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* It is believed Dark Choco Cookie suffers from PTSD. One symptom is avoiding people or places relating to the trauma.If he ever returns to the Dark Cacao kingdom he probably won't be able to fully mend his relationship with his father,due to the latter's involvement
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* It is believed Dark Choco Cookie suffers from PTSD. One PTSD, one symptom is avoiding people or places relating to the trauma.trauma. If he ever returns to the Dark Cacao kingdom he probably won't be able to fully mend his relationship with his father,due father, due to the latter's involvementinvolvement.
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* The Beasts' names, particularly the food aspects of them (milk, sugar, flour, salt, spices), are all rather fitting, given that they all can be base ingredients for cookies, particularly gingerbread cookies. In essence, their ingredients are the basis for all Cookie kind, fitting for the ones originally made to watch over it.
** Additionally, having too much of any of these ingredients tends to spoil a dish, whether it be the wrong texture or a bad flavor. Rather fitting for Cookies who ultimately went bad and ruined their world until they were sealed away.
** Additionally, having too much of any of these ingredients tends to spoil a dish, whether it be the wrong texture or a bad flavor. Rather fitting for Cookies who ultimately went bad and ruined their world until they were sealed away.
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* Chili Pepper Cookie not joining in Cookie Odyssey and to the Golden Cheese Kingdom makes a lot of sense. She's a ''thief'' and she's not going to play by the rules. Stealing things just because she wants them would give a bad reputation to [=GingerBrave=] and the other heroes, which is the ''last'' thing they need if they want the Consul's help to stop Dark Enchantress Cookie and it would make it even harder to stop the White Masks who stole the Soul Jams. And due to the revelations of World 17, namely that the original Golden Cheese Kingdom is gone and is instead inside a virtual world, there's nothing for Chili Pepper that she ''could'' steal even if she tried. Moreover, given that Burnt Cheese Cookie weighs the souls of everyone who passes, he'd instantly figure out her endgame and kick her out before she even got a word in. And those shiny cheese wheels? Not only would the Cheezbirds prevent her from stealing them, but even ''she'' wouldn't want to steal a collection of {{Soul Jar}}s.
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* Chili Pepper Cookie not joining in Cookie Odyssey and to the Golden Cheese Kingdom makes a lot of sense. She's a ''thief'' and she's not going to play by the rules. Stealing things just because she wants them would give a bad reputation to [=GingerBrave=] and the other heroes, which is the ''last'' thing they need if they want the Consul's help to stop Dark Enchantress Cookie and it would make it even harder to stop the White Masks who stole the Soul Jams. And due to the revelations of World 17, namely that the original Golden Cheese Kingdom is gone and is instead inside a virtual world, there's nothing for Chili Pepper that she ''could'' steal even if she tried. Moreover, given that Burnt Cheese Cookie weighs the souls of everyone who passes, he'd instantly figure out her endgame and kick her out before she even got a word in. And those shiny cheese wheels? Not only would the Cheezbirds prevent her from stealing them, but even ''she'' wouldn't want to steal a collection of {{Soul Jar}}s.
Jar}}s. The ''3rd Anniversary Update'' confirms that Chili Pepper sat out the adventure to World 17 and 18 because she would've stolen anything not nailed to the ground.
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* Chili Pepper Cookie not joining in Cookie Odyssey and to the Golden Cheese Kingdom makes a lot of sense. She's a ''thief'' and she's not going to play by the rules. Stealing things just because she wants them would give a bad reputation to [=GingerBrave=] and the other heroes, which is the ''last'' thing they need if they want the Consul's help to stop Dark Enchantress Cookie and it would make it even harder to stop the White Masks who stole the Soul Jams. And due to the revelations of World 17, namely that the original Golden Cheese Kingdom is gone and is instead inside a virtual world, there's nothing for Chili Pepper that she ''could'' steal even if she tried. Moreover, given that Burnt Cheese Cookie weighs the souls of everyone who passes, he'd instantly figure out her endgame and kick her out before she even got a word in.
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* Chili Pepper Cookie not joining in Cookie Odyssey and to the Golden Cheese Kingdom makes a lot of sense. She's a ''thief'' and she's not going to play by the rules. Stealing things just because she wants them would give a bad reputation to [=GingerBrave=] and the other heroes, which is the ''last'' thing they need if they want the Consul's help to stop Dark Enchantress Cookie and it would make it even harder to stop the White Masks who stole the Soul Jams. And due to the revelations of World 17, namely that the original Golden Cheese Kingdom is gone and is instead inside a virtual world, there's nothing for Chili Pepper that she ''could'' steal even if she tried. Moreover, given that Burnt Cheese Cookie weighs the souls of everyone who passes, he'd instantly figure out her endgame and kick her out before she even got a word in.
in. And those shiny cheese wheels? Not only would the Cheezbirds prevent her from stealing them, but even ''she'' wouldn't want to steal a collection of {{Soul Jar}}s.
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* Chili Pepper Cookie not joining in Cookie Odyssey and to the Golden Cheese Kingdom makes a lot of sense. She's a ''thief'' and she's not going to play by the rules. Stealing things just because she wants them would give a bad reputation to [=GingerBrave=] and the other heroes, which is the ''last'' thing they need if they want the Consul's help to stop Dark Enchantress Cookie. And due to the revelations of World 17, namely that the original Golden Cheese Kingdom is gone and is instead inside a virtual world, there's nothing for Chili Pepper that she ''could'' steal even if she tried. Moreover, given that Burnt Cheese Cookie weighs the souls of everyone who passes, he'd instantly figure out her endgame and kick her out before she even got a word in.
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* Chili Pepper Cookie not joining in Cookie Odyssey and to the Golden Cheese Kingdom makes a lot of sense. She's a ''thief'' and she's not going to play by the rules. Stealing things just because she wants them would give a bad reputation to [=GingerBrave=] and the other heroes, which is the ''last'' thing they need if they want the Consul's help to stop Dark Enchantress Cookie.Cookie and it would make it even harder to stop the White Masks who stole the Soul Jams. And due to the revelations of World 17, namely that the original Golden Cheese Kingdom is gone and is instead inside a virtual world, there's nothing for Chili Pepper that she ''could'' steal even if she tried. Moreover, given that Burnt Cheese Cookie weighs the souls of everyone who passes, he'd instantly figure out her endgame and kick her out before she even got a word in.
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* Chili Pepper Cookie not joining in Cookie Odyssey and to the Golden Cheese Kingdom makes a lot of sense. She's a ''thief'' and she's not going to play by the rules. Stealing things just because she wants them would give a bad reputation to [=GingerBrave=] and the other heroes, which is the ''last'' thing they need if they want the Consul's help to stop Dark Enchantress Cookie. And due to the revelations of World 17, namely that the original Golden Cheese Kingdom is gone and is instead inside a virtual world, there's nothing for Chili Pepper that she ''could'' steal even if she tried.
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* Chili Pepper Cookie not joining in Cookie Odyssey and to the Golden Cheese Kingdom makes a lot of sense. She's a ''thief'' and she's not going to play by the rules. Stealing things just because she wants them would give a bad reputation to [=GingerBrave=] and the other heroes, which is the ''last'' thing they need if they want the Consul's help to stop Dark Enchantress Cookie. And due to the revelations of World 17, namely that the original Golden Cheese Kingdom is gone and is instead inside a virtual world, there's nothing for Chili Pepper that she ''could'' steal even if she tried.
tried. Moreover, given that Burnt Cheese Cookie weighs the souls of everyone who passes, he'd instantly figure out her endgame and kick her out before she even got a word in.
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* Chili Pepper Cookie not joining in Cookie Odyssey and to the Golden Cheese Kingdom makes a lot of sense. She's a ''thief'' and she's not going to play by the rules. Stealing things just because she wants them would give a bad reputation to [=GingerBrave=] and the other heroes, which is the ''last'' thing they need if they want the Consul's help to stop Dark Enchantress Cookie. And due to the revelations of World 17, namely that the original Golden Cheese Kingdom is gone and is instead inside a virtual world, there's nothing for Chili Pepper that she ''could'' steal even if she tried.
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* Why is Oyster Cookie so invested in maritime trade and knowledge? "A Mermaid's Tale" shows how Lord Oyster wanted to make his living as a sailor, and she's so invested in knowledge due to how Lord Oyster's tragic mistake in trusting Abalone Cookie ended up creating a monster. This also explains why she's so pissed off at Custard Cookie taking control of the Pearl Legion; Custard Cookie is simply Abalone Cookie in all but name.
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* During Interdimensional Super Mayhem story. Without Croissant Cookie interruption, those cookies who got transfer into another world or timeline could've end up on somewhere that they would've end up being dying in a seconds due to how hostile the timeline or world could have be. But thankfully Croissant Cookie could've just reverse the time even if there's someone died, but they still remember what happened before that.
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* During Interdimensional Super Mayhem story. Without Croissant Cookie interruption, those cookies who got transfer into another world or timeline could've end up on somewhere that they would've end up being dying in a seconds due to how hostile the another timeline or world could have be. But thankfully Croissant Cookie could've just reverse the time even if there's someone died, but they could still remember what happened before that.
