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* ArcSymbol: The Big Dipper. [[RuleOfCreepy For some reason]], it appears on the forehead of anyone Trumpy's mother kills.

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* ArcSymbol: The Big Dipper. [[RuleOfCreepy [[RuleOfScary For some reason]], it appears on the forehead of anyone Trumpy's mother kills.
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* ArcSymbol: The Big Dipper. [[RuleOfCreepy For some reason]], it appears on the forehead of anyone Trumpy's mother kills.
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* RefrainFromAssuming: There actually was a [[https://www.discogs.com/Various-Los-Nuevos-Extra-terrestres-Extraterrestral-Visitors/release/3054922 soundtrack EP]] released, and the title of the song popularly known as "Burning Rubber Tires" or "Hear The Engines Roar Now" (or "Idiot Control Now") is listed in Spanish as "Rugen los motores" ("The Motors Roar").

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* AlliterativeTitleAlliterativeTitle: The Film Ventures re-title does this.



* AssholeVictim: One of the poachers finds a bunch of eggs at the beginning and decides to smash them all [[ForTheEvulz just for fun.]] Shortly after, Trumpy's mother [[MamaBear shows up and kills him.]]
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* AssholeVictim: AssholeVictim:
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One of the poachers finds a bunch of eggs at the beginning and decides to smash them all [[ForTheEvulz just for fun.]] Shortly after, Trumpy's mother [[MamaBear shows up and kills him.]]
%%* BMovie** The other poachers aren't much better; when Trumpy's mother first confronts them in the woods, their first (and probably only) thought is to attempt to poach her. Naturally, she kills them.
** Laura might be a mild, [[DisproportionateRetribution "disproportionate karma"]] example; while she does nothing quite deserving of death, and commits no offense against the aliens themselves, she does behave in a petty, mean-spirited manner toward Sharon, whose boyfriend Laura is trying to get into his pants.



%%* TheBrainlessBeauty: Laura

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%%* * TheBrainlessBeauty: LauraLaura is referred to as [[TheDitz an idiot]] (in-universe, even), and certainly seems to have trouble reading a room. Like when she tries to brag to Sharon about making out with Sharon's boyfriend.



* TheDitz: Laura is referenced as an idiot in-universe, and certainly seems to have trouble reading a room.



%%* {{Housewife}}: Tommy's mom

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%%* * {{Housewife}}: Tommy's mommom seems to be this, quickly taking on a motherly, nurturing role when the band shows up at her doorstep.



* JerkAss: Rick (the leader of the band) and Bill (Tommy's uncle).

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* JerkAss: The poachers, Rick (the leader of the band) and Bill (Tommy's uncle).uncle) are all pretty unlikable.



* MegatonPunch: Trumpy's mom kills two or three of the cast by punching them in the face.
** Many of them she appears to kill by simply pushing them over.

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* MegatonPunch: Trumpy's mom kills two or three of the cast by punching them in the face. \n** Many of them she appears to kill by simply pushing them over.



** And then there's Laura who, after the girlfriend of the man she wanted to get with expressed her resentment toward her, decided her best course of action was to go running away from the safe camper and wandering around a twilit, foggy forest she was obviously unfamiliar with.

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** And then there's Laura who, after the girlfriend of the man she wanted to get with [[FoodSlap expressed her resentment toward her, her]], decided her best course of action was to go running away from the safe camper and wandering around a twilit, foggy forest she was obviously unfamiliar with.with. Not to mention her smug braggadocio which resulted in said expression of resentment, ''even after'' she herself noted that the other campers didn't seem terribly fond of her in the first place.
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* KarmaHoudini: Despite cheating on his girlfriend and even bringing his second girlfriend on their camping trip, the [[InfidelityIndex bastard boyfriend]] is one of the four survivors.

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* KarmaHoudini: Despite cheating on his girlfriend and even bringing his second girlfriend on their camping trip, the [[InfidelityIndex bastard boyfriend]] boyfriend is one of the four survivors.
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* KarmaHoudini: Despite cheating on his girlfriend and even bringing his second girlfriend on their camping trip, the BastardBoyfriend (and to be fair his first/real girlfriend too) is one of the four survivors.

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* KarmaHoudini: Despite cheating on his girlfriend and even bringing his second girlfriend on their camping trip, the BastardBoyfriend (and to be fair his first/real girlfriend too) [[InfidelityIndex bastard boyfriend]] is one of the four survivors.


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%%* HollywoodNight* HollywoodDarkness: A particularly noticeable example, where they shot day-for-night without any blue filter on the cameras, and for whatever reason didn't darken anything in post-production. This leads to many scenes where it's bright out (very foggy, but still clearly daytime) yet the characters refer to it being night, and even insist it's too dark to see anything clearly.



* ItsAllMyFault: Sharon, who'd splashed Laura with coffee, blames herself after she gets lost in the woods and falls off a cliff after storming away from the campfire.

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* ItsAllMyFault: Sharon, who'd splashed Laura with coffee, blames herself after she Laura storms away from the campfire, gets lost in the woods woods, and falls off a cliff after storming away from the campfire.cliff.



* MoodWhiplash: The movie can't decide if it's trying to be a cutesy ''E.T.''-like movie or a monster movie, [[TakeAThirdOption so it settles on being both.]][[note]]It was apparently supposed to be a straight horror movie until Film/ETTheExtraterrestrial came out and raked in boatloads of cash, at which point the producers demanded that the script be rewritten to make it more like that movie.[[/note]]

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* MoodWhiplash: The movie can't decide if it's trying to be a cutesy ''E.T.''-like movie or a monster movie, [[TakeAThirdOption so it settles on being both.]][[note]]It was apparently supposed to be a straight horror movie until Film/ETTheExtraterrestrial ''Film/ETTheExtraterrestrial'' came out and raked in boatloads of cash, at which point the producers demanded that the script be rewritten to make it more like that movie.[[/note]]



* NonindicativeName: The movie doesn't really contain any pods, much less people who come from pods.

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* NonindicativeName: NeverTrustATitle: The movie doesn't really contain any pods, much less people who come from pods.



* WordSaladTitle: Despite what the title implies, the aliens of the title don't come in pods and don't look like people.
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* HumansAreTheRealMonsters: The poachers come across as far more vile than the "bad" alien, as she's ultimately just a [[MamaBear mother who's mad someone killed her babies.]]
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: The whole reason Trumpy's mother kills a bunch of people is because one of the poachers [[KickTheDog smashes all her eggs,]] and the other poachers later try to kill her. As such, it's hard to blame her for hating humans.
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** A couple of band members also pour whiskey down her throat to warm her up, which is terrible on two levels. First, alcohol doesn't actually warm you up; alcohol dilates the vessels and brings blood toward the skin which causes ''feelings'' of warmth, but in drawing that heat toward the skin it draws it ''away'' from the body's core and the vital organs there, which can cause the body's core temperature to drop to dangerous levels. Second, drinking alcohol after suffering a head injury (and potentially brain damage) is even more dangerous, as alcohol can enhance the negative effects of brain injury and inhibit recovery as well. Third, giving fluids to an unconscious person risks the fluid going into the lungs instead of the esophagus.

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** A couple of band members also pour whiskey down her throat to warm her up, which is terrible on two several levels. First, alcohol doesn't actually warm you up; alcohol dilates the vessels and brings blood toward the skin which causes ''feelings'' of warmth, but in drawing that heat toward the skin it draws it ''away'' from the body's core and the vital organs there, which can cause the body's core temperature to drop to dangerous levels. Second, drinking alcohol after suffering a head injury (and potentially brain damage) is even more dangerous, as alcohol can enhance the negative effects of brain injury and inhibit recovery as well. Third, giving fluids to an unconscious person risks the fluid going into the lungs instead of the esophagus.
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* CreepyChild: There's something ''wrong'' about a boy who wants to collect ''specimens''. Doesn't help he's dubbed by an adult female.

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* CreepyChild: There's something ''wrong'' about a boy who wants to collect ''specimens''. Doesn't help he's dubbed by an a breathy adult female.



* DisposableWoman: Laura doesn't even make it to the end of Act 1 before falling off a cliff while trying to escape the poachers.

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* DisposableWoman: Laura doesn't even make it to the end of Act 1 before falling off a cliff while trying to escape the poachers.poachers and being startled by Trumpy's mom.



* {{Fanservice}}: When Kathy gets out of bed to take a shower, it's shown that she was sleeping [[PantsFree with no pants on.]]
* FoodSlap: Sharon throws a mugful of water into Laura's face after Laura smugly suggests that Sharon's jealous of her and starts talking about what she and Rick were doing in the woods.

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* {{Fanservice}}: When Kathy gets out of bed to take a shower, it's shown that she was sleeping [[PantsFree with no pants on.]]
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* FoodSlap: Sharon throws a mugful of water coffee into Laura's face after Laura smugly suggests that Sharon's jealous of her and starts talking about what she and Rick were doing in the woods.



* ItsAllMyFault: Sharon, who'd splashed Laura with water, blames herself after she gets lost in the woods and falls off a cliff after storming away from the campfire.

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* ItsAllMyFault: Sharon, who'd splashed Laura with water, coffee, blames herself after she gets lost in the woods and falls off a cliff after storming away from the campfire.



* RefrainFromAssuming: There actually was a [[https://www.discogs.com/Various-Los-Nuevos-Extra-terrestres-Extraterrestral-Visitors/release/3054922 soundtrack EP]] released, and the title of the song popularly known as "Burning Rubber Tires" or "Hear The Engines Roll Now" (or "Idiot Control Now") is listed in Spanish as "Rugen Los Motores" ("The Motors Roar").

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* RefrainFromAssuming: There actually was a [[https://www.discogs.com/Various-Los-Nuevos-Extra-terrestres-Extraterrestral-Visitors/release/3054922 soundtrack EP]] released, and the title of the song popularly known as "Burning Rubber Tires" or "Hear The Engines Roll Roar Now" (or "Idiot Control Now") is listed in Spanish as "Rugen Los Motores" los motores" ("The Motors Roar").



* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: Trumpy's parent goes on this, justifiably. First, all but one of the eggs on its ship are senselessly smashed by a poacher, then, when it approaches two more poachers by a campfire, they lure it closer, then shoot and wound it without provocation. After that, you'd understand why it kills everyone it sees; it thinks HumansAreTheRealMonsters.

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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: Trumpy's parent goes on this, justifiably. First, all but one of the eggs on its ship are senselessly smashed by a poacher, then, then when it approaches two more poachers by a campfire, they lure it closer, then shoot and wound it without provocation. After that, you'd understand why it kills everyone it sees; it thinks HumansAreTheRealMonsters.



** If you're poacher number two and you see a random teenage girl walking through the woods, then clearly your only reasonable response has to be to grab her and make a joke about wanting to rape her. Even poacher 3 refuses to help him when she runs off, telling him "you better run!" The only reason this doesn't end with him behind bars is that she dies instead after jumping off a cliff to escape him. Of course, he still proves Too Dumb To Live when...

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** If you're poacher number two and you see a random teenage girl walking through the woods, then clearly your only reasonable response has to be to grab her and make a joke about wanting to rape her. Even poacher 3 refuses to help him when she runs off, telling him "you better run!" The only reason this doesn't end with him behind bars is that she dies instead after jumping off a cliff to escape him. Of course, he still proves Too Dumb To Live TooDumbToLive when...



** When Laura falls off the cliff landing on her back, the other campers find her and carry her around. Obviously they had to get her someplace safer and warmer, but even someone not trained in medicine should have known to keep her spine straight, perhaps even build an improvised stretcher from the many branches all around. These idiots don't even so much as try to carry her steadily, much less anything like that. Also, Tommy's mother seems to think the cure for a crushed spine is a good night's rest.
** A couple of band members also pour whiskey down her throat to warm her up, which is terrible on two levels. First, alcohol doesn't actually warm you up; alcohol dilates the vessels and brings blood toward the skin which causes ''feelings'' of warmth, but in drawing that heat toward the skin it draws it ''away'' from the body's core and the vital organs there, which can cause the body's core temperature to drop to dangerous levels. Second, drinking alcohol after suffering a head injury (and potentially brain damage) is even more dangerous, as alcohol can enhance the negative effects of brain injury and inhibit recovery as well.

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** When Laura falls off the cliff cliff, landing on her back, the other campers find her and carry her around. Obviously they had to get her someplace safer and warmer, but even someone not trained in medicine should have known to keep her spine straight, perhaps even build an improvised stretcher from the many branches all around. These idiots don't even so much as try to carry her steadily, much less anything like that. Also, Tommy's mother seems to think the cure for a crushed spine is a good night's rest.
** A couple of band members also pour whiskey down her throat to warm her up, which is terrible on two levels. First, alcohol doesn't actually warm you up; alcohol dilates the vessels and brings blood toward the skin which causes ''feelings'' of warmth, but in drawing that heat toward the skin it draws it ''away'' from the body's core and the vital organs there, which can cause the body's core temperature to drop to dangerous levels. Second, drinking alcohol after suffering a head injury (and potentially brain damage) is even more dangerous, as alcohol can enhance the negative effects of brain injury and inhibit recovery as well. Third, giving fluids to an unconscious person risks the fluid going into the lungs instead of the esophagus.

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Not to be confused with PeopleJars, which involves Jar People, or ''Film/InvasionOfTheBodySnatchers'', which features [[ReplicantSnatching pod people]], unlike this movie.

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Not to be confused with PeopleJars, which involves Jar People, or ''Film/InvasionOfTheBodySnatchers'', which features [[ReplicantSnatching pod people]], unlike this movie.
''Los Nuevos Extraterrestres'' (''The New Extraterrestrials'') is a 1983 French-Spanish science fiction film directed by Juan Piquer Simón.


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The film is as much of a mess behind the scenes as it is on-screen. ''Los Nuevos Extraterrestres'' began its life as a low-budget horror film. Then, after the initial script had been written, [[http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0086026/trivia the producers demanded the addition of the subplot about the little kid adopting the alien]], in a blatant attempt to [[FollowTheLeader cash in on the success]] of ''Film/ETTheExtraTerrestrial''. It was filmed in Spanish and French. For the US release it was (badly) dubbed into English and retitled ''The Unearthling''. Then, when the copyright expired, the distributor Film Ventures International purchased the film, slapped the credits from a ''completely different film'' onto the beginning and end, and changed the name to ''[[http://www.mst3kinfo.com/mstfaq/subtle.html Pod People]]''.

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The film is as much of a mess behind the scenes as it is on-screen. ''Los Nuevos Extraterrestres'' (''The New Extraterrestrials'') began its life as a low-budget horror film. Then, after the initial script had been written, [[http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0086026/trivia the producers demanded the addition of the subplot about the little kid adopting the alien]], in a blatant attempt to [[FollowTheLeader cash in on the success]] of ''Film/ETTheExtraTerrestrial''. It was filmed in Spanish and French. For the US release it was (badly) dubbed into English and retitled ''The Unearthling''. Then, when the copyright expired, the distributor Film Ventures International purchased the film, slapped the credits from a ''completely different film'' onto the beginning and end, and changed the name to ''[[http://www.mst3kinfo.com/mstfaq/subtle.html Pod People]]''.
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You can check out WebVideo/TheCinemaSnob's [[http://www.thecinemasnob.com/the-cinema-snob/et-week-extra-terrestrial-visitors review]] of the film, this time under the title ''Extra-Terrestrial Visitors''.

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* AssholeVictim: One of the poachers finds a bunch of eggs at the beginning and decides to smash them all [[ForTheEvulz just for fun.]] Shortly after, Bad Trumpy [[PapaWolf shows up and kills him.]]

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* AssholeVictim: One of the poachers finds a bunch of eggs at the beginning and decides to smash them all [[ForTheEvulz just for fun.]] Shortly after, Bad Trumpy [[PapaWolf Trumpy's mother [[MamaBear shows up and kills him.]]



* DisposableWoman: Laura doesn't even make it to the end of Act 1 before falling off a cliff while trying to escape the poachers.



* DisposableWoman: Laura doesn't even make it to the end of Act 1 before falling off a cliff while trying to escape the poachers.



* FoodSlap: Sharon throws a mugful of water into Laura's face after Laura smugly suggests that Sharon's jealous of her and starts talking about what she and Rick were doing in the woods.



* ItsAllMyFault: Sharon, who'd splashed Laura with water, blames herself after she goes off a cliff angrily running away from the campfire.

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* ItsAllMyFault: Sharon, who'd splashed Laura with water, blames herself after she goes gets lost in the woods and falls off a cliff angrily running after storming away from the campfire.



* KillEmAll: This movie manages a very respectable body count. It's even lampshaded in the [[Series/MysteryScienceTheater3000 MST3K]] presentation.

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* KillEmAll: This movie manages a very respectable body count. It's even lampshaded in the [[Series/MysteryScienceTheater3000 MST3K]] presentation. By the end of the film, [[spoiler: Rick, Sharon, Tommy, and Tommy's mom are the only humans still standing]].



* MoodWhiplash: The movie can't decide if it's trying to be a cutesy ''E.T.''-like movie or a monster movie, [[TakeAThirdOption so it settles on being both.]]

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* MoodWhiplash: The movie can't decide if it's trying to be a cutesy ''E.T.''-like movie or a monster movie, [[TakeAThirdOption so it settles on being both.]]]][[note]]It was apparently supposed to be a straight horror movie until Film/ETTheExtraterrestrial came out and raked in boatloads of cash, at which point the producers demanded that the script be rewritten to make it more like that movie.[[/note]]

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A little boy named Tommy (who has an extensive array of pets he likes to call "specimens") finds an alien egg to hatch, somewhat like Horton. When it hatches, Tommy names the creature--who manages to use his snout to suck up peanuts and warp time and space with his fingers--Trumpy. Unfortunately, Trumpy's mom is found by poachers (who destroy all of her pod-like eggs) and goes on [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge a killing spree in response]]. To add to the terror, a group of unappealing young people takes a break from recording [[FakeBand nightmarish "pop" music]] to travel by RV up to the scene of the alien foothold. When one of their members is killed by the alien, they are drawn into the hunt for the culprit.

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A little boy named Tommy (who has an extensive array of pets he likes to call "specimens") finds an alien egg to hatch, somewhat like Horton.hatch. When it hatches, Tommy names the creature--who manages to use his snout to suck up peanuts and warp time and space with his fingers--Trumpy. Unfortunately, Trumpy's mom is found by poachers (who destroy all of her pod-like eggs) and goes on [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge a killing spree in response]]. To add to the terror, a group of unappealing young people takes a break from recording [[FakeBand nightmarish "pop" music]] to travel by RV up to the scene of the alien foothold. When one of their members is killed by the alien, they are drawn into the hunt for the culprit.
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* ArtisticLicenseAstronomy: Just after the opening credits, an asteroid is seen approaching the familiar face of the Moon...which is so familiar because it always faces the Earth, meaning the asteroid is ''leaving'' the Earth, not approaching.

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* ArtisticLicenseAstronomy: ArtisticLicenseSpace: Just after the opening credits, an asteroid is seen approaching the familiar face of the Moon...which is so familiar because it always faces the Earth, meaning the asteroid is ''leaving'' the Earth, not approaching.
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Unfortunate Names is In Universe Examples Only now; the name's negative qualities should be pointed out


* UnfortunateNames: "Trumpy" to British audiences, because in the UK "trump" is a word for "fart".
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* BittersweetEnding: Trumpy and Tommy are both safe, but Trumpy's mom has been killed and Tommy had to pull the BreakHisHeartToSaveHim on Trumpy, and that's most likely the last thing Trumpy ever heard from Tommy.

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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Trumpy and Tommy are both safe, but Trumpy's mom has been killed and Tommy had to pull the BreakHisHeartToSaveHim on Trumpy, and that's most likely the last thing Trumpy ever heard from Tommy.Tommy]].
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* BittersweetEnding: Trumpy and Tommy are both safe, but Trumpy's mom has been killed and Tommy had to pull the BreakHisHeartToSaveHim on Trumpy, and that's most likely the last thing Trumpy ever heard from Tommy.
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* TheUnintelligible: Pretty much the entire [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P0Z_OWPe6fU "Hear the Engines Roar Now"]] song. The reason it's so susceptible to mishearings is that the film's composer Librado Pastor is singing the song, dubbing Ian Sera, and slurring his words in an attempt to hide his thick Spanish accent.
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* AssholeVictim: One of the poachers finds a bunch of eggs and the beginning and decides to smash them all [[ForTheEvulz just for fun.]] Shortly after, Bad Trumpy [[PapaWolf shows up and kills him.]]

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* AssholeVictim: One of the poachers finds a bunch of eggs and at the beginning and decides to smash them all [[ForTheEvulz just for fun.]] Shortly after, Bad Trumpy [[PapaWolf shows up and kills him.]]
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* AssholeVictim: One of the poachers finds a bunch of eggs and the beginning and decides to smash them all [[ForTheEvulz just for fun.]] Shortly after, Bad Trumpy [[PapaWolf shows up and kills him.]]
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* StupidEvil: The poachers find some weird eggs which, for all they know, could be really valuable. Rather take them to sell on the black market or anything they instead decide to smash them all just to be dicks.

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* StupidEvil: The One of the poachers find finds some weird eggs which, for all they know, he knows, could be really valuable. Rather than take them to sell on the black market or anything they he instead decide decides to smash them all just to be dicks.a dick.
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* UnfortunateNames: "Trumpy" to British audiences, because in the UK "trump" is a word for "fart".
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* BrokenBird: Tracy shows lots of elements of having a very low opinion of herself, which she overcompensates for by acting ''very'' flirtatious and boy-crazy (when Tommy mentions bringing food to one of his pets, Tracy hears a male name and wonders if there's another man in the house).
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Not sure why this was troped. Not showing the audience was done to set up The Reveal later. Even if it was a lame reveal.


* BehindTheBlack: Perplexingly ''inverted'': at one point the characters apparently see something odd/disturbing on another character after they are attacked by the monster but it only shows us their reaction and not what it is they are reacting to. As Tom Servo puts it
-> "Uh, remember us? The audience? Can we see it, please?'
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** And then there's Laura, who after girlfriend of the man she wanted to get with expressed her resentment toward her, decided her best course of action was to go running away from the safe camper and wandering around a twilit, foggy forest she was obviously unfamiliar with.

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** And then there's Laura, who Laura who, after the girlfriend of the man she wanted to get with expressed her resentment toward her, decided her best course of action was to go running away from the safe camper and wandering around a twilit, foggy forest she was obviously unfamiliar with.



** When Laura falls off the cliff landing on her back, the other campers find her and carry her around without even ''attempting'' to keep her spine straight. Also, Tommy's mother seems to think the cure for a crushed spine is a good night's rest.
** A couple of band member also pour whisky down her throat to warm her up. Not only does alcohol not do that, but it's actually ''dangerous'' to drink after a head injury.

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** When Laura falls off the cliff landing on her back, the other campers find her and carry her around without around. Obviously they had to get her someplace safer and warmer, but even ''attempting'' someone not trained in medicine should have known to keep her spine straight.straight, perhaps even build an improvised stretcher from the many branches all around. These idiots don't even so much as try to carry her steadily, much less anything like that. Also, Tommy's mother seems to think the cure for a crushed spine is a good night's rest.
** A couple of band member members also pour whisky whiskey down her throat to warm her up. Not only does up, which is terrible on two levels. First, alcohol not do that, but it's doesn't actually ''dangerous'' warm you up; alcohol dilates the vessels and brings blood toward the skin which causes ''feelings'' of warmth, but in drawing that heat toward the skin it draws it ''away'' from the body's core and the vital organs there, which can cause the body's core temperature to drink drop to dangerous levels. Second, drinking alcohol after suffering a head injury.injury (and potentially brain damage) is even more dangerous, as alcohol can enhance the negative effects of brain injury and inhibit recovery as well.
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* DeadpanSnarker: One of the back-up singers (the redhead with the shortish hair) constantly makes sacrastic jokes, occasionally at her own expense.

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* DeadpanSnarker: One of the back-up singers (the (Tracy, the redhead with the shortish hair) constantly makes sacrastic sarcastic jokes, occasionally at her own expense.

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