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** During a two-week period where Kevin is sick as a ten-year-old, [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness he's actually nice to Eva and Celia.]] It doesn't last, unfortunately, but for Kevin it's significant. His disdain for Franklin remains, tellingly.
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** During a two-week period where Kevin is sick as a ten-year-old, [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness he's actually nice to Eva and Celia.]] It While it unfortunately doesn't last, unfortunately, but for Kevin it's significant. His disdain for Franklin remains, tellingly.
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* EvilIsPetty: In the novel, Kevin gives a geeky girl at his prom a HannibalLecture while she's dancing – we don't know what it is he says to her, but her reaction implies it was ''bad''.
** Kevin vandalises Eva's study, very shortly after she's finished decorating it, purely because he thinks the maps look "dumb".
** Kevin vandalises Eva's study, very shortly after she's finished decorating it, purely because he thinks the maps look "dumb".
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* EvilIsPetty: In the novel, Kevin gives a geeky girl at his prom a HannibalLecture while she's dancing – we dancing. We don't know what it is he says to her, but her reaction implies it was ''bad''.
** Kevinvandalises vandalizes Eva's study, very study (very shortly after she's finished painstakingly decorating it, it) purely because he thinks the maps look "dumb".
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