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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8440874/1/When-the-Moon-Fell-in-Love-with-the-Sun When The Moon Fell In Love With The Sun]]'' is a ''Literature/TheHungerGames'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1699351/Mejhiren Mejhiren]]. It's a ForWantOfANail story where Prim wasn't chosen in the Reaping and Katniss consequently never left home, while Peeta went on to fight in and win the 74th Hunger Games himself, averting the events of the entire trilogy. However this doesn't automatically make everything better, as the freezing winter that blows in afterwards brings Katniss' poor family to the verge of painful starvation. Until the night that the newest Victor of District 12 comes to their door with an offer- if Katniss will come with him to live in his Victor's residence in the woods and keep him company, he'll see that her mother and sister will have everything they could possibly want. Needless to say, Katniss agrees without question- not only to save her beloved sister from a terrible death, but also because she finally sees a chance to repay the boy who, five years ago, saved her life...

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8440874/1/When-the-Moon-Fell-in-Love-with-the-Sun When The Moon Fell In Love With The Sun]]'' is a ''Literature/TheHungerGames'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1699351/Mejhiren Mejhiren]]. It's a ForWantOfANail story where Prim wasn't chosen in the Reaping and Katniss consequently never left home, while Peeta went on to fight in and win the 74th Hunger Games himself, averting the events of the entire trilogy. However this doesn't automatically make everything better, as the freezing winter that blows in afterwards brings Katniss' poor family to the verge of painful starvation. Until the night that the newest Victor of District 12 comes to their door with an offer- if offer--if Katniss will come with him to live in his Victor's residence in the woods and keep him company, he'll see that her mother and sister will have everything they could possibly want. Needless to say, Katniss agrees without question- not question--not only to save her beloved sister from a terrible death, but also because she finally sees a chance to repay the boy who, five years ago, saved her life...



** Both [[spoiler:Larkspur]] and, surprisingly, [[spoiler:Foxface]] do make an ''actual'' LastRequest of Peeta as well- [[spoiler:that he survive the Games to go home to the girl he loves]].

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** Both [[spoiler:Larkspur]] and, surprisingly, [[spoiler:Foxface]] do make an ''actual'' LastRequest of Peeta as well- [[spoiler:that well--[[spoiler:that he survive the Games to go home to the girl he loves]].
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-->''"Is this what happens," I whisper, "when the moon falls in love with the sun?"''

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-->''"Is this what happens," I whisper, "when the moon falls in love with the sun?"''sun?"''
* UnknowinglyInLove: Bad as it was in canon, Katniss's obliviousness here is even more so. 11 chapters in, she's ''still'' at the stage of thinking that someday they ''might be friends'', even when she's started having {{Erotic Dream}}s about him.
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** In a variation, he also brings feed for Lady (Prim's pregnant goat). As Katniss notes, this more than anything else wins her over forever.

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** In a variation, he also brings feed for Lady (Prim's pregnant goat). As Katniss notes, this more than anything else wins her Prim over forever.
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** In a variation, he also brings feed for Lady (Prim's pregnant goat). As Katniss notes, this more than anything else wins her over forever.
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* CompletelyMissingThePoint: The number and size of mental gymnastics Katniss does to miss the point of every arrow that points to her as the girl Peeta loves is staggering.

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* CompletelyMissingThePoint: DramaticallyMissingThePoint: The number and size of mental gymnastics Katniss does to miss the point of every arrow that points to her as the girl Peeta loves is staggering.
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** In a smaller case, after Peeta lost his leg to a wolverine mutt in the Games, Pollux and Katniss both swear they'd kill any wolverine that came near Peeta again.
* DueToTheDead: When Larkspur (Peeta's district parner) dies in the games, Peeta makes a point to clean her face and give her her first toast ceremony. Katniss thinks the only reason the Capitol aired is that they were confused by what he was doing.



* IOweYouMyLife: Katniss is far more insistant about this (thanks to the bread incident) than in canon, but after Peeta keeps his side of the bargain she feels she owes him a lot ''more'' than that.

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* IOweYouMyLife: Katniss is far more insistant insistent about this (thanks to the bread incident) than in canon, but after Peeta keeps his side of the bargain she feels she owes him a lot ''more'' than that.

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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: People (Gale, Peeta's father, Pollux) ''repeatedly'' lampshade the fact that Katniss [[ObliviousToLove really doesn't have a clue about how Peeta feels]].
%%** UpToEleven: even ''her own dreams'' try to tell her that she clearly cannot see it.

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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: People (Gale, Peeta's father, Pollux) ''repeatedly'' lampshade the fact that Katniss [[ObliviousToLove really doesn't have a clue about how Peeta feels]].
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feels]]. Even ''her own dreams'' try to tell her that she clearly cannot see it.



* HoistByHisOwnPetard: at the end of the Games, Peeta can barely move because of the injury to his leg, so when the giant bear charges at him, he just plants a spear on the ground and lets the bear impale itself.


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* InertialImpalement: At the end of the Games, Peeta can barely move because of the injury to his leg, so when the giant bear charges at him, he just plants a spear on the ground and lets the bear impale itself.

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* ObliviousToLove: '''''KATNISS!''''' To an utterly ''absurd'' degree.
** SugarWiki/MostTriumphantExample: in chapter 11, Katniss realizes that Peeta's District Token is a piece of cloth that would have been given to him by a Seam girl (the handkerchief she gave him before he left for the Games). Her first thought is to be angry, because she believes Peeta is just using her as a test run how to best woo that girl. And once she gets over that first thought, even though she's made the cognitive leap to the "impossible" idea that Peeta loves a Seam girl, she still, ''still,''' STILL''''' doesn't make the connection that ''it's her!''

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* ObliviousToLove: '''''KATNISS!''''' To Katniss, to an utterly ''absurd'' degree.
** SugarWiki/MostTriumphantExample:
degree. Most notably, in chapter 11, Katniss realizes that Peeta's District Token is a piece of cloth that would have been given to him by a Seam girl (the handkerchief she gave him before he left for the Games). Her first thought is to be angry, because she believes Peeta is just using her as a test run how to best woo that girl. And once she gets over that first thought, even though she's made the cognitive leap to the "impossible" idea that Peeta loves a Seam girl, she still, ''still,''' STILL''''' ''still'' doesn't make the connection that ''it's her!''it's her!
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* HypocriticalHumor: In chapter 11, Katniss wonders how Peeta "can be so painfully oblivious" to how attractive he is when he's dressed up in his New Year's party finery and modestly shrugs off a compliment from her. This coming from a girl who ''argues'' with Peeta when he tells her she's beautiful and is the ''SugarWiki/MostTriumphantExample'' of ObliviousToLove.

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* HypocriticalHumor: In chapter 11, Katniss wonders how Peeta "can be so painfully oblivious" to how attractive he is when he's dressed up in his New Year's party finery and modestly shrugs off a compliment from her. This coming from a girl who ''argues'' with Peeta when he tells her she's beautiful and who is the ''SugarWiki/MostTriumphantExample'' of herself ObliviousToLove.

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** UpToEleven: even ''her own dreams'' try to tell her that she clearly cannot see it.

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** %%** UpToEleven: even ''her own dreams'' try to tell her that she clearly cannot see it.



* RuleOfSymbolism: Peeta compares his "sweetheart" with a bird, to feed and give a home to, hoping that she will accept to stay with him forever. [[ObliviousToLove Of course, Katniss completely misses the point.]]

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* PrimalScene: Katniss sort-of-accidentally walks in on Pollux and Lavinia having oral sex. Peeta confesses to her that he walked in on them by accident a couple of times.
* RuleOfSymbolism: Peeta compares his "sweetheart" with a singing bird, to feed and give a home to, hoping that she will accept to stay with him forever. [[ObliviousToLove Of course, Katniss completely misses the point.]]


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** {{Justified}}, though, in that he's mentioned several times he spent a good part of his time after the Games learning how to cook.
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* BearsAreBadNews: Played straight at the end of the 74th Hunger Games when a huge white bear muttation interrupted the FinalBattle between Peeta and Cato and ripped open Cato's throat. Peeta's victory became truly the stuff of legends when ''[[{{Badass}} he killed the bear]].''

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* BearsAreBadNews: Played straight at the end of the 74th Hunger Games when a huge white bear muttation interrupted the FinalBattle between Peeta and Cato and ripped open Cato's throat. Peeta's victory became truly the stuff of legends when ''[[{{Badass}} he killed ''killed the bear]].''bear''.
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* HypocriticalHumor: In chapter 11, Katniss wonders how Peeta "can be so painfully oblivious" to how attractive he is when he's dressed up in his New Year's party finery and modestly shrugs off a compliment from her. This coming from a girl who ''argues'' with Peeta when he tells her she's beautiful and is the ''MostTriumphantExample'' of ObliviousToLove.

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* HypocriticalHumor: In chapter 11, Katniss wonders how Peeta "can be so painfully oblivious" to how attractive he is when he's dressed up in his New Year's party finery and modestly shrugs off a compliment from her. This coming from a girl who ''argues'' with Peeta when he tells her she's beautiful and is the ''MostTriumphantExample'' ''SugarWiki/MostTriumphantExample'' of ObliviousToLove.



** MostTriumphantExample: in chapter 11, Katniss realizes that Peeta's District Token is a piece of cloth that would have been given to him by a Seam girl (the handkerchief she gave him before he left for the Games). Her first thought is to be angry, because she believes Peeta is just using her as a test run how to best woo that girl. And once she gets over that first thought, even though she's made the cognitive leap to the "impossible" idea that Peeta loves a Seam girl, she still, ''still,''' STILL''''' doesn't make the connection that ''it's her!''

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** MostTriumphantExample: SugarWiki/MostTriumphantExample: in chapter 11, Katniss realizes that Peeta's District Token is a piece of cloth that would have been given to him by a Seam girl (the handkerchief she gave him before he left for the Games). Her first thought is to be angry, because she believes Peeta is just using her as a test run how to best woo that girl. And once she gets over that first thought, even though she's made the cognitive leap to the "impossible" idea that Peeta loves a Seam girl, she still, ''still,''' STILL''''' doesn't make the connection that ''it's her!''
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*** He eventually (and indirectly) reveals another, more sensible reason for why he does not say it: should Snow ever learn about his feelings for Katniss, then she is likely to be in danger if Snow uses her to control him.
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* CompletelyMissingThePoint: The number and size of mental gymnastics Katniss does to miss the point of every arrow that points to her as the girl Peeta loves is staggering.


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* RuleOfSymbolism: Peeta compares his "sweetheart" with a bird, to feed and give a home to, hoping that she will accept to stay with him forever. [[ObliviousToLove Of course, Katniss completely misses the point.]]
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** Presumably, knowing that Katniss is a major DebtDetester, he wants to win Katniss' love ''without'' letting her know his feelings for her, aware that if she knew she'd feel ''obligated'' to return them to repay him. While the plan is good in theory, his execution is awful (he's WAY too obvious, any normal girl would realise his feelings in a heartbeat) but he gets away with it because Katniss is [[ObliviousToLove so oblivious that it's laughable]].

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** Presumably, Peeta all but explains it to her: knowing that Katniss is a major DebtDetester, he wants to win Katniss' love ''without'' letting her know his feelings for her, aware that if she knew she'd feel ''obligated'' to return them to repay him. While the plan is good in theory, his execution is awful (he's WAY too obvious, any normal girl would realise his feelings in a heartbeat) but he gets away with it because Katniss is [[ObliviousToLove so oblivious that it's laughable]].



** MostTriumphantExample: in chapter 11, Katniss realizes that Peeta's District Token is a piece of cloth that would have been given to him by a Seam girl. Her first thought is to be angry, because she believes Peeta is using her as the means to ascertain how to best woo that girl. And once she gets over that first thought, even though she's made the cognitive leap to the "impossible" idea that Peeta loves a Seam girl, she still, ''still,''' STILL''''' doesn't make the connection that ''it's her!''

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** MostTriumphantExample: in chapter 11, Katniss realizes that Peeta's District Token is a piece of cloth that would have been given to him by a Seam girl. girl (the handkerchief she gave him before he left for the Games). Her first thought is to be angry, because she believes Peeta is just using her as the means to ascertain a test run how to best woo that girl. And once she gets over that first thought, even though she's made the cognitive leap to the "impossible" idea that Peeta loves a Seam girl, she still, ''still,''' STILL''''' doesn't make the connection that ''it's her!''

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