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This is better.
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Removing Natter, among other things.
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* Nobody having a problem with a cream that makes everyone white.
* Luna believing forced impregnation is not bad enough for Draco Malfoy. What can be worse than raping a child repeatedly, while said child is surrounded by soulsuckers?
** Given her family is all crazy, probably some mad form of torture and death.
* Our [[DesignatedHero "heroes"]] kidnapping women to make them breeder machines, immortal and beautiful, but with no free will. The real Fridge Horror here is that everyone accepts their claim of consent at face value, despite this only happening after they were brainwashed, making the “consent” useless. Is this how the legal system works in Lionheart-land?
* As mentioned on Blog/DasSporking, the fact that Lionheart can go from writing something as horrific as the glorification of slavery to a whimsical author’s note about the characters’ eccentricities is horrifying in its own way, because it means that he [[GiftedlyBad genuinely does not see the story’s problems]], and [[ObliviouslyEvil thinks he’s writing a typical fanfic]].
* Harry takes out life insurance policies on the Dursleys and uses a combination of forged documents and Confundus charms to make it seem like they've had them for years. But while he talks about making it look like the Dursleys have been paying their premiums, there's no mention of him actually transferring money. If the insurance company notices that thousands of pounds haven't been showing up on the balance sheets, some innocent person's going to be falsely accused of embezzlement.
* Luna believing forced impregnation is not bad enough for Draco Malfoy. What can be worse than raping a child repeatedly, while said child is surrounded by soulsuckers?
** Given her family is all crazy, probably some mad form of torture and death.
* Our [[DesignatedHero "heroes"]] kidnapping women to make them breeder machines, immortal and beautiful, but with no free will. The real Fridge Horror here is that everyone accepts their claim of consent at face value, despite this only happening after they were brainwashed, making the “consent” useless. Is this how the legal system works in Lionheart-land?
* As mentioned on Blog/DasSporking, the fact that Lionheart can go from writing something as horrific as the glorification of slavery to a whimsical author’s note about the characters’ eccentricities is horrifying in its own way, because it means that he [[GiftedlyBad genuinely does not see the story’s problems]], and [[ObliviouslyEvil thinks he’s writing a typical fanfic]].
* Harry takes out life insurance policies on the Dursleys and uses a combination of forged documents and Confundus charms to make it seem like they've had them for years. But while he talks about making it look like the Dursleys have been paying their premiums, there's no mention of him actually transferring money. If the insurance company notices that thousands of pounds haven't been showing up on the balance sheets, some innocent person's going to be falsely accused of embezzlement.
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* Nobody having a problem with a cream realizing that makes everyone white.
magically turning minorities into white people will do nothing to stop racism.
* Luna believing forced impregnation is not bad enough for Draco Malfoy. What can be worse than raping a child repeatedly, while said child is surrounded bysoulsuckers?
** Given her family is all crazy, probably some mad form of torture and death.
soulsuckers?
* Our [[DesignatedHero "heroes"]] kidnapping women to make them breeder machines, immortal and beautiful, but with no free will. The real Fridge Horror here is that everyone accepts their claim of consent at face value, despite this only happening after they were brainwashed, making the “consent” useless. Is this how the legal system works inLionheart-land?
Ornstead's fantasy?
* As mentioned on Blog/DasSporking, the fact thatLionheart the author can go from writing something as horrific as the glorification of slavery to a whimsical author’s note about the characters’ eccentricities is horrifying in its own way, because it means that he [[GiftedlyBad genuinely does not see the story’s problems]], and [[ObliviouslyEvil thinks he’s writing a typical fanfic]].
* Harry takes out life insurance policies on the Dursleys and uses a combination of forged documents and Confunduscharms Charms to make it seem like they've had them for years. But while he talks about making it look like the Dursleys have been paying their premiums, there's no mention of him actually transferring money. If the insurance company notices that thousands of pounds haven't been showing up on the balance sheets, some innocent person's going to be falsely accused of embezzlement.
* Luna believing forced impregnation is not bad enough for Draco Malfoy. What can be worse than raping a child repeatedly, while said child is surrounded by
** Given her family is all crazy, probably some mad form of torture and death.
* Our [[DesignatedHero "heroes"]] kidnapping women to make them breeder machines, immortal and beautiful, but with no free will. The real Fridge Horror here is that everyone accepts their claim of consent at face value, despite this only happening after they were brainwashed, making the “consent” useless. Is this how the legal system works in
* As mentioned on Blog/DasSporking, the fact that
* Harry takes out life insurance policies on the Dursleys and uses a combination of forged documents and Confundus
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* Harry takes out life insurance policies on the Dursleys and uses a combination of forged documents and Confundus charms to make it seem like they've had them for years. But while he talks about making it look like the Dursleys have been paying their premiums, there's no mention of him actually transferring money. If the insurance company notices that thousands of pounds haven't been showing up on the balance sheets, some innocent person's going to be falsely accused of embezzlement.
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* Harry takes out life insurance policies on the Dursleys and uses a combination of forged documents and Confundus charms to make it seem like they've had them for years. But while he talks about making it look like the Dursleys have been paying their premiums, there's no mention of him actually transferring money. If the insurance company notices that thousands of pounds haven't been showing up on the balance sheets, some innocent person's going to be falsely accused of embezzlement.embezzlement.
* The Death Eaters apparently ''rape Muggle women'' as routine to the point it's only mentioned in a throwaway line.
* The Death Eaters apparently ''rape Muggle women'' as routine to the point it's only mentioned in a throwaway line.
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** Given her family is all crazy, probably some mad form of torture and death.
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* As mentioned on Blog/DasSporking, the fact that Lionheart can go from writing something as horrific as the glorification of slavery to a whimsical author’s note about the characters’ eccentricities is horrifying in its own way, because it means that he [[GiftedlyBad genuinely does not see the story’s problems]], and [[ObliviouslyEvil thinks he’s writing a typical fanfic]].
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* As mentioned on Blog/DasSporking, the fact that Lionheart can go from writing something as horrific as the glorification of slavery to a whimsical author’s note about the characters’ eccentricities is horrifying in its own way, because it means that he [[GiftedlyBad genuinely does not see the story’s problems]], and [[ObliviouslyEvil thinks he’s writing a typical fanfic]].fanfic]].
* Harry takes out life insurance policies on the Dursleys and uses a combination of forged documents and Confundus charms to make it seem like they've had them for years. But while he talks about making it look like the Dursleys have been paying their premiums, there's no mention of him actually transferring money. If the insurance company notices that thousands of pounds haven't been showing up on the balance sheets, some innocent person's going to be falsely accused of embezzlement.
* Harry takes out life insurance policies on the Dursleys and uses a combination of forged documents and Confundus charms to make it seem like they've had them for years. But while he talks about making it look like the Dursleys have been paying their premiums, there's no mention of him actually transferring money. If the insurance company notices that thousands of pounds haven't been showing up on the balance sheets, some innocent person's going to be falsely accused of embezzlement.
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* Our [[DesignatedHero "heroes"]] kidnapping women to make them breeder machines, immortal and beautiful, but with no free will. The real Fridge Horror here is that everyone accepts their claim of consent at face value, despite this only happening after they were brainwashed, making the “consent” useless. Is this how the legal system works in Lionheart-land?
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* Our [[DesignatedHero "heroes"]] kidnapping women to make them breeder machines, immortal and beautiful, but with no free will. The real Fridge Horror here is that everyone accepts their claim of consent at face value, despite this only happening after they were brainwashed, making the “consent” useless. Is this how the legal system works in Lionheart-land?Lionheart-land?
* As mentioned on Blog/DasSporking, the fact that Lionheart can go from writing something as horrific as the glorification of slavery to a whimsical author’s note about the characters’ eccentricities is horrifying in its own way, because it means that he [[GiftedlyBad genuinely does not see the story’s problems]], and [[ObliviouslyEvil thinks he’s writing a typical fanfic]].
* As mentioned on Blog/DasSporking, the fact that Lionheart can go from writing something as horrific as the glorification of slavery to a whimsical author’s note about the characters’ eccentricities is horrifying in its own way, because it means that he [[GiftedlyBad genuinely does not see the story’s problems]], and [[ObliviouslyEvil thinks he’s writing a typical fanfic]].
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* Nobody having a problem with a cream that makes everyone white.
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* Our "heroes" [[DesignatedHero "heroes"]] kidnapping women to make them breeder machines, immortal and beautiful, but with no free will. The real Fridge Horror here is that everyone accepts their claim of consent at face value, despite this only happening after they were brainwashed, making the “consent” useless. Is this how the legal system works in Lionheart-land?
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* Luna believing forced impregnation is not bad enough for Draco Malfoy. What can be worse than raping a child?
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* Luna believing forced impregnation is not bad enough for Draco Malfoy. What can be worse than raping a child?child repeatedly, while said child is surrounded by soulsuckers?
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* Our "heroes" kidnapping women to make them breeder machines, immortal and beautiful, but with no free will. The real Fridge Horror here is that everyone accepts their claim of consent at face value, despite this only happening after they were brainwashed, making the “consent” useless. Is this how the legal system works in Lionhearted-land?
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* Our "heroes" kidnapping women to make them breeder machines, immortal and beautiful, but with no free will. The real Fridge Horror here is that everyone accepts their claim of consent at face value, despite this only happening after they were brainwashed, making the “consent” useless. Is this how the legal system works in Lionhearted-land?Lionheart-land?
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As much as I agree that she’s the most evil person in the fic, she doesn’t actually qualify for Complete Monster status according to that trope’s strict rules.
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* Our "heroes" kidnapping women to make them breeder machines, immortal and beautiful, but with no free will.
* Our "heroes" kidnapping women to make them breeder machines, immortal and beautiful, but with no free will.
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* [[CompleteMonster Luna]] Luna believing forced impregnation is not bad enough for Draco Malfoy. What can be worse than raping a child?
* Our "heroes" kidnapping women to make them breeder machines, immortal and beautiful, but with no free will. The real Fridge Horror here is that everyone accepts their claim of consent at face value, despite this only happening after they were brainwashed, making the “consent” useless. Is this how the legal system works in Lionhearted-land?
* Our "heroes" kidnapping women to make them breeder machines, immortal and beautiful, but with no free will. The real Fridge Horror here is that everyone accepts their claim of consent at face value, despite this only happening after they were brainwashed, making the “consent” useless. Is this how the legal system works in Lionhearted-land?
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*[[CompleteMonster Luna]] believing forced impregnation is not bad enough for Draco Malfoy. What can be worse than raping a child?
* Our "heroes" kidnapping women to make them breeder machines, immortal and beautiful, but with no free will.
*[[CompleteMonster Luna]] believing forced impregnation is not bad enough for Draco Malfoy. What can be worse than raping a child?
* Our "heroes" kidnapping women to make them breeder machines, immortal and beautiful, but with no free will.
