Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1,2 (click to see context) from:
[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13236978/1/Weird-Dad Weird Dad]] is an AlternateUniverseFic made by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/80745/RockSunner RockSunner]], for ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug''. Part of the [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/994671 Smart Adversaries AU]] for ''Miraculous Ladybug'' on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3]], in which Ladybug villains make smarter decisions. The series has a [[Fanfic/SmartAdversariesAU tropes page here]].
to:
[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13236978/1/Weird-Dad Weird Dad]] is an AlternateUniverseFic made by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/80745/RockSunner RockSunner]], Creator/{{RockSunner}}, for ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug''. Part of the [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/994671 Smart Adversaries AU]] for ''Miraculous Ladybug'' on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3]], in which Ladybug villains make smarter decisions. The series has a [[Fanfic/SmartAdversariesAU tropes page here]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* FormulaBreakingEpisode: Most ''Smart Adversaries'' fics have the nail be an action the villain takes. This one has the nail be [[spoiler:August crying for his pacifier]] before Weredad even shows up.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Deleted line(s) 19 (click to see context) :
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Just because Marinette wants to conceal the pacifier she took, and drops it behind her, does not make it vanish from existence, or from a baby's wants.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* AngerBornOfWorry: [[spoiler: Chat Noir is angry that Marinette lied about being in love with him. Tom Dupain's fear that Marinette is involved with someone who could be dangerous to her is what causes him to be akumatized into Weredad.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
TRS cleanup
Deleted line(s) 6 (click to see context) :
* AdultFear: [[spoiler: Chat Noir is angry that Marinette lied about being in love with him. Tom Dupain's fear that Marinette is involved with someone who could be dangerous to her is what causes him to be akumatized into Weredad.]]
Deleted line(s) 19 (click to see context) :
* SomethingCompletelyDifferent: Most ''Smart Adversaries'' fics have the nail be an action the villain takes. This one has the nail be [[spoiler:August crying for his pacifier]] before Weredad even shows up.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Just because Marinette wants to conceal the pacifier she took, and drops it behind her, does not make it vanish from existence, or from a baby's wants.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Dewicked trope
Deleted line(s) 16 (click to see context) :
* RealityEnsues: [[spoiler:Just because Marinette wants to conceal the pacifier she took and drops it behind her, does not make it vanish from existence, or from a baby's wants.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 18 (click to see context) from:
* ShoutOut: To the [[Series/TheIncredibleHulk 1970's TV version of "The Incredible Hulk"]]. Tom tells Adrien, "You wouldn't like me when I'm angry" as part of a IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer speech.
to:
* ShoutOut: To the [[Series/TheIncredibleHulk [[Series/TheIncredibleHulk1977 1970's TV version of "The Incredible Hulk"]]. Tom tells Adrien, "You wouldn't like me when I'm angry" as part of a IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer speech.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 9 (click to see context) from:
* EasilyForgiven: [[spoiler:Chat Noir forgives Marinette for her false love confession that broke his heart, after realizing that she has real love for him as Adrien.]]
to:
* EarnYourHappyEnding: Marinette comes dangerously close to [[spoiler:getting her room barricaded by her parents after making herself look untrustworthy and losing Chat Noir's friendship after giving him a false love confession, but she manages to salvage all relationships involved and walk off with the guy in the end]].
* EasilyForgiven: [[spoiler:Chat Noir forgives Marinette for her false love confession that broke his heart, after realizing that she has real love for him as Adrien. It's justified by the fact that he has been similarly forgiving towards Chloé and Lila in similar situations, a fact Marinette plays to.]]
* EasilyForgiven: [[spoiler:Chat Noir forgives Marinette for her false love confession that broke his heart, after realizing that she has real love for him as Adrien. It's justified by the fact that he has been similarly forgiving towards Chloé and Lila in similar situations, a fact Marinette plays to.]]
Changed line(s) 15 (click to see context) from:
* RealityEnsues: [[spoiler:Just because Marinette wants to conceal the pacifier she took, and she drops it behind her, does not make it vanish from existence, or from a baby's wants.]]
to:
* RealityEnsues: [[spoiler:Just because Marinette wants to conceal the pacifier she took, took and she drops it behind her, does not make it vanish from existence, or from a baby's wants.]]
* SomethingCompletelyDifferent: Most ''Smart Adversaries'' fics have the nail be an action the villain takes. This one has the nail be [[spoiler:August crying for his pacifier]] before Weredad even shows up.
Changed line(s) 21 (click to see context) from:
* TheUnmasking: [[spoiler: Ladybug's identity is revealed to Chat Noir when the pacifier she took away by accident is found on the roof of her house.]]
to:
* TheUnmasking: [[spoiler: Ladybug's identity is revealed to Chat Noir when the pacifier she took away by accident is found on the roof of her house. Char Noir later unmasks himself to Ladybug at the end of the fic.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 16 (click to see context) from:
* ShoutOut: To the [[Series/TheIncredibleHulk 1970's TV version of "The Incredible Hulk"]]. Tom tells Adrien, "You wouldn't like me when I'm angry."
to:
* SafetyWorst: [[spoiler:Marinette persuades her parents not to lock up her room because it would be dangerous in the event of a fire or an akuma attack.]]
* ShoutOut: To the [[Series/TheIncredibleHulk 1970's TV version of "The Incredible Hulk"]]. Tom tells Adrien, "You wouldn't like me when I'mangry."angry" as part of a IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer speech.
* ShoutOut: To the [[Series/TheIncredibleHulk 1970's TV version of "The Incredible Hulk"]]. Tom tells Adrien, "You wouldn't like me when I'm
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
add item
Added DiffLines:
* HeelRealization: [[spoiler:Marinette realizes how badly she has hurt Adrien by lying, when he compares her to Lila. She pleads for a second chance like the one Adrien gave to Lila.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 15 (click to see context) from:
* ShoutOut: To the 1970's TV version of "The Incredible Hulk." Tom tells Adrien, "You wouldn't like me when I'm angry."
to:
* ShoutOut: To the [[Series/TheIncredibleHulk 1970's TV version of "The Incredible Hulk." Hulk"]]. Tom tells Adrien, "You wouldn't like me when I'm angry."
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* EasilyForgiven: [[spoiler:Chat Noir forgives Marinette for her false love confession that broke his heart, after realizing that she has real love for him as Adrien.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 3 (click to see context) from:
This is a multi-chapter work and it is in progress.
to:
This is a multi-chapter four-chapter work and it is in progress.now complete.
Added DiffLines:
* {{Irony}}: [[spoiler:Marinette's parents accept Adrien as a new boyfriend for Marinette, since he is "much nicer" than Chat Noir and he comes from a "respectable family."]]
Added DiffLines:
* ShoutOut: To the 1970's TV version of "The Incredible Hulk." Tom tells Adrien, "You wouldn't like me when I'm angry."
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* TwoPersonLoveTriangle: [[spoiler:The two-person love square collapses into this when Chat Noir discovers Marinette's secret after she has given him a false love confession.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* SnowballLie: [[spoiler:Marinette's lie about being in love with Chat Noir spirals out of control.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 8 (click to see context) from:
* CantGetAwayWithNuthin: [[spoiler:Tom and Sabine are concerned when Marinette confesses she secretly met with Chat Noir on a few occasions. Out of worry that he will come back after being dumped, they want to restrict access to her room with alarms and window bars. Ironically, this would cramp her activities as Ladybug, which would worry them even more if they knew.]]
to:
* CantGetAwayWithNuthin: [[spoiler:Tom and Sabine are concerned when Marinette confesses she secretly met with Chat Noir once on a few occasions.nearby rooftop. Out of worry that he will come back after being dumped, they want to restrict access to her room with alarms and window bars. Ironically, this would cramp her activities as Ladybug, which would worry them even more if they knew.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* FelonyMisdemeanor: [[spoiler:Tom and Sabine declare that Marninette has broken their trust after her highly toned-down confessions about sneaking out. They don't realize she has done much more lying and sneaking than she admits to.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* CantGetAwayWithNuthin: [[spoiler:Tom and Sabine are concerned when Marinette confesses she secretly met with Chat Noir on a few occasions. Out of worry that he will come back after being dumped, they want to restrict access to her room with alarms and window bars. Ironically, this would cramp her activities as Ladybug, which would worry them even more if they knew.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* AdultFear: [[spoiler: Chat Noir is angry that Marinette lied about being in love with him. Tom Dupain's fear that Marinette is involved with someone who could be dangerous to her is what causes him to be akumatized into Weredad.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* SwappedRoles: [[spoiler: In the original, Chat Noir dumps Marinette and she pretends to be hurt. In this version, Marinette dumps Chat Noir and he is genuinely hurt.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* HonorBeforeReason: [[spoiler:Sabine persuades Chat Noir to do the right thing and help Marinette with Weredad, even though he's unhappy with her and inclined to let her solve the problem herself as Ladybug. His knowledge of her identity allows him to facilitate her escape.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* RealityEnsues: [[spoiler:Just because Marinette wants to conceal the pacifier she took, and she drops it behind her, does not make it vanish from existence, or from a baby's wants.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* PoorCommunicationKills: [[spoiler:Marinette's false love confession is happily accepted by Chat Noir because he thinks Ladybug is finally confessing to him, rather than the ruse it was to protect her identity. Her poor break-up excuses later in front of her parents only make him angry.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
new page
Added DiffLines:
[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13236978/1/Weird-Dad Weird Dad]] is an AlternateUniverseFic made by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/80745/RockSunner RockSunner]], for ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug''. Part of the [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/994671 Smart Adversaries AU]] for ''Miraculous Ladybug'' on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3]], in which Ladybug villains make smarter decisions. The series has a [[Fanfic/SmartAdversariesAU tropes page here]].
This is a multi-chapter work and it is in progress.
----
!!This fanfiction series contains examples of:
* AlternateUniverseFic: A WhatIf with the change that [[spoiler:baby August (the former Gigantitan) cries for his pacifier and Tom Dupain finds it on the roof, exposing Ladybug's identity to Chat Noir.]]
* TheUnmasking: [[spoiler: Ladybug's identity is revealed to Chat Noir when the pacifier she took away by accident is found on the roof of her house.]]
This is a multi-chapter work and it is in progress.
----
!!This fanfiction series contains examples of:
* AlternateUniverseFic: A WhatIf with the change that [[spoiler:baby August (the former Gigantitan) cries for his pacifier and Tom Dupain finds it on the roof, exposing Ladybug's identity to Chat Noir.]]
* TheUnmasking: [[spoiler: Ladybug's identity is revealed to Chat Noir when the pacifier she took away by accident is found on the roof of her house.]]
