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* PrincessForADay: Miss Pettigrew.
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* SavvyGuyEnergeticGirl: This dynamic is why Michael and Delysia are the perfect match.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Edythe is not an antagonist in the original novel, is in a relationship with Joe, and didn't cheat on the man she is with. She still is the owner of a beauty salon and a friend of Delysia, and Guinevere end up befriending her and mending her relationship withe her beau Tony.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Edythe is not an antagonist in the original novel, is not in a relationship with Joe, and didn't cheat on the man she is with. She still is the owner of a beauty salon and a friend of Delysia, and Guinevere end up befriending her and mending her relationship withe her beau Tony.Tony, who is AdaptedOut instead.
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* [[HoistByHisOwnPetard Hoist By Her Own Petard]]: Edythe finds Miss Pettigrew and Joe alone together, having a serious conversation. Edythe assumes that Miss P. has ratted her out to Joe, and says as much, while also telling Joe a secret that Miss P. has been trying to hide. (Miss P. and Joe were actually discussing WWI and [[ItMakesSenseInContext socks]].) Not only does Joe not care about Miss P.'s secret, he's happy to hear Edythe confess the truth about her behaviour.
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* [[HoistByHisOwnPetard Hoist By Her Own Petard]]: HoistByHerOwnPetard: Edythe finds Miss Pettigrew and Joe alone together, having a serious conversation. Edythe assumes that Miss P. has ratted her out to Joe, and says as much, while also telling Joe a secret that Miss P. has been trying to hide. (Miss P. and Joe were actually discussing WWI and [[ItMakesSenseInContext socks]].) Not only does Joe not care about Miss P.'s secret, he's happy to hear Edythe confess the truth about her behaviour.
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* [[ICantDance I Can't Dance]]: Invited to dance by Joe at a jazz club, Miss Pettigrew replies that she can only dance the waltz. The band immediately starts playing a jazz song in a waltz time signature.
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* [[ICantDance I Can't Dance]]: ICantDance: Invited to dance by Joe at a jazz club, Miss Pettigrew replies that she can only dance the waltz. The band immediately starts playing a jazz song in a waltz time signature.
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--> [[JustForFun/IThoughtItMeant "Oh, you]] [[BiggerIsBetterInBed noticed?"]]
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Edythe is not an antagonist in the original novel, is in a relationship with Joe, and didn't cheat on the man she is with. She still is the owner of a beauty salon and a friend of Delysia, and Guinevere end up befriending her and mending her relationship withe her beau Tony.
