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* Chapter 46 brings up the unpleasant consequences of plantfolk being able to spread airborne pollen with a horny treant bombing the town with pollen. As it stands, it's the equivalent of a male pervert able to commit mass sexual harassment of all the female plantfolk in town at once; even if they aren't compatible with the pollen, getting hit by it and becoming horny against their will is something that terrifies them enough that they join Ivy in burying themselves.
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* Chapter 46 brings up the unpleasant consequences of plantfolk being able to spread airborne pollen with a horny treant bombing the town with pollen. As it stands, it's the equivalent of a male pervert able to commit mass sexual harassment of all the female plantfolk in town at once; even if they aren't compatible with the pollen, getting hit by it and becoming horny against their will is something that terrifies them enough that they join Ivy in burying themselves.themselves.
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* Succubi are the ideal sexual partner for ''any'' male. Including non-mammalian/humanoid, so they can collect pollen and/or grow flowers (for plantfolk), or lay eggs (bird- and fish- people) as the situation warrants. Presumably, they can shapeshift their unmentionables to adapt to the myriad ways insects do the doo-dee-doo-dee-doo as well.
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* Succubi are the ideal sexual partner for ''any'' male. Including non-mammalian/humanoid, so they can collect pollen and/or grow flowers (for plantfolk), or lay eggs (bird- and fish- people) as the situation warrants. Presumably, they can shapeshift their unmentionables to adapt to the myriad ways insects do the doo-dee-doo-dee-doo as well.
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* Succubi are the ideal sexual partner for ''any'' male. Including non-mammalian/humanoid, so they can collect pollen and/or grow flowers (for plantfolk), or lay eggs (bird- and fish- people) as the situation warrants. Presumably, they can shapeshift their unmentionables to adapt to the myriad ways insects do the doo-dee-doo-dee-doo as well.
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* Chapter 48 deals with an art-spirit brothel that allows the customer to have sex with the subject of a picture. However, the girls can't recreate anything that's not part of that picture, even if there's writing involved. Personality? That's not part of the artwork, no matter what the writing says. Same with skills. Censorship? The mosaics/bars may as well be SomeKindOfForceField. A one-off drawing featuring an outfit? May as well be part of the character's skin, because that's how the character was drawn. Hell, if the character was only drawn frontways, she won't even have a back at all!
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* Chapter 48 deals with an art-spirit brothel that allows the customer to have sex with the subject of a picture. However, the girls can't recreate anything that's not part of that picture, even if there's writing involved. Personality? That's not part of the artwork, no matter what the writing says. Same with skills. Censorship? The mosaics/bars may as well be SomeKindOfForceField. A one-off drawing featuring an outfit? May as well be part of the character's skin, because that's how the character was drawn. Hell, if the character was only ever drawn frontways, she won't even have a back at all!
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* Chapter 48 deals with an art-spirit brothel that allows the customer to have sex with the subject of a picture. However, the girls can't recreate anything that's not part of that picture, even if there's writing involved. Personality? That's not part of the artwork, no matter what the writing says. Same with skills. Censorship? The mosaics/bars may as well be SomeKindOfForceField. A one-off drawing featuring an outfit? May as well be part of the character's skin, because that's how the character was drawn. Hell, if the character was only drawn frontways, she won't even have a back at all!
