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* UsefulNotes/BechdelTest: Passes. The very first conversation between Miura and Edogawa, both girls, covers a variety of subjects, from the school they're in to Miura's talent.
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* UsefulNotes/JapaneseHonorifics: All characters in the fic use them if they're polite enough. For example, Kaori uses "-kun" on boys, "-san" on girls, and calls Edogawa "Sensei" out of respect for her as an author.
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-->'''Miura narrating''': I had to wonder what kind of story we were talking about- perhaps that of [[Literature/{{Twilight}} a high school girl who falls in love with a vampire]], or that of [[Literature/FiftyShadesOfGrey a billionaire with a passion for bondage and the poor unfortunate woman who happens to be his lover]]- but didn't ask.
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-->'''Miura narrating''': I had to wonder what kind of story we were talking about- perhaps that of [[Literature/{{Twilight}} [[Literature/TheTwilightSaga a high school girl who falls in love with a vampire]], or that of [[Literature/FiftyShadesOfGrey a billionaire with a passion for bondage and the poor unfortunate woman who happens to be his lover]]- but didn't ask.
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** At breakfast on Day 7, Monokuma greets the students with "Rise and shine, ursine!" and departs with "So long, bearwell!", the Monokubz' [[CatchPhrase catchphrases]] in V3.
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** At breakfast on Day 7, Monokuma greets the students with "Rise and shine, ursine!" and departs with "So long, bearwell!", the Monokubz' [[CatchPhrase catchphrases]] catchphrases in V3.''V3''.
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** When giving the second Monokuma File to Miura, Monokuma says "[[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZelda It's dangerous to go alone, so take this]]!"
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** When giving the second Monokuma File to Miura, Monokuma says "[[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZelda "[[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaI It's dangerous to go alone, so take this]]!"
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** When Monokuma is asked whether Final Dead Room: VR Edition will kill people if they lose, he says, "Who do you think I am, [[LightNovel/SwordArtOnline Akihiko Kayaba]]?"
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** When Monokuma is asked whether Final Dead Room: VR Edition will kill people if they lose, he says, "Who do you think I am, [[LightNovel/SwordArtOnline [[Literature/SwordArtOnline Akihiko Kayaba]]?"
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%%* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Miura finds a ball of rice in the Monomono machine that's over a year past its expiration date.
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These are character reactions or someone pointing out that something could happen, which don't count. I'm not sure about the third one.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** When 16 high schoolers are trapped together in a school, away from their families and other friends, and fearing for their lives, some don't even need an additional "motive" from Monokuma in order to commit murder and graduate. [[spoiler:In Sakuragi's case, realizing that two years have passed and he's likely out of shape is enough reason to cause him to snap and kill]]. Lampshaded by Hoshino.
-->'''Hoshino''': You mean escaping this hellhole isn't enough reason to kill someone?
** Miura strongly suspects that after two years in the school, [[spoiler:Mizuhara's medication for his allergy is no longer good, and wouldn't have saved his life]].
** Similarly, Miura finds a ball of rice in the Monomono machine that's over a year past its expiration date.
** When 16 high schoolers are trapped together in a school, away from their families and other friends, and fearing for their lives, some don't even need an additional "motive" from Monokuma in order to commit murder and graduate. [[spoiler:In Sakuragi's case, realizing that two years have passed and he's likely out of shape is enough reason to cause him to snap and kill]]. Lampshaded by Hoshino.
-->'''Hoshino''': You mean escaping this hellhole isn't enough reason to kill someone?
** Miura strongly suspects that after two years in the school, [[spoiler:Mizuhara's medication for his allergy is no longer good, and wouldn't have saved his life]].
** Similarly, Miura finds a ball of rice in the Monomono machine that's over a year past its expiration date.
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** When 16 high schoolers are trapped together in a school, away from their families and other friends, and fearing for their lives, some don't even need an additional "motive" from Monokuma in order to commit murder and graduate. [[spoiler:In Sakuragi's case, realizing that two years have passed and he's likely out of shape is enough reason to cause him to snap and kill]]. Lampshaded by Hoshino.
-->'''Hoshino''': You mean escaping this hellhole isn't enough reason to kill someone?
** Miura strongly suspects that after two years in the school, [[spoiler:Mizuhara's medication for his allergy is no longer good, and wouldn't have saved his life]].
** Similarly,
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* DarkSecret: In the second Chapter, Monokuma gives out information on characters' weaknesses, similar to the first game's second motives, but these include personal weaknesses (for example, Yuuki's fear of blood and [[spoiler:Mizuhara's peanut allergy]]) and secrets people don't want to get out([[spoiler:Sugiura being the Ultimate Poisoner and Mitamura cheating on a test]]). The twist is that with a few exceptions, everyone has ''someone else's'' secret, as well as a potential clue as to who has their secret.
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* DarkSecret: In the second Chapter, Monokuma gives out information on characters' weaknesses, similar to the first game's second motives, but these include personal weaknesses (for example, Yuuki's fear of blood and [[spoiler:Mizuhara's peanut allergy]]) and secrets people don't want to get out([[spoiler:Sugiura out ([[spoiler:Sugiura being the Ultimate Poisoner and Mitamura cheating on a test]]). The twist is that with a few exceptions, everyone has ''someone else's'' secret, as well as a potential clue as to who has their secret.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** When 16 high schoolers are trapped together in a school, away from their families and other friends, and fearing for their lives, some don't even need an additional "motive" from Monokuma in order to commit murder and graduate. [[spoiler:In Sakuragi's case, realizing that two years have passed and he's likely out of shape is enough reason to cause him to snap and kill]]. Lampshaded by Hoshino.
-->'''Hoshino''': You mean escaping this hellhole isn't enough reason to kill someone?
** Miura strongly suspects that after two years in the school, [[spoiler:Mizuhara's medication for his allergy is no longer good, and wouldn't have saved his life]].
** Similarly, Miura finds a ball of rice in the Monomono machine that's over a year past its expiration date.
** When 16 high schoolers are trapped together in a school, away from their families and other friends, and fearing for their lives, some don't even need an additional "motive" from Monokuma in order to commit murder and graduate. [[spoiler:In Sakuragi's case, realizing that two years have passed and he's likely out of shape is enough reason to cause him to snap and kill]]. Lampshaded by Hoshino.
-->'''Hoshino''': You mean escaping this hellhole isn't enough reason to kill someone?
** Miura strongly suspects that after two years in the school, [[spoiler:Mizuhara's medication for his allergy is no longer good, and wouldn't have saved his life]].
** Similarly, Miura finds a ball of rice in the Monomono machine that's over a year past its expiration date.
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* NotSoDifferentRemark:
** In his time at Talent High School, Shiro's still bitter about losing to Miura, but admits that he'd probably have made the same choices she had, from taking advantage of a second chance to be invited to the school to joining the student council.
** Kagami tries to invoke this with Miura, saying that they were both used by Talent High School, but Miura is quick to shoot him down.
** In his time at Talent High School, Shiro's still bitter about losing to Miura, but admits that he'd probably have made the same choices she had, from taking advantage of a second chance to be invited to the school to joining the student council.
** Kagami tries to invoke this with Miura, saying that they were both used by Talent High School, but Miura is quick to shoot him down.
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* RealityEnsues:
** When 16 high schoolers are trapped together in a school, away from their families and other friends, and fearing for their lives, some don't even need an additional "motive" from Monokuma in order to commit murder and graduate. [[spoiler:In Sakuragi's case, realizing that two years have passed and he's likely out of shape is enough reason to cause him to snap and kill]]. Lampshaded by Hoshino.
-->'''Hoshino''': You mean escaping this hellhole isn't enough reason to kill someone?
** Miura strongly suspects that after two years in the school, [[spoiler:Mizuhara's medication for his allergy is no longer good, and wouldn't have saved his life]].
** Similarly, Miura finds a ball of rice in the Monomono machine that's over a year past its expiration date.
** When 16 high schoolers are trapped together in a school, away from their families and other friends, and fearing for their lives, some don't even need an additional "motive" from Monokuma in order to commit murder and graduate. [[spoiler:In Sakuragi's case, realizing that two years have passed and he's likely out of shape is enough reason to cause him to snap and kill]]. Lampshaded by Hoshino.
-->'''Hoshino''': You mean escaping this hellhole isn't enough reason to kill someone?
** Miura strongly suspects that after two years in the school, [[spoiler:Mizuhara's medication for his allergy is no longer good, and wouldn't have saved his life]].
** Similarly, Miura finds a ball of rice in the Monomono machine that's over a year past its expiration date.
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* SanitySlippage: When 16 high schoolers are trapped together in a school, away from their families and other friends, and fearing for their lives, some don't even need an additional "motive" from Monokuma in order to commit murder and graduate. [[spoiler:In Sakuragi's case, realizing that two years have passed and he's likely out of shape is enough reason to cause him to snap and kill]]. Lampshaded by Hoshino.
-->'''Hoshino''': You mean escaping this hellhole isn't enough reason to kill someone?
-->'''Hoshino''': You mean escaping this hellhole isn't enough reason to kill someone?
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