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* In neither series does Ashka ever learn about the existence of guns. She learns about gunpowder, but only in its use as an explosive. She thinks the Spellbinder power suit--which is essentially little more than a taser that also functions as body armor--makes her practically unstoppable to anyone not wearing the suit, and never realizes she could be taken down quite easily by a firearm.
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* In neither series does Ashka ever learn about the existence of guns. She learns about gunpowder, but only in its use as an explosive.explosive material. She thinks the Spellbinder power suit--which is essentially little more than a taser that also functions as body armor--makes her practically unstoppable to anyone not wearing the suit, and never realizes she could be taken down quite easily by a firearm.
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* In neither series does Ashka ever learn about guns or even imagine such a thing could exist. She learns the word "gunpowder," but only in its use as an explosive. She thinks the Spellbinder power suit--which is essentially little more than a taser that also functions as body armor--makes her practically unstoppable to anyone not wearing the suit, and never realizes she could be taken down quite easily by a firearm.
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* In neither series does Ashka ever learn about guns or even imagine such a thing could exist. the existence of guns. She learns the word "gunpowder," about gunpowder, but only in its use as an explosive. She thinks the Spellbinder power suit--which is essentially little more than a taser that also functions as body armor--makes her practically unstoppable to anyone not wearing the suit, and never realizes she could be taken down quite easily by a firearm.
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* In neither series does Ashka ever learn about guns or even imagine such a thing could exist. She learns the word "gunpowder," but only in its use as an explosive. She thinks the Spellbinder power suit--which is essentially little more than a stun gun that also functions as body armor--makes her practically unstoppable to anyone not wearing the suit, and never realizes she could be taken down quite easily by a gun.
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* In neither series does Ashka ever learn about guns or even imagine such a thing could exist. She learns the word "gunpowder," but only in its use as an explosive. She thinks the Spellbinder power suit--which is essentially little more than a stun gun taser that also functions as body armor--makes her practically unstoppable to anyone not wearing the suit, and never realizes she could be taken down quite easily by a gun.firearm.
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* At first, the fact that everyone is able to perfectly set coordinates for the Land of the Dragon Lord and Kathy's World without any troubles looks at least bizzare. Wasn't it stated that there is infinite number of harmonic worlds, so it should require some more precise procedure? But then few times the control mechanism is hit, broken or tempered with, resulting with the same setting sending the boat into different worlds. The control mechanism is simply ''very'' crude, with relatively small scale, giving finite combinations from all those infinite adresses.
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* At first, the fact that everyone is able to perfectly set coordinates for the Land of the Dragon Lord and Kathy's World without any troubles looks at least bizzare.bizarre. Wasn't it stated that there is infinite number of harmonic worlds, so it should require some more precise procedure? But then few times the control mechanism is hit, broken or tempered with, resulting with the same setting sending the boat into different worlds. The control mechanism is simply ''very'' crude, with relatively small scale, giving finite combinations from all those infinite adresses.addresses.
* In neither series does Ashka ever learn about guns or even imagine such a thing could exist. She learns the word "gunpowder," but only in its use as an explosive. She thinks the Spellbinder power suit--which is essentially little more than a stun gun that also functions as body armor--makes her practically unstoppable to anyone not wearing the suit, and never realizes she could be taken down quite easily by a gun.
* In neither series does Ashka ever learn about guns or even imagine such a thing could exist. She learns the word "gunpowder," but only in its use as an explosive. She thinks the Spellbinder power suit--which is essentially little more than a stun gun that also functions as body armor--makes her practically unstoppable to anyone not wearing the suit, and never realizes she could be taken down quite easily by a gun.
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* At first, the fact that everyone is able to perfectly set coordinates for the Land of the Dragon Lord and Kathy's World without any troubles looks at least bizzare. Wasn't it staded that there is infinite number of harmonic worlds, so it should require some more precise procedure? But then few times the control mechanism is hit, broken or tempered with, resulting with the same setting sending the boat into different worlds. The control mechanism is simply ''very'' crude, with relatively small scale, giving finite combinations from all those infinite adresses.
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* At first, the fact that everyone is able to perfectly set coordinates for the Land of the Dragon Lord and Kathy's World without any troubles looks at least bizzare. Wasn't it staded stated that there is infinite number of harmonic worlds, so it should require some more precise procedure? But then few times the control mechanism is hit, broken or tempered with, resulting with the same setting sending the boat into different worlds. The control mechanism is simply ''very'' crude, with relatively small scale, giving finite combinations from all those infinite adresses.
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* At first, the fact that everyone is able to perfectly set coordinates for the Land of the Dragon Lord and Kathy's World without any troubles looks at least bizzare. Wasn't it staded that there is infinite number of harmonic worlds, so it should require some more precise procedure? But then few times the control mechanism is hit, broken or tempered with, resulting with the same setting sending the boat into different worlds. The control mechanism is simply ''very'' crude, with relatively small scale, giving finite combinations from all those infinite adresses.
* At first, the fact that everyone is able to perfectly set coordinates for the Land of the Dragon Lord and Kathy's World without any troubles looks at least bizzare. Wasn't it staded that there is infinite number of harmonic worlds, so it should require some more precise procedure? But then few times the control mechanism is hit, broken or tempered with, resulting with the same setting sending the boat into different worlds. The control mechanism is simply ''very'' crude, with relatively small scale, giving finite combinations from all those infinite adresses.
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* There are children—some of them very young—among the Marauders. Spellbinders are banishing ''children'' to the wastelands.
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* There are children—some of them very young—among the Marauders. Spellbinders are banishing ''children'' to the wastelands.wastelands.
** Not all the Marauders had been banished; some simply ran away. Also, some of the kids could have been born in the village. If I had been banished, and subsequently rescued by the Marauders, I'd be getting my family out of Spellbinder control, too.
** Not all the Marauders had been banished; some simply ran away. Also, some of the kids could have been born in the village. If I had been banished, and subsequently rescued by the Marauders, I'd be getting my family out of Spellbinder control, too.
