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* KarmaHoudini: [[spoiler: [[AvertedTrope Averted so hard]]. The punishment system for the Redux has been explained in massive detail, and we get to see demonstrations of it happen, regardless of anyone's intentions. But the most notable aversion is for Tigerclaw; in canon, after his crimes came to light, Tigerclaw was exiled from [=ThunderClan=], and later became [=ShadowClan=]'s leader. Here, he is given the worst of punishments, which is execution and ''having his name erased from the Clans' memory'', which essentially denies him entrance into [=StarClan=], and is supposed to lead to CessationOfExistence once he has been completely forgotten from the Clans' memory.]]
* KnightTemplar / HeWhoFightsMonsters / WellIntentionedExtremist: [[spoiler: [[BigBad Tigerclaw]] has become this in the Redux. Whereas in canon he was an ordinary evil and diabolical villain, the Redux makes it clear that he is someone who genuinely loves [=ThunderClan=], but he is willing to go to extreme lengths to protect it and lead it to what he thinks is greatness, rather than just wanting power.
* KnightTemplar / HeWhoFightsMonsters / WellIntentionedExtremist: [[spoiler: [[BigBad Tigerclaw]] has become this in the Redux. Whereas in canon he was an ordinary evil and diabolical villain, the Redux makes it clear that he is someone who genuinely loves [=ThunderClan=], but he is willing to go to extreme lengths to protect it and lead it to what he thinks is greatness, rather than just wanting power.
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** Arc 4: (''The Darkest Hour''): Scourge [[labelnote]] WordOfGod [[/labelnote]]
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* BigBad: There doesn't seem to be an overreaching villain, as the evilness of the "bad guys" can be called into question in the redux.
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** Arc 1: (''Into the Wild''): Brokenstar
** Arc 2: (''Forest of Secrets''): Tigerclaw
** Arc 3: (''Rising Storm''): The Dogs
** Arc 4: (''The Darkest Hour''): Scourge [[labelnote]] WordOfGod [[/labelnote]]
** Arc 1: (''Into the Wild''): Brokenstar
** Arc 2: (''Forest of Secrets''): Tigerclaw
** Arc 3: (''Rising Storm''): The Dogs
** Arc 4: (''The Darkest Hour''): Scourge [[labelnote]] WordOfGod [[/labelnote]]
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* AnyoneCanDie: Still the case.
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* AnyoneCanDie: Still the case. [[spoiler: Sandstorm, a character who lived until the ''A Vision of Shadows'' arc in the canon ''Warriors'', is killed off in Chapter 34 of Arc 2.]]
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** Also double subverted, as Brokenstar stays in power, but it's given that he'll be overthrown and ShadowClan restored to its former... glory?
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** Also double subverted, as Brokenstar stays in power, but it's given that he'll be overthrown and ShadowClan [=ShadowClan=] restored to its former... glory?
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Played fairly straight with ShadowClan, as they aren't "teh Evil Clan" this time around. The closest you could even get to that is their strong religious beliefs which, it's implied, are on the verge of making them a theocracy.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Played fairly straight with ShadowClan, [=ShadowClan=], as they aren't "teh Evil Clan" this time around. The closest you could even get to that is their strong religious beliefs which, it's implied, are on the verge of making them a theocracy.
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* YouCantFightFate: Subverted, as since StarClan's existence is uncertain, so are their prophecies. Can be outright defied.
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* YouCantFightFate: Subverted, as since StarClan's [=StarClan's=] existence is uncertain, so are their prophecies. Can be outright defied.
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Several cats from outside ThunderClan are met at the Gathering, some even books before their original introduction.
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Several cats from outside ThunderClan [=ThunderClan=] are met at the Gathering, some even books before their original introduction.
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* AdaptedOut: Seems to be the case with [=SkyClan=], as it's been outright stated by WordOfGod that the SkyClan arc was just an excuse to milk the "Hero Firestar" thing.
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** It should be noted that this was a problem in the original because, for the first arc, it was constantly mentioned by Clanners that the reason Clans shouldn't get together was because they were separate... despite the fact that all of the Clan's individual cultures were exactly the same and the background cats themselves were basically interchangeable.
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** It should be noted that this was a problem in the original because, for the first arc, it was constantly mentioned by Clanners that the reason Clans shouldn't get together was because they were separate... despite the fact that all of the Clan's individual cultures were exactly the same and that many of the background cats characters themselves were basically interchangeable.interchangeable personality-wise.
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** It should be noted that this was a problem in the original because, for the first arc, it was constantly mentioned by Clanners that the reason Clans shouldn't get together was because they were separate... despite the fact that all of the Clan's individual cultures were exactly the same and the background cats themselves were basically interchangeable.
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** Whenever they change something from the original.
** Whenever they added some new element to the redux version.
** Whenever they added some new element to the redux version.
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* NightmareFuel: Yrrun.
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* WordOfGod: Has confirmed or jossed a lot of things.
** Although, when the author doesn't want to answer a question, instead of an answer a random animal fact will be posted.
** Although, when the author doesn't want to answer a question, instead of an answer a random animal fact will be posted.
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* FanNickname: Outside of the Redux universe, the creator has been dubbed, to name a few, "Dux," "Duxie," and "Duxinator" by the fans.
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* AffectionateNickname: The creator has been dubbed, to name a few, "Dux," "Duxie," and "Duxinator" by the fans.
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* FanNickname: Outside of the Redux universe, the creator has been dubbed, to name a few, "Dux," "Duxie," and "Duxinator" by the fans.
* FanNickname: Outside of the Redux universe, the creator has been dubbed, to name a few, "Dux," "Duxie," and "Duxinator" by the fans.
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* AbandonedMine: Still seems to be the case with the Moonstone.
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*** Onewhisker's renaming becomes even more justified when it's considered that his original name was one of the most nonsensical of all.all, even by the Erins' standards.
*AffectionateNickname: The creator has been dubbed, to name a few, "Dux," "Duxie," and "Duxinator" by the fans.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Deconstructed with ShadowClan, as they aren't "teh Evil Clan" this time around. The closest you could even get to that is their strong religious beliefs which, it's implied, are on the verge of making them a theocracy.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Deconstructed Played fairly straight with ShadowClan, as they aren't "teh Evil Clan" this time around. The closest you could even get to that is their strong religious beliefs which, it's implied, are on the verge of making them a theocracy.
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Warriors Redux (http://warriorsredux.tumblr.com) is a DeconstructionFic/FixFic dedicated to the revision of the [[Literature/{{Warriors}} Warriors]] series. It attempts to revise the first arc of the series as being more believable,
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Warriors Redux (http://warriorsredux.tumblr.com) is a DeconstructionFic/FixFic dedicated to the revision of the [[Literature/{{Warriors}} Warriors]] series. It attempts to revise the first arc of the series as being more believable,
believable while greatly expanding on and editing the lore to also be more believable. Although Firepaw's path remains largely the same as the first arc, the steps he takes to get there wildly vary.
*AdaptationPersonalityChange: Justified with Greypaw, as he was formerly just played for comic relief and dramatic subplots, whereas now he's a much more well-rounded and fleshed-out character.
**Tigerclaw is also less of an obvious villain.
**Tigerclaw is also less of an obvious villain.
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* AesopAmnesia: Shouldn't be as big of a deal as it was in the original, since the Clans are so culturally separate that any attempts at unification would be treated like wanting to unify, say, Switzerland and Japan: It's just not going to happen.
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* AesopAmnesia: Shouldn't be as big of a deal as it was in the original, since the Clans are so culturally separate now that any attempts at unification would be treated like wanting to unify, say, Switzerland Switzerland, Canada, Argentina, and Japan: It's just not going to happen.
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* AllThereInTheManual: The author has done a ''lot'' of explaining about the amendments and worldbuilding before even getting into the rewriting of the ''first book.''
* AllYourBaseAreBelongToUs: Subverted.
* AllYourBaseAreBelongToUs: Subverted.
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* AllThereInTheManual: The author has done a ''lot'' of explaining about the amendments and worldbuilding before even getting into the rewriting of the ''first first book.''
* AllYourBaseAreBelongToUs: Subverted.
* AllYourBaseAreBelongToUs: Subverted.
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* CrisisOfFaith: WordOfGod says that this kind of thing won't be taken very well among the fans, which makes one wonder if and how Bluestar's loss-of-faith arc would be handled in future.
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* CrisisOfFaith: WordOfGod says that this kind of thing won't be taken very well among the fans, clans, which makes one wonder if and how Bluestar's loss-of-faith arc would be handled in future.
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*CatStereotype: WordOfGod has made statements on a few of these.
**White cats are thought of by the Clans to usually be "bad" and are usually the villain in nursery stories.
**Black cats, on the other hand, are thought of as special and magical.
**As in the original, red/ginger/yellow (go together because of cats' colorblindness) cats are thought of as heroic, mainly because of their color being similar to the pelt of Horoa, the lion, one of the cat gods.
*ChildrenAreInnocent: Still largely the case with the kits.
*CodeOfHonor: The Warrior Code is greatly expanded from its original fifteen or so rules to being an enormous, complex, convoluted system that was constructed over the course of many decades.
**White cats are thought of by the Clans to usually be "bad" and are usually the villain in nursery stories.
**Black cats, on the other hand, are thought of as special and magical.
**As in the original, red/ginger/yellow (go together because of cats' colorblindness) cats are thought of as heroic, mainly because of their color being similar to the pelt of Horoa, the lion, one of the cat gods.
*ChildrenAreInnocent: Still largely the case with the kits.
*CodeOfHonor: The Warrior Code is greatly expanded from its original fifteen or so rules to being an enormous, complex, convoluted system that was constructed over the course of many decades.
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*CrisisOfFaith: WordOfGod says that this kind of thing won't be taken very well among the fans, which makes one wonder if and how Bluestar's loss-of-faith arc would be handled in future.
*CulturalPosturing: Even more exaggerated now that the Clans are genuinely culturally different.
*DarkIsNotEvil: Deconstructed with ShadowClan, as they aren't "teh Evil Clan" this time around. The closest you could even get to that is their strong religious beliefs which, it's implied, are on the verge of making them a theocracy.
*CulturalPosturing: Even more exaggerated now that the Clans are genuinely culturally different.
*DarkIsNotEvil: Deconstructed with ShadowClan, as they aren't "teh Evil Clan" this time around. The closest you could even get to that is their strong religious beliefs which, it's implied, are on the verge of making them a theocracy.
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*NightmareFuel: Yrrun.
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*WordOfGod: Has confirmed or jossed a lot of things.
**Although, when the author doesn't want to answer a question, instead of an answer a random animal fact will be posted.
**Although, when the author doesn't want to answer a question, instead of an answer a random animal fact will be posted.
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* Adorkable: Possibly the case with Firepaw, Greypaw, and Ravenpaw.
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*BelatedBackstory: Thankfully seems to be averted.
*BigBad: There doesn't seem to be an overreaching villain, as the evilness of the "bad guys" can be called into question in the redux.
*BigDamnHeroes: Seems to be both downplayed and subverted with Firepaw.
*BigEater: Unfortunately, still the case with Graypaw.
*BigBad: There doesn't seem to be an overreaching villain, as the evilness of the "bad guys" can be called into question in the redux.
*BigDamnHeroes: Seems to be both downplayed and subverted with Firepaw.
*BigEater: Unfortunately, still the case with Graypaw.
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*CallARabbitASmeerp: The cats' vocabulary has been changed from the original, although for some reason some parts of it have been changed back into ordinary human terms, and an entire new language has been constructed for the cats.
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*CareerEndingInjury: WordOfGod says this will not be the case except in situations on the verge of BodyHorror, considering how adaptable and versatile cats are.
*CarnivoreConfusion: Crows seem to be sentient as well, and many other carnivores are at least intelligent enough for cats to be able to use the Fang language to speak to them.
*CarnivoreConfusion: Crows seem to be sentient as well, and many other carnivores are at least intelligent enough for cats to be able to use the Fang language to speak to them.
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* AwesomeMcCoolNameAwesomeMcCoolName: Some of the changed names fit this category.
**The names of Rokhoa, Horoa, and Surii also fall into this category.
*BecauseDestinySaysSo: Even worse for seers than in the original.
*BodyHorror: Yrrun.
**The names of Rokhoa, Horoa, and Surii also fall into this category.
*BecauseDestinySaysSo: Even worse for seers than in the original.
*BodyHorror: Yrrun.
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* WorldBuilding: Taken UpToEleven.
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* WorldBuilding: Taken UpToEleven.UpToEleven.
*YouCantFightFate: Subverted, as since StarClan's existence is uncertain, so are their prophecies. Can be outright defied.
*YouCantFightFate: Subverted, as since StarClan's existence is uncertain, so are their prophecies. Can be outright defied.
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*AlternativeCalendar: Although somewhat similar to the original, the cats' system of measuring time has also been changed.
*AmbiguousTimePeriod: Still the case, although WordOfGod has confirmed that the first book is set around the early 2010s, and the Clans have been around for about 100 years prior.
*AmbitionIsEvil: Treated with the contempt it deserves.
*AnimalReligion: [=StarClan=] still exists, although its reality is ambiguous and it's been changed into a sort of collective HiveMind afterlife where everybody is one.
*AnimalTalk: Both Felidae, the language of cats, and Fang, the language of carnivores in general.
*AnyoneCanDie: Still the case.
*AmbiguousTimePeriod: Still the case, although WordOfGod has confirmed that the first book is set around the early 2010s, and the Clans have been around for about 100 years prior.
*AmbitionIsEvil: Treated with the contempt it deserves.
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*AnimalTalk: Both Felidae, the language of cats, and Fang, the language of carnivores in general.
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*CallBack: There is a CallBack to the original book when Greypaw jokingly suggests renaming Murkpelt as Yellowfang.
*CallBack: There is a CallBack to the original book when Greypaw jokingly suggests renaming Murkpelt as Yellowfang.
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*ActionGirl: As in canon, almost every female cat is just as competent as their male counterparts.
**Subverted with female seers, as they aren't taught to fight.
*ActionPrologue: The opening prologue is quite similar to the original one in terms of the action.
**Subverted with female seers, as they aren't taught to fight.
*ActionPrologue: The opening prologue is quite similar to the original one in terms of the action.
*AdaptationDyeJob: Justified in every instance, as every coat color change is done for the sake of genetic plausibility.
*AdaptedOut: Seems to be the case with [=SkyClan=], as it's been outright stated by WordOfGod that the SkyClan arc was just an excuse to milk the "Hero Firestar" thing.
*Adorkable: Possibly the case with Firepaw, Greypaw, and Ravenpaw.
*AdultFear: Much more so than the original series.
*AesopAmnesia: Shouldn't be as big of a deal as it was in the original, since the Clans are so culturally separate that any attempts at unification would be treated like wanting to unify, say, Switzerland and Japan: It's just not going to happen.
*AllGenesAreCoDominant: This has been treated with the contempt it deserves, and all genetically-impossible appearances have been changed.
*AllThereInTheManual: The author has done a ''lot'' of explaining about the amendments and worldbuilding before even getting into the rewriting of the ''first book.''
*AllYourBaseAreBelongToUs: Subverted.
*AdaptedOut: Seems to be the case with [=SkyClan=], as it's been outright stated by WordOfGod that the SkyClan arc was just an excuse to milk the "Hero Firestar" thing.
*Adorkable: Possibly the case with Firepaw, Greypaw, and Ravenpaw.
*AdultFear: Much more so than the original series.
*AesopAmnesia: Shouldn't be as big of a deal as it was in the original, since the Clans are so culturally separate that any attempts at unification would be treated like wanting to unify, say, Switzerland and Japan: It's just not going to happen.
*AllGenesAreCoDominant: This has been treated with the contempt it deserves, and all genetically-impossible appearances have been changed.
*AllThereInTheManual: The author has done a ''lot'' of explaining about the amendments and worldbuilding before even getting into the rewriting of the ''first book.''
*AllYourBaseAreBelongToUs: Subverted.
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* UpToEleven: With the worldbuilding, my god. ''So much work'' has been put into amending the faults of the original, revising the history, giving Clans more interesting backgrounds and personalities.
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* UpToEleven: With the worldbuilding, my god. ''So much work'' has been put into amending the faults of the original, revising the history, giving Clans more interesting backgrounds and personalities.personalities.
*WorldBuilding: Taken UpToEleven.
*WorldBuilding: Taken UpToEleven.
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**Perchkit becomes Shadekit.
**Primrosepaw becomes Sheepkit.
**Pikepaw becomes Starlingkit.
**Graypool becomes Greypath.
**Primrosepaw becomes Sheepkit.
**Pikepaw becomes Starlingkit.
**Graypool becomes Greypath.
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**Played relatively straight with Buzzardface (the replacement for Barkface), as in the allegiances he's outright stated to be handsome.
*AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Several cats from outside ThunderClan are met at the Gathering, some even books before their original introduction.
**Redtail also gets this, as he watches Rusty with Bluestar instead of Lionheart/pelt.
*AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Several cats from outside ThunderClan are met at the Gathering, some even books before their original introduction.
**Redtail also gets this, as he watches Rusty with Bluestar instead of Lionheart/pelt.
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**Onewhisker becomes Wrenwhisker.
***Onewhisker's renaming becomes even
**Ashfoot becomes Nettlefoot.
**Weaselfur becomes Squirrelfur.
**Rushtail becomes Jaytail.
**Gorsetail becomes Fawnfoot.
**Webfoot becomes Roachpaw.
**Whitetail becomes Lightpaw.
**Sunstrike becomes Copperpaw.
**Runningbrook becomes Cranekit.
**Eaglekit becomes Falconkit.
**Oakheart becomes Oakclaw.
**Mudfur becomes Shellcloud.
**Blackclaw becomes Nightclaw.
**Voletooth becomes Volefang.
**Whiteclaw becomes Sloeclaw.
**Minnowtail becomes Minnowstream.
**Mosspelt becomes Mottlepaw.
**Stonestream becomes Pebblepaw.
**Beechfur becomes Lampreypaw.
**Greenflower becomes Duckflower.
**Mistyfoot becomes Mistfoot.
**Loudbelly becomes Cedarkit.
**Heavystep becomes Otterkit.
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**Played relatively straight with Rowena (the replacement for Shadowstar), as she's actually one of the nicest founders of the Clans.
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**Windstar becomes The Crone.
**Thunderstar becomes Brawn.
**Shadowstar becomes Rowena.
**Riverstar becomes Ripple.
**Thunderstar becomes Brawn.
**Shadowstar becomes Rowena.
**Riverstar becomes Ripple.
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*AbandonedMine: Still seems to be the case with the Moonstone.
*AdaptationalAttractiveness: Many cat's descriptions have been changed to be more in-line with genetics.
*AdaptationalAttractiveness: Many cat's descriptions have been changed to be more in-line with genetics.
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*AdaptationNameChange: Justified in every instance, usually for more believable names or to break the incessant two-part naming format.
**Runningwind becomes Teaselfoot.
**Lionheart becomes Lionpelt.
**Smallear becomes Smallstorm.
**Whitestorm becomes Whitecloud.
**Yellowfang becomes Murkpelt. (Although she's still affectionately called by her former name by some, and Graypaw jokingly suggests changing her name to this at one point.)
**Runningnose becomes Fogcloud.
**Boulder becomes Bouldernose.
**Clawface becomes Clawedface.
**Littlecloud becomes Littlethroat.
**Whitethroat becomes Dipperfoot.
**Stumpytail becomes Batwhisker.
**Frogtail becomes Dusktail.
**Tangleburr becomes Wigeonfur.
**Wetpaw becomes Rainpaw.
**Tallpoppy becomes Poppytail.
**Applekit becomes Stoatkit.
**Poolcloud becomes Palecloud.
**Tallstar becomes Rookstar.
***Mothermouth has been changed to simply "The Mother," and is even integrated into the cat's mythology and religion.
**Runningwind becomes Teaselfoot.
**Lionheart becomes Lionpelt.
**Smallear becomes Smallstorm.
**Whitestorm becomes Whitecloud.
**Yellowfang becomes Murkpelt. (Although she's still affectionately called by her former name by some, and Graypaw jokingly suggests changing her name to this at one point.)
**Runningnose becomes Fogcloud.
**Boulder becomes Bouldernose.
**Clawface becomes Clawedface.
**Littlecloud becomes Littlethroat.
**Whitethroat becomes Dipperfoot.
**Stumpytail becomes Batwhisker.
**Frogtail becomes Dusktail.
**Tangleburr becomes Wigeonfur.
**Wetpaw becomes Rainpaw.
**Tallpoppy becomes Poppytail.
**Applekit becomes Stoatkit.
**Poolcloud becomes Palecloud.
**Tallstar becomes Rookstar.
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*ConLang: The creator made an entire new cat language, and was even kind enough to change some of the cat words into a form pronounceable for humans.
*ConLang: The creator made an entire new cat language, and was even kind enough to change some of the cat words into a form pronounceable for humans.
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*DrinkingGame: Take a sip every time the author swears when talking about a hated character.
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* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: Unlike in the original series, where [[=StarClan=]] [=StarClan=] was indisputably real, in the Reduxverse it's left up to the reader to decide, as evidence is given for both sides of the argument.
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** Downplayed with [[=ShadowClan=]], as they're still somewhat [[Main/{{Jerkass}} jerkasses]], but they're less dark and edgy (and what remains of it is explained by their strong religious devotions) and they aren't hated by everyone, nor purported to be the "evil villain Clan."
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** Downplayed with [[=ShadowClan=]], [=ShadowClan=], as they're still somewhat [[Main/{{Jerkass}} jerkasses]], but they're less dark and edgy (and what remains of it is explained by their strong religious devotions) and they aren't hated by everyone, nor purported to be the "evil villain Clan."
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* NearlyNormalAnimal:
* ShownTheirWork: The cat genetics are a lot more realistic than in the original.
* ShownTheirWork: The cat genetics are a lot more realistic than in the original.
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* NearlyNormalAnimal:
NearlyNormalAnimal: The cats are barely anthropomorphized at all anymore. The author has clearly ShownTheirWork during the [[Main/{{DeconstructionFic}} deconstruction]] phase.
* ShownTheirWork: The catgenetics genetics, Clan structure, and generally ''everything'' are a lot more realistic than in the original.
* ShownTheirWork: The cat
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Warriors Redux ({{http://warriorsredux.tumblr.com]]) is a DeconstructionFic/FixFic dedicated to the revision of the [[Literature/{{Warriors}} Warriors]] series. It attempts to revise the first arc of the series as being more believable,
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Warriors Redux ({{http://warriorsredux.(http://warriorsredux.tumblr.com]]) com) is a DeconstructionFic/FixFic dedicated to the revision of the [[Literature/{{Warriors}} Warriors]] series. It attempts to revise the first arc of the series as being more believable,
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* AscendedExtra: Where Spottedleaf had not had much action before her [[spoiler:death]] in the original arc, she is given more prominence and an expanded role in the Redux.
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*AdaptationalHeroism: Justified in all instances, as it's been done to make the world more believable.
**Downplayed with [[=ShadowClan=]], as they're still somewhat [[Main/{{Jerkass}} jerkasses]], but they're less dark and edgy (and what remains of it is explained by their strong religious devotions) and they aren't hated by everyone, nor purported to be the "evil villain Clan."
**Also double subverted, as Brokenstar stays in power, but it's given that he'll be overthrown and ShadowClan restored to its former... glory?
* AscendedExtra: Where Spottedleaf had not had much action before her [[spoiler:death]] in theoriginal arc, original, she is given more prominence and an expanded role in the Redux.
**Downplayed with [[=ShadowClan=]], as they're still somewhat [[Main/{{Jerkass}} jerkasses]], but they're less dark and edgy (and what remains of it is explained by their strong religious devotions) and they aren't hated by everyone, nor purported to be the "evil villain Clan."
**Also double subverted, as Brokenstar stays in power, but it's given that he'll be overthrown and ShadowClan restored to its former... glory?
* AscendedExtra: Where Spottedleaf had not had much action before her [[spoiler:death]] in the
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* ShownTheirWork: The cat genetics are a lot more realistic than in theoriginal.original.
*UpToEleven: With the worldbuilding, my god. ''So much work'' has been put into amending the faults of the original, revising the history, giving Clans more interesting backgrounds and personalities.
* ShownTheirWork: The cat genetics are a lot more realistic than in the
*UpToEleven: With the worldbuilding, my god. ''So much work'' has been put into amending the faults of the original, revising the history, giving Clans more interesting backgrounds and personalities.
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Warriors Redux.{{http://warriorsredux.tumblr.com}} is a DeconstructionFic/FixFic dedicated to the revision of the [[Literature/{{Warriors}} Warriors]] series. It attempts to revise the first arc of the series as being more believable,
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Warriors Redux.{{http://warriorsredux.Redux ({{http://warriorsredux.tumblr.com}} com]]) is a DeconstructionFic/FixFic dedicated to the revision of the [[Literature/{{Warriors}} Warriors]] series. It attempts to revise the first arc of the series as being more believable,
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* DeoonstructionFic: Again, on a massive scale. There's an entire section in which the creator deconstructs characters, Clans, mythology, et cetera.
* FixFic: On a massive scale, considering the amount of time and effort that must've been put in to make Warriors more believable and realistic.
* FixFic: On a massive scale, considering the amount of time and effort that must've been put in to make Warriors more believable and realistic.
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* DeoonstructionFic: Again, on DeconstructionFic: On a massive scale. There's an entire section in which the creator deconstructs characters, Clans, mythology, et cetera.
* FixFic:On As with DeconstructionFic, on a massive scale, considering the amount of time and effort that must've been put in to make Warriors more believable and realistic.
* FixFic:
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!!Warriors Redux contains examples of:
*AscendedExtra: Where Spottedleaf had not had much action before her [[spoiler:death]] in the original arc, she is given more prominence and an expanded role in the Redux.
*CoolOldLady: The Crone (the redux's version of Windstar.)
*DeoonstructionFic: Again, on a massive scale. There's an entire section in which the creator deconstructs characters, Clans, mythology, et cetera.
*FixFic: On a massive scale, considering the amount of time and effort that must've been put in to make Warriors more believable and realistic.
*MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: Unlike in the original series, where [[=StarClan=]] was indisputably real, in the Reduxverse it's left up to the reader to decide, as evidence is given for both sides of the argument.
*ShownTheirWork: The cat genetics are a lot more realistic than in the original.
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