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* In a dark way, Freddy nodding his head as he approaches Grady, as if to non-verbally say "Yeah, you are ''in fact'' going to die today!"
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* In a dark way, Freddy flashing Grady the SlasherSmile equivalent of a beaming grin and nodding his head as he approaches Grady, as if to non-verbally say "Yeah, you are ''in fact'' going to die today!"
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* Jesse’s high pitched screams are a prime source of unintentional hilarity. Of note is the scene where Freddy makes him kill his gym teacher. Afterward he stares at the glove for a few seconds, and promptly kills the dramatic scene with his hilarious scream.
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* Jesse’s high pitched screams are a prime source of unintentional hilarity. Of note is the scene where Freddy makes him kill his gym teacher. Afterward he stares at the glove for a few seconds, and promptly kills the dramatic scene with his hilarious scream.scream.
* In a dark way, Freddy nodding his head as he approaches Grady, as if to non-verbally say "Yeah, you are ''in fact'' going to die today!"
* In a dark way, Freddy nodding his head as he approaches Grady, as if to non-verbally say "Yeah, you are ''in fact'' going to die today!"
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** And what helps sell it is that the dad's face in particular just screams [[SarcasmMode "Oh great.]] [[OhNoNotAgain This again."]]
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* Jesse dancing by himself in his room. It quickly becomes ''very'' homoerotic. And then his mother and (supposed) love interest walk in on him.
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* Jesse dancing by himself in his room. It quickly becomes ''very'' homoerotic. And then his mother and (supposed) love interest walk in on him.him.
* Jesse’s high pitched screams are a prime source of unintentional hilarity. Of note is the scene where Freddy makes him kill his gym teacher. Afterward he stares at the glove for a few seconds, and promptly kills the dramatic scene with his hilarious scream.
* Jesse’s high pitched screams are a prime source of unintentional hilarity. Of note is the scene where Freddy makes him kill his gym teacher. Afterward he stares at the glove for a few seconds, and promptly kills the dramatic scene with his hilarious scream.
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-->'''Jesse:''' Something is trying to get inside my body!
-->'''Grady:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Yeah, and she's female, and she's waiting for you in the cabana]]. [[HoYay And YOU wanna sleep with me]].
-->'''Grady:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Yeah, and she's female, and she's waiting for you in the cabana]]. [[HoYay And YOU wanna sleep with me]].
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-->'''Jesse:''' Something is trying to get inside my body!
-->'''Grady:'''body!\\
'''Grady:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Yeah, and she's female, and she's waiting for you in the cabana]].[[HoYay And YOU wanna sleep with me]].me.
-->'''Grady:'''
'''Grady:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Yeah, and she's female, and she's waiting for you in the cabana]].
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* Grady can't go to the party. Why?
-->'''Grady:''' I pushed my grandma down a flight of stairs.
** "Shut UP, Grady!"
-->'''Grady:''' I pushed my grandma down a flight of stairs.
** "Shut UP, Grady!"
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* Jesse's family's reactions to hearing Jesse [[ScreamsLikeALittleGirl waking up from a nightmare]].
-->'''Angela:''' Mommy? Why can't Jesse wake up like everybody else?
-->'''Angela:''' Mommy? Why can't Jesse wake up like everybody else?
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-->'''Grady:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Yeah, and she's female, and she's waiting for you in the cabana]]. [[HoYay And YOU wanna sleep with me]].
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-->'''Grady:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Yeah, and she's female, and she's waiting for you in the cabana]]. [[HoYay And YOU wanna sleep with me]].me]].
* Jesse dancing by himself in his room. It quickly becomes ''very'' homoerotic. And then his mother and (supposed) love interest walk in on him.
* Jesse dancing by himself in his room. It quickly becomes ''very'' homoerotic. And then his mother and (supposed) love interest walk in on him.
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* "Help yourself, [[PrecisionFStrike fucker]]!"
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* "Help yourself, [[PrecisionFStrike fucker]]!"fucker]]!"
* This exchange:
-->'''Jesse:''' Something is trying to get inside my body!
-->'''Grady:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Yeah, and she's female, and she's waiting for you in the cabana]]. [[HoYay And YOU wanna sleep with me]].
* This exchange:
-->'''Jesse:''' Something is trying to get inside my body!
-->'''Grady:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Yeah, and she's female, and she's waiting for you in the cabana]]. [[HoYay And YOU wanna sleep with me]].
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* "Help yourself, [[PrecisionFStrike fucker]]!"
