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Just imagine a child accidentally using slip on someone walking down the stares.
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Just imagine a child accidentally using slip on someone walking down the stares.stairs.
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** the attacked on the silvermoon in by a group of blue rank adventurers [[spoiler:luckily Dolan and Bear(2 former adventurers are there).]]
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** the attacked The attack on the silvermoon in by a group of blue rank adventurers [[spoiler:luckily Dolan and Bear(2 former adventurers are there).]]
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** What if Touya didn't learned [apports] out of thousands of Null spells from his tolme when they first encounter a phrase.
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** What if Touya didn't learned [apports] out of thousands of Null spells from his tolme tome when they first encounter a phrase.
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* Volume 16
** The territory of Lowe has a high deposit of mithril which give them defense against golems(mess with their system) and other places like Rephan, thus the western continent seem to don't value it. Unlike the eastern continent.
** The territory of Lowe has a high deposit of mithril which give them defense against golems(mess with their system) and other places like Rephan, thus the western continent seem to don't value it. Unlike the eastern continent.
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** Why was Dolan surprised when Touya made a Shogi Board, as a former adventurer cursed/trap boxes/chest would have been something he would be aware of.
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** Why was Dolan surprised when Touya made a Shogi Board, as a former adventurer cursed/trap boxes/chest boxes/chests would have been something he would be aware of.of.
* Volume 9
** Bowman learned about Wood Gollem breeding from Deborah Elks notes, in the previous volume it was said by Monica that the Domination needle was created by Deborah Elks, most likely the needles are meant to control the golems with Bowman using Slavery Collar.
* Volume 12
** People of the Reverse world seem to be surprised to see metals Touya carry around, most likely due to the reliance on golems they already overmined the metals thus making them rare.
* Volume 9
** Bowman learned about Wood Gollem breeding from Deborah Elks notes, in the previous volume it was said by Monica that the Domination needle was created by Deborah Elks, most likely the needles are meant to control the golems with Bowman using Slavery Collar.
* Volume 12
** People of the Reverse world seem to be surprised to see metals Touya carry around, most likely due to the reliance on golems they already overmined the metals thus making them rare.
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*** Just imagine a child accidentally using slip on someone walking down the stares.
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-->'''Touya''' “That’s not it, alright! Don’t say something scary like that!”
Apparently, inside Moroha nee-san’s head, Luna was a girl who I picked up and then threw away, and with love and hate in her heart, came to the castle to commit a double suicide with me.
Apparently, inside Moroha nee-san’s head, Luna was a girl who I picked up and then threw away, and with love and hate in her heart, came to the castle to commit a double suicide with me.
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-->'''Touya''' “That’s not it, alright! Don’t say something scary like that!”
that!” Apparently, inside Moroha nee-san’s head, Luna was a girl who I picked up and then threw away, and with love and hate in her heart, came to the castle to commit a double suicide with me.
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'''Touya''' “That’s not it, alright! Don’t say something scary like that!”
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** How many love complications does Moroha knew, as the Goddess of swords, that ended via death by violence? given her idea what Touya's relationship with Luna.--->'''Moroha''' “Touya-kun, this is my advice as your older sister, but you really shouldn’t engage in the kind of adultery that involves drawing blades, you know.”
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** How many love complications does Moroha knew, as the Goddess of swords, that ended via death by violence? given her idea what Touya's relationship with Luna.--->'''Moroha''' Luna.
-->'''Moroha''' “Touya-kun, this is my advice as your older sister, but you really shouldn’t engage in the kind of adultery that involves drawing blades, you know.”
-->'''Moroha''' “Touya-kun, this is my advice as your older sister, but you really shouldn’t engage in the kind of adultery that involves drawing blades, you know.”
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** How many love complications does Moroha knew, as the Goddess of swords, that ended via death by violence? given her idea what Touya's relationship with Luna.---->[[quoteblock]]“Touya-kun, this is my advice as your older sister, but you really shouldn’t engage in the kind of adultery that involves drawing blades, you know.”
“That’s not it, alright! Don’t say something scary like that!”
Apparently, inside Moroha nee-san’s head, Luna was a girl who I picked up and then threw away, and with love and hate in her heart, came to the castle to commit a double suicide with me.[[/quoteblock]]
“That’s not it, alright! Don’t say something scary like that!”
Apparently, inside Moroha nee-san’s head, Luna was a girl who I picked up and then threw away, and with love and hate in her heart, came to the castle to commit a double suicide with me.[[/quoteblock]]
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** How many love complications does Moroha knew, as the Goddess of swords, that ended via death by violence? given her idea what Touya's relationship with Luna.---->[[quoteblock]]“Touya-kun, --->'''Moroha''' “Touya-kun, this is my advice as your older sister, but you really shouldn’t engage in the kind of adultery that involves drawing blades, you know.”
'''Touya''' “That’s not it, alright! Don’t say something scary like that!”
Apparently, inside Moroha nee-san’s head, Luna was a girl who I picked up and then threw away, and with love and hate in her heart, came to the castle to commit a double suicide with me.[[/quoteblock]]
'''Touya''' “That’s not it, alright! Don’t say something scary like that!”
Apparently, inside Moroha nee-san’s head, Luna was a girl who I picked up and then threw away, and with love and hate in her heart, came to the castle to commit a double suicide with me.
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** How many love complications does Moroha knew, as the Goddess of swords, that ended via death by violence? given her idea what Touya's relationship with Luna.[[quoteblock]]“Touya-kun, this is my advice as your older sister, but you really shouldn’t engage in the kind of adultery that involves drawing blades, you know.”
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** How many love complications does Moroha knew, as the Goddess of swords, that ended via death by violence? given her idea what Touya's relationship with Luna.[[quoteblock]]“Touya-kun, ---->[[quoteblock]]“Touya-kun, this is my advice as your older sister, but you really shouldn’t engage in the kind of adultery that involves drawing blades, you know.”
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** Null spells and Mystic eyes: can be seen as a danger as any inborn power in fiction in the hand of children according to Yumina's statement--> '''Yumina:''' "For example, were the Fire spell [Ignis Fire] to dwell in a person’s eyes, it would give them the Mystic Eyes of Conflagration, and if the Null spell [Paralysis] were to dwell in one’s eyes, they would become the Mystic Eyes of Petrification.".
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** Null spells and Mystic eyes: can be seen as a danger as any inborn power in fiction in the hand of children according to Yumina's statement--> statement
--> '''Yumina:''' "For example, were the Fire spell [Ignis Fire] to dwell in a person’s eyes, it would give them the Mystic Eyes of Conflagration, and if the Null spell [Paralysis] were to dwell in one’s eyes, they would become the Mystic Eyes of Petrification.".
--> '''Yumina:''' "For example, were the Fire spell [Ignis Fire] to dwell in a person’s eyes, it would give them the Mystic Eyes of Conflagration, and if the Null spell [Paralysis] were to dwell in one’s eyes, they would become the Mystic Eyes of Petrification.".
