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* Victoria Van Gale used black magic to make her own "nisse". One made of plants and debris and...a skull?! Who's skull is that?! It's small and very obviously humanoid. She made an undead homunculi/copy of a fae creature. That was reduced to a chattering skull at the end of it's tale. WHERE DID THAT SKULL COME FROM?! HOW MANY OTHER REMAINS DID SHE DISTURB?!
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* Victoria Van Gale used black magic to make her own "nisse". One made of plants and debris and...a skull?! Who's Whose skull is that?! It's small and very obviously humanoid. She made an undead homunculi/copy of a fae creature. That was reduced to a chattering skull at the end of it's its tale. WHERE DID THAT SKULL COME FROM?! HOW MANY OTHER REMAINS DID SHE DISTURB?!
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* In Chapter 1, of course Angelina would go into Hilda's hair. It's soft, it's warm, and it's something she can bury herself in. In short, a safe, comfortable place to give birth in.
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* Frida being a witch is kind of obvious when you think about it. While Hilda can perform magic, she performed the spell without considering the consequences and performed the counter-spell incorrectly, and Frida was chosen by the Marra to become one of them for some reason. Which is now revealed because she has a natural talent for being a witch.
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* Frida being a witch is kind of obvious when you think about it. While Hilda can perform magic, she performed the spell [[StoppedReadingTooSoon without considering the consequences consequences]] and performed the counter-spell disenchantment incorrectly, and Frida was chosen by the Marra to become one of them for some reason. Which is now revealed because she has a natural talent for being a witch.
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* On the beginning of Chapter 2 of the Netflix series, Hilda goes to sleep when the sun is setting outside, and the clock showing that it's almost 10 o'clock. This is because the show was inspired by Scandinavia, a place where the sun can set at 10-11pm and rise at 2-3am, or in particularly northerly parts even [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Midnight_sun not set at all]], in summer.
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* On the beginning of Chapter 2 of the Netflix series, Hilda goes to sleep when the sun is setting outside, and the clock showing that it's almost 10 o'clock. This is because the show was inspired by Scandinavia, a place where the sun can set at 10-11pm and rise at 2-3am, or in particularly northerly parts even [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Midnight_sun not even set at all]], in summer.
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* On the beginning of Chapter 2 of the Netflix series, Hilda goes to sleep when the sun is setting outside, and the clock showing that it's almost 10 o'clock. This is because the show was inspired by Scandinavia, a place where the sun can set at 10-11pm, and rise at 2-3am in winter.
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* On the beginning of Chapter 2 of the Netflix series, Hilda goes to sleep when the sun is setting outside, and the clock showing that it's almost 10 o'clock. This is because the show was inspired by Scandinavia, a place where the sun can set at 10-11pm, 10-11pm and rise at 2-3am 2-3am, or in winter.
particularly northerly parts even [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Midnight_sun not set at all]], in summer.
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* Frida being a witch is kind of obvious when you think about it. While Hilda can perform magic she performed the spell incorrectly and Frida was chosen by the Marra to become one of them for some reason. Which is now revealed because she has a natural talent for being a witch.
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* Frida being a witch is kind of obvious when you think about it. While Hilda can perform magic magic, she performed the spell incorrectly without considering the consequences and performed the counter-spell incorrectly, and Frida was chosen by the Marra to become one of them for some reason. Which is now revealed because she has a natural talent for being a witch.
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* After being defeated in sword fight by Hilda, Halvor states he lost everything when a giant stepped on his house. This statement could mean he lost his own parents or entire family, who were inside the house when the giant stepped on it. This would make his hatred of giants very understandable, as such FreudianExcuse is more tragic than destruction of Hilda’s house.
