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* [[spoiler: TheBadGuyWins]]
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* Donny, Steve's bumbling and overweight other employee.
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* Donny, Steve's other bumbling and overweight other employee.
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After the discussion, a suspicious man goes running out of the store, but the group think nothing of that, believing he was just a simple shoplifter. After Morty leaves, the place is closed down, and everyone heads up to Steve's apartment for poker night, Jess having been convinced to stay by Donny; Jimmy is also forced to participate by his uncle, who wants to keep an eye on him, essentially [[NailedToTheWagon nailing him to the wagon]]. As the night drags on, it becomes apparent that Steve's place is CSK's latest target. After [[DisposableVagrant disposing of Jacko, a vagrant]] who lives in the alleyway behind the store, the gimp-masked maniac somehow gets inside, and begins whittling down the five main characters, in exactly the same way they said they'd off him.
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After the discussion, a suspicious man goes running out of the store, but the group think thinks nothing of that, believing he was just a simple shoplifter. After Morty leaves, the place is closed down, and everyone heads up to Steve's apartment for poker night, Jess having been convinced to stay by Donny; Jimmy is also forced to participate by his uncle, who wants to keep an eye on him, essentially [[NailedToTheWagon nailing him to the wagon]]. As the night drags on, it becomes apparent that Steve's place is CSK's latest target. After [[DisposableVagrant disposing of Jacko, a vagrant]] who lives in the alleyway behind the store, the gimp-masked maniac somehow gets inside, and begins whittling down the five main characters, in exactly the same way they said they'd off him.
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* AxeBeforeEntering: When the basement door is dead-bolted, CSK starts sawing through it.
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* AxeBeforeEntering: When the basement door is dead-bolted, deadbolted, CSK starts sawing through it.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Morty showing up and scares Teddy off when he pulls a knife on Jess and Donny.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Morty showing shows up and scares Teddy off when he pulls a knife on Jess and Donny.
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* CallingTheOldManOut: Jimmy attacking Steve, calling him out on his bullying behavior in the process.
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* CallingTheOldManOut: Jimmy attacking attacks Steve, calling him out on his bullying behavior in the process.
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* ABloodyMess: Since it was a ketchup bottle CSK got Jimmy with.
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* ABloodyMess: Since it was a ketchup bottle CSK got Jimmy with.with it.
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* AxeBeforeEntering: When the basement door is dead bolted, CSK starts sawing through it.
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* AxeBeforeEntering: When the basement door is dead bolted, dead-bolted, CSK starts sawing through it.
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* BigCreepyCrawlies: When crazy old Jimmy spots the gimp mask clad CSK on a monitor, he claims he's "a king cockroach".
* BigDamnHeroes: Morty showing up and scaring Teddy off when he pulls a knife on Jess and Donny.
* BigDamnHeroes: Morty showing up and scaring Teddy off when he pulls a knife on Jess and Donny.
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* BigCreepyCrawlies: When crazy old Jimmy spots the gimp mask clad mask-clad CSK on a monitor, he claims he's "a king cockroach".
* BigDamnHeroes: Morty showing up andscaring scares Teddy off when he pulls a knife on Jess and Donny.
* BigDamnHeroes: Morty showing up and
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* CassandraTruth: Nobody believes Jimmy when he spots CSK on a monitor, since he's tripping and all.
* CellPhonesAreUseless: Steve hasn't paid the phone bills, Mona is out of credits, Jess left her cellphone in a john's car, Donny fell on his, and Jimmy's was thrown out by the enclosed dumpster by Steve. Contrived, but it works.
* CellPhonesAreUseless: Steve hasn't paid the phone bills, Mona is out of credits, Jess left her cellphone in a john's car, Donny fell on his, and Jimmy's was thrown out by the enclosed dumpster by Steve. Contrived, but it works.
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* CassandraTruth: Nobody believes Jimmy when he spots CSK on a monitor, monitor since he's tripping and all.
* CellPhonesAreUseless: Steve hasn't paid the phone bills, Mona is out of credits, Jess left hercellphone cell phone in a john's car, Donny fell on his, and Jimmy's was thrown out by the enclosed dumpster by Steve. Contrived, but it works.
* CellPhonesAreUseless: Steve hasn't paid the phone bills, Mona is out of credits, Jess left her
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* {{Irony}}: When Steve tells Donny to go look for Mona, who is currently having head bashed in with a freezer lid, he tells him, "And if she's got her head in that freezer again, tell her I'm gonna kill her."
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* {{Irony}}: When Steve tells Donny to go look for Mona, who is currently having her head bashed in with a freezer lid, he tells him, "And if she's got her head in that freezer again, tell her I'm gonna kill her."
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* PeekABooCorpse: Donny bumps into a shelf, causing Jimmy's saran wrapped body to fall off the top of it. Later, Mona's frosted over body is found in the freezer due to her ringing cellphone.
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* PeekABooCorpse: Donny bumps into a shelf, causing Jimmy's saran wrapped saran-wrapped body to fall off the top of it. Later, Mona's frosted over frosted-over body is found in the freezer due to her ringing cellphone.cell phone.
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* PornStash: There's some naughty mags in Steve's hidden room.
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* PornStash: There's There are some naughty mags in Steve's hidden room.
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* TimePassesMontage: While the group are waiting for Mona to get back.
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* TimePassesMontage: While the group are is waiting for Mona to get back.
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%%* ExcitedShowTitle
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%%* BareYourMidriff: Jess.
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* KillEmAll: Nobody survives CSK’s rampage.