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* HiddenDepths: Oobleck is hinted [[spoiler: to be a part of [[Fanfic/InTheKingdomsService VSS]]]]
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Every family has its odd member, the one that doesn't fit. Jaune was just that, the black sheep. He had always wanted to be the hero, to be a Huntsman. But when your name is Jaune Salem Arc - Prince of the Grimm - and your mother is understandably against the idea, what is a young man to do? Why, run away to attend Beacon in pursuit of a dream, of course. What could go wrong?

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Every family has its odd member, the one that doesn't fit. Jaune was just that, the black sheep. He had always wanted to be the hero, to be a Huntsman. But when your name is Jaune Salem Arc - -- Prince of the Grimm - -- and your mother is understandably against the idea, what is a young man to do? Why, run away to attend Beacon in pursuit of a dream, of course. What could go wrong?
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* DangerDeadpan: The Beacon initiation test begins with Jaune being launched off a cliff and caught by a giant Nevermore, carried off to what the teachers and other students believe is his certain death. Everyone is left in StunnedSilence, and Ozpin needs a sip of coffee - followed by three more sips - before he turns to the others and asks, "So, who wants to go next?"

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* DangerDeadpan: The Beacon initiation test begins with Jaune being launched off a cliff and caught by a giant Nevermore, carried off to what the teachers and other students believe is his certain death. Everyone is left in StunnedSilence, and Ozpin needs a sip of coffee - -- followed by three more sips - -- before he turns to the others and asks, "So, who wants to go next?"


'''Watts:''' No. It's because I'm not Jaune. And [[BreadEggsMilkSquick a host of other reasons]] related to [[{{Ephebophile}} suitable age]], [[StraightEdgeEvil personal feelings]], [[ConsummateProfessional professionalism]], [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil not taking advantage of a woman]], and [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers a desire not to]] be [[CruelAndUnusualDeath strung up]] by [[GuttedLikeAFish my entrails]] by [[BigBad my mistress]].

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'''Watts:''' No. It's because I'm not Jaune. And [[BreadEggsMilkSquick a host of other reasons]] related to [[{{Ephebophile}} suitable age]], [[StraightEdgeEvil personal feelings]], [[ConsummateProfessional professionalism]], [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil not taking advantage of a woman]], and [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers a desire not to]] to be [[CruelAndUnusualDeath strung up]] up by [[GuttedLikeAFish my entrails]] by [[BigBad entrails my mistress]].
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** During the game of Remnant, Yang summons a giant Nevermore to cut off the town of Magnis. In Coeur's first fic ever, "[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10817938/1/One-Good-Turn-Deserves-Another One Good Turn Deserves Another]]," the town of Magnis was the location of the climax and was attacked by a giant Nevermore, and an Ursa swarm (that Ruby summoned in the game in response to Yang's actions) played a role earlier in that story as well.

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** During the game of Remnant, Yang summons a giant Nevermore to cut off the town of Magnis. In Coeur's first fic ever, "[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10817938/1/One-Good-Turn-Deserves-Another "[[Fanfic/OneGoodTurnDeservesAnother One Good Turn Deserves Another]]," the town of Magnis was the location of the climax and was attacked by a giant Nevermore, and an Ursa swarm (that Ruby summoned in the game in response to Yang's actions) played a role earlier in that story as well.
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Removing trope misuse (the trope is about villains revealing their Evil Plan because they know there's nothing the recipient can do about it, and the recipient will likely end up helping the plan work if they know)


* BluntYes: When [[spoiler:the God of Darkness]] accuses Yang of trying to turn him against [[spoiler:the God of Light]], saying she wants him to do her dirty work, she responds with, "Yeah, pretty much." [[HonestyIsTheBestPolicy But that doesn't make her wrong]].

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* BluntYes: When [[spoiler:the God of Darkness]] accuses Yang of trying to turn him against [[spoiler:the God of Light]], saying she wants him to do her dirty work, she responds with, "Yeah, pretty much." [[HonestyIsTheBestPolicy But that doesn't make her wrong]].wrong.
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** Jaune's massive Beowolf is called "Mannie." Technically his name is Man-slayer, but everyone, including Cinder and Salem, call it Mannie.

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** Jaune's massive Jaune calls his lifelong pet Beowolf is called "Mannie." Technically his [[spoiler:Its full name is Man-slayer, but everyone, including Cinder and Salem, call it Mannie.''Manslayer.'']]
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** And ''then'' when Qrow, still under the impression that the aforementioned sister of Jaune who he banged was Raven's daughter, tries to confess the misunderstanding to Raven, Raven thinks that Qrow is referring to Yang as the daughter of hers who he slept with, and she immediately tries to cut off ''both'' of Qrow's heads for it.
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* MistakenForIncest:
** Qrow mistakenly believes that Jaune is his sister Raven's son, and therefore goes to a lot of effort to keep him from dating Raven's daughter Yang (who she abandoned as a baby). Making this also a case of subverted SurpriseIncest, he's wrong.
** Qrow does this to ''himself'' when he has sex with a girl who he then discovers is Jaune's sister, while he still believes Jaune is Raven's son. There is a ''lot'' of screaming.
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Removing trope misuse; as per TRS, this is an IUEO motive trope where the work acknowledges in some fashion that the villain has a good point about his motive for being a villain without it ever being a justification for him becoming a villain because of it.


* VillainHasAPoint: Cinder, early on, points out to Salem that Roman is a scumbag who she doesn't trust as far as she can throw him, but his story about helping a person who ''exactly'' matches Jaune's appearance in both normal and Grimm forms to enroll in Beacon seems true. She also can't blame his reasoning for why he didn't try to keep Jaune around - Roman saw Jaune as a person who was far too powerful to try to manipulate, and only saw destruction for himself if he tried.
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Disambiguated.


* OverprotectiveDad: [[PlayingWithATrope Zig-zagged]] with Taiyang. Before he met Jaune for the first time, he gave Zwei instructions to attack him. However, when he hears that [[spoiler:his daughter married and was "with child" by the Crown Prince of the Grimm]], his biggest concern is that [[spoiler:he wasn't invited to the wedding]]. Once Jaune clears things up, Tai offers Jaune some advice for dealing with politicians [[spoiler:and threatens him that he'd better be invited to the real wedding]].
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* GladYouThoughtOfIt: {{Discussed|Trope}} early on; Salem asks Cinder why she hasn't brought Jaune home already, to which the ''real'' answer is that this would conflict with Cinder's agenda. Since she obviously can't say that, she instead buys time by claiming she's subtly reminding Jaune of his family so he grows homesick and decides to return home on his own.


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* ObliviousToHisOwnDescription: When Salem asks Cinder what she thinks of the prospect of Jaune getting together with Yang, Cinder says she finds Yang childish and inexperienced, and that she thinks there are already enough blondes in the family. Salem seems to think this is jealousy, as her response is to tell Cinder that she'd approve of any older, more experienced women with darker hair (i.e. Cinder) who might want to get with Jaune instead. Cinder has no idea why Salem finds that an amusing thing to say.
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* {{Irony}}: For a chunk of the fic, Qrow disapproves of Jaune's romantic interest in Yang and even tries to sabotage it, because he's under the false impression that the pair are half-siblings on Raven's side. Qrow later beds a blonde woman and finds out mid-coitus that she's Jaune's sister, causing him to believe that ''he'' has [[SurpriseIncest unknowingly boned his own long-lost niece]] at a time before Jaune and Yang's relationship has gotten that far.
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* CuffsOffRubWrists: [[spoiler:Yang tries this while held in an Atlesian research facility, but since her right arm isn't under her own conscious control, she needs to ask Yin to help]].
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Fixing sinkhole.


* GoodColorsEvilColors: Jaune's belief in this trope causes him to mistake [[DarkIsNotEvil Ruby]] to be the evil villainess attacking the respectable [[LightIsNotGood Roman]].

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* GoodColorsEvilColors: Jaune's belief in this trope causes him to mistake [[DarkIsNotEvil Ruby]] to be the evil villainess attacking the respectable [[LightIsNotGood [[BrightIsNotGood Roman]].
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* AlternateUniverse: Aside from the obvious part of Jaune being Salem's son, Salem has a different personality, Cinder is Jaune's adoptive big sister and helped raise him as his babysitter growing up, and due to this Jaune's alternate behavior or locations, the events of the story differ from canon. For instance, instead of Team RWBY and Team JNPR, Team WJRP (Whirlpool, made of its leader Weiss, Jaune, Ruby, and Pyrrha) and Team RYBN (Ribbon, made of its leader Ren, Yang, Blake, and Nora) are formed after an altered initiation test.

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* AlternateUniverse: Aside from AlternateUniverseFic: Roughly two decades before the obvious part of series' start, the Arc family's patriarch Nicholas got himself captured by Salem in the Grimmlands, which in turn led to a booty call. As a result, Jaune being and his seven sisters in this continuity are Salem's son, human-Grimm hybrid children, finding love and having children again has put Salem through a massive personality shift which has a different personality, made her effectively all but retire from villainy, Cinder is Jaune's adoptive big sister and who helped raise him as his babysitter growing up, up; and due to this Jaune's alternate behavior or locations, from his upbringing, the events of the story differ from canon. For instance, instead of Team RWBY and Team JNPR, Team WJRP (Whirlpool, made of its leader Weiss, Jaune, Ruby, and Pyrrha) and Team RYBN (Ribbon, made of its leader Ren, Yang, Blake, and Nora) are formed after an altered initiation test. Although Cinder and her subordinates are still plotting to infiltrate Beacon and claim the Fall Maiden power on top of Jaune still running away from home to enrol in Beacon, things increasingly diverge from canon as the events of Volume 1-5 progress.
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trope merge with Recruiters Always Lie


* JoinTheArmyTheySaid: Watts at the end of Chapter 83.
--> '''Watts:''' [[ForTheEvulz Be evil]], they said. [[CardCarryingVillain Become a supervillain]], they said. [[ItAmusedMe It'll be fun]], they said. [[NotWhatISignedOnFor This wasn't in the job description]]...
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The trope no longer exists and has been disambiguated. I can't tell if another trope would be appropriate, so feel free to re-add under a suitable trope.


* ArmorPiercingSlap: [[spoiler:Cinder slaps Jaune across the face when he complains to her that he might as well get himself killed to stop being a burden to her]]. Downplays the "armor piercing" part since Jaune's Aura blocks the physical damage, but Jaune is still hurt emotionally.
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Adding it back because the point of the Take That was to mock the supposed Plot Holes. I disagree with the author's position on that, but that's beside the point.

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** Ruby gives one in chapter 93 to what the author perceives as the various {{Deus Ex Machina}}s in canon, citing that with the current situation with the Kingdoms (which is functionally the same as canon), humanity would have no chance against Salem "without something like random superpowers or magical artifacts."
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* DancingRoyalty: Yang is surprised to find that Jaune is an excellent dancer. Apparently [[SorcerousOverlord his mother]], assuming that he'd need to attend some diplomatic dances after he [[TakeOverTheWorld took over the world]], made sure he learned. Unlike in [[WebAnimation/{{RWBY}} canon]], he doesn't lead the entire school in a group dance.
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Yeah, but without a replacement trope, the entry is incomplete. Removing.


** Ruby gives one in chapter 93 to the various, citing that with the current situation with the Kingdoms (which is functionally the same as canon), humanity would have no chance against Salem without something like random superpowers or magical artifacts.
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There is no example of the Deus Ex Machina trope in the canon, so removed this bit of misuse.


** Ruby gives one in chapter 93 to the various {{Deus Ex Machina}}s in canon, citing that with the current situation with the Kingdoms (which is functionally the same as canon), humanity would have no chance against Salem without something like random superpowers or magical artifacts.

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** Ruby gives one in chapter 93 to the various {{Deus Ex Machina}}s in canon, various, citing that with the current situation with the Kingdoms (which is functionally the same as canon), humanity would have no chance against Salem without something like random superpowers or magical artifacts.
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Removing trope misuse. The trope is for someone coming up with a convoluted plan only for someone else to point out there's a far simpler solution staring them in the face.


** Watts prefers to save the time, effort, and trouble of kidnapping priests and tailors and stealing associated materials for the weddings of Salem's children by simply [[NoodleIncident having himself (and Tyrian) ordained as priests]] and [[StatingTheSimpleSolution paying Lien to hire the tailors]].

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** Watts prefers to save the time, effort, and trouble of kidnapping priests and tailors and stealing associated materials for the weddings of Salem's children by simply [[NoodleIncident having himself (and Tyrian) ordained as priests]] and [[StatingTheSimpleSolution paying Lien to hire the tailors]].tailors.
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Soul Power isn't in effect for the main show, as per Is This An Example thread. Aura is already troped as Mana and manipulating Aura is Ki Manipulation.


---> '''Cardin:''' How much [[SoulPower aura]] do you have? Forget it... so you've got [[LifeMeter a big aura]]. That's nothing special!\\

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---> '''Cardin:''' How much [[SoulPower [[{{Mana}} aura]] do you have? Forget it... so you've got [[LifeMeter a big aura]]. That's nothing special!\\
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* CringeComedy: Chapter 16 ends with an AfterActionReport written by [[RobotGirl Penny]] about [[TheBlindLeadingTheBlind her tour of Vale with Ruby and Jaune]], containing multiple UnEntendre misinterpretations of the aforementioned event, and sent to [[FourStarBadass her Atlesian military general]] with the hope that [[TheComicallySerious Ironwood]] will be pleased by her progress in [[HughMann acting like a normal person]].

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* CringeComedy: Chapter 16 ends with an AfterActionReport written by [[RobotGirl Penny]] about [[TheBlindLeadingTheBlind her tour of Vale with Ruby and Jaune]], containing multiple UnEntendre ImaginedInnuendo misinterpretations of the aforementioned event, and sent to [[FourStarBadass her Atlesian military general]] with the hope that [[TheComicallySerious Ironwood]] will be pleased by her progress in [[HughMann acting like a normal person]].

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