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* AffablyEvil: Lester is the most laid-back ScavengerWorld war-lord ever. Before leading a charge to try to kill the heroes, he announces to his minions, "Remember, gentlemen: Life's an adventure!"
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* AffablyEvil: Lester is the most laid-back ScavengerWorld war-lord WastelandWarlord ever. Before leading a charge to try to kill the heroes, he announces to his minions, "Remember, gentlemen: Life's an adventure!"
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* MakeAnExampleOfThem: It's implied that Lester executing Skeet and his intolerance of lying is actually directed at Sam, who also lies to him but doesn't call him out on it since he wants Sam to join his ranks.
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* MakeAnExampleOfThem: It's implied that Lester executing Skeet and his intolerance of lying is actually directed at Sam, who also lies to him but doesn't call him get called out on it since he wants Sam to join his ranks.
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* BadGuyBar: Treadwell visits one in Glory Hole to try to recruit a tracker. The skuzzy denizens laugh when he tells them he's from Anaheim. He's mugged soon after.
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* BadGuyBar: Treadwell visits one in Glory Hole to try to recruit a tracker. The skuzzy denizens laugh when he tells them he's from Anaheim. He's mugged soon after.after but escapes.
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* MakeAnExampleOfThem: It's implied that Lester executing Skeet and his intolerance of lying is actually directed at Sam, who also lies to him but doesn't call him out on it since he wants him to join his ranks.
-->'''Ginger:''' I told him to stay, Lester. I explained everything and I encouraged him to stay.
-->'''Ginger:''' I told him to stay, Lester. I explained everything and I encouraged him to stay.
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* MakeAnExampleOfThem: It's implied that Lester executing Skeet and his intolerance of lying is actually directed at Sam, who also lies to him but doesn't call him out on it since he wants him Sam to join his ranks.
-->'''Ginger:''' I told him to stay,Lester.Les. I explained everything and I encouraged him to stay.
-->'''Ginger:''' I told him to stay,
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* MakeAnExampleOfThem: It's implied that Lester executing Skeet and his intolerance of lying is actually directed at Sam, who also lied to him but doesn't call him out on it since he wants him to join his ranks.
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* MakeAnExampleOfThem: It's implied that Lester executing Skeet and his intolerance of lying is actually directed at Sam, who also lied lies to him but doesn't call him out on it since he wants him to join his ranks.ranks.
-->'''Ginger:''' I told him to stay, Lester. I explained everything and I encouraged him to stay.
-->'''Ginger:''' I told him to stay, Lester. I explained everything and I encouraged him to stay.
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* TranquilFury: When Lester finds out that Skeet lied about who and what he was doing in Zone 7, he doesn't raise his voice or even get angry. But his words and subsequent actions show otherwise. His tranquil fury gets even more obvious after he goes after Sam for burning down Sky Ranch.
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* TranquilFury: When Lester finds out that Skeet lied lies about who and what he was is doing in Zone 7, he doesn't raise his voice or even get angry.and remains jovial. But his words and subsequent actions show otherwise. His tranquil fury gets even more obvious after pronounced when he goes after Sam for burning down Sky Ranch.Sam.
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* MakeAnExampleOfThem: It's implied that Lester executing Skeet and his intolerance of lying is actually directed at Sam, who also lied to him but doesn't call him out on it.
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* MakeAnExampleOfThem: It's implied that Lester executing Skeet and his intolerance of lying is actually directed at Sam, who also lied to him but doesn't call him out on it.it since he wants him to join his ranks.
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* MakeAnExampleOfThem: It's implied that Lester executing Skeet and his intolerance of lying is actually directed at Sam, who also lied to him but doesn't call him out on it.
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-->'''Lester:''' You've got to work on your personality.
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* TranquilFury: When Lester finds out that Skeet lied about who and what he was doing in Zone 7, he doesn't raise his voice or even get angry. But his words and subsequent actions show otherwise. His tranquil fury gets even more obvious after he goes after Sam for burning down Sky Ranch.
-->'''Lester:''' We have a policy against trackers in these parts. And I can never tolerate lying in any form.
-->'''Lester:''' We have a policy against trackers in these parts. And I can never tolerate lying in any form.
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* DesertPunk: The zone is a desert wasteland outside of vaguely cyberpunkish civilization.
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* DesertPunk: The zone is a desert wasteland (the Nevada Desert, being specific - a major action sequence happens on the ruins of Hoover Dam) outside of vaguely cyberpunkish civilization.
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A 1987 ScienceFiction film, directed by Steve De Jarnatt and set in the sorta-post-apocalyptic world of [[TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture 2017]], in which a yuppie businessman's (Creator/DavidAndrews) sex robot/wife breaks down, and he hires a tough female tracker (Creator/MelanieGriffith) to drive him into the desert wasteland called "The Zone" to find her a replacement body.
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A 1987 ScienceFiction film, directed by Steve De Jarnatt and set in the sorta-post-apocalyptic world of [[TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture 2017]], in which a yuppie businessman's businessman Treadwell, (Creator/DavidAndrews) has his sex robot/wife breaks robot/wife, Cherry 2000, break down, and he hires a tough female tracker as in a tracker that's female, E. Johnson, (Creator/MelanieGriffith) to drive him into the desert wasteland called "The Zone" to find her a replacement body.
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* AfterTheEnd: The "End" in question being pretty mild (probably no more than a Class 1 on the ApocalypseHow scale), since mainstream civilization still persists in areas.
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* AfterTheEnd: The "End" in question being pretty mild (probably no more than a Class 1 on the ApocalypseHow scale), mild, since mainstream civilization still persists in areas.
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* MayDecemberRomance: Snappy Tom is an old man, while his girl Randa is in her early 20s.
* MinorInsultMeltdown: Even after she's told Lester where his enemies are, Lester kills Randa for commenting on his bee stings.
* MinorInsultMeltdown: Even after she's told Lester where his enemies are, Lester kills Randa for commenting on his bee stings.
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* BadGuyBar: Treadwell visits one in Glory Hole to try to recruit a tracker. The skuzzy denizens laugh when he tells them he's from Anaheim. He's mugged soon after.
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* NewOldWest: Glory Hole, on the outskirts of society, has become very reminiscent of the Old West. This is most evident at the saloon. The massive deflation of currency also brings prices in line with what they'd be in the Old West.
