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* BrokenAesop: Foal!Siren once got sent to a shrink for reading one into a fairy tale.
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* BrokenAesop: BrokenAesop[[invoked]]: In-universe. Foal!Siren once got sent to a shrink for reading one into a fairy tale.
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* WhatWereYouThinking: “Did you just agree to complete a vital mission on a short time limit with no idea—” “Shut up, Berry. When I want your opinion I’ll ask Trixie.”
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* WhatWereYouThinking: “Did "Did you just agree to complete a vital mission on a short time limit with no idea—” “Shut idea-" "Shut up, Berry. When I want your opinion I’ll I'll ask Trixie.”"
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* {{Yangire}}: White Wash.
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* AxeCrazy: Whitewash and [[spoiler: Rarity]] turn out to be this.
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* AxeCrazy: AxCrazy: Whitewash and [[spoiler: Rarity]] turn out to be this.
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* [[CharmPerson Charm Pony]]: Green, through Heart's Desire, has the ''Would you kindly...'' power.
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* [[CharmPerson Charm Pony]]: CharmPerson: Green, through Heart's Desire, has the ''Would you kindly...'' power.
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* DrivenToSuicide: Berry Punch's backstory. She mentions it in such a nonchalant way that Siren is taken aback.
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* DrivenToSuicide: DrivenToSuicide:
** Berry Punch's backstory. She mentions it in such a nonchalant way that Siren is taken aback.
** Berry Punch's backstory. She mentions it in such a nonchalant way that Siren is taken aback.
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* SanitySlippage: Happens as a marker's addiction gets out of hand.
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* SanitySlippage: SanitySlippage:
** Happens as a marker's addiction gets out of hand.
** Happens as a marker's addiction gets out of hand.
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** When she first meets Epiphany, Siren is passing the time by reading [[Fanfic/FalloutEquestria Fallout: Equestria]].
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** When she first meets Epiphany, Siren is passing the time by reading [[Fanfic/FalloutEquestria Fallout: Equestria]].''Fanfic/FalloutEquestria''.
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* UndyingLoyalty: Whatever else can be said about Siren, she seems to adore Celestia wholeheartedly.
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* UndyingLoyalty: UndyingLoyalty:
** Whatever else can be said about Siren, she seems to adore Celestia wholeheartedly.
** Whatever else can be said about Siren, she seems to adore Celestia wholeheartedly.
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* ShoutOut: Trixie informs Siren that if she can't make it out of Serpent's Wharf, the Markers will kill her and rape her, and if she's lucky [[{{Series/Firefly}} they'll do it in that order.]]
** Siren mentions the fan songs Music/LullabyForAPrincess and [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kPjVCIX5Fvs The Moon Rises]].
** Siren mentions the fan songs Music/LullabyForAPrincess and [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kPjVCIX5Fvs The Moon Rises]].
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** Trixie informs Siren that if she can't make it out of Serpent's Wharf, the Markers will kill her and rape her, and if she's lucky [[{{Series/Firefly}} they'll do it in that order.]]
** Siren mentions the fan songs Music/LullabyForAPrincess and[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kPjVCIX5Fvs The Moon Rises]].Music/TheMoonRises.
** Trixie informs Siren that if she can't make it out of Serpent's Wharf, the Markers will kill her and rape her, and if she's lucky [[{{Series/Firefly}} they'll do it in that order.]]
** Siren mentions the fan songs Music/LullabyForAPrincess and
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* BenevolentBoss / [[AFatherToHisMen A Mother To Her Ponies]]: Diamond Tiara genuinely cares for those under her, bringing her into conflict with Trixie when she thinks Siren got several of her guards killed during a riot.
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* BenevolentBoss / [[AFatherToHisMen A Mother To Her Ponies]]: BenevolentBoss: Diamond Tiara genuinely cares for those under her, bringing her into conflict with Trixie when she thinks Siren got several of her guards killed during a riot.
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* [[EmotionlessGirl Emotionless Mare]]: Berry.
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* [[EmotionlessGirl Emotionless Mare]]: EmotionlessGirl: Berry.
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* [[HitmanWithAHeart Hitmare With A Heart]]: Green seems to be this.
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* [[HitmanWithAHeart Hitmare With A Heart]]: HitmanWithAHeart: Green seems to be this.
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* [[MistakenForJunkie Mistaken For Insane Marker]]: Siren is this after all the contradicting drugs she'd been given [[MushroomSamba warp her mind]].
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* [[MistakenForJunkie Mistaken For Insane Marker]]: MistakenForJunkie: Siren is this after all the contradicting drugs she'd been given [[MushroomSamba warp her mind]].
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* [[PoisonousPerson Poisonous Pony]]: Berry Punch, perhaps.
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* [[PoisonousPerson Poisonous Pony]]: PoisonousPerson: Berry Punch, perhaps.
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* TemptingFate: Green tries to encourage Siren by telling her that she's as good as home. Siren points out that in a play, that's usually a sign that something's about to go horribly wrong.
** And she's right.
* [[ThirdPersonPerson Third Pony Pony]]: Trixie, even in private.
** And she's right.
* [[ThirdPersonPerson Third Pony Pony]]: Trixie, even in private.
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* TemptingFate: Green tries to encourage Siren by telling her that she's as good as home. Siren points out that in a play, that's usually a sign that something's about to go horribly wrong. She's right.
** And she's right.
* [[ThirdPersonPerson Third Pony Pony]]: ThirdPersonPerson: Trixie, even in private.
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** Siren mentions the fan songs [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H4tyvJJzSDk Lullaby For A Princess]] and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kPjVCIX5Fvs The Moon Rises]].
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** Siren mentions the fan songs [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H4tyvJJzSDk Lullaby For A Princess]] Music/LullabyForAPrincess and [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kPjVCIX5Fvs The Moon Rises]].
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''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' meets ''Franchise/BioShock''. Is a mare not entitled to the sweat of her brow?
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''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' meets ''Franchise/BioShock''.''VideoGame/BioShock''. Is a mare not entitled to the sweat of her brow?
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The first book of the series, ''Siren Song'', is complete, and can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/87120/siren-song here]]. The second book, ''Daring Do'', can be found half-complete [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/175220/daring-do here]]. Unfortunately, the author [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/GaPJaxie GaPJaxie]] has [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/509830/a-major-announcement announced the series' cancellation]] in order to pursue original fiction. He'll instead upload deleted scenes, behind-the-scenes content, a series bible, and more.
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The first book of the series, ''Siren Song'', is complete, and can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/87120/siren-song here]]. The second book, ''Daring Do'', can be found half-complete [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/175220/daring-do here]]. Unfortunately, the author [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/GaPJaxie GaPJaxie]] has [[http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/509830/a-major-announcement announced the series' cancellation]] in order to pursue original fiction. He'll instead upload deleted scenes, behind-the-scenes content, a series bible, and more.
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''{{Fanfic/Vision}}'' is an ongoing series by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/GaPJaxie GaPJaxie]], and it's first book, ''Siren Song'', can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/87120/vision here]]. A second book, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/175220/daring-do Daring Do]]'', is ongoing.
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* ShoutOut: Trixie informs Siren that if she can't make it out of Serpent's Wharf, the Markers will kill her and rape her, and if she's lucky [[{{Firefly}} they'll do it in that order.]]
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* ShoutOut: Trixie informs Siren that if she can't make it out of Serpent's Wharf, the Markers will kill her and rape her, and if she's lucky [[{{Firefly}} [[{{Series/Firefly}} they'll do it in that order.]]
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''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' meets ''VideoGame/{{Bioshock}}''. Is a mare not entitled to the sweat of her brow?
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''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' meets ''VideoGame/{{Bioshock}}''.''Franchise/BioShock''. Is a mare not entitled to the sweat of her brow?
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** When she first meets Epiphany, Siren is passing the time by reading [[Fanfic/FalloutEquestria Fallout: Equestria]].
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* BavarianFireDrill: Echo's disguise while walking about The Pavillon? Goggles and clipboard.
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* DefectorFromDecadence: Epiphany. [[spoiler: [[Manga/DeathNote Exactly as planned.]]]]
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* DefectorFromDecadence: Epiphany. [[spoiler: [[Manga/DeathNote Exactly as planned.]]]]]]
* EyeScream: How [[spoiler: Rarity gets her comeuppance]].
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Green.]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: HeroicSacrifice: Green.]]
* ShapeshifterGuiltTrip: Siren buys herself a second by [[spoiler: imitating Sweetie Belle's voice]].
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* TakenForGranite: [[spoiler: Epiphany.]]
** [[spoiler: And now, Green.]]
** [[spoiler: And now, Green.]]
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* TakenForGranite: [[spoiler: Epiphany.]]
** [[spoiler: And now,Epiphany and Green.]]
** [[spoiler: And now,
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* WhatWereYouThinking: “Did you just agree to complete a vital mission on a short time limit with no idea—” “Shut up, Berry. When I want your opinion I’ll ask Trixie.”
