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* Hawks spams the UA internship offer system with a whole series of offers from Izuku, each with increasingly ridiculous things written in the name space because he doesn't know Izuku's name.
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* Hawks spams the UA internship offer system with a whole series of offers from for Izuku, each with increasingly ridiculous things written in the name space because he doesn't know Izuku's name.
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* Nezu deliberately left Present Mic out of the loop regarding One For All ''ostensibly'' to test the credibility of the cover story, but in actuality because he wanted to record Mic's reaction to the Entrance Exam and put it on the staff chat. And indeed, when the moment comes, Mic's [[ClusterFBomb reaction]] to Izuku showing off Stormclad is suitably deafening (even through Eraserhead erasing his Quirk) until Midnight puts him to sleep.
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* Nezu deliberately left Present Mic out of the loop regarding One For All ''ostensibly'' to test the credibility of the cover story, story (much to the delight of Vlad King, the normal victim of being left out of the loop), but in actuality because he wanted to record Mic's reaction to the Entrance Exam and put it on the staff chat. And indeed, when the moment comes, Mic's [[ClusterFBomb reaction]] to Izuku showing off Stormclad is suitably deafening (even through Eraserhead erasing his Quirk) until Midnight puts him to sleep.
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CAUGHT ON CAMERA! Gang Orca and Hawks go head to head in an epic... street corner collision. Don’t walk and text, people!\\
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CAUGHT ON CAMERA! Gang Orca and Hawks go head to head in an epic... [[WatchWhereYoureGoing street corner collision. collision.]] Don’t walk and text, people!\\
Changed line(s) 15 (click to see context) from:
* Nezu deliberately left Present Mic out of the loop regarding One For All ''ostensibly'' to test the credibility of the cover story, but in actuality because he wanted to record Mic's reaction to the Entrance Exam and put it on the staff chat.
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* Nezu deliberately left Present Mic out of the loop regarding One For All ''ostensibly'' to test the credibility of the cover story, but in actuality because he wanted to record Mic's reaction to the Entrance Exam and put it on the staff chat. And indeed, when the moment comes, Mic's [[ClusterFBomb reaction]] to Izuku showing off Stormclad is suitably deafening (even through Eraserhead erasing his Quirk) until Midnight puts him to sleep.
-->'''Mic:''' C’mon, kiddos, green guy’s got the right idea, there ain’t no countd ''oooooohWAIT WHAT THE F- [[SoundEffectBleep (“Mic!”)]] IS THAT MIDORIYA!? SHOUTA, NEM, ARE YOU SEEING THIS!?'' WHAT THE HELL!? ''THE F-(“Mic!”) DID YOU GUYS DO TO HIM!?'' HE LOOKS LIKE THE F-(“Mic!”)-ING '''ENERGIZER BUNNY''' GOT INTO '''POPEYE’S SPINACH SUPPLY!''' DID YOU LET THE BOSSRAT DO SOME F-(“Mic!”)-ING ILLEGAL '''EXPERIMENT''' ON HIM OR SOMETHING, ''SHOUTA !? ''''NEM, DON’T YOU DARE GAS ME I NEED ANSWE-'''''
** Though Yamada is later mollified when Aizawa shares the video of Izuku getting One For All with him - including the part where All Might described how he activated it (clench your buttcheeks and yell "SMASH!") and [[SpitTake Nezu snorts his tea out his nose]].
* The ending of the sequel has the UA staff celebrating Izuku's successful entry into U.A., and who is the one to give the announcement? A series of video clips of Izuku himself spliced together like a CutAndPasteNote. Cue EverybodyLaughsEnding.
-->'''Izuku:''' I hate all of you.
-->'''Mic:''' C’mon, kiddos, green guy’s got the right idea, there ain’t no countd ''oooooohWAIT WHAT THE F- [[SoundEffectBleep (“Mic!”)]] IS THAT MIDORIYA!? SHOUTA, NEM, ARE YOU SEEING THIS!?'' WHAT THE HELL!? ''THE F-(“Mic!”) DID YOU GUYS DO TO HIM!?'' HE LOOKS LIKE THE F-(“Mic!”)-ING '''ENERGIZER BUNNY''' GOT INTO '''POPEYE’S SPINACH SUPPLY!''' DID YOU LET THE BOSSRAT DO SOME F-(“Mic!”)-ING ILLEGAL '''EXPERIMENT''' ON HIM OR SOMETHING, ''SHOUTA !? ''''NEM, DON’T YOU DARE GAS ME I NEED ANSWE-'''''
** Though Yamada is later mollified when Aizawa shares the video of Izuku getting One For All with him - including the part where All Might described how he activated it (clench your buttcheeks and yell "SMASH!") and [[SpitTake Nezu snorts his tea out his nose]].
* The ending of the sequel has the UA staff celebrating Izuku's successful entry into U.A., and who is the one to give the announcement? A series of video clips of Izuku himself spliced together like a CutAndPasteNote. Cue EverybodyLaughsEnding.
-->'''Izuku:''' I hate all of you.
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* Nezu designed the UA security systems to literally kick Hawks' ass.
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---> '''Gang Orca''', in an email: I would like to extend an offer of internship to the student currently in the announcer’s booth. Please expect a more formal and complete email to follow. Apologies for the aarghjsdnbpo8h4239499494877777777777777777777777777arhm
--->[Four narrative cuts later]
---> '''[=HeroWatch=] [=@HeroWatchOfficial=]''' · 2m
---> Gang Orca arrests two villains while trying to keep his phone #unsmashed. CONTENT WARNING: CONTAINS JUGGLING AND SWEARING.
--->[Four narrative cuts later]
---> '''[=HeroWatch=] [=@HeroWatchOfficial=]''' · 2m
---> Gang Orca arrests two villains while trying to keep his phone #unsmashed. CONTENT WARNING: CONTAINS JUGGLING AND SWEARING.
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--->[Four
[Four narrative cuts
--->
'''[=HeroWatch=] [=@HeroWatchOfficial=]''' ·
--->
Gang Orca arrests two villains while trying to keep his phone #unsmashed. CONTENT WARNING: CONTAINS JUGGLING AND SWEARING.
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--->'''Pro Hero Hawks''' (in texts): So when you see this spam of messages, call me back okat6gyhbuj
--->[{{Beat}}]
--->'''[=HeroWatch=] [=@HeroWatchOfficial=]''' · 1m
--->CAUGHT ON CAMERA! Gang Orca and Hawks go head to head in an epic... street corner collision. Don’t walk and text, people!
--->CONTENT WARNING: SWEARING [=#GangOrcaGang #HawkWatchers #GangOrca #Hawks #ProFails=]
--->[{{Beat}}]
--->'''[=HeroWatch=] [=@HeroWatchOfficial=]''' · 1m
--->CAUGHT ON CAMERA! Gang Orca and Hawks go head to head in an epic... street corner collision. Don’t walk and text, people!
--->CONTENT WARNING: SWEARING [=#GangOrcaGang #HawkWatchers #GangOrca #Hawks #ProFails=]
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--->'''Pro Hero Hawks''' (in texts): So when you see this spam of messages, call me back okat6gyhbuj
--->[{{Beat}}]
--->'''[=HeroWatch=]okat6gyhbuj\\
[{{Beat}}]\\
'''[=HeroWatch=] [=@HeroWatchOfficial=]''' ·1m
--->CAUGHT1m\\
CAUGHT ON CAMERA! Gang Orca and Hawks go head to head in an epic... street corner collision. Don’t walk and text,people!
--->CONTENTpeople!\\
CONTENT WARNING: SWEARING [=#GangOrcaGang #HawkWatchers #GangOrca #Hawks #ProFails=]
--->[{{Beat}}]
--->'''[=HeroWatch=]
[{{Beat}}]\\
'''[=HeroWatch=] [=@HeroWatchOfficial=]''' ·
--->CAUGHT
CAUGHT ON CAMERA! Gang Orca and Hawks go head to head in an epic... street corner collision. Don’t walk and text,
--->CONTENT
CONTENT WARNING: SWEARING [=#GangOrcaGang #HawkWatchers #GangOrca #Hawks #ProFails=]
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** Nezu deliberately left Present Mic out of the loop regarding One For All ''ostensibly'' to test the credibility of the cover story, but in actuality because he wanted to record Mic's reaction to the Entrance Exam and put it on the staff chat.
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--->“Is it a bird? Is it a plane? Or is it the #5 hero coming uninvited while the UA Barrier is in high-security anti-intruder mode?”
--->“Wait, what?”
--->“Whatever it is, it’s getting a warning shot!”
--->“Wait, what?”
--->“Whatever it is, it’s getting a warning shot!”
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--->“Wait, what?”
--->“Whatever
“Wait, what?”\\
“Whatever it is, it’s getting a warning
** The missile itself is designed so the tip looks like a boot. So Nezu can see the missile literally kick Hawks' ass.
** Hawks manages to destroy the missile and begins to boast about it... only to get caught by the ''second'' missile Nezu fired.
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* “Is it a bird? Is it a plane? Or is it the #5 hero coming uninvited while the UA Barrier is in high-security anti-intruder mode?”
“Wait, what?”
“Whatever it is, it’s getting a warning shot!”
“Wait, what?”
“Whatever it is, it’s getting a warning shot!”
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* “Is In a deleted scene, Hawks tries to fly into UA during the sports festival, and thus the area in under higher security measures. Nedzu recognizes it's him and calls him to make sure... Then fires a specially designed missile anyway.
--->“Is it a bird? Is it a plane? Or is it the #5 hero coming uninvited while the UA Barrier is in high-security anti-intruder mode?”
“Wait, --->“Wait, what?”
“Whatever --->“Whatever it is, it’s getting a warning shot!”
--->“Is it a bird? Is it a plane? Or is it the #5 hero coming uninvited while the UA Barrier is in high-security anti-intruder mode?”
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8“Is it a bird? Is it a plane? Or is it the #5 hero coming uninvited while the UA Barrier is in high-security anti-intruder mode?”
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** Nezu deliberately left Present Mic out of the loop regarding One For All ''ostensibly'' to test the credibility of the cover story, but in actuality because he wanted to record Mic's reaction to the Entrance Exam and put it on the staff chat.
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** Nezu deliberately left Present Mic out of the loop regarding One For All ''ostensibly'' to test the credibility of the cover story, but in actuality because he wanted to record Mic's reaction to the Entrance Exam and put it on the staff chat.chat.
8“Is it a bird? Is it a plane? Or is it the #5 hero coming uninvited while the UA Barrier is in high-security anti-intruder mode?”
“Wait, what?”
“Whatever it is, it’s getting a warning shot!”
8“Is it a bird? Is it a plane? Or is it the #5 hero coming uninvited while the UA Barrier is in high-security anti-intruder mode?”
“Wait, what?”
“Whatever it is, it’s getting a warning shot!”
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--> '''Gang Orca''', in an email: I would like to extend an offer of internship to the student currently in the announcer’s booth. Please expect a more formal and complete email to follow. Apologies for the aarghjsdnbpo8h4239499494877777777777777777777777777arhm
-->[Four narrative cuts later]
--> '''[=HeroWatch=] [=@HeroWatchOfficial=]''' · 2m
--> Gang Orca arrests two villains while trying to keep his phone #unsmashed. CONTENT WARNING: CONTAINS JUGGLING AND SWEARING.
-->[Four narrative cuts later]
--> '''[=HeroWatch=] [=@HeroWatchOfficial=]''' · 2m
--> Gang Orca arrests two villains while trying to keep his phone #unsmashed. CONTENT WARNING: CONTAINS JUGGLING AND SWEARING.
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** Later:
--->'''Pro Hero Hawks''' (in texts): So when you see this spam of messages, call me back okat6gyhbuj
--->[{{Beat}}]
--->'''[=HeroWatch=] [=@HeroWatchOfficial=]''' · 1m
--->CAUGHT ON CAMERA! Gang Orca and Hawks go head to head in an epic... street corner collision. Don’t walk and text, people!
--->CONTENT WARNING: SWEARING [=#GangOrcaGang #HawkWatchers #GangOrca #Hawks #ProFails=]
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--> '''Gang Orca''', in a letter: I would like to extend an offer of internship to the student currently in the announcer’s booth. Please expect a more formal and complete email to follow. Apologies for the aarghjsdnbpo8h4239499494877777777777777777777777777arhm
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--> '''Gang Orca''', in a letter: an email: I would like to extend an offer of internship to the student currently in the announcer’s booth. Please expect a more formal and complete email to follow. Apologies for the aarghjsdnbpo8h4239499494877777777777777777777777777arhm
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--> [=HeroWatch=] [=@HeroWatchOfficial=] · 2m
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--> [=HeroWatch=] [=@HeroWatchOfficial=] '''[=HeroWatch=] [=@HeroWatchOfficial=]''' · 2m
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* The cutaways to [=@HeroWatchOfficial=], most of which are timed as punchlines to shenanigans from previous scenes, dryly implying what happened after.
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* The cutaways to [=@HeroWatchOfficial=], most of which are timed as punchlines to shenanigans from previous scenes, dryly implying what happened after.scenes.
--> '''Gang Orca''', in a letter: I would like to extend an offer of internship to the student currently in the announcer’s booth. Please expect a more formal and complete email to follow. Apologies for the aarghjsdnbpo8h4239499494877777777777777777777777777arhm
-->[Four narrative cuts later]
--> '''Gang Orca''', in a letter: I would like to extend an offer of internship to the student currently in the announcer’s booth. Please expect a more formal and complete email to follow. Apologies for the aarghjsdnbpo8h4239499494877777777777777777777777777arhm
-->[Four narrative cuts later]
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* Nezu designed the UA security systems to literally kick Hawks' ass.
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* Nezu designed the UA security systems to literally kick Hawks' ass.ass.
** Nezu deliberately left Present Mic out of the loop regarding One For All ''ostensibly'' to test the credibility of the cover story, but in actuality because he wanted to record Mic's reaction to the Entrance Exam and put it on the staff chat.
** Nezu deliberately left Present Mic out of the loop regarding One For All ''ostensibly'' to test the credibility of the cover story, but in actuality because he wanted to record Mic's reaction to the Entrance Exam and put it on the staff chat.
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--> HeroWatch @HeroWatchOfficial · 2m
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--> HeroWatch @HeroWatchOfficial [=HeroWatch=] [=@HeroWatchOfficial=] · 2m
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--> HeroWatch @HeroWatchOfficial · 2m
--> Gang Orca arrests two villains while trying to keep his phone #unsmashed. CONTENT WARNING: CONTAINS JUGGLING AND SWEARING.
--> Gang Orca arrests two villains while trying to keep his phone #unsmashed. CONTENT WARNING: CONTAINS JUGGLING AND SWEARING.
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* The cutaways to @HeroWatchOfficial.
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* The cutaways to @HeroWatchOfficial.[=@HeroWatchOfficial=], most of which are timed as punchlines to shenanigans from previous scenes, dryly implying what happened after.
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* Hawks flew into his own window and then fell into a pool, where he flailed around in water and took a comedically long time for him to realize it was shallow enough to stand up in. His security footage caught it, and Mirko releases it over social media during their squabble over Izuku. In retaliation, he threatens her carrot fridge.
* Hawks spams the UA internship offer system with a whole series of offers from Izuku, each with increasingly ridiculous things written in the name space because he doesn't know Izuku's name.
* The cutaways to @HeroWatchOfficial.
* In the sequel, the Midoriyas collectively cry so much they apparently flood the UA staff room, set off the security alarms, and require the staff to seek a bilge pump. No one is surprised by this.
* Nezu designed the UA security systems to literally kick Hawks' ass.
* Hawks spams the UA internship offer system with a whole series of offers from Izuku, each with increasingly ridiculous things written in the name space because he doesn't know Izuku's name.
* The cutaways to @HeroWatchOfficial.
* In the sequel, the Midoriyas collectively cry so much they apparently flood the UA staff room, set off the security alarms, and require the staff to seek a bilge pump. No one is surprised by this.
* Nezu designed the UA security systems to literally kick Hawks' ass.
