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* Viera finds out to her embarrassment that some of her missions are being adapted to a film. The best part is that Plagueis is the one funding it. Viera honestly wonders if he is just doing it to {{troll}} her.
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* In ''The Nar Shaddaa Job'', Viera finds out out, to her embarrassment embarrassment, that some of her missions are being adapted to a film. into holofilms. The best part is that Darth Plagueis is the one funding it. Viera honestly wonders if he is just doing it to {{troll}} her.
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* Ilena is in her room indulging in her guilty pleasure, cosplaying. Specifically, the sexy outfit Viera's movie counterpart wears. When someone knocks on her door, she lets them in. Unfortunately for her, the person turns out to be Tomas, who decides to tease her about her outfit.
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* Ilena is in her room indulging in her guilty pleasure, cosplaying. Specifically, the sexy outfit Viera's movie holofilm counterpart wears. When someone knocks on her door, she lets them in. Unfortunately for her, the person turns out to be Tomas, who decides to tease her about her outfit.
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* Viera points out to Del Kimer that Alpheridies has hundreds of millions of Force sensitives they can recruit for the Matukai while the man was in the middle of doing a handstand. This results in Del {{face plant}}ing.
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* Viera finds out to her embarrassment that some of her missions are being adapted to a film. The best part is that Palgueis is the one funding it. Viera honestly wonders if he is just doing it to {{troll}} her.
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* Viera finds out to her embarrassment that some of her missions are being adapted to a film. The best part is that Palgueis Plagueis is the one funding it. Viera honestly wonders if he is just doing it to {{troll}} her.
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* After seeing a holiday on Onderon where people fight with paint gallons, Viera decides to tell Master Yoda about it. This later leads to it also being celebrated in the Jedi Temple, with Yoda leading the charge of younglings in paint ballooning other Jedi.
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* After seeing a holiday on Onderon where people fight with paint gallons, balloons, Viera decides to tell Master Yoda about it. This later leads to it also being celebrated in the Jedi Temple, with Yoda leading the charge of younglings in paint ballooning other Jedi.
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--> '''Graush:''' (''menacingly'') Jedi.\\
'''Viera:''' What’s up, bitch?
** Two of the Jedi with them look at Viera strangely after she says this. The last Jedi is one of Viera's friends, and is unsurprised by Viera's levity and swearing.
'''Viera:''' What’s up, bitch?
** Two of the Jedi with them look at Viera strangely after she says this. The last Jedi is one of Viera's friends, and is unsurprised by Viera's levity and swearing.
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--> '''Graush:''' (''menacingly'') Jedi.\\
'''Viera:''' What’s"What’s up, bitch?
bitch?"
**Two of the The two Jedi Masters with them look at Viera strangely after she says this. The last Jedi is one of Viera's friends, and is unsurprised by Viera's levity and swearing.
'''Viera:''' What’s
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** Two of the Jedi with them look at Viera strangely after she says this. The last Jedi is one of Viera's friends, qand is unsurprised by Viera's levity and swearing.
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** Two of the Jedi with them look at Viera strangely after she says this. The last Jedi is one of Viera's friends, qand and is unsurprised by Viera's levity and swearing.
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* Bruck is hoping that Viera is having an easier time than he and his team are... right before he sees a high-speed chase pass by them with Viera being the one being pursued.
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* Bruck is hoping that Viera is having an easier time than he and his team are... right before he sees a high-speed chase pass by them with Viera being on the one being pursued.pursued side.
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** The comments after this omake describe Bruck as a well-written and likable harem protagonist.
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** The comments after this omake describe Bruck as a well-written and likable likeable harem protagonist.
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--> '''Graush:''' 9''menacingly''0 Jedi.\\
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--> '''Graush:''' 9''menacingly''0 (''menacingly'') Jedi.\\
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--> '''Graush:''' ''[menacingly]'' 9''menacingly''0 Jedi.\\
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* When questioned by his padawan about him going on a date with another Jedi (Jang), Zey bluntly tells the young learner about his friends.
--> '''Zey:''' Here’s an early lesson you need to learn, two of my best friends, Jedi I’ve known since infancy, are in a committed relationship with each other. Another is trying to deny that she’s attracted to what is generously described as a silver-haired muscular pretty-boy, and another likes to pretend that it’s not obvious she’s raising a child. None of us really follow the Code that well, as long as you’re not doing anything bad, it won’t matter that much.\\\
Also, I need you to not tell anyone else about that. No need to get the Council looking too closely at us.
* The normally stoic Zey is [[StunnedSilence speechless]] when he sees Jang [[SheCleansUpNicely all dressed up]] for their date.
--> '''Zey:''' Here’s an early lesson you need to learn, two of my best friends, Jedi I’ve known since infancy, are in a committed relationship with each other. Another is trying to deny that she’s attracted to what is generously described as a silver-haired muscular pretty-boy, and another likes to pretend that it’s not obvious she’s raising a child. None of us really follow the Code that well, as long as you’re not doing anything bad, it won’t matter that much.\\\
Also, I need you to not tell anyone else about that. No need to get the Council looking too closely at us.
* The normally stoic Zey is [[StunnedSilence speechless]] when he sees Jang [[SheCleansUpNicely all dressed up]] for their date.
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--> '''Zey:''' Here’s an early lesson you need to learn, two of my best friends, Jedi I’ve known since infancy, are in a committed relationship with each other. Another is trying to deny that she’s attracted to what is generously described as a silver-haired muscular pretty-boy, and another likes to pretend that it’s not obvious she’s raising a child. None of us really follow the Code that well, as long as you’re not doing anything bad, it won’t matter that much.\\\
Also, I need you to not tell anyone else about that. No need to get the Council looking too closely at us.
* The normally stoic Zey is [[StunnedSilence speechless]] when he sees Jang [[SheCleansUpNicely all dressed up]] for their date.
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* When questioned by his padawan about him going on a date with another Jedi (Jang), Zey bluntly tells the young learner about his friends.
--> '''Zey:''' Here’s an early lesson you need to learn, two of my best friends, Jedi I’ve known since infancy, are in a committed relationship with each other. Another is trying to deny that she’s attracted to what is generously described as a silver-haired muscular pretty-boy, and another likes to pretend that it’s not obvious she’s raising a child. None of us really follow the Code that well, as long as you’re not doing anything bad, it won’t matter that much.\\\
Also, I need you to not tell anyone else about that. No need to get the Council looking too closely at us.
* The normally stoic Zey is [[StunnedSilence speechless]] when he sees Jang [[SheCleansUpNicely all dressed up]] for their date.
* During their date, Jang and Zey reminisce about the time they put glue on the Council's seats with Yoda's help.
--> '''Zey:''' Here’s an early lesson you need to learn, two of my best friends, Jedi I’ve known since infancy, are in a committed relationship with each other. Another is trying to deny that she’s attracted to what is generously described as a silver-haired muscular pretty-boy, and another likes to pretend that it’s not obvious she’s raising a child. None of us really follow the Code that well, as long as you’re not doing anything bad, it won’t matter that much.\\\
Also, I need you to not tell anyone else about that. No need to get the Council looking too closely at us.
* The normally stoic Zey is [[StunnedSilence speechless]] when he sees Jang [[SheCleansUpNicely all dressed up]] for their date.
* During their date, Jang and Zey reminisce about the time they put glue on the Council's seats with Yoda's help.
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** Mrs. Chun later calls when the two are asleep, and is surprised when Ru answers. It wasn't too bad, though she did warn him to not elope.
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* When questioned by his padawan about him going on a date with another Jedi (Jang), Zey bluntly tells the young learner about his friends.
--> '''Zey:''' Here’s an early lesson you need to learn, two of my best friends, Jedi I’ve known since infancy, are in a committed relationship with each other. Another is trying to deny that she’s attracted to what is generously described as a silver-haired muscular pretty-boy, and another likes to pretend that it’s not obvious she’s raising a child. None of us really follow the Code that well, as long as you’re not doing anything bad, it won’t matter that much.\\\
Also, I need you to not tell anyone else about that. No need to get the Council looking too closely at us.
* The normally stoic Zey is [[StunnedSilence speechless]] when he sees Jang [[SheCleansUpNicely all dressed up]] for their date.
--> '''Zey:''' Here’s an early lesson you need to learn, two of my best friends, Jedi I’ve known since infancy, are in a committed relationship with each other. Another is trying to deny that she’s attracted to what is generously described as a silver-haired muscular pretty-boy, and another likes to pretend that it’s not obvious she’s raising a child. None of us really follow the Code that well, as long as you’re not doing anything bad, it won’t matter that much.\\\
Also, I need you to not tell anyone else about that. No need to get the Council looking too closely at us.
* The normally stoic Zey is [[StunnedSilence speechless]] when he sees Jang [[SheCleansUpNicely all dressed up]] for their date.
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* When visiting the Altisian Order, Viera's friend Siri Tachi thinks to herself that she wouldn't be surprised if Viera was married. Her thoughts aren't that far off, as Viera has already adopted a child and is in a relationship with a princess.
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* While sparring with Ilena in front of a crowd, Tomas decides it is a good time to start flirting with her.
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* During the paint balloon fight in the Jedi Temple, Yoda was able to [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/fate-denied-a-star-wars-si.525061/post-52647790 get Mace Windu]].
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* During the paint balloon fight in the Jedi Temple, Yoda was able to [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/fate-denied-a-star-wars-si.525061/post-52647790 get Mace Windu]].Windu]].
* Jocata keeps her lightsaber rifle [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/fate-denied-a-star-wars-si.525061/post-55983544 in her office as a warning]] to people who borrow from the archives.
* Jocata keeps her lightsaber rifle [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/fate-denied-a-star-wars-si.525061/post-55983544 in her office as a warning]] to people who borrow from the archives.
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* The padawans of Politrix and Jai are having an argument over whose master is better. It started because Politrix's padawan, Kai, heard what he thought was the two of them wrestling.
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* Ilena is in her room, indulging in her guilty pleasure, cosplaying. Specifically, the sexy outfit Viera's movie counterpart wears. When someone knocks on her door, she lets them in. Unfortunately for her, the person turns out to be Tomas, who decides to tease her about her outfit.
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* Ilena is in her room, room indulging in her guilty pleasure, cosplaying. Specifically, the sexy outfit Viera's movie counterpart wears. When someone knocks on her door, she lets them in. Unfortunately for her, the person turns out to be Tomas, who decides to tease her about her outfit.outfit.
* After getting drunk, Bruck gets kidnapped by a witch from another tribe. He gets saved by a witch from the tribe hosting his team, but as she wasn't informed about them being off limits, she takes him back tied up.
* After getting drunk, Bruck gets kidnapped by a witch from another tribe. He gets saved by a witch from the tribe hosting his team, but as she wasn't informed about them being off limits, she takes him back tied up.
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* After taking in a bounty as part of their plan on Nar Shaddaa, Viera takes a few seconds to swipe the man's alcohol.
--> '''Vhiran:''' Everyone’s got to have a hobby, I guess.\\
'''Viera:''' I prefer the term, way of life.\\
''[Vhiran laughs]''
--> '''Vhiran:''' Everyone’s got to have a hobby, I guess.\\
'''Viera:''' I prefer the term, way of life.\\
''[Vhiran laughs]''
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* After seeing a holiday on Onderon where people fight with paint gallons, Viera decides to tell Master Yoda about it. This later leads to it also being celebrated in the Jedi Temple, with Yoda leading the charge of younglings in paint ballooning other Jedi.
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** Mrs. Chun later calls when the two are asleep, and is surprised when Ru answers. It wasn't too bad, though she did warn him to not elope.
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** Mrs. Chun later calls when the two are asleep, and is surprised when Ru answers. It wasn't too bad, though she did warn him to not elope.elope.
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* During the paint balloon fight in the Jedi Temple, Yoda was able to [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/fate-denied-a-star-wars-si.525061/post-52647790 get Mace Windu]].
!!Meta
* During the paint balloon fight in the Jedi Temple, Yoda was able to [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/fate-denied-a-star-wars-si.525061/post-52647790 get Mace Windu]].
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* When thinking of how to help the Sith species recover after the campaign of Tund is over, Viera imagines leaving a record in the Great Holocron about how she saved the Sith, to the confusion of future Jedi.
--> Here I am, musing about how to save the Sith. It makes sense in context, but I want to record it in the Great Holocron so future Jedi can listen and be so very confused. Viera Sarat, fucking with historians countless years later.
* During the fight with the Sithspawn, Tomas and Ilena get into [[BelligerentSexualTension an argument]] over how the other fights. Viera has to break them up so they can focus on the fight.
--> “Guys! Fuck later, fight the still alive Sithspawn now!”
--> Here I am, musing about how to save the Sith. It makes sense in context, but I want to record it in the Great Holocron so future Jedi can listen and be so very confused. Viera Sarat, fucking with historians countless years later.
* During the fight with the Sithspawn, Tomas and Ilena get into [[BelligerentSexualTension an argument]] over how the other fights. Viera has to break them up so they can focus on the fight.
--> “Guys! Fuck later, fight the still alive Sithspawn now!”
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--> '''Graush:''' Jedi.\\
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--> '''Graush:''' ''[menacingly]'' Jedi.\\
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* Bruck holocoms his mother while staying in Ru's house on Corellia when Ru walks in... wearing only lingerie. She then decide to introduce herself, showing Mrs. Chun only her head and shoulders while giving Bruck a [[MaleGaze front row view of her cleavage]].
** After the conversation, Bruck mentions that she dragged him to a lingerie store earlier and that he had difficulty in knowing where to look without being offensive or awkward.
** After the conversation, Bruck mentions that she dragged him to a lingerie store earlier and that he had difficulty in knowing where to look without being offensive or awkward.
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* Bruck holocoms his mother while staying in Ru's house on Corellia when Ru walks in... wearing only lingerie. She then decide decides to introduce herself, showing Mrs. Chun only her head and shoulders while giving Bruck a [[MaleGaze front row view of her cleavage]].
** After the conversation, Bruck mentions that she dragged him to a lingerie store earlier and that he had difficulty in knowing where to look without being offensive orawkward.awkward.
** Mrs. Chun later calls when the two are asleep, and is surprised when Ru answers. It wasn't too bad, though she did warn him to not elope.
** After the conversation, Bruck mentions that she dragged him to a lingerie store earlier and that he had difficulty in knowing where to look without being offensive or
** Mrs. Chun later calls when the two are asleep, and is surprised when Ru answers. It wasn't too bad, though she did warn him to not elope.
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--> Aron gaped, Carina stared, Driss merely shook his head as the three Twi'leks stared on in awe. Bruck, sighed. He ran a hand through his hair and muttered something unintelligible, even to himself, under his breath.\\\
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--> Aron gaped, Carina stared, Driss Dirss merely shook his head as the three Twi'leks stared on in awe. Bruck, sighed. He ran a hand through his hair and muttered something unintelligible, even to himself, under his breath.\\\\\
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* Bruck holocoms his mother while staying in Ru's house on Corellia when Ru walks in... wearing only lingerie. She then decide to introduce herself, showing Mrs. Chun only her head and shoulders while giving Bruck a [[MaleGaze front to row view of her cleavage]].
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--> Aron gaped, Carina stared, Dirss merely shook his head as the three Twi'leks stared on in awe. Bruck, sighed. He ran a hand through his hair and muttered something unintelligible, even to himself, under his breath.\\\
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--> Aron gaped, Carina stared, Dirss Driss merely shook his head as the three Twi'leks stared on in awe. Bruck, sighed. He ran a hand through his hair and muttered something unintelligible, even to himself, under his breath.\\\
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** The comments after this omake describe Bruck as a well-written and likable harem protagonist.
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** The comments after this omake describe Bruck as a well-written and likable harem protagonist.protagonist.
* Bruck holocoms his mother while staying in Ru's house on Corellia when Ru walks in... wearing only lingerie. She then decide to introduce herself, showing only her head and shoulders while giving Bruck a [[MaleGaze front to view of her cleavage]].
** After the conversation, Bruck mentions that she dragged him to a lingerie store earlier and that he had difficulty in knowing where to look without being offensive or awkward.
* Bruck holocoms his mother while staying in Ru's house on Corellia when Ru walks in... wearing only lingerie. She then decide to introduce herself, showing only her head and shoulders while giving Bruck a [[MaleGaze front to view of her cleavage]].
** After the conversation, Bruck mentions that she dragged him to a lingerie store earlier and that he had difficulty in knowing where to look without being offensive or awkward.
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--> '''Graush''': Jedi.\\
'''Viera''': What’s up, bitch?
'''Viera''': What’s up, bitch?
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--> '''Graush''': '''Graush:''' Jedi.\\
'''Viera''': '''Viera:''' What’s up, bitch?
* When Viera meets Hego Damask, aka Darth Plagueis, at a party, she notices that he drinks through his nose. The image of a powerful and evil Sith Lord drinking through his nostrils is rather surreal.
* When Viera meets Hego Damask, aka Darth Plagueis, at a party, she notices that he drinks through his nose. The image of a powerful and evil Sith Lord drinking through his nostrils is rather surreal.
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--> Aron gaped, Carina stared, Dirss merely shook his head as the three Twi'leks stared on in awe. Bruck, sighed. He ran a hand through his hair and muttered something unintelligible, even to himself, under his breath.\\
--> Of course, as if he could expect anything else from Viera.
--> Of course, as if he could expect anything else from Viera.
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--> Aron gaped, Carina stared, Dirss merely shook his head as the three Twi'leks stared on in awe. Bruck, sighed. He ran a hand through his hair and muttered something unintelligible, even to himself, under his breath.\\
-->\\\
Of course, as if he could expect anything else fromViera.Viera.
* Bruck, after days of being aggressively pursued by Allaya, is asked by the Dathomirian for a walk and talk about offworlder customs. He is oblivious to the implication that she is attracted to him and wishes to pursue him the way offworlders do.
** The comments after this omake describe Bruck as a well-written and likable harem protagonist.
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Of course, as if he could expect anything else from
* Bruck, after days of being aggressively pursued by Allaya, is asked by the Dathomirian for a walk and talk about offworlder customs. He is oblivious to the implication that she is attracted to him and wishes to pursue him the way offworlders do.
** The comments after this omake describe Bruck as a well-written and likable harem protagonist.
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* When facing Dathka Graush alongside other Jedi, Viera takes a second to insult the ancient Sith spirit.
--> '''Graush''': Jedi.\\
'''Viera''': What’s up, bitch?
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* Bruck is hoping that Viera is having an easier time than he and his team are... right before he sees a high-speed chase pass by them with Viera being the one being pursued.
--> Aron gaped, Carina stared, Dirss merely shook his head as the three Twi'leks stared on in awe. Bruck, sighed. He ran a hand through his hair and muttered something unintelligible, even to himself, under his breath.\\
--> Of course, as if he could expect anything else from Viera.
--> '''Graush''': Jedi.\\
'''Viera''': What’s up, bitch?
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* Bruck is hoping that Viera is having an easier time than he and his team are... right before he sees a high-speed chase pass by them with Viera being the one being pursued.
--> Aron gaped, Carina stared, Dirss merely shook his head as the three Twi'leks stared on in awe. Bruck, sighed. He ran a hand through his hair and muttered something unintelligible, even to himself, under his breath.\\
--> Of course, as if he could expect anything else from Viera.
