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--->'''Martial Horror:''' It means [[TrueArtIsIncomprehensible everything, yet nothing, yet something]] all at once!
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--->'''Martial Horror:''' It means [[TrueArtIsIncomprehensible everything, yet nothing, yet something]] something all at once!
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* From his JesuOtaku review:
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* From his JesuOtaku WebVideo/JesuOtaku review:
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* From the review of TheSpoonyExperiment:
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* From the review of TheSpoonyExperiment:WebVideo/TheSpoonyExperiment:
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* Pretty much the entirety of "Humor [[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext and Semen]]", especially when Martial shows off his [[StylisticSuck amazing]] title card.
-->'''Martial Horror''': It means [[TrueArtIsIncomprehensible everything, yet nothing, yet something]]all at once!
** Also, this line
-->'''Martial Horror''': Those cons [[TheNostalgiaCritic th]][[TheAngryVideoGameNerd ey]] are always going to? Turns they are just an [[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseinContext excuse for scat parties]]
*** --->'''Martial Horror''': And here we have The Distressed Watcher AKA TheAmazingAtheist alone in the corner looking sad. That's not a metaphor. [[TakeThat That is just reality]]
-->'''Martial Horror''': It means [[TrueArtIsIncomprehensible everything, yet nothing, yet something]]all at once!
** Also, this line
-->'''Martial Horror''': Those cons [[TheNostalgiaCritic th]][[TheAngryVideoGameNerd ey]] are always going to? Turns they are just an [[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseinContext excuse for scat parties]]
*** --->'''Martial Horror''': And here we have The Distressed Watcher AKA TheAmazingAtheist alone in the corner looking sad. That's not a metaphor. [[TakeThat That is just reality]]
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* Pretty much the entirety of "Humor [[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext and Semen]]", especially Semen]]".
** Especially when Martial shows off his [[StylisticSuck amazing]] title card.
-->'''Martial Horror''': --->'''Martial Horror:''' It means [[TrueArtIsIncomprehensible everything, yet nothing, yet something]]all something]] all at once!
** Also, thisline
-->'''Martial Horror''':line:
--->'''Martial Horror:''' Those cons[[TheNostalgiaCritic th]][[TheAngryVideoGameNerd ey]] they [WebVideo/TheNostalgiaCritic & WebVideo/TheAngryVideoGameNerd] are always going to? Turns they are just an [[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseinContext excuse for scat parties]]
***parties]].
** And this one:
--->'''MartialHorror''': Horror:''' And here we have The Distressed Watcher AKA TheAmazingAtheist a.k.a. WebVideo/TheAmazingAtheist alone in the corner looking sad. That's not a metaphor. [[TakeThat That is just reality]]
** Especially when Martial shows off his [[StylisticSuck amazing]] title card.
** Also, this
-->'''Martial Horror''':
--->'''Martial Horror:''' Those cons
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** And this one:
--->'''Martial
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-->'''Martial Horror''': Last time we talked about [[DragonBallZ Vegata]] blasting TheCinemaSnob, Doug Walker and James Rolfe [[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext holding scat parties]], Asarelli-zilla stomping through Reviewotpia, and a little bit about hte topic at hand: Writing Jokes. Also, there were a lot of metaphors and [[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext a lot of semen]]
** He says in order to play his creepy character, he has to [[SelfDeprecation: turn down his normal creepiness]]
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** He says in order to play his creepy character, he has to [[SelfDeprecation: turn down his normal creepiness]]
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-->'''Martial Horror''': Horror:''' Last time we talked about [[DragonBallZ Vegata]] [[Anime/DragonBallZ Vegeta]] blasting TheCinemaSnob, WebVideo/TheCinemaSnob, Doug Walker and James Rolfe [[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext holding scat parties]], Asarelli-zilla stomping through Reviewotpia, and a little bit about hte topic at hand: Writing Jokes. Also, there were a lot of metaphors and [[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext a lot of semen]]
**semen]].
* He says in order to play his creepy character, he has to[[SelfDeprecation: [[SelfDeprecation turn down his normal creepiness]]
[[/folder]]creepiness]].
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* He says in order to play his creepy character, he has to
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* From his review of TheCinemaSnobMovie
--->'''Martial Horror''': You should know once Martial Horror puts pencil on paper, only [[BlatantLies high art]] can be born.
--->'''Martial Horror''': You should know once Martial Horror puts pencil on paper, only [[BlatantLies high art]] can be born.
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** He sayss in order to play his creepy character, he has to [[SelfDepreciation turn down his normal creepiness]]
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** He sayss says in order to play his creepy character, he has to [[SelfDepreciation [[SelfDeprecation: turn down his normal creepiness]]
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-->'''Martial Horror''': Last time we talked about [[DragonBallZ Vegata]] blasting TheCinemaSnob, Doug Walker and James Rolfe [[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext holding scat parties]], Asarelli-zilla stomping through Reviewotpia, and a little bit about hte topic at hand: Writing Jokes. Also, there were a lot of metaphors and [[ItMakesMakeSenseInContext [[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext a lot of semen]]
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* Pretty much the entirety of "Humor [[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext [[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext]] and Semen", especially when Martial shows off his [[StylisticSuck amazing]] title card.
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--->'''Martial Horror''': Don't assumme I'm {{Fanwank}}ing over Spoony, cuz I have done that before, but then I realized that was supposed to be taken as a metaphor and the restraining order says I can not do so again.
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--->'''Martial Horror''': Don't assumme assume I'm {{Fanwank}}ing over Spoony, cuz I have done that before, but then I realized that was supposed to be taken as a metaphor and the restraining order says I can not do so again.
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* Pretty much the entirety of "Humor", "Humor [[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext and Semen", especially when Martial shows off his [[StylisticSuck amazing]] title card.
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-->'''Martial Horror''': Last time we talked about [[DragonBallZ Vegata]] blasting TheCinemaSnob, Doug Walker and James Rolfe [[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext holding scat parties]], Asarelli-zilla stomping through Reviewotpia, and a little bit about hte topic at hand.
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-->'''Martial Horror''': Last time we talked about [[DragonBallZ Vegata]] blasting TheCinemaSnob, Doug Walker and James Rolfe [[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext holding scat parties]], Asarelli-zilla stomping through Reviewotpia, and a little bit about hte topic at hand. hand: Writing Jokes. Also, there were a lot of metaphors and [[ItMakesMakeSenseInContext a lot of semen]]
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* The recap of Part 1 of the video at the start of part
-->'''Martial Horror''': Last time we talked about [[DragonBallZ Vegata]] blasting TheCinemaSnob, Doug Walker and James Rolfe [[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext holding scat parties]], Asarelli-zilla stomping through Reviewotpia, and a little bit about hte topic at hand.
-->'''Martial Horror''': Last time we talked about [[DragonBallZ Vegata]] blasting TheCinemaSnob, Doug Walker and James Rolfe [[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext holding scat parties]], Asarelli-zilla stomping through Reviewotpia, and a little bit about hte topic at hand.
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** --->'''Martial Horror''': And here we have The Distressed Watcher AKA TheAmazingAtheist alone in the corner looking sad. That's not a metaphor. [[TakeThat That is just reality]]
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** -->'''Martial Horror''': And here we have The Distressed Watcher AKA TheAmazingAtheist alone in the corner looking sad. That's not a metaphor. [[TakeThat That is just reality]]
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** -->'''Martial --->'''Martial Horror''': And here we have The Distressed Watcher AKA TheAmazingAtheist alone in the corner looking sad. That's not a metaphor. [[TakeThat That is just reality]]
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** -->'''Martial Horror''': And here we have The Distressed Watcher AKA TheAmazingAtheist alone in the corner looking sad.
That's not a metaphor. [[TakeThat That is just reality]]
That's not a metaphor. [[TakeThat That is just reality]]
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** -->'''Martial Horror''': And here we have The Distressed Watcher AKA TheAmazingAtheist alone in the corner looking sad. \n That's not a metaphor. [[TakeThat That is just reality]]
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-->'''Martial Horror''': Those cons [[TheNostalgiaCritic th]] [[TheAngryVideoGameNerd ey]] are always going to? Turns they are just an [[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseinContext excuse for scat parties]]
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-->'''Martial Horror''': Those cons [[TheNostalgiaCritic th]] [[TheAngryVideoGameNerd th]][[TheAngryVideoGameNerd ey]] are always going to? Turns they are just an [[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseinContext excuse for scat parties]]
parties]]
** -->'''Martial Horror''': And here we have The Distressed Watcher AKA TheAmazingAtheist alone in the corner looking sad.
That's not a metaphor. [[TakeThat That is just reality]]
[[/folder]]
** -->'''Martial Horror''': And here we have The Distressed Watcher AKA TheAmazingAtheist alone in the corner looking sad.
That's not a metaphor. [[TakeThat That is just reality]]
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* Pretty much the entirety of "Humor", especially when Martial shows off his [[StylisticSuck amazing]] title card.
-->'''Martial Horror''': It means [[TrueArtIsIncomprehensible everything, yet nothing, yet something]]all at once!
** Also, this line
-->'''Martial Horror''': Those cons [[TheNostalgiaCritic th]] [[TheAngryVideoGameNerd ey]] are always going to? Turns they are just an [[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseinContext excuse for scat parties]]
-->'''Martial Horror''': It means [[TrueArtIsIncomprehensible everything, yet nothing, yet something]]all at once!
** Also, this line
-->'''Martial Horror''': Those cons [[TheNostalgiaCritic th]] [[TheAngryVideoGameNerd ey]] are always going to? Turns they are just an [[ItMakesJustAsMuchSenseinContext excuse for scat parties]]
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--->'''Martial Horror: Horror''': Don't assumme I'm {{Fanwank}}ing over Spoony, cuz I have done that before, but then I realized that was supposed to be taken as a metaphor and the restraining order says I can not do so again.again.
[[folder:Guidelines to Not sucking at Video reviewing]]
[[folder:Guidelines to Not sucking at Video reviewing]]
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-->'''Martial Horror''': She always keeps me on my toes....which is weird cuz [[ComicallyMissingTHePoint I always watch them sitting down]]
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-->'''Martial Horror''': She always keeps me on my toes....which is weird cuz [[ComicallyMissingTHePoint I always watch them sitting down]]down]]
* From the review of TheSpoonyExperiment:
--->'''Martial Horror: Don't assumme I'm {{Fanwank}}ing over Spoony, cuz I have done that before, but then I realized that was supposed to be taken as a metaphor and the restraining order says I can not do so again.
* From the review of TheSpoonyExperiment:
--->'''Martial Horror: Don't assumme I'm {{Fanwank}}ing over Spoony, cuz I have done that before, but then I realized that was supposed to be taken as a metaphor and the restraining order says I can not do so again.
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-->'''Martial Horror''': She always keeps me on my toes....which is weird cuz [[ComicallyMissingTHePoints I always watch them sitting down]]
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-->'''Martial Horror''': She always keeps me on my toes....which is weird cuz [[ComicallyMissingTHePoints [[ComicallyMissingTHePoint I always watch them sitting down]]
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-->'''Martial Horror''': This may surprise you, but I'm a little slow...You don't look very surprised.
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-->'''Martial Horror''': She always keeps me on my toes....which is weird cuz [[ComicallyMissingTHePoints I always watch them sitting down]]
-->'''Martial Horror''': This may surprise you, but I'm a little slow...You don't look very surprised.
** Another one from the same video:
-->'''Martial Horror''': She always keeps me on my toes....which is weird cuz [[ComicallyMissingTHePoints I always watch them sitting down]]