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* Thad assures Alex that there's nothing to be scared of. Then they both scream high-pitched from being startled by a falling couch lit on fire landing next to them.
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* Thad assures assuring Alex that there's nothing to be scared of. Then they both scream let out a high-pitched scream from being startled by a falling couch lit on fire landing right next to them.
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** When the team is outside locating the missing badger, Thad hears a noise, shushes the team and promptly shoots at the source of the noise -- a couple walking around on campus -- and the poor guy takes a tranquilizer dart right to the neck and collapses. Thad's response as he and his team take off running and the poor target's girlfriend screaming?
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** When the team is outside locating the missing badger, Thad hears a noise, shushes the team and promptly shoots at the source of the noise -- a couple walking around on campus -- and the poor guy takes a tranquilizer dart right to in the neck and collapses. Thad's response as while he and his team take off running and the poor target's girlfriend is left screaming?
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** Thad cries at a bonfire lamenting over his failures to his team. One of which is for being a "shitty captain". The other, not being able to eat a badger's balls.
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** Thad cries at over a bonfire bonfire, lamenting over about his failures to his team. One of which is team abandoning him for being a "shitty captain". The other, As Alex tries to cheer him up, Thad complains about not being able having the chance to eat a badger's balls.
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Changed line(s) 37 (click to see context) from:
** When the team is outside locating the missing badger, Thad hears a noise, shushes the team and promptly shoots at the source of the noise -- a couple walking around on campus and the poor guy taking a tranquilizer dart right to the neck and collapsing. Thad's response as he and his team take off running?
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** When the team is outside locating the missing badger, Thad hears a noise, shushes the team and promptly shoots at the source of the noise -- a couple walking around on campus -- and the poor guy taking takes a tranquilizer dart right to the neck and collapsing. collapses. Thad's response as he and his team take off running?running and the poor target's girlfriend screaming?
