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** During the assassination of the third target by planting a bomb underneath the mattress of his hotel's room, the bomb also blows the two adjacent rooms. One of them had a [[InsatiableNewlyweds couple of newlyweds]] on their honeymoon-when Avner rushes to help them we see them completely naked and heavily bleeding.
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** During the assassination of the third target by planting a bomb underneath the mattress of his hotel's room, the bomb also blows the two adjacent rooms. One of them had a [[InsatiableNewlyweds couple of newlyweds]] on their honeymoon-when honeymoon - when Avner rushes to help them we see them completely naked and heavily bleeding.
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* AffablyEvil: Quite a few of the targets are this, which makes them far more human to the audience.
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* AffablyEvil: Quite a few of the targets are this, targets, which makes them far more human to the audience.
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** The young member of the [=PLO=] group who has a conversation with Avner, when both their groups accidentally end up sharing a safehouse together. He lays out his case to Avner very simply: "[[MeaningfulEcho Nothing is more important than home]]". [[spoiler: He is then gunned down in the street right in front of Avner, who is visibly horrified]].
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** The young member of the [=PLO=] PLO group who has a conversation with Avner, when both their groups accidentally end up sharing a safehouse together. He lays out his case to Avner very simply: "[[MeaningfulEcho Nothing is more important than home]]". [[spoiler: He is then gunned down in the street right in front of Avner, who is visibly horrified]].
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* AmoralAfrikaner: Steve is this to an extent. He's South African and while he's not a villain, he is shown to be one of the more radical operatives on the team; he has few qualms about collateral damage so long as the mission is carried out and the Munich Massacre is avenged. He even outright says that the only blood spilled that matters to him is Jewish blood.
* AppealToWorseProblems: One of the targets does this when he mentions that compared to the reaction of the Munich massacre, nobody says anything about the children killed in Israel's military attacks against Palestinians.
* AppealToWorseProblems: One of the targets does this when he mentions that compared to the reaction of the Munich massacre, nobody says anything about the children killed in Israel's military attacks against Palestinians.
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* AmoralAfrikaner: Steve is this to an extent. He's South African African, and while he's not a villain, he is shown to be one of the more radical operatives on the team; he has few qualms about collateral damage so long as the mission is carried out and the Munich Massacre is avenged. He even outright says that the only blood spilled that matters to him is Jewish blood.
* AppealToWorseProblems: One of the targetsdoes this when he mentions that compared to the reaction of to the Munich massacre, nobody says anything about the children killed in Israel's military attacks against Palestinians.
* AppealToWorseProblems: One of the targets
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* DarkerAndEdgier: [[spoiler:The female assassin's death is this in comparison to the original film. In the original, she gets finished off with a headshot as the camera pans away from her body. Here, she dies in a slow and agonizing way and her body is completely exposed.]]
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* DarkerAndEdgier: [[spoiler:The female assassin's death is this in comparison to the original film. In the original, she gets finished off with a headshot as the camera pans away from her body. Here, she dies in a slow and agonizing way and her body is completely exposed.]]
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* SpiritualSuccessor: It could be considered as this to ''Film/SchindlersList''. Creator/JonStewart at the 2006 Oscars:
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* SpiritualSuccessor: It could be considered as this The film explores similar themes to ''Film/SchindlersList''.''Film/SchindlersList'' and is set a generation later. Creator/JonStewart at the 2006 Oscars:
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Keep in mind that due to its [[UsefulNotes/ArabIsraeliConflict volatile subject matter]] this is a highly controversial film, and [[Administrivia/RuleOfCautiousEditingJudgment edit accordingly]].
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Keep in mind that due to its [[UsefulNotes/ArabIsraeliConflict volatile subject matter]] matter]], this is a highly controversial film, and [[Administrivia/RuleOfCautiousEditingJudgment edit accordingly]].
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Keep in mind that due to its [[UsefulNotes/ArabIsraeliConflict volatile subject matter matter]] this is a highly controversial film, and [[Administrivia/RuleOfCautiousEditingJudgment edit accordingly.
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