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* TheStationsOfTheCannon: The events from episode 9 of the anime are revisited sometimes, showing off the inner thoughts of Kouta and Lucy during some points of the episode.
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* TheStationsOfTheCannon: TheStationsOfTheCanon: The events from episode 9 of the anime are revisited sometimes, showing off the inner thoughts of Kouta and Lucy during some points of the episode.
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* OCStandin: Bando is given backstory and explanations for why his is like he is. Additionally, Arakawa is further delved into.
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* SeriesFic: “[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7285350/1/I-am-what-I-am I am What I am]]” and “[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7290361/1/One-Bullet-Left One Bullet left]]” were written and come before this story. Bridging the gap between the anime and this fic.
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* TheStationsOfTheCannon: The events from episode 9 of the anime are revisited sometimes, showing off the inner thoughts of Kouta and Lucy during some points of the episode.
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* Hurt/ComfortFic: There is a lot of this going around with a number of characters.
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* Hurt/ComfortFic: HurtComfortFic: There is a lot of this going around with a number of characters.
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* Xenafication: Mayu in both interpretations of cannon is a rather peaceful and non-violent person. Though out of the coarse of the fic, she becomes more willing to take on the forces of the Institute with lethal force.
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* Xenafication: {{Xenafication}}: Mayu in both interpretations of cannon is a rather peaceful and non-violent person. Though out of the coarse of the fic, she becomes more willing to take on the forces of the Institute with lethal force.
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* AcceptableBreaksFromCannon: Diclonius age slower than in cannon. Additionally, the Diclonius problem is implied to have gone on longer than in the cannon material.
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* AcceptableBreaksFromCannon: AcceptableBreaksFromCanon: Diclonius age slower than in cannon. Additionally, the Diclonius problem is implied to have gone on longer than in the cannon material.
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* AcceptableBreaksFromCannon: Diclonius age slower than in cannon. Additionally, the Diclonius problem is implied to have gone on longer than in the cannon material.
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* Hurt/ComfortFic: There is a lot of this going around with a number of characters.
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* MostFanficWritersAreFans: Most of the stated geography of Kamakura is correct to the real location, minus a few mistakes where the author says the characters are going to Fujisawa Hospital when he means Kamakura hospital.
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* Xenafication: Mayu in both interpretations of cannon is a rather peaceful and non-violent person. Though out of the coarse of the fic, she becomes more willing to take on the forces of the Institute with lethal force.
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-->--'''Angel [[spoiler:as she’s chasing Ghost]]'''
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-->--'''Angel [[spoiler:as as she’s chasing Ghost]]'''
Ghost'''
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* HeroicResolve: [[spoiler:Lucy yearning for death after the events of chapter 32 is able to find the will to live after a stern talking to curtesy of Bando. From there on, she takes on an overwhelming force of SAT and a tank just to reunite with Kouta.]]
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* HeroicResolve: [[spoiler:Lucy Lucy yearning for death after the events of chapter 32 is able to find the will to live after a stern [[spoiler:stern talking to curtesy of Bando. Bando.]] From there on, she takes on an overwhelming force of SAT and a tank just to reunite with Kouta.]]
Kouta.
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* DyingMomentOfAwesome: Despite being fatally stabbed, [[spoiler:Bando is still able to throw Angel in position to be shot by Mayu and to then beat her and throw her out of a building.]]
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* HeroicResolve: [[spoiler:Lucy yearning for death after the events of chapter 32 is able to find the will to live after a stern talking to curtesy of Bando. From there on, she takes on an overwhelming force of SAT and a tank just to reunite with Kouta.]]
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* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: Lucy at many points attempts suicide believing Kouta would be better off without her in his life.
