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* FantasticSlur: As the story is from the perspective of a pureblood supremacist who lives in a society of them, the word "Mudblood" (a demeaning word for Muggle-born wizards) is thrown around rather liberally.
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* FantasticSlur: As the story is from the perspective of a pureblood supremacist who lives in a society of them, the word "Mudblood" (a demeaning word for Muggle-born wizards) is thrown around rather liberally.liberally. While its original use was to demean Muggle-born wizards, it seems to have extended to any magical person not a pureblood, as Lucius uses it to refer to some of the children of the Cabal girls, who would be either pureblood or half-blood.
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* AmbiguousSituation: Lucius wonders if the Net was put up around Wizarding Britain in reaction to the kidnappings or, since it was created so quickly, if the ICW had planned on placing the Net all along.
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* FantasticSlur: As the story is from the perspective of a pureblood supremacist who lives in a society of them, the word "Mudblood" (a demeaning word for Muggle-born wizards) is thrown around rather liberally.
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** When the Malfoys bring in a half-blood concubine to conceive a son with Leonidas, several of the talking portraits (presumably of Malfoy family members) have to be moved from their positions, as they make a huge racket over her blood status.
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** When the Malfoys bring in a half-blood concubine to conceive a son with Leonidas, several of the talking portraits (presumably of Malfoy family members) have to be moved from their positions, as they upset her and make a huge racket over her blood status.
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* RacistGrandpa: Lucius, especially now that he literally is a grandfather and great-grandfather.
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* RacistGrandpa: RacistGrandpa:
** Lucius, especially now that he literally is a grandfather andgreat-grandfather.great-grandfather.
** When the Malfoys bring in a half-blood concubine to conceive a son with Leonidas, several of the talking portraits (presumably of Malfoy family members) have to be moved from their positions, as they make a huge racket over her blood status.
** Lucius, especially now that he literally is a grandfather and
** When the Malfoys bring in a half-blood concubine to conceive a son with Leonidas, several of the talking portraits (presumably of Malfoy family members) have to be moved from their positions, as they make a huge racket over her blood status.
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* AnAesop: Building a society on racial purity and the exclusion of others is not sustainable. The Death Eaters find this out the hard way when their ideology is put to the test, and it slowly erodes in front of their eyes. Meanwhile, the Light thrives without the Death Eaters getting in the way.
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* PrejudiceAesop: Building a society on racial purity and the exclusion of others is not sustainable. The Death Eaters find this out the hard way when their ideology is put to the test, and it slowly erodes in front of their eyes. Meanwhile, the Light thrives without the Death Eaters getting in the way.
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* BatmanGambit: The premise is Harry setting up one for the Death Eaters with the Rites of Parlay. [[spoiler:Leonidas predicts he's set up ''another'' one targeted at Voldemort specifically -- with the Wizarding population in Britain dwindling to nothing due to inbreeding, Voldemort will inevitably try terrorizing {{Muggles}} for fun without realizing it (since he refuses to believe nothing's wrong in his empire) and thus lose his magic. This will leave him easy pickings for the authorities and possibly cut him off from his [[SoulJar Horcruxes]] as a bonus, or just kill him since his body was made by magic.]]
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* BatmanGambit: The premise is Harry setting up one for the Death Eaters with the Rites of Parlay. [[spoiler:Leonidas predicts he's set up ''another'' one targeted at Voldemort specifically -- with the Wizarding population in Britain dwindling to nothing due to inbreeding, Voldemort will inevitably try terrorizing {{Muggles}} for fun without realizing it (since he refuses to believe nothing's anything's wrong in his empire) and thus lose his magic. This will leave him easy pickings for the authorities and possibly cut him off from his [[SoulJar Horcruxes]] as a bonus, or just kill him since his body was made by magic.]]
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* PointOfDivergence: After Dumbledore dies in ''Literature/HarryPotterAndTheHalf-BloodPrince'', Harry, instead of choosing to fight Voldemort and the Death Eaters, chose to invoke the Rites of Parlay in order to minimize the deaths of the Light Supporters.
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* PointOfDivergence: After Dumbledore dies in ''Literature/HarryPotterAndTheHalf-BloodPrince'', ''Literature/HarryPotterAndTheHalfBloodPrince'', Harry, instead of choosing to fight Voldemort and the Death Eaters, chose to invoke the Rites of Parlay in order to minimize the deaths of the Light Supporters.
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* ForWantOfANail: After Dumbledore dies in ''Literature/HarryPotterAndTheHalfBloodPrince'', Harry, instead of choosing to fight Voldemort and the Death Eaters, chose to invoke the Rites of Parlay in order to minimize the deaths of the Light Supporters.
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* PointOfDivergence: After Dumbledore dies in ''Literature/HarryPotterAndTheHalf-BloodPrince'', Harry, instead of choosing to fight Voldemort and the Death Eaters, chose to invoke the Rites of Parlay in order to minimize the deaths of the Light Supporters.
