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* WithholdingTheBigGood: Dumbledore is absent for pretty much the entire story save for a few scenes near the end. Initially, this is because he had just been ousted as headmaster of Hogwarts after taking the fall for the creation of Dumbledore's Army, and is now a fugitive hiding from the Ministry of Magic, so obviously he can't show up at Hogwarts to help out with the Freddy situation. After news of Freddy's gruesome murders at Hogwarts spreads, it's mentioned that Dumbledore has left Grimmauld Place and is searching the countryside for potential leads to solve the murders. [[spoiler:When Harry is finally able to meet up with Dumbledore in Chapter 10, the latter isn't able to stay around for long as he has to leave shortly afterwards to help the Unspeakables at the Department of Mysteries attempt a (likely futile) ritual to get rid of Freddy. This means he is absent for Harry's final battle with Freddy and only returns mere moments after Freddy is seemingly killed in the real world.]]

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* WithholdingTheBigGood: Dumbledore is absent for pretty much the entire story save for a few scenes near the end. Initially, this is because he had just been ousted as headmaster of Hogwarts after taking the fall for the creation of Dumbledore's Army, and is now a fugitive in hiding from the Ministry of Magic, so obviously he can't just show up at Hogwarts to help out with resolve the Freddy Krueger situation. After news spreads of Freddy's a string of gruesome murders at Hogwarts spreads, Hogwarts, it's mentioned that Dumbledore has left Grimmauld Place and (explaining why he isn't present when Harry is searching brought there after [[spoiler:Hogwarts is shut down]]) to try solving the countryside for potential leads to solve murders himself. [[spoiler:By the murders. [[spoiler:When time Harry is finally able to meet up with Dumbledore in Chapter 10, the latter isn't able to stay around for long as he has to leave shortly afterwards to help the Unspeakables at the Department of Mysteries attempt a (likely futile) ritual to get rid of Freddy. This means he is absent for Harry's the story's climatic final battle with Freddy and only returns mere moments after Freddy is Harry has seemingly killed Freddy in the real world.]]
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** After Umbridge nearly killed Harry through Veritaserum poisoning, Amelia took personal interest in the case and did everything in her power to ensure Umbridge would be detained and prosecuted for attempted murder.

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** After Umbridge nearly killed Harry through Veritaserum poisoning, poisoning during an illegal interrogation, Amelia took personal interest in the case and did everything in her power to ensure Umbridge would be arrested and detained and prosecuted for attempted murder.murder, while having the two Aurors who helped Umbridge suspended from duty pending investigation.

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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Amelia Bones, the head of the Department of Magical Law Enforcement, is presented as one to contrast Fudge and Umbridge. Unlike the other Ministry officials, she doesn't have it out for Harry nor does she think he has what it takes to engage in cold-blooded murder. She is also among those who accepted Harry and Dumbledore's claims that Voldemort has returned; when Fudge is still in denial despite the increasing evidence, Amelia leaks the details of Harry's Veritaserum interrogation (in which he confirmed Voldemort was back) to the press while simultaneously strong-arming Fudge into ceasing his smear campaign against Harry. When Harry finally decides to tell Amelia everything he knows about Freddy Krueger in Chapter 7, she not only listens to him, but actually takes his claims seriously (despite confessing that she finds the idea of a serial killer with dream powers [[ArbitrarySkepticism hard to believe]]) and does her best to convey his warnings to the public.

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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Amelia Bones, the head of the Department of Magical Law Enforcement, is presented as one to contrast Fudge and Umbridge.
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Unlike the other Ministry officials, she doesn't have it out for Harry from the get-go nor does she think he has what it takes to engage in cold-blooded murder. murder.
** After Umbridge nearly killed Harry through Veritaserum poisoning, Amelia took personal interest in the case and did everything in her power to ensure Umbridge would be detained and prosecuted for attempted murder.
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She is was also among those who accepted believed Harry and Dumbledore's claims that Voldemort has returned; when had returned. When Fudge is still in denial despite the increasing evidence, Amelia leaks the details of Harry's Veritaserum interrogation (in which he confirmed Voldemort was back) to the press while simultaneously strong-arming Fudge into ceasing his smear campaign against Harry. Harry.
** While listening to Harry's tirade about the relentless persecution he has experienced from the rest of the Ministry, Amelia makes a private note to herself to personally investigate Harry's claims when she hears him mention being tortured (referring to Umbridge's use of Blood Quills during their detentions together).
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When Harry finally decides to tell Amelia everything he knows about Freddy Krueger in Chapter 7, she not only listens to him, but actually takes his claims seriously (despite confessing that she finds the idea of a serial killer with dream powers [[ArbitrarySkepticism hard to believe]]) and does believe]]). We later find out that she did her best to convey his warnings about the "Dream Killer" to the public.
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* OutsideContextProblem: Freddy Krueger presents an unprecedented threat to the Potterverse wizards because he is a foreigner in more ways than one. He originates from the Muggle world, is an independent threat from outside Europe with zero ties to either Voldemort or Dumbledore, and possesses supernatural abilities that don't abide by the rules of the Potterverse's magic system. He is so disconnected from the wizarding world's history, factions, and conflicts that he hedonistically kills whoever he pleases regardless of his victims' importance in the setting. Unlike the majority of ''Harry Potter'' antagonists who commit evil deeds as a means to an end (ex. Fudge wants to maintain a peaceful status quo, Voldemort wants more power, the Death Eaters want to promote pureblood supremacy, Umbridge is a fanatical bureaucrat looking to advance her Ministry career, etc.), Freddy kills kids solely because [[{{Sadist}} he finds it pleasurable]] and [[ForTheEvulz there's no one who can stop him]].

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* OutsideContextProblem: Freddy Krueger presents an unprecedented threat to the Potterverse wizards because he is a foreigner in more ways than one. He originates from the Muggle world, is an independent threat from outside Europe with zero ties to either Voldemort or Dumbledore, and possesses supernatural abilities that don't abide by the rules of the Potterverse's magic system. He is so disconnected from the wizarding world's history, factions, and conflicts that he hedonistically kills whoever he pleases regardless of his victims' importance in the setting. Unlike the majority of ''Harry Potter'' antagonists who commit evil deeds as a means to an end (ex. Fudge wants to maintain a peaceful status quo, Voldemort wants seeks more power, the Death Eaters want to promote pureblood supremacy, Umbridge is a fanatical bureaucrat looking to advance her Ministry career, etc.), Freddy kills kids solely because [[{{Sadist}} he finds it pleasurable]] and [[ForTheEvulz there's no one who can stop him]].

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* TheWorfBarrage: [[spoiler:While curb-stomping Voldemort in the dream world, Freddy casually shrugs off being hit in the chest by ''multiple'' Killing Curses from the former, even throwing in an OhCrapFakeout just to troll with him.]]

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* TheWorfBarrage: TheWorfBarrage:
** The fic wastes no time establishing just how near-invincible Freddy is in the dream world by having Harry cast practically every offensive spell he knows, only for Freddy to either shrug it off or immediately adapt to each spell's effects.
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[[spoiler:While curb-stomping Voldemort in the dream world, Freddy casually shrugs off [[NoSell no-sells]] being hit in the chest by ''multiple'' Killing Curses from the former, even throwing in an OhCrapFakeout just to troll with him.]]
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** When Umbridge officially interrogates Harry under suspicion of being the murderer, neither of the two Aurors accompanying her do anything to stop what is clearly an illegal interrogation of a minor, even when said minor is forcibly injected with a deadly TruthSerum without consent. It's only when Harry is proven innocent beyond question and nearly ''dies'' from Veritaserum poisoning that the two Aurors finally intervene, and even then [=McGonagall=] practically had to force one of them to help out.
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* PoliceAreUseless: As is par for the course, the Aurors are depicted as having no chance or clue against any situation that arises in this story.
** They are utterly ineffective at stopping Freddy's murder spree at Hogwarts. Their only real response is to assign an increasing number of Auror squads to patrol the school halls at night, none of whom are successful in catching or even deterring the killer. Whenever the Aurors try to investigate, they always hit a dead end and fail to turn up any leads. This results in the Aurors looking like a major embarrassment to the public and their failure [[spoiler:forces Hogwarts to permanently close down for the students' own safety.]]

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* PoliceAreUseless: As is par for the course, the Aurors are depicted as having no chance or clue against any situation that arises in this story.
story, and they wind up looking like a major embarrassment.
** They are utterly ineffective at stopping Freddy's murder spree at Hogwarts. Their only real response is to assign an increasing number of Auror squads to patrol the school halls at night, none of whom are successful in catching or even deterring the killer. Whenever the Aurors try to investigate, they always hit a dead end and fail to turn up any leads. This results in the Aurors looking like a major embarrassment to the public and their failure [[spoiler:forces Hogwarts [[spoiler:Hogwarts being forced to permanently close down its doors for the students' own safety.]]

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** They are utterly ineffective at stopping Freddy's murders at Hogwarts. Even as more and more Auror squads are assigned to guard the dormitories at night, nothing they do works. [[spoiler:Which eventually leads to Hogwarts shutting down.]]

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** They are utterly ineffective at stopping Freddy's murders murder spree at Hogwarts. Even as more and more Their only real response is to assign an increasing number of Auror squads are assigned to guard patrol the dormitories school halls at night, nothing none of whom are successful in catching or even deterring the killer. Whenever the Aurors try to investigate, they do works. [[spoiler:Which eventually leads always hit a dead end and fail to turn up any leads. This results in the Aurors looking like a major embarrassment to the public and their failure [[spoiler:forces Hogwarts shutting down.to permanently close down for the students' own safety.]]



** Hermione, a fifth year Hogwarts student, is able to correctly deduce how Freddy is killing his victims by herself. By comparison, none of the Aurors actually investigating these murder cases seemingly bothered to notice how all the victims were SlainInTheirSleep or thought that was worth looking into.
** Even once Harry finally spills the beans about Freddy's existence and his nature as a dream demon, the Aurors are at a loss for how to actually defeat Krueger with various characters noting that they have no means of entering the dream world or intercepting Freddy's murders before they happen.

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** Hermione, a fifth year Hogwarts student, is able to correctly deduce how Freddy is Freddy's method of killing his victims by herself. By comparison, none before any of the so-called professional Aurors actually investigating these murder cases seemingly bothered to notice how do. She figures it out within ''seconds'' of realizing that all the victims were SlainInTheirSleep and subsequently putting two and two together. By comparison, none of Aurors actually investigating those murders bothered to notice this common trait linking all the deaths or thought that was worth looking into.
** Even once After Harry finally spills the beans about Freddy's Freddy Krueger's existence and his nature as a dream demon, the Aurors are at a total loss for how to actually defeat Krueger with various characters noting that they have no means of entering the dream world or intercepting Freddy's murders before they happen.happen. The best solution they can provide to the public is "don't fall asleep".
** It says something when even the Ministry is seemingly fed up the Aurors' incompetence by the end of the story. A desperate Fudge resorts to [[spoiler:pardoning Dumbledore]] and bringing in the Department of Mysteries to "fix things" rather than continuing to trust the Aurors to actually do their jobs.
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* OutsideContextProblem: Freddy Krueger presents an unprecedented threat to the Potterverse wizards because he is a foreigner in more ways than one. He originates from the Muggle world, is an independent threat from outside Europe with zero ties to either Voldemort or Dumbledore, and possesses supernatural abilities that don't abide by the rules of the Potterverse's magic system. He is so disconnected from the wizarding world's politics, factions, and conflicts that he hedonistically kills whoever he pleases regardless of his victims' importance in the setting. Unlike the majority of ''Harry Potter'' antagonists who commit evil deeds as a means to an end (ex. Fudge wants to maintain a peaceful status quo, Voldemort wants more power, the Death Eaters want to promote pureblood supremacy, Umbridge is a fanatical bureaucrat looking to advance her Ministry career, etc.), Freddy kills kids solely because [[{{Sadist}} he finds it pleasurable]] and [[ForTheEvulz there's no one who can stop him]].

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* OutsideContextProblem: Freddy Krueger presents an unprecedented threat to the Potterverse wizards because he is a foreigner in more ways than one. He originates from the Muggle world, is an independent threat from outside Europe with zero ties to either Voldemort or Dumbledore, and possesses supernatural abilities that don't abide by the rules of the Potterverse's magic system. He is so disconnected from the wizarding world's politics, history, factions, and conflicts that he hedonistically kills whoever he pleases regardless of his victims' importance in the setting. Unlike the majority of ''Harry Potter'' antagonists who commit evil deeds as a means to an end (ex. Fudge wants to maintain a peaceful status quo, Voldemort wants more power, the Death Eaters want to promote pureblood supremacy, Umbridge is a fanatical bureaucrat looking to advance her Ministry career, etc.), Freddy kills kids solely because [[{{Sadist}} he finds it pleasurable]] and [[ForTheEvulz there's no one who can stop him]].
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* PoliceAreUseless: As is par for the course, the Aurors are depicted as being completely useless against any situation in this story.

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* PoliceAreUseless: As is par for the course, the Aurors are depicted as being completely useless having no chance or clue against any situation that arises in this story.
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** Hermione, a fifth year Hogwarts student, is able to correctly deduce how Freddy is killing his victims by herself. By comparison, none of the Aurors actually investigating these murder cases seemingly bothered to notice how all the victims were SlainInTheirSleep.

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** Hermione, a fifth year Hogwarts student, is able to correctly deduce how Freddy is killing his victims by herself. By comparison, none of the Aurors actually investigating these murder cases seemingly bothered to notice how all the victims were SlainInTheirSleep.SlainInTheirSleep or thought that was worth looking into.

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* PoliceAreUseless: As is par for the course, the Aurors are depicted as being completely useless against any threat in this story.

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* PoliceAreUseless: As is par for the course, the Aurors are depicted as being completely useless against any threat situation in this story.



** When a MexicanStandoff occurs during breakfast in the Great Hall between Dumbledore's Army and the Slytherins following the night of Zacharias's murder, none of the on-duty Aurors standing guard in the room do anything to intervene or deescalate things. It takes the sudden arrival of a furious Professor [=McGonagall=] and Amelia Bones in order to avert a literal full-blown battle breaking out between the students.

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** When a MexicanStandoff occurs erupts during breakfast in the Great Hall between Dumbledore's Army and the Slytherins following the night of Zacharias's murder, none of the on-duty Aurors standing guard in the room do anything to intervene or deescalate things. It takes the sudden arrival of a furious Professor [=McGonagall=] and Amelia Bones in order to avert a literal full-blown battle breaking out between the students.students.
** Hermione, a fifth year Hogwarts student, is able to correctly deduce how Freddy is killing his victims by herself. By comparison, none of the Aurors actually investigating these murder cases seemingly bothered to notice how all the victims were SlainInTheirSleep.
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* FanDisservice: During Marietta's NightmareSequence, Freddy strips her naked by [[ClothingDamage slicing off her clothes]] with a butcher knife in a manner akin to Zorro using his rapier to remove Elena's clothes during their duel in ''Film/TheMaskOfZorro''. However, any potential fanservice from this scene is negated by the fact that this leaves Marietta's body covered in bleeding cuts and in extreme pain.
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* OutsideContextProblem: Freddy Krueger presents an unprecedented threat to the Potterverse wizards because he is an OCP in several ways. For starters, he originates from the Muggle world and has zero ties to the wizarding world. He possesses supernatural abilities that were bestowed onto him by literal demons from Hell, and these powers don't abide by the rules of the Potterverse's magic system. He is an independent threat from outside the UK who has no past connections to either Voldemort or Dumbledore. Lastly, unlike every other ''Harry Potter'' antagonist for whom committing evil deeds was merely a means to an end (ex. Fudge smeared Harry's reputation to try maintaining a peaceful status quo, Voldemort is driven by a hunger for power, the Death Eaters terrorized the magical community to promote pureblood supremacy, Umbridge made Harry's school life miserable out of an obnoxious self-righteousness and fanatical loyalty to the Ministry, etc.), Freddy is motivated purely by ForTheEvulz. Rather than being for some grand vision or ideology, Freddy kills kids solely because he finds it pleasurable and there's no one who can stop him.
* OutsideGenreFoe: Whereas almost all ''Harry Potter'' antagonists are British wizards or fantasy creatures inspired by European folklore, Freddy Krueger is a ResurrectedMurderer from the USA who normally haunts suburban teenagers in small-town Ohio.

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* OutsideContextProblem: Freddy Krueger presents an unprecedented threat to the Potterverse wizards because he is an OCP a foreigner in several ways. For starters, he more ways than one. He originates from the Muggle world and has world, is an independent threat from outside Europe with zero ties to the wizarding world. He either Voldemort or Dumbledore, and possesses supernatural abilities that were bestowed onto him by literal demons from Hell, and these powers don't abide by the rules of the Potterverse's magic system. He is an independent threat so disconnected from outside the UK who has no past connections to either Voldemort or Dumbledore. Lastly, unlike every other wizarding world's politics, factions, and conflicts that he hedonistically kills whoever he pleases regardless of his victims' importance in the setting. Unlike the majority of ''Harry Potter'' antagonist for whom committing antagonists who commit evil deeds was merely as a means to an end (ex. Fudge smeared Harry's reputation wants to try maintaining maintain a peaceful status quo, Voldemort is driven by a hunger for wants more power, the Death Eaters terrorized the magical community want to promote pureblood supremacy, Umbridge made Harry's school life miserable out of an obnoxious self-righteousness and is a fanatical loyalty bureaucrat looking to the Ministry, advance her Ministry career, etc.), Freddy is motivated purely by ForTheEvulz. Rather than being for some grand vision or ideology, Freddy kills kids solely because [[{{Sadist}} he finds it pleasurable pleasurable]] and [[ForTheEvulz there's no one who can stop him.
him]].
* OutsideGenreFoe: Whereas almost all ''Harry Potter'' antagonists are British wizards or fantasy creatures inspired by European folklore, Freddy Krueger is a ResurrectedMurderer from the USA who normally haunts suburban teenagers in small-town Ohio. His powers are based in supernatural horror as opposed to the Potterverse's fantasy-based magic system.
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* SufficientlyAnalyzedMagic: Upon realizing that Freddy is killing people through their dreams, Hermione quickly determines that Freddy is somehow able to make his victims' bodies experience psychosomatic pain on such an extreme level that it results in physical injuries and death.

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