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* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: [[spoiler:Subverted. Harry fails to save Ginny Weasley and Ron hates him for it.]]
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* HomeschooledKids: Harry does not return to Hogwarts on third year, instead recieving tutoring from Nicholas Flammel.
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* OrwellianEditor: The Ministry of Magic which has written out the means which ancient Egyptian wizards used to shape-shift into a Phoenix and [[YouKeepUsingThatWord proclaimed such means to be Dark Magic]].
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* OrwellianEditor: The Ministry of Magic which has written out from history books the means which ancient Egyptian wizards used to shape-shift into a Phoenix and [[YouKeepUsingThatWord proclaimed such means to be Dark Magic]].Magic]].
* PainfulTransformation: Harry [[spoiler:shapeshifting into his Phoenix form]].
* PainfulTransformation: Harry [[spoiler:shapeshifting into his Phoenix form]].
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* CorruptPolitician: The fifty seats (excluding the Chief Warlock) of the Wizengamot are inherited by the Lord (patriarch) of a pureblood family, with empty seats being appointed by the Minister. Nowadays a significant number of the seats are appointed because bloodlines have died out or the heirs are in Azkaban for supporting Voldemort.
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* EgyptIsStillAncient: Subverted. Most of Egypt is under control of islamic muggles but the wizarding world controls Heliopolis which is a vast undergound network of cavern marketplaces with an InvisibleToNormals dome in the ruins above which is the headquarters of the Centre of Alchemical Studies.
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* OrwellianEditor: The Ministry of Magic which has written out the means which ancient Egyptian wizards used to shape-shift into a Phoenix and [[YouKeepUsingThatWord proclaimed such means to be Dark Magic]].
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: [[spoiler:Harry decides to WalkinTheEarth after Ginny dies in the Chamber]]
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* ScrewThisIAmOuttaHere: [[spoiler:Harry decides to WalkinTheEarth after Ginny dies in the Chamber]]
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* ScrewThisIAmOuttaHere: ScrewThisImOuttaHere: [[spoiler:Harry decides to WalkinTheEarth after Ginny dies in the Chamber]]
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* AbsurdlySharpBlade: [[spoiler:Harry's steel wings]] are sharp enough to cut off a man's hand or a [[spoiler: Basilisk]] into pieces.
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Ginny dies in the Chamber]].
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* MaliciousSlander: As usual, Rita Skeeter with help from Lucius Malfoy.
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* NoKillLikeOverkill: The Basilisk is slain by Harry's sharp [[spoiler:wings]].
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* ScrewThisIAmOuttaHere: [[spoiler:Harry decides to WalkinTheEarth after Ginny dies in the Chamber]]
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* AdaptationalWimp: The Basilisk. In canon it would kill anyone who looked at it's eyes directly and only a series of ContrivedCoincidence resulted in people looking at the snake's eyes indirectly and getting petrifyied. Here the Basilisk doesn't have the power to kill but instead to petrify with a stare.
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* AdaptationalWimp: The Basilisk. In canon it would kill anyone who looked at it's eyes directly and only a series of ContrivedCoincidence resulted in people looking at the snake's eyes indirectly and getting petrifyied. Here the Basilisk doesn't have the power to kill but instead to petrify with a stare.the power of TakenForGranite but if they look at its eyes indirectly they are merely petrified.
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* AdaptationalWimp: The Basilisk. In canon it would kill anyone who looked at it's eyes directly and only a series of ContrivedCoincidence resulted in people looking at the snake's eyes indirectly and getting petrifyied. Here the Basilisk doesn't have the power to kill but instead to petrify with a stare.
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* IneptMage: Gildroy Lockhart who manages to accidently [[InSpiteOfANail vanish Harry's bones after he's hit with a cursed bludger]].
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** AdaptationalBadass: Pomona Sprout's class sees the first years travelling to the forbidden forest in order to learn to identify magical plants. This version of Quirrel does not have his infamous stutter, teaches competently and is a beloved teacher appreciated by both students and the Governors' Board.
** AdaptationalJerkass: Ron, who absorbed the bullying tendencies of Draco Malfoy.
** AdaptationalBadass: Pomona Sprout's class sees the first years travelling to the forbidden forest in order to learn to identify magical plants. This version of Quirrel does not have his infamous stutter, teaches competently and is a beloved teacher appreciated by both students and the Governors' Board.
** AdaptationalJerkass: Ron, who absorbed the bullying tendencies of Draco Malfoy.
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* AdaptationalPersonalityChange:
**AdaptationalBadass: Pomona Sprout's class sees the first years travelling to the forbidden forest in order to learn to identify magical plants. This version of Quirrel does not have his infamous stutter, teaches competently and is a beloved teacher appreciated by both students and the Governors' Board.
** AdaptationalJerkass: * AdaptationalVillainy: Ron, who absorbed the bullying tendencies of Draco Malfoy.Malfoy. However by second year he has fully evolved to this, even calling Hermione a [[FantasticSlur mudblood]] to her face.
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* BloodMagic: Dumbledore created a device by using a few drops of blood to keep minotoring of Harry's magic. Harry getting a tattoo however causes massive disruption of the magical flow and the device explodes.
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* BloodMagic: Dumbledore created a device by using a few drops of blood to keep minotoring of Harry's magic. Harry getting a tattoo however causes massive disruption of the magical flow and the device explodes. Harry's runes are also this.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Mike, Kerr, Tiny and even [[{{jerkass}} Rick]] are this to Harry.
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* InstantRunes: Subverted, Harry has to carve runes [[spoiler:into [[BloodMagichis own skin]] at a very specific time, initially following the lunar phases]].
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* InstantRunes: Subverted, Harry has to carve runes [[spoiler:into [[BloodMagichis [[BloodMagic his own skin]] at a very specific time, initially following the lunar phases]].
* ParentalSubstitute: Gerald Steel becomes a father figure for Harry [[spoiler:until Snape wipes his memory]]
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* SpottingTheThread: What causes people to join the Hound are a series of bizarre events, like patients curing themselves, prized students vanishing to a school that doesn't exist, government employee whose memories are wiped, law enforcement agents who catch criminals who suddenly aren't criminals anymore and other parts necessary to maintain TheMasquerade.
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* SpottingTheThread: What causes people to join the Hound are a series of bizarre events, like patients curing themselves, prized students vanishing to a school that doesn't exist, government employee employees whose memories are wiped, wiped continuously, law enforcement agents who catch criminals who suddenly aren't criminals anymore and other parts necessary to maintain TheMasquerade.
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** AdaptationalBadass: Pomona Sprout's class sees the first years travelling to the forbidden forest in order to learn to identify magical plants.
** AdaptationalIntelligence: Not really more smart, but this version of Quirrel doesn't have his infamous stutter and his class quickly becomes Harry's favorite.
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** AdaptationalBadass: Pomona Sprout's class sees the first years travelling to the forbidden forest in order to learn to identify magical plants.
** AdaptationalIntelligence: Not really more smart, but thisplants. This version of Quirrel doesn't does not have his infamous stutter stutter, teaches competently and his class quickly becomes Harry's favorite.is a beloved teacher appreciated by both students and the Governors' Board.
** AdaptationalIntelligence: Not really more smart, but this
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* HufflepuffHouse: The TropeNamer becomes yet another victim as Dumbledore orders them to return to their common room which is located in the dungeons, where a troll is also suspected to be.
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** AdaptationalJerkass: Ron, who absorbed the bullying tendencies of Draco Malfoy.
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* DecompositeCharacter: Draco, who while still existing as his personality split: his bigotry goes to Theodore Nott while his bullying goes to Ron.
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** AdaptationalBadass: Pomona Sprout's class sees the first years travelling to the forbidden forest in order to learn to identify magical plants.
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* AdaptationalPersonalityChange:
** AdaptationalIntelligence: Not really more smart, but this version of Quirrel doesn't have his infamous stutter and his class quickly becomes Harry's favorite.
** AdaptationalBadass: Pomona Sprout's class sees the first years travelling to the forbidden forest in order to learn to identify magical plants.
** AdaptationalIntelligence: Not really more smart, but this version of Quirrel doesn't have his infamous stutter and his class quickly becomes Harry's favorite.
** AdaptationalBadass: Pomona Sprout's class sees the first years travelling to the forbidden forest in order to learn to identify magical plants.
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* EvilReactionary: Theodore Nott, who absorbs all the negative personality traits of canon!Draco, magnified to the point that he considers that muggleborns should be expelled from the wizarding world.
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* RealityEnsues: Pureblood obsession with blood purity has resulted in a decline of birthrates so most pureblood have only one child whose death could spell the end of their lineage. Also muggleborns general lack and unfamiliarity with magic gives them greater disvantage over purebloods can far more easily master spells because they have been surrounded by magic all their lives.
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* {{Irony}}: The fact that the means used to uphold TheMasquerade such as LaserGuidedAmnesia, DestroyTheEvidence and FakeMemories are also responsible for BrokenMasquerade.
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** Thanks to the internet, they now are organizing at a faster rate and have actually compilled data and crafted a map that details the wizarding world.
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome: Sybill Trelawney.
* ShroudedInMyth: The origins of the Hound are unknown, even to its members.
* SpottingTheThread: What causes people to join the Hound are a series of bizarre events, like patients curing themselves, prized students vanishing to a school that doesn't exist, government employee whose memories are wiped, law enforcement agents who catch criminals who suddenly aren't criminals anymore and other parts necessary to maintain TheMasquerade.
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* WingedHumanoid: [[spoiler:Harry]][[spoiler:Harry]]
* WitchHunter: The Hounds, although they merely want to expose their existence. Some merely seek to do TheMagicComesBack while others have far less noble goals.
* WitchHunter: The Hounds, although they merely want to expose their existence. Some merely seek to do TheMagicComesBack while others have far less noble goals.
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* ArtisticLicenseHistory: The wizarding history books blame the persecution of wizardkind on the "Catholic religion" taking a greater hold over the nation. In fact, the witch trials started and worsened as Protestantism spread throughout Britain and Catholicism had been a force in Britain since the 4rd century.
* ArtisticLicenseReligion: The official position of the Catholic Church on magic is that [[IRejectYourReality it doesn't exist]]. In fact, belief in witchcraft did not spread until after the Reformation and witch trials would be far more common and likely to occur in nations with a growing Protestant community.
* ArtisticLicenseReligion: The official position of the Catholic Church on magic is that [[IRejectYourReality it doesn't exist]]. In fact, belief in witchcraft did not spread until after the Reformation and witch trials would be far more common and likely to occur in nations with a growing Protestant community.
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* ChristianityIsCatholic: According to wizarding history books, very much so.
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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: A variant. When Harry is first brought to Hogwarts, Madam Pomfrey casts a series of diagnosis spells on his magical core but due to the his protective runes, the diagnosis is that the core is normal, average which, along with the fact she has to employ very advanced healing spells, causes the mediwitch to be suspicious.
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* CripplingOverspecialization: Harry's runes are activated by a vocal command and a silencing charm will prevent him from using them.
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* ForcedToWatch: [[spoiler:Harry is bound in a telephone cord and has to helplessly watch as Snape obliviates Gerald Steel]].
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* CoolHouse: Mr. Steel owns a cottage in the countryside, which he, Harry and the Steel Wings eventually move to.
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* EyepatchOfPower: When Harry crafts rune that makes his right eye see magic but also corrects the eye sight, he becomes TheClutz so Kerr, Tiny and Mike give him an eyepatch.
* FandomSpecificPlot: The concept of magical cores, which is basically power levels, which also includes limted amount of magic being avaliable to wizards and witches and how spellcasting spends it, when in canon only physical and emotional exhaustion are shown and there's no hint of limited magic.
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* EyepatchOfPower: When Harry crafts rune that makes his right eye see magic but also corrects the eye sight, he becomes TheClutz TheKlutz so Kerr, Tiny and Mike give him an eyepatch.
* FandomSpecificPlot: The concept of magical cores, which is basically power levels,which also includes limted amount of magic being avaliable to wizards and witches and how spellcasting spends it, when in canon only physical and emotional exhaustion are shown and there's no hint of limited magic.
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: The inability of wizards to dress up like muggles, in violation of the Statue of Secrecy, is what initially intrigued Mr. Steel, eventually to him discovering TheMasquerade.
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* InstantRunes: Subverted, Harry has to work hard to carve runes [[spoiler:into his own skin]].
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* LaserGuidedAmnesia: The Memory Charm, which is deconstructed by showing how destructive to social life it can be [[spoiler:Dumbledore wipes out Mr. Steel's memory of Harry, damaging his relationship with the wizard boy forever]].
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* RoofHopping: During his race against Rick and Mike, Harry engages in this until he [[{{teleportation}} apparates]].
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* DeflectorShields: Harry's third rune creates a shield which resembles a bubble.
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* SolarAndLunar: Harry's first two runic sets are dedicated to the moon while the other two runic sets are dedicated to the sun.
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* Teleportation: {{Teleportation}}: Beyond apparation, Harry can also teleport through conjured fire.