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* It's lucky that if you sabotage Sierra's racecar, it only kills her rather than her crashing into other cars.
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* Providence is, at its heart, about preserving the wealth and power of a group of the corporate elite; with the Partners revealed, it seems to itself be run like a corporation, with the Partners as its "board", so to speak, and the Constant as its "[=CEO=]". As powerful as he is as the Heralds' commander, how much he himself benefits from the entirety of the scheme depends on the whims of the "shareholders", who are fairly constant in contrast to the position of Constant, which has changed hands at least once.
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* Providence is, at its heart, about preserving the wealth and power of a group of the corporate elite; with the Partners revealed, it seems to itself be run like a corporation, with the Partners as its "board", so to speak, and the Constant as its "[=CEO=]". As powerful as he is as the Heralds' commander, how much he himself benefits from the entirety of the scheme depends on the whims of the "shareholders", who are fairly constant in contrast to (ironically) the position of Constant, which has changed hands at least once.
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* Providence is, at its heart, about preserving the wealth and power of a group of the corporate elite; with the Partners revealed, it seems to itself be run like a corporation, with the Partners as its "board", so to speak, and the Constant as its [=CEO=]. As powerful as he is as the Heralds' commander, how much he himself benefits from the entirety of the scheme depends on the whims of the "shareholders".
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* Providence is, at its heart, about preserving the wealth and power of a group of the corporate elite; with the Partners revealed, it seems to itself be run like a corporation, with the Partners as its "board", so to speak, and the Constant as its [=CEO=]. "[=CEO=]". As powerful as he is as the Heralds' commander, how much he himself benefits from the entirety of the scheme depends on the whims of the "shareholders"."shareholders", who are fairly constant in contrast to the position of Constant, which has changed hands at least once.
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* Providence is, at its heart, about preserving the wealth and power of a group of the corporate elite; with the Partners revealed, it seems to itself be run like a corporation, with the Partners as its "board", so to speak, and the Constant as its [=CEO=]. As powerful as he is as the Heralds' commander, how much he himself benefits from the entirety of the scheme depends on the whims of the "shareholders".
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** The Constant has embezzled all of the Partners' shares into his bank account and escaped. While unlikely to regain his position at Providence due to having betrayed them, he is now an extremely wealthy man backed by mysterious, powerful allies who freed him and knowledge of Diana and 47's betrayal, which he could expose to Providence and the ICA.
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** The Constant has embezzled all of the Partners' shares into his bank account and escaped. While unlikely to regain his position at Providence due to having betrayed them, he is he’s now an extremely wealthy man backed by mysterious, powerful allies who freed him and knowledge of Diana and 47's betrayal, which he could expose to Providence and the ICA.
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* The difficulty of the Ark Society Initiation test and why a lot of tokens are at out of bound areas could be credited to TheSocialDarwinist mentality of the Ark Society. Why it is impossible to collect enough tokens without sneaking into restricted areas, using disguises and even stealing from your competitors could be to test how cutthroat you can be.
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* The difficulty of the Ark Society Initiation test and why a lot of tokens are at out of bound areas could be credited to TheSocialDarwinist mentality of the Ark Society. Why it is it’s impossible to collect enough tokens without sneaking into restricted areas, using disguises and even stealing from your competitors could be to test how cutthroat you can be.
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* In "Nightcall", Jordan Cross's signature song, Are We Stars, plays on the TV" after the Dynasty news report. The song is about a man mourning the death of his girlfriend, soon to be befitting Orson.
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* In "Nightcall", Jordan Cross's signature song, Are “Are We Stars, Stars”, plays on the TV" TV after the Dynasty news report. The song is about a man mourning the death of his girlfriend, soon to be befitting Orson.
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* The Shadow Client seems distinctly ruthless despite his claims of being ALighterShadeOfBlack, using his own men as pawns as well as CannonFodder. This makes sense when you note that he is leading an ArmyOfThievesAndWhores who very often don't care about collateral damage. They're tools, nothing more, with only 47 being a WorthyOpponent by comparison.
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* The Shadow Client seems distinctly ruthless despite his claims of being ALighterShadeOfBlack, using his own men as pawns as well as CannonFodder. This makes sense when you note that he is he’s leading an ArmyOfThievesAndWhores who very often don't care about collateral damage. They're tools, nothing more, with only 47 being a WorthyOpponent by comparison.
