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* During Ria's introduction to the duo, Eric sees a CatSmile sewn into her hat, and subsequently notes in his head that he's never seen a feline actually making that face. Ria then lifts up her hat to reveal she actually is making the face.
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* During Ria's introduction to the duo, Eric sees a CatSmile PlayfulCatSmile sewn into her hat, and subsequently notes in his head that he's never seen a feline actually making that face. Ria then lifts up her hat to reveal she actually is making the face.
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** She apparently shows her attorney's badge to everyone on her investigations, to the point where it's seemingly on instinct.
* As the trio leaves the meeting at Remus Legal Academy, we're introduced to their mode of transportation: [[CoolCar A bright red sportscar speeding down the street]]... is what the main characters are riding behind on their own vehicle, a bright red tandem bicycle which Eric dubs "The Justicycle". Adding onto that, it's a two-mammal vehicle with three passengers, so Millie has to ride in the basket.
* As the trio leaves the meeting at Remus Legal Academy, we're introduced to their mode of transportation: [[CoolCar A bright red sportscar speeding down the street]]... is what the main characters are riding behind on their own vehicle, a bright red tandem bicycle which Eric dubs "The Justicycle". Adding onto that, it's a two-mammal vehicle with three passengers, so Millie has to ride in the basket.
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** She apparently shows her attorney's badge to everyone on her investigations, apparently on instinct at this point.
** Delilah's Court Record is sure to bring a smile, starting with thepoint where it's seemingly on instinct.
fact that she seems incapable of listing a mammal's species directly. This results in them being labeled things like "Polecat who wants to tap that" for Millie, and "Beaver of Authority" for Judge Loggins. She even dubs herself "Sassy Possum".
* As the trio leaves the meeting at Remus Legal Academy, we're introduced to their mode of transportation: [[CoolCar A bright red sportscar speeding down the street]]... is what the main characters are riding behind on their own vehicle, a bright red tandem bicycle which Eric dubs "The Justicycle". Adding onto that, it's a two-mammal vehicle with three passengers, so Millie has to ride in thebasket.basket.
* During Ria's introduction to the duo, Eric sees a CatSmile sewn into her hat, and subsequently notes in his head that he's never seen a feline actually making that face. Ria then lifts up her hat to reveal she actually is making the face.
** Delilah's Court Record is sure to bring a smile, starting with the
* As the trio leaves the meeting at Remus Legal Academy, we're introduced to their mode of transportation: [[CoolCar A bright red sportscar speeding down the street]]... is what the main characters are riding behind on their own vehicle, a bright red tandem bicycle which Eric dubs "The Justicycle". Adding onto that, it's a two-mammal vehicle with three passengers, so Millie has to ride in the
* During Ria's introduction to the duo, Eric sees a CatSmile sewn into her hat, and subsequently notes in his head that he's never seen a feline actually making that face. Ria then lifts up her hat to reveal she actually is making the face.
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* To calm himself, Delilah suggests that Eric center himself by reviewing who is and what he's doing here, serving as the AsYouKnow introduction for the readers. Delilah pauses in surprise when she realizes that he's doing an introduction for her as well.
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* To calm himself, Delilah suggests that Eric center himself by reviewing who he is and what he's doing here, serving as the AsYouKnow introduction for the readers. Delilah pauses in surprise when she realizes that he's doing an introduction for her as well.
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* Since Delilah takes the lead in this chapter, expect a lot of Funny moments.
** For starters, there's her inner monologue delivering comments such as the following gem:
--> Delilah considered herself thicc, not thick.
** She apparently shows her attorney's badge to everyone on her investigations, to the point where it's seemingly on instinct.
** For starters, there's her inner monologue delivering comments such as the following gem:
--> Delilah considered herself thicc, not thick.
** She apparently shows her attorney's badge to everyone on her investigations, to the point where it's seemingly on instinct.
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!Turnabout Da Capo
* Eric and Delilah's EstablishingCharacterMoment. While Eric is checking his suit for wrinkles and having a minor panic attack, Delilah is stealing a bag of [[BlandNameProduct Zooritos]] from the vending machine.
* To calm himself, Delilah suggests that Eric center himself by reviewing who is and what he's doing here, serving as the AsYouKnow introduction for the readers. Delilah pauses in surprise when she realizes that he's doing an introduction for her as well.
!A Study in Turnabout
* As the trio leaves the meeting at Remus Legal Academy, we're introduced to their mode of transportation: [[CoolCar A bright red sportscar speeding down the street]]... is what the main characters are riding behind on their own vehicle, a bright red tandem bicycle which Eric dubs "The Justicycle". Adding onto that, it's a two-mammal vehicle with three passengers, so Millie has to ride in the basket.
* Eric and Delilah's EstablishingCharacterMoment. While Eric is checking his suit for wrinkles and having a minor panic attack, Delilah is stealing a bag of [[BlandNameProduct Zooritos]] from the vending machine.
* To calm himself, Delilah suggests that Eric center himself by reviewing who is and what he's doing here, serving as the AsYouKnow introduction for the readers. Delilah pauses in surprise when she realizes that he's doing an introduction for her as well.
!A Study in Turnabout
* As the trio leaves the meeting at Remus Legal Academy, we're introduced to their mode of transportation: [[CoolCar A bright red sportscar speeding down the street]]... is what the main characters are riding behind on their own vehicle, a bright red tandem bicycle which Eric dubs "The Justicycle". Adding onto that, it's a two-mammal vehicle with three passengers, so Millie has to ride in the basket.
