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the shadow dragons were straight up evil outside of nuova
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* AdaptationExpansion:
** The Shadow Dragons get expanded upon a bit, with it being explained they're not ''created'' by the negative energy, but ''summoned'' by it and have existed for far longer. Nuova and Eis's fusion implies they've been around for so long that they remember the Metamorans and why they died. It's also explained that they're corrupted by the selfish wishes and their ''true'' purpose isn't to destroy the world, but to take the corrupted Dragon Balls to the Super Dragon Balls to be purified.
** Shin Shenron's motives are also expanded upon: he desires to use the Super Dragon Balls to make a wish in order to punish mortals and prevent this from happening again.
** The Shadow Dragons get expanded upon a bit, with it being explained they're not ''created'' by the negative energy, but ''summoned'' by it and have existed for far longer. Nuova and Eis's fusion implies they've been around for so long that they remember the Metamorans and why they died. It's also explained that they're corrupted by the selfish wishes and their ''true'' purpose isn't to destroy the world, but to take the corrupted Dragon Balls to the Super Dragon Balls to be purified.
** Shin Shenron's motives are also expanded upon: he desires to use the Super Dragon Balls to make a wish in order to punish mortals and prevent this from happening again.
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* AdaptationExpansion:
**AdaptationExpansion: The Shadow Dragons get expanded upon a bit, with it being explained they're not ''created'' by the negative energy, but ''summoned'' by it and have existed for far longer. Nuova and Eis's fusion implies they've been around for so long that they remember the Metamorans and why they died. It's also explained that they're corrupted by the selfish wishes and their ''true'' purpose isn't to destroy the world, but to take the corrupted Dragon Balls to the Super Dragon Balls to be purified.\n** Shin Shenron's motives are also expanded upon: he desires to use the Super Dragon Balls to make a wish in order to punish mortals and prevent this from happening again.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Pretty much the point of the fic, as it focuses on Raditz undergoing a HeelFaceTurn. The series is ''literally'' titled "What if Raditz Turned Good," so this was somewhat of a given.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: AdaptationalHeroism:
** Pretty much the point of the fic, as it focuses on Raditz undergoing a HeelFaceTurn. The series is ''literally'' titled "What if Raditz Turned Good," so this was somewhat of agiven.given.
** It's also explained that Shadow Dragons corrupted by the selfish wishes and their ''true'' purpose isn't to destroy the world, but to take the corrupted Dragon Balls to the Super Dragon Balls to be purified.
** Shin/Syn Shenron's motives are also expanded upon: he desires to use the Super Dragon Balls to make a wish in order to punish mortals and prevent this from happening again.
** Pretty much the point of the fic, as it focuses on Raditz undergoing a HeelFaceTurn. The series is ''literally'' titled "What if Raditz Turned Good," so this was somewhat of a
** It's also explained that Shadow Dragons corrupted by the selfish wishes and their ''true'' purpose isn't to destroy the world, but to take the corrupted Dragon Balls to the Super Dragon Balls to be purified.
** Shin/Syn Shenron's motives are also expanded upon: he desires to use the Super Dragon Balls to make a wish in order to punish mortals and prevent this from happening again.
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** In the finale [[spoilers: Super Shenron and later normal Shenron forgive the Z-Fighters for overusing the Dragon Balls and corrupting the Shadow Dragons with the former even helping the Z-Fighters to kill Black Smoke Shenron.]]
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** In the finale [[spoilers: [[spoiler: Super Shenron and later normal Shenron forgive the Z-Fighters for overusing the Dragon Balls and corrupting the Shadow Dragons with the former even helping the Z-Fighters to kill Black Smoke Shenron.]]
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** In the finale [[spoilers: Super Shenron and later normal Shenron forgive the Z-Fighters for overusing the Dragon Balls and corrupting the Shadow Dragons with the former even helping the Z-Fighters to kill Black Smoke Shenron.]]
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* AdaptationExpansion:
** The Shadow Dragons get expanded upon a bit, with it being explained they're not ''created'' by the negative energy, but ''summoned'' by it and have existed for far longer. Nuova and Eis's fusion implies they've been around for so long that they remember the Metamorans and why they died. It's also explained that they're corrupted by the selfish wishes and their ''true'' purpose isn't to destroy the world, but to take the corrupted Dragon Balls to the Super Dragon Balls to be purified.
** Shin Shenron's motives are also expanded upon: he desires to use the Super Dragon Balls to make a wish in order to punish mortals and prevent this from happening again.
** The Shadow Dragons get expanded upon a bit, with it being explained they're not ''created'' by the negative energy, but ''summoned'' by it and have existed for far longer. Nuova and Eis's fusion implies they've been around for so long that they remember the Metamorans and why they died. It's also explained that they're corrupted by the selfish wishes and their ''true'' purpose isn't to destroy the world, but to take the corrupted Dragon Balls to the Super Dragon Balls to be purified.
** Shin Shenron's motives are also expanded upon: he desires to use the Super Dragon Balls to make a wish in order to punish mortals and prevent this from happening again.
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* AdaptationalExpansion:
** The Shadow Dragons get expanded upon a bit, with it being explained they're not ''created'' by the negative energy, but ''summoned'' by it and have existed for far longer. Nuova and Eis's fusion implies they've been around for so long that they remember the Metamorans and why they died. It's also explained that they're corrupted by the selfish wishes and their ''true'' purpose isn't to destroy the world, but to take the corrupted Dragon Balls to the Super Dragon Balls to be purified.
** Shin Shenron's motives are also expanded upon: he desires to use the Super Dragon Balls to make a wish in order to punish mortals and prevent this from happening again.
** The Shadow Dragons get expanded upon a bit, with it being explained they're not ''created'' by the negative energy, but ''summoned'' by it and have existed for far longer. Nuova and Eis's fusion implies they've been around for so long that they remember the Metamorans and why they died. It's also explained that they're corrupted by the selfish wishes and their ''true'' purpose isn't to destroy the world, but to take the corrupted Dragon Balls to the Super Dragon Balls to be purified.
** Shin Shenron's motives are also expanded upon: he desires to use the Super Dragon Balls to make a wish in order to punish mortals and prevent this from happening again.
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* AmazonianBeauty: Future Ranch is described as being 6'/183cm and well-built, and certainly has Future Trunks' eye. Adult Ranch from GT also qualifies, since she's muscular, but still cute in [[https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/teamfourstar/images/9/9d/Adult_Ranch_fully_grown_all_grown_up_%28by_SirBaisa%29_Raditz_turned_Good_Dragon_Ball_R%26R_Z_Abridged_MasakoX_TFS_Team_Four_Star.jpeg/revision/latest?cb=20191015200829 official merchandise for her]].
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* AmazonianBeauty: Future Ranch is described as being 6'/183cm and well-built, and certainly has Future Trunks' eye. Adult Ranch from GT also qualifies, since she's muscular, but still cute in [[https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/teamfourstar/images/9/9d/Adult_Ranch_fully_grown_all_grown_up_%28by_SirBaisa%29_Raditz_turned_Good_Dragon_Ball_R%26R_Z_Abridged_MasakoX_TFS_Team_Four_Star.jpeg/revision/latest?cb=20191015200829 official merchandise for her]]. We also get to see adult Ranch in R&R episode 8.
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* StatuesqueStunner: Ranch takes after her father in height, so Future Ranch and adult Ranch are 6'/183cm tall(According to ''What if Future Ranch Went To the Past Episode 2'') or 6'1/185cm (according to R&R Episode 5 Debrief) and Future Trunks is very attracted to Future Ranch, who's [[TinyGuyHugeGirl a half-foot taller than his' 5'6"]].
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* StatuesqueStunner: Ranch takes after her father in height, so Future Ranch and adult Ranch are 6'/183cm tall(According to ''What if Future Ranch Went To the Past Episode 2'') or 6'1/185cm (according to R&R Episode 5 Debrief) Debrief and R&R Episode 8) and Future Trunks is very attracted to Future Ranch, who's [[TinyGuyHugeGirl a half-foot taller than his' 5'6"]].
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* CloserToEarth: Ranch is more level-headed than Trunks, usually balancing out his brattiness when the trio hangs out. This also means that Ranten is far more pragmatic than Gotenks, not wasting time by showing off and inherently realizing that using Super Saiyan 3 would be a bad idea.
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''What If Raditz Turned Good?'' is a ''Franchise/DragonBall'' WhatIf fanfic by Lawrence Simpson aka Creator/MasakoX of ''Creator/TeamFourStar'' fame as part of his Dragon Ball Discussion series of Youtube videos. This particular topic started on April 17th, 2017.
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''What If Raditz Turned Good?'' is a ''Franchise/DragonBall'' WhatIf fanfic by Lawrence Simpson aka Creator/MasakoX of ''Creator/TeamFourStar'' fame as part of his Dragon Ball Discussion series of Youtube videos. This particular topic started on April 17th, 2017.
2017, as the sixth entry in the series.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Vegeta in this version. His rivalry with Raditz brings out the worst in him and, due to a few changed events, he doesn't learn humility. Even when Bra is on the way to be born, he hardly seems to care.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Vegeta in this version. His rivalry with Raditz brings out the worst in him and, due to a few changed events, he doesn't learn humility. Even when Bra is on the way to be born, he hardly seems to care. He eventually mellows out once he and Raditz finally settle their rivalry.
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* ActionGirl: Ranch, as the daughter of Raditz and Launch, is quite the badass, learning all the Super Saiyan forms, up to Super Saiyan 4. Surprisingly, she doesn't get a Blue form, like her father.
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* ActionGirl: ActionGirl:
** Ranch, as the daughter of Raditz and Launch, is quite the badass, learning all the Super Saiyan forms, up to Super Saiyan 4. Surprisingly, she doesn't get a Blue form, like herfather.father.
** Caulifla and Kale as well, being friendly rivals to Ranch.
** ''R&R'' episode 6, after a device that incapacitates all of the stronger fighters and makes them unable to do ki attacks is activated, Mercenary Tao and the Pilaf gang smugly take credit for it, but [[MamaBear Chi-Chi, Launch and Bulma]] are unaffected by it, and Chi-Chi and Launch hold off Tao, while Bulma builds a nullifier of the nullifier.
** Ranch, as the daughter of Raditz and Launch, is quite the badass, learning all the Super Saiyan forms, up to Super Saiyan 4. Surprisingly, she doesn't get a Blue form, like her
** Caulifla and Kale as well, being friendly rivals to Ranch.
** ''R&R'' episode 6, after a device that incapacitates all of the stronger fighters and makes them unable to do ki attacks is activated, Mercenary Tao and the Pilaf gang smugly take credit for it, but [[MamaBear Chi-Chi, Launch and Bulma]] are unaffected by it, and Chi-Chi and Launch hold off Tao, while Bulma builds a nullifier of the nullifier.
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* GroinAttack: Launch gives one to Tao twice in ''R&R'' episode 7.
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* WouldNotHurtAChild: In ''R&R'' episode 6.5, Tao goes easy on Kid Shuu, Mai and Pilaf, saying that he doesn't care for hurting children.
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** Freeza in this version. After ''Resurrection F'', he stays dead due to everyone shooting down Goku's suggestion to bring him in for the Tournament of Power and Ranch ultimately taking his place.
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** Freeza in this version. After ''Resurrection F'', he stays dead due to everyone shooting down Goku's suggestion to bring him in for the Tournament of Power and Power. Frieza isn't needed as Raditz takes Frieza's place in canon while Ranch ultimately taking his takes Tien's place.
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: [[spoiler:Balsa and Gretta, the children of Future Trunks and Future Ranch, are murdered by Goku Black. This serves as the trigger for Future Ranch unlocking Super Saiyan Rage.]]
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* ADayInTheLimelight: Most of the R&R episodes focus on the main Z team. 6.5 focuses on Mercenary Tao, the Pilaf gang and [[spoiler: Android 21]].
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* AndNowForSomethingCompletelyDifferent: Most of the R&R episodes focus on the main Z team. 6.5 focuses on Mercenary Tao, the Pilaf gang and [[spoiler: Android 21]].
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* StuffedIntoTheFridge: [[spoiler:Just like he did with Future Chi-Chi and Goten, Goku Black murders Future Trunks and Ranch's children Balsa and Gretta to provoke the pair. [[MamaBear And oh BOY does it work...]].]]
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* ButtMonkey: [[spoiler: Future Ranch and Raditz beat the shit out of Goku Black [[LaserGuidedKarma 3 separate times]] for [[WouldHurtAChild killing Future Ranch and Future Trunks' children.]]]]
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** After killing Future Zamasu, Future Ranch then [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown methodically beats the crap out of]] a still injured Goku Black before she, Raditz and Future Trunks vaporize him.
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** After killing Future Zamasu, Future Ranch then once again [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown methodically beats the crap out of]] a still injured [[ButtMonkey Goku Black Black]] before she, Raditz and Future Trunks vaporize him.
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* HeelFaceTurn: The defining point that starts Raditz's turn to good is during the moment where Goku puts him in a full nelson to ensure that Piccolo's Special Beam Cannon finds its mark. Similar to what happens in the first [[VideoGame/DragonBallXenoverse Xenoverse game]], he manages break free just before the beam reaches him. However, unlike the game, he's still injured from the hit Gohan gave him and decides to run for it rather than continue to fight.
** In Part 4 of the Future Ranch stories, we find out that Goku argued in Raditz's favor, convincing King Yemma to overlook his villainous past thanks to the efforts he made post-face turn. Unfortunately, Yemma's charity only went so far and he refused to likewise grant clemency to Launch, meaning her spirit was purified and sent to Hell for reincarnation.
** In Part 4 of the Future Ranch stories, we find out that Goku argued in Raditz's favor, convincing King Yemma to overlook his villainous past thanks to the efforts he made post-face turn. Unfortunately, Yemma's charity only went so far and he refused to likewise grant clemency to Launch, meaning her spirit was purified and sent to Hell for reincarnation.
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* RealityEnsues: The defining point that starts Raditz's HeelFaceTurn is during the moment where Goku puts him in a full nelson to ensure that Piccolo's Special Beam Cannon finds its mark. Similar to what happens in the first [[VideoGame/DragonBallXenoverse Xenoverse game]], he manages break free just before the beam reaches him. However, unlike the game, he's still injured from the hit Gohan gave him and decides to run for it rather than continue to fight.
** In Part 4 of the Future Ranch stories, we find out that Goku argued in Raditz's favor, convincing King Yemma to overlook his villainous past thanks to the efforts he made post-face turn. Unfortunately, Yemma's charity only went so far and he refused to likewise grant clemency to Launch, meaning her spirit was purified and sent to Hell for reincarnation.
** In Part 4 of the Future Ranch stories, we find out that Goku argued in Raditz's favor, convincing King Yemma to overlook his villainous past thanks to the efforts he made post-face turn. Unfortunately, Yemma's charity only went so far and he refused to likewise grant clemency to Launch, meaning her spirit was purified and sent to Hell for reincarnation.
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You can find the playlist for it [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bmr4J92f5q0&list=PLNSgpJTAeqwl1ILSHjUC84Hh1obBMtYxM here]].
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You can find the playlist for it [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bmr4J92f5q0&list=PLNSgpJTAeqwl1ILSHjUC84Hh1obBMtYxM here]], with the playlist for ''R&R'' being [[https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLNSgpJTAeqwllrTD7pc--gtRKrj0XD45L here]].
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* IHaveNoSon: Inverted in the revised Future Trunks timeline, where Gohan ends up cutting ties with Chi-Chi when she protests the idea of him training Trunks and Ranch (then about 8 years old) as fighters; since this is the timeline with the evil versions of Androids 17 and 18 rampaging and most of the Z Warriors dead, holding back potential fighters is downright suicidal.
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* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Raditz’s reaction to Vegeta allowing Semi-Perfect Cell to absorb Android 18 for prideful reasons. He later invokes this again when Goku proposes recruiting [[EvilOverlord Frieza]] to fight for Universe 7 in the Tournament of Power, even punching Goku in the head just for ''thinking'' that it was a good idea.
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* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Raditz’s reaction to Vegeta allowing Semi-Perfect Cell to absorb Android 18 for prideful reasons. He later invokes this again when Goku proposes recruiting [[EvilOverlord Frieza]] to fight for Universe 7 in the Tournament of Power, even punching Goku in the head just for ''thinking'' that it was a good idea.idea.
* YoureNotMyMother: In the revised Future Trunks timeline, Gohan ends up cutting ties with Chi-Chi when she protests the idea of him training Trunks and Ranch (then about 8 years old) as fighters; since this is the timeline with the evil versions of Androids 17 and 18 rampaging and most of the Z Warriors dead, holding back potential fighters is downright suicidal.
* YoureNotMyMother: In the revised Future Trunks timeline, Gohan ends up cutting ties with Chi-Chi when she protests the idea of him training Trunks and Ranch (then about 8 years old) as fighters; since this is the timeline with the evil versions of Androids 17 and 18 rampaging and most of the Z Warriors dead, holding back potential fighters is downright suicidal.
