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* ApatheicPet: Rusty. It's mentioned that he JumpedAtTheCall to [[APetIntoTheWild become a forest cat]] because he always felt uncomfortable being around humans and being a housepet.
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* ApatheicPet: ApatheticPet: Rusty. It's mentioned that he JumpedAtTheCall to [[APetIntoTheWild become a forest cat]] because he always felt uncomfortable being around humans and being a housepet.
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* ApatheicPet: Rusty. It's mentioned that he JumpedAtTheCall to [[APetIntoTheWild become a forest cat]] because he always felt uncomfortable being around humans and being a housepet.
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** Redtail [[PlotTriggeringDeath died in the prologue]] to the series. Here, he's a reoccuring character.
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** Redtail [[PlotTriggeringDeath died in the prologue]] to the series. Here, he's a reoccuring reoccurring character.
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* AdaptationalGenderIdentity:
** Firestar is changed from a cisgender tom to a transgender tom, and transitioned as a kit.
** To explain how he's a [[AnimalGenderBender tortie tom]], Redtail is a transgender tomcat.
** Firestar is changed from a cisgender tom to a transgender tom, and transitioned as a kit.
** To explain how he's a [[AnimalGenderBender tortie tom]], Redtail is a transgender tomcat.
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* AdaptationalDiversity: The Erins aren't allowed to have explicitly gay characters, though they've still [[HideYourLesbians written a few in]] anyway. ''Warriors Rewrite'' does away with this by introducing same-gender romances and even a few {{transgender}} cats (including the protagonist Fireheart). It also includes more disabled and mixed-Clan characters.
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* AdaptationalDiversity: The Erins aren't allowed to have explicitly gay characters, though they've still [[HideYourLesbians written a few in]] anyway. ''Warriors Rewrite'' does away with this by introducing same-gender romances and even a few {{transgender}} transgender cats (including the protagonist Fireheart). It also includes more disabled and mixed-Clan characters.
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* {{Transgender}}:
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** Redtail is transgender, explaining how he's a tortoiseshell tom.
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** Redtail is transgender, explaining how he's a tortoiseshell tom.
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* ShoutOut: Ravenpaw's full name is shared with ''Fanfic/WarriorsRedux'': [[spoiler:Raventhroat]].
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* ShoutOut: Ravenpaw's full warrior name is shared with ''Fanfic/WarriorsRedux'': [[spoiler:Raventhroat]].
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* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: Brindleface is Sandstorm's aunt, not her mother.
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** Several warriors are changed into "caretakers" (cats who help queens and cats in general).
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** Several A few warriors are changed into "caretakers" (cats who help queens and cats in general).
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** [[spoiler:Ravenpaw]] is made into a caretaker.
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** [[spoiler:Ravenpaw]] is made into a caretaker.caretaker instead of becoming a rouge.
* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: Brindleface is Sandstorm's aunt, not her mother.
* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul: Brindleface is Sandstorm's aunt, not her mother.
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** Medicinecats are now "healers".
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** Medicinecats Medicine cats are now "healers".
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* MentorInQueerness: Firepaw is trans, as is Redtail. As a result, Redtail offers to be there for advice.
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* MentorInQueerness: Firepaw is trans, as is Redtail. As a result, Redtail offers to be there for advice.advice for the younger cat.
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** Brindleface is most remembered for being a PregnantBadass and ActionMom. In ''Warriors Rewrite'', she spends most of her screentime as Firepaw's mentor, gives birth, [[spoiler:and is murdered less than a day later]].
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** Brindleface is most remembered for being a PregnantBadass and ActionMom. In ''Warriors Rewrite'', she spends most of her screentime as Firepaw's mentor, gives birth, [[spoiler:and is then murdered less than a day later]].
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* PrecisionFStrike: Loudbelly calls Brokentail a "sick piece of fox-dung" for making his [[ChildSoldiers 4-moon old daughter into an apprentice]].
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* PrecisionFStrike: Loudbelly calls Brokentail a "sick piece of fox-dung" for making his Longbelly's [[ChildSoldiers 4-moon old daughter into an apprentice]].
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** Lionheart is Sandstorm's father. This makes Sandstorm the older sister of Brackenfur, Cinderpelt, Thornclaw, and Brightheart.
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** Lionheart is Sandstorm's father. This also makes Sandstorm the older sister of Brackenfur, Cinderpelt, Thornclaw, and Brightheart.
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** Firestar is a dark red tabby rather than a red solid.
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** Firestar is a dark red tabby rather than a red solid.tabby.
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* AdaptationalDiversity: The Erins aren't allowed to have explicitly gay characters, though they've still [[HideYourLesbians written a few in]] anyway. ''Warriors Rewrite'' does away with this by introducing same-gender romances and even a few {{transgender}} cats (including the protagonist Fireheart). It also includes more disabled and mixed-Clan characters.
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** Instead of being an red tabby like Crookedstar, Stormstar is a dappled grey.
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** Instead of being an a red tabby like Crookedstar, Stormstar is a dappled grey.
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* IntimateHairBrushing: Firepaw finds "sharing tongues" with his Clanmates to be far more intimate than getting licked by his sister Princess
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* GiveHimANormalLife: It's not uncommon for loners to abandon their kits on Clan territory in the hope they'll have a better life in a Clan.
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* DemotedToExtra: Ravenpaw has less screentime in ''Entee the Wild'' and is not as close to Graypaw and Firepaw as he is in canon.
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* DemotedToExtra: Ravenpaw has less screentime in ''Entee ''Enter the Wild'' and is not as close to Graypaw and Firepaw as he is in canon.
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* APetIntoTheWild: Rusty is an adolescent kitten who feels restless and bored living as a pet. When asked to join a Clan in the forest, he eagerly agrees without second thought of his owners (however, leaving his sister Princess behind makes him think twice for a moment).
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* PrecisionFStrike: Loudbelly calls Brokenstar a "sick piece of fox-dung" for making his [[ChildSoldiers 4-moon old daughter into an apprentice]].
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* PrecisionFStrike: Loudbelly calls Brokenstar Brokentail a "sick piece of fox-dung" for making his [[ChildSoldiers 4-moon old daughter into an apprentice]].
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* SanitySlippage: Fernshade slips after her very young son Badgerpaw is killed in battle. She starts hallucinating that Eaglekit is a {{reincarnation}} of Badgerpaw. It gets to the point where she [[spoiler:threatens her clanmates with murder and has to be exiled]].
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* AccidentalMisnaming: Yellow asks Firepaw if his name is "Flamepaw", "Blazepaw", or "Emberpaw".
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* AccidentalMisnaming: AccidentalMisnaming:
** Yellow asks Firepaw if his name is "Flamepaw", "Blazepaw", or"Emberpaw"."Emberpaw".
** Firepaw accidentally calls Loudbelly's daughter Tawnykit "Tansykit".
** Yellow asks Firepaw if his name is "Flamepaw", "Blazepaw", or
** Firepaw accidentally calls Loudbelly's daughter Tawnykit "Tansykit".
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Smudge and Rusty don't get along. Smudge misgenders Rusty a lot, while Rusty thinks Smudge is a coward.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Smudge and Rusty don't get along.along much. Smudge misgenders Rusty a lot, while Rusty thinks Smudge is a coward.
* AlternateUniverseFic: ''Warriors Rewrite'' is a complete rewrite of the series.
** Spottedleaf is Graypaw's mentor, giving her more screentime.
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* DemotedToExtra:
** Ravenpaw has less screentime and is not as close to Graypaw and Firepaw as he is in canon.
** Cinderpelt is only a kit for most of ''Enter the Wild''.
** Ravenpaw has less screentime and is not as close to Graypaw and Firepaw as he is in canon.
** Cinderpelt is only a kit for most of ''Enter the Wild''.
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* CompositeCharacter: Lionheart takes Redtail's role as Sandstorm's father. He's also the one Tigerclaw kills.
* DemotedToExtra: Ravenpaw has less screentime in ''Entee the Wild'' and is not as close to Graypaw and Firepaw as he is in
** Cinderpelt is only a kit for most of ''Enter the Wild''.
* TheExile:
** Yellowfang, two other [=ShadowClan=] elders, and a caretaker were wrongly exiled by Brokentail for not siding with him. They were later allowed back into [=ShadowClan=], but Yellowfang declined the offer in exchange for becoming [=ThunderClan=]'s healer.
** Boulderpelt, Blackfoot, and Tangleburr are exiled at the end of ''Enter the Wild'' for siding with Brokentail.
** [[spoiler:Fernshade]] is exiled after she threatens to kill her clanmates for [[spoiler: wanting to take her "son" from her.]]
** Yellowfang, two other [=ShadowClan=] elders, and a caretaker were wrongly exiled by Brokentail for not siding with him. They were later allowed back into [=ShadowClan=], but Yellowfang declined the offer in exchange for becoming [=ThunderClan=]'s healer.
** Boulderpelt, Blackfoot, and Tangleburr are exiled at the end of ''Enter the Wild'' for siding with Brokentail.
** [[spoiler:Fernshade]] is exiled after she threatens to kill her clanmates for [[spoiler: wanting to take her "son" from her.]]
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** Graystripe was taken in by Rosetail after his mother had a DeathByChildbirth. He loves her but is hesitant to call her his mother.
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** Graystripe was taken in by Rosetail after his mother had a DeathByChildbirth. He loves her but is hesitant to call her his mother.mother until [[spoiler:after her death]].
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* MarkOfShame: Exiled cats are slashed around their face. This is referred to as an "exile mark"
* MeaningfulRename: Yellowfang is renamed "Yellow" after she's exiled from [=ShadowClan=].
* MeaningfulRename: Yellowfang is renamed "Yellow" after she's exiled from [=ShadowClan=].
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* MarkOfShame: Exiled cats are slashed around their face. This is given scars referred to as an "exile mark"
* MeaningfulRename: When a cat is exiled, they lose their suffix. For example, Yellowfangis renamed "Yellow" after she's exiled from [=ShadowClan=].becomes "Yellow".
* MeaningfulRename: When a cat is exiled, they lose their suffix. For example, Yellowfang
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* NotHisSled: Brindleface is most remembered for being a PregnantBadass and ActionMom. In ''Warriors Rewrite'', she spends most of her screentime as Firepaw's mentor, gives birth, [[spoiler:and is murdered less than a day later]].
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* NotHisSled: NotHisSled:
** Firepaw doesn't show an interest in either Spottedleaf or Sandstorm. He instead has a crush on his friend Graypaw.
** Brindleface is most remembered for being a PregnantBadass and ActionMom. In ''Warriors Rewrite'', she spends most of her screentime as Firepaw's mentor, gives birth, [[spoiler:and is murdered less than a day later]].
** Firepaw doesn't show an interest in either Spottedleaf or Sandstorm. He instead has a crush on his friend Graypaw.
** Brindleface is most remembered for being a PregnantBadass and ActionMom. In ''Warriors Rewrite'', she spends most of her screentime as Firepaw's mentor, gives birth, [[spoiler:and is murdered less than a day later]].
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* WouldHurtAChild: Brokentail kills two 1-moon old kits and frames Yellowfang as the murderer.
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* WouldHurtAChild: WouldHurtAChild:
** Brokentail kills two 1-moon old kits and frames Yellowfang as themurderer.murderer.
** Clawface kills one of [[spoiler:Brindleface's]] newborn kits. He claims it was accidental but still gets exiled.
** Brokentail kills two 1-moon old kits and frames Yellowfang as the
** Clawface kills one of [[spoiler:Brindleface's]] newborn kits. He claims it was accidental but still gets exiled.
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** Redtail isn't Sandstorm's father, with Lionheart taking the role instead. Likewise, Brindleface isn't Sandstorm's mother.
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** Redtail isn't Sandstorm's father, with Lionheart taking the role instead. Likewise, Brindleface isn't Sandstorm's mother.mother, but instead she is her aunt.
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* ActualPacifist: Being the spiritual leaders and medics of the Clan, healers and their apprentices are forbidden from hunting, fighting, or otherwise killing unless it's absolutely necessary.
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* ActualPacifist: ActualPacifist:
** Being the spiritual leaders and medics of the Clan, healers and their apprentices are forbidden from hunting, fighting, or otherwise killing unless it's absolutelynecessary.necessary.
** Caretakers are also not allowed to hunt or fight.
** Being the spiritual leaders and medics of the Clan, healers and their apprentices are forbidden from hunting, fighting, or otherwise killing unless it's absolutely
** Caretakers are also not allowed to hunt or fight.
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** Several warriors are changed into "caretakers" (cats who help queens).
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** Several warriors are changed into "caretakers" (cats who help queens).queens and cats in general).
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** Silverstream is a healer.
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** Silverstream is a healer. healer rather than a warrior.
** [[spoiler:Ravenpaw]] is made into a caretaker.
** [[spoiler:Ravenpaw]] is made into a caretaker.
** Whitestorm is silver-furred instead of white.
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** Redtail [[PlotTriggeringDeath died in the prologue]] to the series. Here, he's a character.
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** Redtail [[PlotTriggeringDeath died in the prologue]] to the series. Here, he's a character. reoccuring character.
** Brindleface has a much larger role as Firepaw's mentor.
** Brindleface has a much larger role as Firepaw's mentor.
** CListFodder Rosetail is now Graypaw's adopted mother.
* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation:
** Lionheart didn't simply die of his injuries. He was killed by Tigerclaw.
** Brindleface's unnamed kit dies after being attacked, not from illness.
** Lionheart didn't simply die of his injuries. He was killed by Tigerclaw.
** Brindleface's unnamed kit dies after being attacked, not from illness.
* NamedByTheAdaptation: Ravenpaw is [[spoiler:made into a caretaker]] and named [[spoiler:Raventhroat]].
* NotHisSled: Brindleface is most remembered for being a PregnantBadass and ActionMom. In ''Warriors Rewrite'', she spends most of her screentime as Firepaw's mentor, gives birth, [[spoiler:and is murdered less than a day later]].
* NotHisSled: Brindleface is most remembered for being a PregnantBadass and ActionMom. In ''Warriors Rewrite'', she spends most of her screentime as Firepaw's mentor, gives birth, [[spoiler:and is murdered less than a day later]].
* ShoutOut: Ravenpaw's full name is shared with ''Fanfic/WarriorsRedux'': [[spoiler:Raventhroat]].
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** Redtail isn't Sandstorm's father, with Lionheart taking the role instead.
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** Redtail isn't Sandstorm's father, with Lionheart taking the role instead. Likewise, Brindleface isn't Sandstorm's mother.
* WouldHurtAChild: Brokentail kills two 1-moon old kits and frames Yellowfang as the murderer.
* WouldHurtAChild: Brokentail kills two 1-moon old kits and frames Yellowfang as the murderer.
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** Instead of being an orange tabby like Crookedstar, Stormstar is a dappled grey.
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** Instead of being an orange red tabby like Crookedstar, Stormstar is a dappled grey.
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* DemotedToExtra: Ravenpaw has less screentime and is not as close to Graypaw and Firepaw as he is in canon.
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* DemotedToExtra: DemotedToExtra:
** Ravenpaw has less screentime and is not as close to Graypaw and Firepaw as he is incanon.canon.
** Cinderpelt is only a kit for most of ''Enter the Wild''.
** Ravenpaw has less screentime and is not as close to Graypaw and Firepaw as he is in
** Cinderpelt is only a kit for most of ''Enter the Wild''.
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** Lionheart is Sandstorm's father.
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** Lionheart is Sandstorm's father. This makes Sandstorm the older sister of Brackenfur, Cinderpelt, Thornclaw, and Brightheart.
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* AscendedExtra:
** Redtail [[PlotTriggeringDeath died in the prologue]] to the series. Here, he's a character.
** Princess is introduced as living alongside Rusty.
** Smudge is a upgraded into a reoccuring character.
* DemotedToExtra: Ravenpaw has less screentime and is not as close to Graypaw and Firepaw as he is in canon.
** Redtail [[PlotTriggeringDeath died in the prologue]] to the series. Here, he's a character.
** Princess is introduced as living alongside Rusty.
** Smudge is a upgraded into a reoccuring character.
* DemotedToExtra: Ravenpaw has less screentime and is not as close to Graypaw and Firepaw as he is in canon.
* EveryoneCanSeeIt: Firepaw's crush on Graypaw is noted by several of his peers.
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* ForbiddenLove: Downplayed. Cross-Clan couples aren't against the Warrior Code but they aren't the norm. Bluestar is openly mates with Oakheart, but it's seen as unusual. These relationships are treated as {{Long Distance Relationship}}s.
* LongDistanceRelationship: Cross-Clan couples aren't against the Warrior Code but they are difficult to keep. The mates rarely meet outside of Gatherings.
** Lionheart is Sandstorm's father.
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* UnrelatedInTheAdaptation: Willowpelt is no longer Graystripe's mother.
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* UnrelatedInTheAdaptation: UnrelatedInTheAdaptation:
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** Redtail isn't Sandstorm's father, with Lionheart taking the role instead.
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** Silverstream is a healer.
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** Instead of being an orange tabby like Crookedstar, Stormstar is a dappled grey.
** Brokenstar is described as having a Persian-like face similar to his mother's.
** Oakheart is dark grey instead of reddish-brown
** Rowanberry is red and cream, rather than brown and cream.
** Smallear has folded ears rather than small ears.
** Brokenstar is described as having a Persian-like face similar to his mother's.
** Oakheart is dark grey instead of reddish-brown
** Rowanberry is red and cream, rather than brown and cream.
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* PrecisionFStrike: Loudbelly calls Brokenstar a "sick piece of fox-dung" for making his [[ChildSoldiers 4-moon old daughter into an apprentice]].
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* ForbiddenLove: Downplayed. Cross-Clan couples aren't against the Warrior Code but they are frowned upon. Bluestar is openly mates with Oakheart, but it's seen as unusual.
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* ForbiddenLove: Downplayed. Cross-Clan couples aren't against the Warrior Code but they are frowned upon.aren't the norm. Bluestar is openly mates with Oakheart, but it's seen as unusual. These relationships are treated as {{Long Distance Relationship}}s.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/series/1168283 Warriors Rewrite]]'' is a planned rewrite of the ''Literature/WarriorCats'' series by [=MurasakiNoAo=]. Currently one the first story has been finished: ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/16394336/chapters/38374940 Enter the Wild]]'' (a rewrite of the first book, ''Into the Wild'').
The rewrite expands upon and changes elements from ''Warriors'' canon. Relationships are better established without any EarlyInstallmentWeirdness at fault, age are more concrete, the Warrior Coede is rewritten, and there are more explicitly queer characters than before. The general story is kept the same, but details are changed.
The rewrite expands upon and changes elements from ''Warriors'' canon. Relationships are better established without any EarlyInstallmentWeirdness at fault, age are more concrete, the Warrior Coede is rewritten, and there are more explicitly queer characters than before. The general story is kept the same, but details are changed.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/series/1168283 Warriors Rewrite]]'' is a planned rewrite of the ''Literature/WarriorCats'' series by [=MurasakiNoAo=]. Currently one only the first story has been finished: ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/16394336/chapters/38374940 Enter the Wild]]'' (a rewrite of the first book, ''Into the Wild'').
Rusty is a 6-month old kitten who has dreams of the forest. One day he goes into the neighboring woods and meets Graypaw, a similarly-aged cat who lives with his Clan in the forest. Graypaw's leader Bluestar sees potential in Rusty and invites him to join [=ThunderClan=]. Therewrite next day Rusty leaves his sister Princess and their owner so that he can live in the wild as "Firepaw".
''Warriors Rewrite'' expands upon and changes elements from ''Warriors'' canon. Relationships are better established without any EarlyInstallmentWeirdness at fault,age ages are more concrete, the Warrior Coede Code is rewritten, and there are more explicitly queer characters than before. The general story is kept the same, but details are changed.
Rusty is a 6-month old kitten who has dreams of the forest. One day he goes into the neighboring woods and meets Graypaw, a similarly-aged cat who lives with his Clan in the forest. Graypaw's leader Bluestar sees potential in Rusty and invites him to join [=ThunderClan=]. The
''Warriors Rewrite'' expands upon and changes elements from ''Warriors'' canon. Relationships are better established without any EarlyInstallmentWeirdness at fault,
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* AccidentalMisnaming: Yellow asks Firepaw if his name is "Flamepaw", "Blazepaw", or "Emberpaw".
* ActualPacifist: Being the spiritual leaders and medics of the Clan, healers and their apprentices are forbidden from hunting, fighting, or otherwise killing unless it's absolutely necessary.
* ActualPacifist: Being the spiritual leaders and medics of the Clan, healers and their apprentices are forbidden from hunting, fighting, or otherwise killing unless it's absolutely necessary.
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* AdaptationalJobChange: AdaptationalJobChange:
** Several warriors are changed into "caretakers" (cats who helpqueens).queens).
** Graypaw has a vision at Mothermouth and becomes Spottedleaf's healer apprentice instead of a warrior.
* AdaptationDyeJob:
** Firestar is a dark red tabby rather than a red solid.
** Yellowfang is dark red, not dark grey.
** Several warriors are changed into "caretakers" (cats who help
** Graypaw has a vision at Mothermouth and becomes Spottedleaf's healer apprentice instead of a warrior.
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** Yellowfang is dark red, not dark grey.
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* MarkOfShame: Exiled cats are slashed around their face. This is referred to as an "exile mark"
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation:
** Tigerclaw is Dustpelt's father.
** Rosetail is Graystripe's adopted mother.
** Tigerclaw is Dustpelt's father.
** Rosetail is Graystripe's adopted mother.
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* HappilyAdopted: Graystripe was taken in by Rosetail after his mother had a DeathByChildbirth. He loves her but is hesitant to call her his mother.
* MentorinQueerness: Firepaw is trans, as is Redtail. As a result, Redtail offers to be there for advice.
* MentorinQueerness: Firepaw is trans, as is Redtail. As a result, Redtail offers to be there for advice.
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* HappilyAdopted: HappilyAdopted:
** Graystripe was taken in by Rosetail after his mother had a DeathByChildbirth. He loves her but is hesitant to call her his mother.
** Swiftkit was abandoned by his biological mother and happily raised by Speckletail.
*MentorinQueerness: MentorInQueerness: Firepaw is trans, as is Redtail. As a result, Redtail offers to be there for advice.
** Graystripe was taken in by Rosetail after his mother had a DeathByChildbirth. He loves her but is hesitant to call her his mother.
** Swiftkit was abandoned by his biological mother and happily raised by Speckletail.
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''Warriors Rewrite'' is a planned rewrite of the ''Literature/WarriorCats'' series by [=MurasakiNoAo=]. Currently one the first story has been finished: ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/16394336/chapters/38374940 Enter the Wild]]'' (a rewrite of the first book, ''Into the Wild'').
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* DisabledInTheAdaptation: In ''Warriors'', it's mentioned that Willowpelt has "unusual eyes". What this means is never clarified. In ''Warriors Rewrite'', she has clouded eyes due to being near-completely blind.
* HappilyAdopted: Graystripe was taken in by Rosetail after his mother had a DeathByChildbirth. He loves her but is hesitant to call her his mother.
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** Redtail is transgender, explaining how he's a tortoiseshell tom.
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** Redtail is transgender, explaining how he's a tortoiseshell tom.tom.
* UnrelatedInTheAdaptation: Willowpelt is no longer Graystripe's mother.
* UnrelatedInTheAdaptation: Willowpelt is no longer Graystripe's mother.
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The rewrite expands upon and changes elements from ''Warriors'' canon. Relationships are better established without any EarlyInstallmentWeirdness at fault, age are more concrte, and there are more explicitly queer characters than before.
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The rewrite expands upon and changes elements from ''Warriors'' canon. Relationships are better established without any EarlyInstallmentWeirdness at fault, age are more concrte, concrete, the Warrior Coede is rewritten, and there are more explicitly queer characters than before.before. The general story is kept the same, but details are changed.
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* AdaptationJobChange: Several warriors are changed into "caretakers" (cats who help queens).
* AdaptationNameChange: Medicinecats are now "healers".
* AdaptationNameChange: Medicinecats are now "healers".
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* AdaptationJobChange: AdaptationalJobChange: Several warriors are changed into "caretakers" (cats who help queens).
*AdaptationNameChange: AdaptationNameChange:
** Medicinecats are now"healers"."healers".
** The usage of "she-cat" is scrapped in exchange for the more accurate "molly".
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** Medicinecats are now
** The usage of "she-cat" is scrapped in exchange for the more accurate "molly".
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* {{Transgender}}: Fireheart is a transgender tom who transitioned as a kit.
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* {{Transgender}}: ForbiddenLove: Downplayed. Cross-Clan couples aren't against the Warrior Code but they are frowned upon. Bluestar is openly mates with Oakheart, but it's seen as unusual.
* MentorinQueerness: Firepaw is trans, as is Redtail. As a result, Redtail offers to be there for advice.
* {{Transgender}}:
** Fireheart is a transgender tom who transitioned as akit.kit.
** Redtail is transgender, explaining how he's a tortoiseshell tom.
* MentorinQueerness: Firepaw is trans, as is Redtail. As a result, Redtail offers to be there for advice.
* {{Transgender}}:
** Fireheart is a transgender tom who transitioned as a
** Redtail is transgender, explaining how he's a tortoiseshell tom.
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''Warriors Rewrite'' is a planned rewrite of the ''Literature/WarriorCats'' series by [=MurasakiNoAo=]. Currently one the first story has been finished: ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/16394336/chapters/38374940 Enter the Wild]]'' (a rewrite of the first book, ''Into the Wild'').
The rewrite expands upon and changes elements from ''Warriors'' canon. Relationships are better established without any EarlyInstallmentWeirdness at fault, age are more concrte, and there are more explicitly queer characters than before.
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!!''Warriors Rewrite'' provides examples of:
* AdaptationalJerkass: Smudge and Rusty don't get along. Smudge misgenders Rusty a lot, while Rusty thinks Smudge is a coward.
* AdaptationJobChange: Several warriors are changed into "caretakers" (cats who help queens).
* AdaptationNameChange: Medicinecats are now "healers".
* FixFic: ''Warriors Rewrite'' revamps the ''Warriors'' canon by streamlining and rewriting it.
* {{Transgender}}: Fireheart is a transgender tom who transitioned as a kit.
The rewrite expands upon and changes elements from ''Warriors'' canon. Relationships are better established without any EarlyInstallmentWeirdness at fault, age are more concrte, and there are more explicitly queer characters than before.
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!!''Warriors Rewrite'' provides examples of:
* AdaptationalJerkass: Smudge and Rusty don't get along. Smudge misgenders Rusty a lot, while Rusty thinks Smudge is a coward.
* AdaptationJobChange: Several warriors are changed into "caretakers" (cats who help queens).
* AdaptationNameChange: Medicinecats are now "healers".
* FixFic: ''Warriors Rewrite'' revamps the ''Warriors'' canon by streamlining and rewriting it.
* {{Transgender}}: Fireheart is a transgender tom who transitioned as a kit.