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* While going out with her boyfriend, Marta (who lives and works in Shadow Hill) notes he's twitchy about the hill because he's afraid vampires will eat him after sunset. Marta doesn't bother telling him that the vampires at Shadow Hill ''behave'', or else.
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* While going out with her boyfriend, Marta (who lives and works in Shadow Hill) notes he's twitchy about the hill neighborhood because he's afraid vampires will eat him after sunset. Marta doesn't bother telling him that the vampires at Shadow Hill ''behave'', or else.
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** Sunshrike refuses to accept that the cat is called "Kittyhawk" or that she could be their sidekick. Sunshrike and Nighthawk's arrangement is BecauseDestinySaysSo. Nothing in there about "Bird of Light, Birth of Night, ''and'' their pet cat."
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** Sunshrike refuses to accept that the cat is called "Kittyhawk" or that she could be their sidekick. Sunshrike and Nighthawk's arrangement is BecauseDestinySaysSo. Nothing in there about "Bird of Light, Birth Bird of Night, ''and'' their pet cat."
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* The second issue features an ordinary reporter caught up in a bizarre occurrence in the subways of Astro City, including a bizarre shark-demon cult, the return of a superhero thought to be dead years before, and the world's foremost super-team being trapped in a dimensional rift, as well as the shocking appearance of the time-drifting Old Soldier, not seen since the darkest days of UsefulNotes/WorldWarII. But when he turns the story in, his editor insists that they print only what they can ''prove.'' After careful (and repeated) re-editing, the newspaper article ends up titled: ''Trolley delayed by shark.''
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* The second issue features an ordinary reporter caught up in a bizarre occurrence in the subways of Astro City, including a bizarre shark-demon cult, the return of a superhero thought to be dead years before, and the world's foremost super-team being trapped in a dimensional rift, as well as the shocking appearance of the time-drifting Old Soldier, not seen since the darkest days of UsefulNotes/WorldWarII. But when he turns the story in, his editor insists that they print only what they can ''prove.'' After careful (and repeated) re-editing, the newspaper article ends up titled: ''Trolley delayed by shark.''
