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** Zeri's lore is dictated much like any teenage girl's life of the modern age. Poor spelling, spontaneous and random language, and a conversation aligned left side then right side as if it were an iPhone message conversation. Smilies included.
** King Of Masks' is written as a play script. Stage commands and all. It is a biased and hilariously played interpretation of himself and Renzo, who disliked his performances and wanted him out. Renzo's lines are performed by the King still impersonating his voice, and are made out to be even more TestosteronePoisoning than the real Renzo... if only by a small amount.
** King Of Masks' is written as a play script. Stage commands and all. It is a biased and hilariously played interpretation of himself and Renzo, who disliked his performances and wanted him out. Renzo's lines are performed by the King still impersonating his voice, and are made out to be even more TestosteronePoisoning than the real Renzo... if only by a small amount.
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** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yCD3Cu9HmB8 Zeri's lore lore]] is dictated much like any teenage girl's life of the modern age. Poor spelling, spontaneous and random language, and a conversation aligned left side then right side as if it were an iPhone message conversation. Smilies included.
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VT2R1k0t9Xc King OfMasks' Masks']] is written as a play script. Stage commands and all. It is a biased and hilariously played interpretation of himself and Renzo, who disliked his performances and wanted him out. Renzo's lines are performed by the King still impersonating his voice, and are made out to be even more TestosteronePoisoning than the real Renzo... if only by a small amount.
** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VT2R1k0t9Xc King Of
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** Renzo himself has a colourfully written (and performed) description of his gallery of sculptures... and himself. Claiming that visitors will be provided smelling salts in the case of swooning at the sight of his physique. That being said, a lot of the adjectives are written in capital letters, and at the very end in small text Renzo points out his apprentice, Zeri, also has paintings in the lobby. A remark dedicated to exactly one line when the rest of the lore takes up many.
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** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6U-YgazxqHA Renzo himself himself]] has a colourfully written (and performed) description of his gallery of sculptures... and himself. Claiming that visitors will be provided smelling salts in the case of swooning at the sight of his physique. That being said, a lot of the adjectives are written in capital letters, and at the very end in small text Renzo points out his apprentice, Zeri, also has paintings in the lobby. A remark dedicated to exactly one line when the rest of the lore takes up many.
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Chronicles page reuploaded to imgur so that it can be linked to here. Shirt-ripping action must be witnessed.
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* Renzo giving a [[http://dawngatechronicles.com/prologue/57/ dramatic exposition of his woes]] in the Chronicles, complete with shirt-ripping action.
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* Renzo giving a [[http://dawngatechronicles.com/prologue/57/ [[http://i.imgur.com/m83TmgV.jpg dramatic exposition of his woes]] in the Chronicles, complete with shirt-ripping action.
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** Renzo himself has a colourfully written (and performed) description of his gallery of sculptures... and himself. Claiming that visitors will be provided smelling salts in the case of swooning at the sight of his physique. That being said, a lot of the adjectives are written in capital letters, and at the very end in small text Renzo points out his apprentice, Zeri, also has paintings in the lobby. A remark dedicated to exactly one line when the rest of the lore takes up many.
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** Renzo himself has a colourfully written (and performed) description of his gallery of sculptures... and himself. Claiming that visitors will be provided smelling salts in the case of swooning at the sight of his physique. That being said, a lot of the adjectives are written in capital letters, and at the very end in small text Renzo points out his apprentice, Zeri, also has paintings in the lobby. A remark dedicated to exactly one line when the rest of the lore takes up many.many.
* Renzo giving a [[http://dawngatechronicles.com/prologue/57/ dramatic exposition of his woes]] in the Chronicles, complete with shirt-ripping action.
* Renzo giving a [[http://dawngatechronicles.com/prologue/57/ dramatic exposition of his woes]] in the Chronicles, complete with shirt-ripping action.
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Cutting out some of the fluff in these paragraphs I wrote
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* The game's new update lore pages have quite the content. Each Shaper has a window of text, followed by an audio recording of that text being spoken. That's about as much as they have in common, and it's more a demonstration of their character than anything else... however creatively it's made. For some of the quirkier characters, the lore can be absolutely ''hilarious''.
** Zeri's lore is dictated much like any teenage girl's life of the modern age. Poor spelling, very spontaneous and random language (in her to-do notes no less), and of course a conversation aligned left side then right side as if it were an iPhone message conversation. Smilies included.
** King Of Masks' is written as a play script. Stage commands and all. It is a biased and hilariously played interpretation of himself and Renzo, who he claims disliked his performances and wanted him out. Renzo's lines are performed by the King still impersonating his voice, and are made out to be even more TestosteronePoisoning than the real Renzo... if only by a small amount.
** Zeri's lore is dictated much like any teenage girl's life of the modern age. Poor spelling, very spontaneous and random language (in her to-do notes no less), and of course a conversation aligned left side then right side as if it were an iPhone message conversation. Smilies included.
** King Of Masks' is written as a play script. Stage commands and all. It is a biased and hilariously played interpretation of himself and Renzo, who he claims disliked his performances and wanted him out. Renzo's lines are performed by the King still impersonating his voice, and are made out to be even more TestosteronePoisoning than the real Renzo... if only by a small amount.
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* The game's new update lore pages have quite the content. Each Shaper has a window of text, followed by an audio recording of that text being spoken. That's about as much as they have in common, and it's more a demonstration of their character than anything else... however creatively it's made. For some of the quirkier characters, the lore can be absolutely ''hilarious''.
** Zeri's lore is dictated much like any teenage girl's life of the modern age. Poor spelling,very spontaneous and random language (in her to-do notes no less), language, and of course a conversation aligned left side then right side as if it were an iPhone message conversation. Smilies included.
** King Of Masks' is written as a play script. Stage commands and all. It is a biased and hilariously played interpretation of himself and Renzo, whohe claims disliked his performances and wanted him out. Renzo's lines are performed by the King still impersonating his voice, and are made out to be even more TestosteronePoisoning than the real Renzo... if only by a small amount.
** Zeri's lore is dictated much like any teenage girl's life of the modern age. Poor spelling,
** King Of Masks' is written as a play script. Stage commands and all. It is a biased and hilariously played interpretation of himself and Renzo, who
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** Renzo himself has a very colourfully written (and performed) description of his gallery of sculptures... and himself, no less. Claiming that visitors will be provided smelling salts in the case of swooning at the sight of his physique. That being said, a lot of the adjectives are written in capital letters, and at the very end in small text Renzo points out his apprentice, Zeri, also has paintings in the lobby. A remark dedicated to exactly one line when the rest of the lore takes up many.
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** Renzo himself has a very colourfully written (and performed) description of his gallery of sculptures... and himself, no less.himself. Claiming that visitors will be provided smelling salts in the case of swooning at the sight of his physique. That being said, a lot of the adjectives are written in capital letters, and at the very end in small text Renzo points out his apprentice, Zeri, also has paintings in the lobby. A remark dedicated to exactly one line when the rest of the lore takes up many.
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--> '''Renzo''': Renzo cannot hear anyone without a mustache right now.'''
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* The game's new update lore pages have quite the content. Each Shaper has a window of text, followed by an audio recording of that text being spoken. That's about as much as they have in common, and it's more a demonstration of their character than anything else... however creatively it's made. For some of the quirkier characters, the lore can be absolutely ''hilarious''.
** Zeri's lore is dictated much like any teenage girl's life of the modern age. Poor spelling, very spontaneous and random language (in her to-do notes no less), and of course a conversation aligned left side then right side as if it were an iPhone message conversation. Smilies included.
** King Of Masks' is written as a play script. Stage commands and all. It is a biased and hilariously played interpretation of himself and Renzo, who he claims disliked his performances and wanted him out. Renzo's lines are performed by the King still impersonating his voice, and are made out to be even more TestosteronePoisoning than the real Renzo... if only by a small amount.
--> '''Renzo''': Renzo cannot hear anyone without a mustache right now.'''
** Renzo himself has a very colourfully written (and performed) description of his gallery of sculptures... and himself, no less. Claiming that visitors will be provided smelling salts in the case of swooning at the sight of his physique. That being said, a lot of the adjectives are written in capital letters, and at the very end in small text Renzo points out his apprentice, Zeri, also has paintings in the lobby. A remark dedicated to exactly one line when the rest of the lore takes up many.
** Zeri's lore is dictated much like any teenage girl's life of the modern age. Poor spelling, very spontaneous and random language (in her to-do notes no less), and of course a conversation aligned left side then right side as if it were an iPhone message conversation. Smilies included.
** King Of Masks' is written as a play script. Stage commands and all. It is a biased and hilariously played interpretation of himself and Renzo, who he claims disliked his performances and wanted him out. Renzo's lines are performed by the King still impersonating his voice, and are made out to be even more TestosteronePoisoning than the real Renzo... if only by a small amount.
--> '''Renzo''': Renzo cannot hear anyone without a mustache right now.'''
** Renzo himself has a very colourfully written (and performed) description of his gallery of sculptures... and himself, no less. Claiming that visitors will be provided smelling salts in the case of swooning at the sight of his physique. That being said, a lot of the adjectives are written in capital letters, and at the very end in small text Renzo points out his apprentice, Zeri, also has paintings in the lobby. A remark dedicated to exactly one line when the rest of the lore takes up many.
