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* DidntThinkThisThrough: [[VillainousBreakdown in a state of panic,]] "Evan"/Voldemort creates massive wards on an abandoned classroom door that only Dumbledore or Grindelwald could hope to break in the hopes of avoiding further interactions with Harry and Draco. He realizes the gaping flaw in his plan when he begins to worry that [=McGonagall=] might get around his wards if she were to transfigure the door into something else and as it is Harry circumvents the door and all of his carefully laid warding altogether by dropping in through the window on his broomstick. And because he's so heavily warded the door he's essentially locked himself in.
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** [[VillainousBreakdown in a state of panic,]] "Evan"/Voldemort creates massive wards on an abandoned classroom door that only Dumbledore or Grindelwald could hope to break in the hopes of avoiding further interactions with Harry and Draco. He realizes the gaping flaw in his plan when he begins to worry that [=McGonagall=] might get around his wards if she were to transfigure the door into something else and as it is Harry circumvents the door and all of his carefully laid warding altogether by dropping in through the window on his broomstick. And because he's so heavily warded the door he's essentially locked himself in.
** [[VillainousBreakdown in a state of panic,]] "Evan"/Voldemort creates massive wards on an abandoned classroom door that only Dumbledore or Grindelwald could hope to break in the hopes of avoiding further interactions with Harry and Draco. He realizes the gaping flaw in his plan when he begins to worry that [=McGonagall=] might get around his wards if she were to transfigure the door into something else and as it is Harry circumvents the door and all of his carefully laid warding altogether by dropping in through the window on his broomstick. And because he's so heavily warded the door he's essentially locked himself in.
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/574557/chapters/1029905?view_adult=true Voldemort Goes Back To School]]'' by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/KisaraP/pseuds/KisaraP KisaraP]] is a [[CrackFic cracky]] SlashFic and full retelling of ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheHalfBloodPrince The Half-Blood Prince]]'' in which Voldemort disguises himself as a transfer student named "Evan Farley" to gain access to Hogwarts in order to kill Harry Potter personally but things don't go according to plan... HilarityEnsues.
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* AnOfferYouCantRefuse: When Snape catches "Evan" raiding his potion stores, "Evan" forces him to let him go without punishment or telling anyone else or a flashing neon sign reading 'Dumbledore Took My Virginity And I Liked It!' will appear on the back of his trousers.
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* AnOfferYouCantRefuse: When Snape catches "Evan" raiding his potion stores, "Evan" forces him to let him go without punishment or telling anyone else or a flashing neon sign reading 'Dumbledore Took My Virginity And I Liked It!' will appear on the back of his Snape's trousers.
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* BiTheWay: Harry and Draco.
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* DirtyMindReading: Thanks to being a natural leglimens "Evan" is privy to Draco's mental images of "the Dark Lord screwing Harry."
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* BadLiar: Both "Evan" and Draco are very bad liars when flustered.
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* BadLiar: Both "Evan" and Draco are very bad liars when flustered. flustered though most of the time [[IdiotHero Harry still falls for it.]]
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* BadLiar: Both "Evan" and Draco are very bad liars when flustered.
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* ThisIsGonnaSuck: This is "Evan's" reaction when he fails to escape on Harry's broom and is about to become acquainted with the ground.
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* ThisIsGonnaSuck: This is "Evan's" reaction when he fails to escape on Harry's broom and [[NotTheFallThatKillsYou is about to become acquainted with the ground. ground.]]
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** [[WhatAnIdiot Also "Evan" antagonized Snape, the only person who can supply him with the potions he needs, and hopes to just control him with blackmail and didn't think to obliviate him afterwards.]]
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis: Snape... speaks... like this.
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* BrainBleach: Harry and Draco want some after imagining Harry having sex with Voldemort. "Evan" is surprised to find he's actually ''hurt'' by their reaction.
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* AnOfferYouCantRefuse: When Snape catches "Evan" raiding his potion stores, "Evan" forces him to let him go without punishment or telling anyone else or a flashing neon sign reading 'Dumbledore Took My Virginity And I Liked It!' will appear on the back of his trousers.
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* TheDogBitesBack: after "Evan" steals from Snape's potion stores and humiliates him Snape plans to sabotage him in the near future.
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* DontYouDarePityMe: "Evan" gets annoyed when everyone is fussing over him in the infirmary.
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* TransparentCloset: When Draco is caught kissing another boy [[BlatantLies he insists that he was]] [[IsThatWhatTheyreCallingItNow "just saying goodnight."]]
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* ButtMonkey: Voldemort, full stop. Harry and Draco get this too to a lesser extent.
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-->'''"Evan":''' Oh, the reason I, uh, can't ask them, is uh, because they're both dead.
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-->'''"Evan":''' Oh, the reason I, uh, can't ask them, is uh, [[VillainsNeverLie because they're both dead.]]
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-->'''Harry:''' Why can't you just directly ask your mother or father? You could Fire-Call them, right?
-->'''"Evan":''' Oh, the reason I, uh, can't ask them, is uh, because they're both dead.
-->'''Harry:''' Oh, I'm, er, so sorry. I, er, know what it's like to... not have a family.
-->'''Draco:''' Nice one, Potter. I think the prize for the Gryffindor's stupidest House-member just got handed over from the Weasel to you.
-->'''Harry:''' Why can't you just directly ask your mother or father? You could Fire-Call them, right?
-->'''"Evan":''' Oh, the reason I, uh, can't ask them, is uh, because they're both dead.
-->'''Harry:''' Oh, I'm, er, so sorry. I, er, know what it's like to... not have a family.
-->'''Draco:''' Nice one, Potter. I think the prize for the Gryffindor's stupidest House-member just got handed over from the Weasel to you.
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* SorryToInterrupt: Madame Pomfrey returns to find Draco making out with "Evan."
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* VitriolicBestBuds: Harry and Draco after bonding over their concern for "Evan."
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* VillainousBreakdown: "Evan"/Voldemort ''freaks'' after "the library incident."
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: [[VillainousBreakdown in a state of panic,]] "Evan"/Voldemort creates massive wards on an abandoned classroom door that only Dumbledore or Grindelwald could hope to break in the hopes of avoiding further interactions with Harry and Draco. He realizes the gaping flaw in his plan when he begins to worry that [=McGonagall=] might get around his wards if she were to transfigure the door into something else and as it is Harry circumvents the door and all of his careful carefully laid warding altogether by dropping in through the window on his broomstick. And because he's so heavily warded the door he's essentially locked himself in.
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* ThisIsGonnaSuck: This is "Evan's" reaction when he fails to escape on Harry's broom and is about to become acquainted with the ground.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: [[VillainousBreakdown in a state of panic,]] "Evan"/Voldemort creates massive wards on an abandoned classroom door that only Dumbledore or Grindelwald could hope to break in the hopes of avoiding further interactions with Harry and Draco. He realizes the gaping flaw in his plan when he begins to worry that [=McGonagall=] might get around his wards if she were to transfigure the door into something else and as it is Harry circumvents the door and all of his careful laid warding altogether by dropping in through the window on his broomstick. And because he's so heavily warded the door he's essentially locked himself in.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: In [[VillainousBreakdown in a state of panic, "Evan" panic,]] "Evan"/Voldemort creates massive wards on an abandoned classroom door that only Dumbledore or Grindelwald could hope to break in the hopes of avoiding further interactions with Harry and Draco. He realizes the gaping flaw in his plan when he begins to worry that : [=McGonagall=] might get around his wards if she were to transfigure the door into something else and as it is Harry circumvents the door and all of his careful laid warding altogether by dropping in through the window on his broomstick. And because he's heavily warded the door he's essentially locked himself in.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: In a state of panic, "Evan" creates massive wards on an abandoned classroom door that only Dumbledore or Grindelwald could hope to break in the hopes of avoiding further interactions with Harry and Draco.
realizes the gaping flaw in his plan when he begins to worry that McGonagall might get around his wards if she were to transfigure the door into something and as it is Harry circumvents the door and all of his careful warding altogether by dropping in through the window on his broomstick. And because he's heavily warded the door he's essentially locked himself in.
realizes the gaping flaw in his plan when he begins to worry that McGonagall might get around his wards if she were to transfigure the door into something and as it is Harry circumvents the door and all of his careful warding altogether by dropping in through the window on his broomstick. And because he's heavily warded the door he's essentially locked himself in.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: In a state of panic, "Evan" creates massive wards on an abandoned classroom door that only Dumbledore or Grindelwald could hope to break in the hopes of avoiding further interactions with Harry and Draco. \n He realizes the gaping flaw in his plan when he begins to worry that McGonagall : [=McGonagall=] might get around his wards if she were to transfigure the door into something and as it is Harry circumvents the door and all of his careful warding altogether by dropping in through the window on his broomstick. And because he's heavily warded the door he's essentially locked himself in.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: In a state of panic, "Evan" creates massive wards on an abandoned classroom door that only Dumbledore or Grindelwald could hope to break in the hopes of avoiding further interactions with Harry and Draco.
realizes the gaping flaw in his plan when he begins to worry that McGonagall might get around his wards if she were to transfigure the door into something and as it is Harry circumvents the door and all of his careful warding altogether by dropping in through the window on hisbroomstick and broomstick. And because he's heavily warded the door he's essentially locked himself in.
realizes the gaping flaw in his plan when he begins to worry that McGonagall might get around his wards if she were to transfigure the door into something and as it is Harry circumvents the door and all of his careful warding altogether by dropping in through the window on his
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/574557/chapters/1029905?view_adult=true Voldemort Goes Back To School]]'' by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/KisaraP/pseuds/KisaraP KisaraP]] is a [[CrackFic cracky]] SlashFic and full retelling of ''The Half-Blood Prince'' in which Voldemort disguises himself as a transfer student named "Evan Farley" to gain access to Hogwarts in order to kill Harry Potter personally but things don't go according to plan... HilarityEnsues.
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/574557/chapters/1029905?view_adult=true Voldemort Goes Back To School]]'' by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/KisaraP/pseuds/KisaraP KisaraP]] is a [[CrackFic cracky]] SlashFic and full retelling of ''The ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheHalfBloodPrince The Half-Blood Prince'' Prince]]'' in which Voldemort disguises himself as a transfer student named "Evan Farley" to gain access to Hogwarts in order to kill Harry Potter personally but things don't go according to plan... HilarityEnsues.
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* NoEscapeButDown: "Evan" leaps out a fourth story window to get away from Harry and Draco.
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* GoKartingWithBowser: Harry shares the Marauder's Map with Draco when they have the common interest of finding Evan to see if he's alright.
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/574557/chapters/1029905?view_adult=true Voldemort Goes Back To School]]'' by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/KisaraP/pseuds/KisaraP KisaraP]] is a [[CrackFic Cracky]] SlashFic and full retelling of ''The Half-Blood Prince'' in which Voldemort disguises himself as a transfer student named "Evan Farley" to gain access to Hogwarts in order to kill Harry Potter personally but things don't go according to plan... HilarityEnsues.
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/574557/chapters/1029905?view_adult=true Voldemort Goes Back To School]]'' by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/KisaraP/pseuds/KisaraP KisaraP]] is a [[CrackFic Cracky]] cracky]] SlashFic and full retelling of ''The Half-Blood Prince'' in which Voldemort disguises himself as a transfer student named "Evan Farley" to gain access to Hogwarts in order to kill Harry Potter personally but things don't go according to plan... HilarityEnsues.