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* WritersCantDoMath: When Jack demonstrates the leaves falling when he talks, he says the sentence "It's not a coincidence, you idiot!" out of frustration for the latter thinking so. Aaron then says "You just lost five more" when leaves fall after Jack says this, even though Jack's sentence was six words long, not five.
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* WritersCantDoMath: WritersCannotDoMath: When Jack demonstrates the leaves falling when he talks, he says the sentence "It's not a coincidence, you idiot!" out of frustration for the latter thinking so. Aaron then says "You just lost five more" when leaves fall after Jack says this, even though Jack's sentence was six words long, not five.
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* WritersCantDoMath: When Jack demonstrates the leaves falling when he talks, he says the sentence "It's not a coincidence, you idiot!" out of frustration for the latter thinking so. Aaron then says "You just lost five more" when leaves fall after Jack says this, even though Jack's sentence was six words long, not five.
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* AwardBaitSong: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8rXbAyCVrlk Out Loud]] by Mary Mary.
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* AwardBaitSong: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8rXbAyCVrlk com/watch?v=Y7CONH-Ip3M Out Loud]] by Mary Mary.
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!This movie provides the following examples:
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* HitPoints: The leaves on the tree are treated like these InUniverse: for each word Jack speaks, one leaf falls off the tree, and if all the leaves fall off, Jack dies.
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* HitPoints: The leaves on the tree are treated like these InUniverse: InUniverse for Jack. For each word Jack he speaks, one leaf falls off the tree, and if all the leaves fall off, tree is reduced to no leaves, Jack dies.
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Jack calls Sinja over to his house to ask him why he put the tree here, but Sinja states that he had nothing to do with it. It isn't before long Sinja discovers with each word [=McCall=] speaks, a leaf drops off of the tree, Jack refuses to speak at all, as doing so will keep the tree, and him, alive. However, his work, marriage and friendships are all affected by his choice. Jack has his assitant Aaron Wiseberger (Creator/ClarkDuke) keep track of how many leaves remain. Can Jack figure out an alternative method of survival? Or will he simply have to live the rest of his life to the fullest?
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Jack calls Sinja over to his house to ask him why he put the tree here, but Sinja states that he had nothing to do with it. It isn't before long Sinja discovers with each word [=McCall=] speaks, a leaf drops off of the tree, Jack refuses to speak at all, as doing so will keep the tree, and him, alive. However, his work, marriage and friendships are all affected by his choice. Jack has his assitant assistant Aaron Wiseberger (Creator/ClarkDuke) keep track of how many leaves remain. Can Jack figure out an alternative method of survival? Or will he simply have to live the rest of his life to the fullest?
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%%* HitPoints: The leaves on the tree are treated like these.
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* AluminumChristmasTrees: Jack's habit of reading the first five pages and the last five pages of a book to see if it is worthwhile is portrayed as if it were negligent on his part, but it is actually fair by industry standards.
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* AdultFear: Caroline is concerned for their baby due to how their house has a pool without anything to keep a baby from falling in, and is also at the edge of a cliff.
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* AluminumChristmasTrees: Jack's habit of reading the first five pages and the last five pages of a book to see if it is worthwhile is portrayed as if it were negligent on his part, but it is actually fair by industry standards.
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* AwardBaitSong: [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8rXbAyCVrlk Out Loud]] by Mary Mary.
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* FaceDeathWithDignity: At one point a drunken Jack tries to do this singing along to one of his favorite songs. Also counts as being DrivenToSuicide. Later, when down to his last sentence he tires to make peace with his mother and wife, while also doing favors and giving short word goodbyes to the parking valet whose always been trying to sell him a book and the barista he's been doing charades for in order to get orders.
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* FaceDeathWithDignity: At one point a drunken Jack tries to do this singing along to one of his favorite songs. Also counts as being DrivenToSuicide. Later, when down to his last sentence he tires to make peace with his mother and wife, while also doing favors and giving short word goodbyes to the parking valet whose who’s always been trying to sell him a book and the barista he's been doing charades for in order to get orders.
