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* ActionPrologue: The story begins with Rainbow Dash frantically rushing Gabriel to the hospital after she finds him near-dead in a field, before it settles down for the more SliceOfLife bulk of it.
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Rainbow Dash, flying at the edge of Ponyville, finds a seriously injured, unconscious colt, and rushes him to the hospital. The colt, Gabriel, survives, but nobody knows where he’s from or who his parents are. The story follows Rainbow and other ponies Gabriel meets, as the colt adjusts to life in Ponyville, and everyone else wonders what kind of past could produce such a strange foal.
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Rainbow Dash, flying at the edge of Ponyville, finds a seriously injured, unconscious colt, and rushes him to the hospital. The colt, Gabriel, survives, but nobody knows where he’s he's from or who his parents are. The story follows Rainbow and other ponies Gabriel meets, as the colt adjusts to life in Ponyville, and everyone else wonders what kind of past could produce such a strange foal.
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* FakeoutEscape: [[ImpliedTrope Implied]] to be how [[spoiler: Gabriel escaped from Twilight and Looking Glass’s attempt to bring him to the princesses.]]
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* FakeoutEscape: [[ImpliedTrope Implied]] to be how [[spoiler: Gabriel escaped from Twilight and Looking Glass’s Glass's attempt to bring him to the princesses.]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: In the end, Gabriel decides on his own to return his piece of Luna’s soul, sacrificing himself to save her.]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: In the end, Gabriel decides on his own to return his piece of Luna’s Luna's soul, sacrificing himself to save her.]]
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* IMeantToDoThat: After her conversation with Gabriel in “Truth”, Rainbow says this when she stumbles and lands in a heap.
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* IMeantToDoThat: After her conversation with Gabriel in “Truth”, "Truth", Rainbow says this when she stumbles and lands in a heap.
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-->'''Pinkie Pie:''' I ''knew'' that somepony new was in town because my back left hoof was itchy-twitchy and I knew it was a ''foal'' because it was just itchy-twitchy and not itchy-witchy like the way it is with grown-ups and I just knew that I had to give you the warmest, huggiest, most ''superlicious'' Pinkie Pie welcome ever so I made a big batch of ''super-yummy'' cupcakes but then my tail got wiggly and I knew somepony in the hospital would need more than just a normal cupcake so I made a brand-new batch of ''extra'' super-yummy cupcakes to make somepony who was having an terrible horrible no-good very bad day into somepony who was having an extra special new friend day so then I brought one up to the hospital but the ''SUPER'' nice mare at the front said that I had to wait for the doctor to come back but I just ''couldn't'' stand by while a foal was so horribly cupcake-less so I got super sneakey and sneaked so fast that the mare couldn't stop me from getting all the way to your room and then I saw that Dashie was already here and I was like ''[='whaaaaaat'=]'' but that's okay because now it’s a ''party'' and at a party you're ''always'' supposed to introduce yourself to people you don't know even if they have super-duper weird and scary eyes so hi my name's Pinkie Pie what's yours?
* NonIndicativeName: Rainbow notices the irony of Gabriel’s northern hometown being named ''West''field.
* NonPOVProtagonist: The story never takes Gabriel’s PointOfView, despite his prominent role.
* NotHisBlood: When Thunderlane asks Rainbow how bad Gabriel’s injuries are, she says the blood on her isn’t from herself. (It’s Gabriel’s.)
* ProfanityPolice: Sandy admonishes Gabriel when he says “shit, why not?” She has a bit of a grin, though.
* PronouncingMyNameForYou: Gabriel explains his name’s pronounciation to Fluttershy when she gets it wrong.
-->'''Gabriel:''' Most of you say 'Gab Real,' but it's all one word. Gab-ree-ul.
* NonIndicativeName: Rainbow notices the irony of Gabriel’s northern hometown being named ''West''field.
* NonPOVProtagonist: The story never takes Gabriel’s PointOfView, despite his prominent role.
* NotHisBlood: When Thunderlane asks Rainbow how bad Gabriel’s injuries are, she says the blood on her isn’t from herself. (It’s Gabriel’s.)
* ProfanityPolice: Sandy admonishes Gabriel when he says “shit, why not?” She has a bit of a grin, though.
* PronouncingMyNameForYou: Gabriel explains his name’s pronounciation to Fluttershy when she gets it wrong.
-->'''Gabriel:''' Most of you say 'Gab Real,' but it's all one word. Gab-ree-ul.
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-->'''Pinkie Pie:''' I ''knew'' that somepony new was in town because my back left hoof was itchy-twitchy and I knew it was a ''foal'' because it was just itchy-twitchy and not itchy-witchy like the way it is with grown-ups and I just knew that I had to give you the warmest, huggiest, most ''superlicious'' Pinkie Pie welcome ever so I made a big batch of ''super-yummy'' cupcakes but then my tail got wiggly and I knew somepony in the hospital would need more than just a normal cupcake so I made a brand-new batch of ''extra'' super-yummy cupcakes to make somepony who was having an terrible horrible no-good very bad day into somepony who was having an extra special new friend day so then I brought one up to the hospital but the ''SUPER'' nice mare at the front said that I had to wait for the doctor to come back but I just ''couldn't'' stand by while a foal was so horribly cupcake-less so I got super sneakey and sneaked so fast that the mare couldn't stop me from getting all the way to your room and then I saw that Dashie was already here and I was like ''[='whaaaaaat'=]'' ''"whaaaaaat"'' but that's okay because now it’s it's a ''party'' and at a party you're ''always'' supposed to introduce yourself to people you don't know even if they have super-duper weird and scary eyes so hi my name's Pinkie Pie what's yours?
* NonIndicativeName: Rainbow notices the irony ofGabriel’s Gabriel's northern hometown being named ''West''field.
* NonPOVProtagonist: The story never takesGabriel’s Gabriel's PointOfView, despite his prominent role.
* NotHisBlood: When Thunderlane asks Rainbow how badGabriel’s Gabriel's injuries are, she says the blood on her isn’t isn't from herself. (It’s Gabriel’s.(It's Gabriel's.)
* ProfanityPolice: Sandy admonishes Gabriel when he says“shit, "shit, why not?” not?" She has a bit of a grin, though.
* PronouncingMyNameForYou: Gabriel explains hisname’s name's pronounciation to Fluttershy when she gets it wrong.
-->'''Gabriel:''' Most of you say'Gab Real,' "Gab Real," but it's all one word. Gab-ree-ul.
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* NonPOVProtagonist: The story never takes
* NotHisBlood: When Thunderlane asks Rainbow how bad
* ProfanityPolice: Sandy admonishes Gabriel when he says
* PronouncingMyNameForYou: Gabriel explains his
-->'''Gabriel:''' Most of you say
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* SwitchingPOV: Rainbow Dash is the main PointOfView, but there are many sections told from other characters’ perspectives.
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* WhoNamesTheirKidDude: When she learns Gabriel’s name, Rainbow finds it rather strange.
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* WhoNamesTheirKidDude: When she learns Gabriel’s Gabriel's name, Rainbow finds it rather strange.
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* AccidentalMisnaming: Almost nobody pronounces “Gabriel” right the first time.
* AerithAndBob: The name “Gabriel” doesn’t fit the naming scheme of most ponies.
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* AccidentalMisnaming: Almost nobody pronounces “Gabriel” "Gabriel" right the first time.
* AerithAndBob: The name“Gabriel” doesn’t "Gabriel" doesn't fit the naming scheme of most ponies.
* AerithAndBob: The name
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->''"...the grass is literally greener here. It's greener, it's softer, it smells nicer, it's just... better in every way. This place is amazing. I'm real glad I ended up here. It's so different, but it's good. Peaceful."''
-->-- '''Gabriel'''
-->-- '''Gabriel'''
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* FakeoutEscape: Implied to be how [[spoiler: Gabriel escaped from Twilight and Looking Glass’s attempt to bring him to the princesses.]]
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* FakeoutEscape: Implied [[ImpliedTrope Implied]] to be how [[spoiler: Gabriel escaped from Twilight and Looking Glass’s attempt to bring him to the princesses.]]
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* ArborealAbode: Like in ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Friendship Is Magic]]'', Twilight lives in a library made out of a hollowed-out tree. Gabriel asks her how it stays alive: the walls are too thin to transport the nutrients and water the tree needs, so spells are used to keep it healthy.
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-->'''Gabriel:''' Yeah, I could tell you rehearsed.
-->'''Rainbow Dash:''' ''[smirks]'' Whatever.
-->'''Rainbow Dash:''' ''[smirks]'' Whatever.
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-->'''Gabriel:''' Yeah, I could tell you rehearsed.
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'''Rainbow Dash:''' ''[smirks]'' Whatever.
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'''Rainbow Dash:''' ''[smirks]'' Whatever.
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* NonPOVProtagonist: The story never takes Gabriel’s PointOfView, despite his prominent role.
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* SwitchingPOV: The most common points of view are Rainbow Dash and Sandy Hills, but several other characters get their turns too. Interestingly, the story never takes Gabriel’s perspective.
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* SwitchingPOV: The most common points of view are Rainbow Dash and Sandy Hills, is the main PointOfView, but several there are many sections told from other characters get their turns too. Interestingly, the story never takes Gabriel’s perspective.characters’ perspectives.
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* InstantlyProvenWrong: In the eleventh chapter, Thunderlane reassures Rainbow that Gabriel will be alright. This is directly followed by Cloudchaser frantically bursting in to tell Rainbow he isn’t.
-->Rainbow whipped her head around to look at Thunderlane. "Or, uh, maybe he's not alright?" He offered up the most pathetic, awkward grin she had seen on a stallion in a long time, which was ''really'' saying something. "Oops?"
-->Rainbow whipped her head around to look at Thunderlane. "Or, uh, maybe he's not alright?" He offered up the most pathetic, awkward grin she had seen on a stallion in a long time, which was ''really'' saying something. "Oops?"
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* IMeantToDoThat: After her conversation with Gabriel in “Truth”, Rainbow says this when she stumbles and lands in a heap.
-->'''Gabriel:''' Yeah, I could tell you rehearsed.
-->'''Rainbow Dash:''' ''[smirks]'' Whatever.
-->'''Gabriel:''' Yeah, I could tell you rehearsed.
-->'''Rainbow Dash:''' ''[smirks]'' Whatever.
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* NonIndicativeName: Rainbow notices the irony of Gabriel’s northern hometown being named ''West''field.
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* WhoNamesTheirKidDude: When she learns Gabriel’s name, Rainbow finds it rather strange.
-->The name felt so strange coming out of her mouth. What did it mean? ''What kinda mean-spirited parent would give their kid a name like that? It's practically asking to be bullied.''
-->The name felt so strange coming out of her mouth. What did it mean? ''What kinda mean-spirited parent would give their kid a name like that? It's practically asking to be bullied.''
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''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/478316/what-a-strange-little-colt What a Strange Little Colt]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction by Lynwood.
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''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/478316/what-a-strange-little-colt What a Strange Little Colt]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction by Lynwood.
Lynwood. It has a complete [[https://fimtale.com/t/23303 Chinese translation]] by forgivenlove.
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* VaguenessIsComing: Chapter 2 has a [[TheStinger stinger]] where Princess Luna only says she “brings terrible news” before the scene ends.
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* VaguenessIsComing: Chapter 2 has a [[TheStinger stinger]] where Princess Luna only says she “brings terrible news” before the scene chapter ends.
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* FakeoutEscape: Implied to be how [[spoiler: Gabriel escaped from Twilight and Looking Glass’s attempt to bring him to the princesses.]]
-->'''[[spoiler: Gabriel]]:''' Would you believe that when someone who thinks they locked you in a room sees a broken window, they think you climbed out of it?
* FosterKid: In the third chapter, Rainbow Dash decides to start fostering Gabriel.
-->'''[[spoiler: Gabriel]]:''' Would you believe that when someone who thinks they locked you in a room sees a broken window, they think you climbed out of it?
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* HoldYourHippogriffs: As usual for ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic My Little Pony]]''. There are also a few times where characters notice Gabriel ''not'' using the pony-themed terminology.
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* ProfanityPolice: Sandy admonishes Gabriel when he says “shit, why not?” She has a bit of a grin, though.
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* MotorMouth: Pinkie Pie, unsurprisingly, explaining how she figured there was a new foal and came to deliver a cupcake.
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* MotorMouth: Pinkie Pie, unsurprisingly, explaining when she explains how she figured there was a new foal and came to deliver a cupcake.
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* PronouncingMyNameForYou: Gabriel explains his name’s pronounciation to Fluttershy when she gets it wrong:
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''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/478316/what-a-strange-little-colt What a Strange Little Colt]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfiction by Lynwood.
Rainbow Dash, flying at the edge of Ponyville, finds a seriously injured, unconscious colt, and rushes him to the hospital. The colt, Gabriel, survives, but nobody knows where he’s from or who his parents are. The story follows Rainbow and other ponies Gabriel meets, as the colt adjusts to life in Ponyville, and everyone else wonders what kind of past could produce such a strange foal.
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!! ''What a Strange Little Colt'' contains examples of:
* AccidentalMisnaming: Almost nobody pronounces “Gabriel” right the first time.
* AerithAndBob: The name “Gabriel” doesn’t fit the naming scheme of most ponies.
* ArmorPiercingQuestion: [[spoiler: When Sandy Hills asks Twilight whether she would as eager to sacrifice Spike if it was his life on the line, Twilight is stunned into silence. Reflecting on it later, she finds herself still not quite able to come up with an answer.]]
* BloodyHorror: Rainbow finds Gabriel drenched in his own blood. A lot of it gets on her as she takes him to the hospital.
* GaspOfLife: [[spoiler: Gabriel upon being revived, after he sacrifices himself.]]
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: In the end, Gabriel decides on his own to return his piece of Luna’s soul, sacrificing himself to save her.]]
* MotorMouth: Pinkie Pie, unsurprisingly, explaining how she figured there was a new foal and came to deliver a cupcake.
-->'''Pinkie:''' I ''knew'' that somepony new was in town because my back left hoof was itchy-twitchy and I knew it was a ''foal'' because it was just itchy-twitchy and not itchy-witchy like the way it is with grown-ups and I just knew that I had to give you the warmest, huggiest, most ''superlicious'' Pinkie Pie welcome ever so I made a big batch of ''super-yummy'' cupcakes but then my tail got wiggly and I knew somepony in the hospital would need more than just a normal cupcake so I made a brand-new batch of ''extra'' super-yummy cupcakes to make somepony who was having an terrible horrible no-good very bad day into somepony who was having an extra special new friend day so then I brought one up to the hospital but the ''SUPER'' nice mare at the front said that I had to wait for the doctor to come back but I just ''couldn't'' stand by while a foal was so horribly cupcake-less so I got super sneakey and sneaked so fast that the mare couldn't stop me from getting all the way to your room and then I saw that Dashie was already here and I was like ''[='whaaaaaat'=]'' but that's okay because now it’s a ''party'' and at a party you're ''always'' supposed to introduce yourself to people you don't know even if they have super-duper weird and scary eyes so hi my name's Pinkie Pie what's yours?
* NotHisBlood: When Thunderlane asks Rainbow how bad Gabriel’s injuries are, she says the blood on her isn’t from herself. (It’s Gabriel’s.)
* PronouncingMyNameForYou: Gabriel explains his name’s pronounciation to Fluttershy when she gets it wrong:
-->'''Gabriel:''' Most of you say 'Gab Real,' but it's all one word. Gab-ree-ul.
* TheShrink: Sandy Hills, a foal counselor assigned to Gabriel.
* TitleDrop: [[spoiler: Princess Celestia]] murmurs “What a strange little colt...” upon first meeting Gabriel.
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Rainbow Dash, flying at the edge of Ponyville, finds a seriously injured, unconscious colt, and rushes him to the hospital. The colt, Gabriel, survives, but nobody knows where he’s from or who his parents are. The story follows Rainbow and other ponies Gabriel meets, as the colt adjusts to life in Ponyville, and everyone else wonders what kind of past could produce such a strange foal.
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!! ''What a Strange Little Colt'' contains examples of:
* AccidentalMisnaming: Almost nobody pronounces “Gabriel” right the first time.
* AerithAndBob: The name “Gabriel” doesn’t fit the naming scheme of most ponies.
* ArmorPiercingQuestion: [[spoiler: When Sandy Hills asks Twilight whether she would as eager to sacrifice Spike if it was his life on the line, Twilight is stunned into silence. Reflecting on it later, she finds herself still not quite able to come up with an answer.]]
* BloodyHorror: Rainbow finds Gabriel drenched in his own blood. A lot of it gets on her as she takes him to the hospital.
* GaspOfLife: [[spoiler: Gabriel upon being revived, after he sacrifices himself.]]
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: In the end, Gabriel decides on his own to return his piece of Luna’s soul, sacrificing himself to save her.]]
* MotorMouth: Pinkie Pie, unsurprisingly, explaining how she figured there was a new foal and came to deliver a cupcake.
-->'''Pinkie:''' I ''knew'' that somepony new was in town because my back left hoof was itchy-twitchy and I knew it was a ''foal'' because it was just itchy-twitchy and not itchy-witchy like the way it is with grown-ups and I just knew that I had to give you the warmest, huggiest, most ''superlicious'' Pinkie Pie welcome ever so I made a big batch of ''super-yummy'' cupcakes but then my tail got wiggly and I knew somepony in the hospital would need more than just a normal cupcake so I made a brand-new batch of ''extra'' super-yummy cupcakes to make somepony who was having an terrible horrible no-good very bad day into somepony who was having an extra special new friend day so then I brought one up to the hospital but the ''SUPER'' nice mare at the front said that I had to wait for the doctor to come back but I just ''couldn't'' stand by while a foal was so horribly cupcake-less so I got super sneakey and sneaked so fast that the mare couldn't stop me from getting all the way to your room and then I saw that Dashie was already here and I was like ''[='whaaaaaat'=]'' but that's okay because now it’s a ''party'' and at a party you're ''always'' supposed to introduce yourself to people you don't know even if they have super-duper weird and scary eyes so hi my name's Pinkie Pie what's yours?
* NotHisBlood: When Thunderlane asks Rainbow how bad Gabriel’s injuries are, she says the blood on her isn’t from herself. (It’s Gabriel’s.)
* PronouncingMyNameForYou: Gabriel explains his name’s pronounciation to Fluttershy when she gets it wrong:
-->'''Gabriel:''' Most of you say 'Gab Real,' but it's all one word. Gab-ree-ul.
* TheShrink: Sandy Hills, a foal counselor assigned to Gabriel.
* TitleDrop: [[spoiler: Princess Celestia]] murmurs “What a strange little colt...” upon first meeting Gabriel.
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