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* Somehow, the player still has his desk, even when in prison!
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* Somehow, the player still has his their desk, even when in prison!
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-->'''Cave Johnson:''' So the lab boys put me in the big head, switched me on and...uh...I don't know, I panicked. Killed a few of them. Said I'd kill more if they ever came back. Honestly, I-I regret that now.
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-->'''Cave Johnson:''' So the lab boys put me in the big head, switched me on and...uh... uh... I don't know, I panicked. Killed a few of them. Said I'd kill more if they ever came back. Honestly, I-I regret that now.
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* The scenes where a group of mantis discover a light bulb and manage to BUILD A ENTIRE FREAKING FUTURISTIC CITY out of a simple light bulb.
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* The RunningGag of in-between scenes where a group of mantis discover a light bulb and manage to BUILD A ENTIRE FREAKING FUTURISTIC CITY out of a simple light bulb.bulb. At least until the final act, with Cave's giant robot head having destroyed the city when it fell down.
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--->'''Cave Johnson:''' So the lab boys put me in the big head, switched me on and...uh...I don't know, I panicked. Killed a few of them. Said I'd kill more if they ever came back. Honestly, I-I regret that now.
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** It takes six months for Grady to make the toilet turret. Well, it actually took him one month. The other five was for another toilet turret, with [[MoreDakka a whole munch of different weapons glued on to it]].
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** It takes six months for Grady to make the toilet turret. Well, it actually took him one month. The other five was for another toilet turret, with [[MoreDakka a whole munch bunch of different weapons glued on to it]].
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* The titular desk job is nothing more than inspecting Aperture-made toilets. Fortunately the player only has to deal with the "boring" version of the desk job for the first three minutes of gameplay.
* Everything involving the invention of (this version of) the Aperture Science Turret. Especially since the prototype turrets seen here are made out of toilets.
** And how did Grady come up with the idea of the turret? He and the player saw a toilet that was [[MadeOfIncendium smoking]], then Grady fell in the toilet when it blasted him with water, ''then'' the player's attempts at getting Grady out wound up breaking the Ammunition pipeline overhead…just in time for a ton of bullets to ''spill out of it and into the water bowl of the toilet''. The comic timing of it has to be seen to be believed.
** It takes six months for Grady to make the toilet turret. Well, it actually took him one month. The other five was for another toilet turret, with [[MoreDakka a shitton of weapons glued on to it.]]
* Everything involving the invention of (this version of) the Aperture Science Turret. Especially since the prototype turrets seen here are made out of toilets.
** And how did Grady come up with the idea of the turret? He and the player saw a toilet that was [[MadeOfIncendium smoking]], then Grady fell in the toilet when it blasted him with water, ''then'' the player's attempts at getting Grady out wound up breaking the Ammunition pipeline overhead…just in time for a ton of bullets to ''spill out of it and into the water bowl of the toilet''. The comic timing of it has to be seen to be believed.
** It takes six months for Grady to make the toilet turret. Well, it actually took him one month. The other five was for another toilet turret, with [[MoreDakka a shitton of weapons glued on to it.]]
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* The titular desk job is nothing more than inspecting Aperture-made toilets. Fortunately Fortunately, the player only has to deal with the "boring" version of the desk job for the first three minutes of gameplay.
* Everything involving the invention of (this version of) the Aperture Science Turret. Especially since the prototype turrets seen here are made out of toilets.
** And how did Grady come up with the idea of the turret? He and the player saw a toilet that was [[MadeOfIncendium smoking]], then Grady fell in the toilet when it blasted him with water, ''then'' the player's attempts at getting Grady out wound up breaking the Ammunition pipeline overhead…just in time for a ton of bulletsgameplay; things start to ''spill out of it and into the water bowl of the toilet''. The comic timing of it has to be seen to be believed.
** It takes six months for Grady to make the toilet turret. Well, it actually took him one month. The other five was for another toilet turret, with [[MoreDakka a shitton of weapons glued on to it.]]get more interesting from here.
* Everything involving the invention of (this version of) the Aperture Science Turret. Especially since the prototype turrets seen here are made out of toilets.
** And how did Grady come up with the idea of the turret? He and the player saw a toilet that was [[MadeOfIncendium smoking]], then Grady fell in the toilet when it blasted him with water, ''then'' the player's attempts at getting Grady out wound up breaking the Ammunition pipeline overhead…just in time for a ton of bullets
** It takes six months for Grady to make the toilet turret. Well, it actually took him one month. The other five was for another toilet turret, with [[MoreDakka a shitton of weapons glued on to it.]]
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* Everything involving the invention of (this version of) the Aperture Science Turret. Especially since the prototype turrets seen here are made out of ''toilets''.
** And how did Grady come up with the idea of the turret? He and the player saw a toilet that was [[MadeOfIncendium smoking]], then Grady fell in the toilet when it blasted him with water, ''then'' the player's attempts at getting Grady out wound up breaking the Ammunition pipeline overhead…just in time for a ton of bullets to ''spill out of it and into the water bowl of the toilet''. The comic timing of it has to be seen to be believed.
** It takes six months for Grady to make the toilet turret. Well, it actually took him one month. The other five was for another toilet turret, with [[MoreDakka a whole munch of different weapons glued on to it]].
** And how did Grady come up with the idea of the turret? He and the player saw a toilet that was [[MadeOfIncendium smoking]], then Grady fell in the toilet when it blasted him with water, ''then'' the player's attempts at getting Grady out wound up breaking the Ammunition pipeline overhead…just in time for a ton of bullets to ''spill out of it and into the water bowl of the toilet''. The comic timing of it has to be seen to be believed.
** It takes six months for Grady to make the toilet turret. Well, it actually took him one month. The other five was for another toilet turret, with [[MoreDakka a whole munch of different weapons glued on to it]].
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*The scenes where a group of mantis discover a light bulb and manage to BUILD A ENTIRE FREAKING FUTURISTIC CITY out of a simple light bulb.
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--->'''Cave Johnson:''' You. In the overalls. Get to work, or you're fired.\\
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* The intro has Cave Johnson giving a rousing speech, calling the main character a genius and that their work will matter in the future. Then it turns out Grady put in the wrong tape, and what Cave Johnson actually says to rank-and-file employees (i.e. you) is much simpler:
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* The intro has Cave Johnson giving a rousing speech, calling the main character a genius and that their work will matter in the future. Then it turns out Grady put in the wrong tape, and what Cave Johnson actually says to rank-and-file employees (i.e. , you) is much simpler:
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* Everything involving the invention of the turrets seen in the main games. Especially since the prototype turrets seen here are made out of toilets.
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* Everything involving the invention of (this version of) the turrets seen in the main games.Aperture Science Turret. Especially since the prototype turrets seen here are made out of toilets.
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** It takes six months for Grady to make the toilet turret. Well, it actually took him one month. The other five was for another toilet turret with [[MoreDakka a shitton of weapons glued on to it.]]
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** It takes six months for Grady to make the toilet turret. Well, it actually took him one month. The other five was for another toilet turret turret, with [[MoreDakka a shitton of weapons glued on to it.]]
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--->'''Cave Johnson:''' You. In the overalls. Get to work or you're fired.\\
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--->'''Cave Johnson:''' You. In the overalls. Get to work work, or you're fired.\\
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* Somehow, the player still has his desk, even when in prison.
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* Somehow, the player still has his desk, even when in prison.prison!
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** Just the idea that Aperture had its own maximum security prison facility is worth a chuckle, if only for how hilariously dystopian the idea is.
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* The titular desk job is nothing more than inspecting Aperture-made toilets.
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* The titular desk job is nothing more than inspecting Aperture-made toilets. Fortunately the player only has to deal with the "boring" version of the desk job for the first three minutes of gameplay.
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** And how did Grady come up with the idea of the turret? He and the player saw a toilet that was [[MadeOfIncendium smoking]], then Grady fell in the toilet, then the player's attempts at getting Grady out wound up breaking the Ammunition pipeline overhead…just in time for a ton of bullets to spill into the water bowl of the toilet. The comic timing of it has to be seen to be believed.
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** And how did Grady come up with the idea of the turret? He and the player saw a toilet that was [[MadeOfIncendium smoking]], then Grady fell in the toilet, then toilet when it blasted him with water, ''then'' the player's attempts at getting Grady out wound up breaking the Ammunition pipeline overhead…just in time for a ton of bullets to spill ''spill out of it and into the water bowl of the toilet.toilet''. The comic timing of it has to be seen to be believed.
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'''Grady:''' They don't give out overalls anymore.
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'''Grady:''' They don't give out overalls overalls, anymore.
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--->'''Cave Johnson:''' So the lab boys put me in the big head, switched me on and...uh...I don't know, I panicked. Killed a few of them. Said I'd kill more if they ever came back. Honestly, I regret that now.
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--->'''Cave Johnson:''' So the lab boys put me in the big head, switched me on and...uh...I don't know, I panicked. Killed a few of them. Said I'd kill more if they ever came back. Honestly, I I-I regret that now.
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--->'''Cave Johnson:''' ''[frustrated sigh]'' You're both fired.
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--->'''Cave Johnson:''' ''[frustrated sigh]'' You're …You're both fired.fired.
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** And how did Grady come up with the idea of the turret? He and the player saw a toilet that was [[MadeOfIncendium smoking]], then Grady fell in the toilet, then the player's attempts at getting Grady out resulted in bullets spilling into the water bowl of the toilet.
* The intro has Cave Johnson giving a rousing speech, calling the main character a genius and that their work will matter in the future. Then it turns out Grady put in the wrong tape and what Cave Johnson actually says to rank-and-file employees is much simpler:
* The intro has Cave Johnson giving a rousing speech, calling the main character a genius and that their work will matter in the future. Then it turns out Grady put in the wrong tape and what Cave Johnson actually says to rank-and-file employees is much simpler:
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** And how did Grady come up with the idea of the turret? He and the player saw a toilet that was [[MadeOfIncendium smoking]], then Grady fell in the toilet, then the player's attempts at getting Grady out resulted wound up breaking the Ammunition pipeline overhead…just in time for a ton of bullets spilling to spill into the water bowl of the toilet.
toilet. The comic timing of it has to be seen to be believed.
* The intro has Cave Johnson giving a rousing speech, calling the main character a genius and that their work will matter in the future. Then it turns out Grady put in the wrongtape tape, and what Cave Johnson actually says to rank-and-file employees (i.e. you) is much simpler:
* The intro has Cave Johnson giving a rousing speech, calling the main character a genius and that their work will matter in the future. Then it turns out Grady put in the wrong
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* Somehow, the player still has his desk even when in prison.
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* Somehow, the player still has his desk desk, even when in prison.
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--->'''Cave Johnson:''' You're both fired.
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--->'''Cave Johnson:''' ''[frustrated sigh]'' You're both fired.
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* The titular desk job is nothing more than inspecting Aperture-made toilets.
* Everything involving the invention of the turrets seen in the main games. Especially since the prototype turrets seen here are made out of toilets.
** And how did Grady come up with the idea of the turret? He and the player saw a toilet that was [[MadeOfIncendium smoking]], then Grady fell in the toilet, then the player's attempts at getting Grady out resulted in bullets spilling into the water bowl of the toilet.
* The intro has Cave Johnson giving a rousing speech, calling the main character a genius and that their work will matter in the future. Then it turns out Grady put in the wrong tape and what Cave Johnson actually says to rank-and-file employees is much simpler:
--->'''Cave Johnson:''' You. In the overalls. Get to work or you're fired.\\
'''Grady:''' They don't give out overalls anymore.
* Somehow, the player still has his desk even when in prison.
* While depressing, Cave Johnson's ultimate fate is also darkly amusing. Especially when he explains why he's been all on his own, stuck in a giant head in his likeness:
--->'''Cave Johnson:''' So the lab boys put me in the big head, switched me on and...uh...I don't know, I panicked. Killed a few of them. Said I'd kill more if they ever came back. Honestly, I regret that now.
** And just when it looks like Grady and the player [[HopeSpot finally ended Johnson's suffering]], the back-up power to his head comes on.
--->'''Cave Johnson:''' You're both fired.
* Everything involving the invention of the turrets seen in the main games. Especially since the prototype turrets seen here are made out of toilets.
** And how did Grady come up with the idea of the turret? He and the player saw a toilet that was [[MadeOfIncendium smoking]], then Grady fell in the toilet, then the player's attempts at getting Grady out resulted in bullets spilling into the water bowl of the toilet.
* The intro has Cave Johnson giving a rousing speech, calling the main character a genius and that their work will matter in the future. Then it turns out Grady put in the wrong tape and what Cave Johnson actually says to rank-and-file employees is much simpler:
--->'''Cave Johnson:''' You. In the overalls. Get to work or you're fired.\\
'''Grady:''' They don't give out overalls anymore.
* Somehow, the player still has his desk even when in prison.
* While depressing, Cave Johnson's ultimate fate is also darkly amusing. Especially when he explains why he's been all on his own, stuck in a giant head in his likeness:
--->'''Cave Johnson:''' So the lab boys put me in the big head, switched me on and...uh...I don't know, I panicked. Killed a few of them. Said I'd kill more if they ever came back. Honestly, I regret that now.
** And just when it looks like Grady and the player [[HopeSpot finally ended Johnson's suffering]], the back-up power to his head comes on.
--->'''Cave Johnson:''' You're both fired.