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* TheBeard: Chapter 2 reveals that Neptune is unwittingly this for Weiss.
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** Neptune was more of a CasanovaWannabe in canon, but he starts out as more of a plain NiceGuy at the start. [[spoiler: He even accepts the fact that Weiss is a lesbian after she confesses despite the fact that it clearly hurts him to know this.]]
** Jacques (infamous for being an {{Abusive Parent|s}} in canon) and Willow (who had a bad case of ParentalNeglect) are genuinely GoodParents in this story. They are supportive of their daughter and treat her with love and affection. [[spoiler: They even accept the fact that she's a lesbian.]]
* AdaptationalSexuality: Several characters in this story have sexual orientations that are changed from what's established in canon.
** Jacques (infamous for being an {{Abusive Parent|s}} in canon) and Willow (who had a bad case of ParentalNeglect) are genuinely GoodParents in this story. They are supportive of their daughter and treat her with love and affection. [[spoiler: They even accept the fact that she's a lesbian.]]
* AdaptationalSexuality: Several characters in this story have sexual orientations that are changed from what's established in canon.
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** Neptune was more Downplayed in the case of Neptune. In canon he's a good-natured guy overall, but does possess some flaws including being a bit of a CasanovaWannabe in canon, but CasanovaWannabe. In this story he starts out as more of a plain NiceGuy lacking his canon flaws at the start. [[spoiler: He even accepts the fact that Weiss is a lesbian after she confesses despite the fact that it clearly hurts him to know this.]]
** Jacques (infamous for being an {{Abusive Parent|s}} in canon) and Willow (who had a bad case of ParentalNeglect) are genuinely GoodParents in this story. They are supportive of their daughter and treat her with love and affection. [[spoiler: They even accept the fact that she'sa lesbian.gay.]]
* AdaptationalSexuality: Several characters in this story have sexual orientations that are changed from what's established incanon.canon with some cases being before any canon confirmations.
** Ruby is gay in this story whereas in canon there's nothing indicating such.
** Jacques (infamous for being an {{Abusive Parent|s}} in canon) and Willow (who had a bad case of ParentalNeglect) are genuinely GoodParents in this story. They are supportive of their daughter and treat her with love and affection. [[spoiler: They even accept the fact that she's
* AdaptationalSexuality: Several characters in this story have sexual orientations that are changed from what's established in
** Ruby is gay in this story whereas in canon there's nothing indicating such.
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** Yang is a straight girl with a PragmaticPansexuality streak in this story. In canon, while she's shown attraction to boys, she gets confirmed as bisexual [[spoiler:in Volume 9 when she gets together with Blake.]]
** [[spoiler: Qrow showed some attraction to women in canon and sometimes made jokes about it. Here, he's gay and has no interest in women despite his sister's efforts to change that.]]
** [[spoiler: Qrow showed some attraction to women in canon and sometimes made jokes about it. Here, he's gay and has no interest in women despite his sister's efforts to change that.]]
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** Yang is a straight girl with a PragmaticPansexuality [[PragmaticPansexuality gay-for-pay]] streak in this story. In canon, while she's shown attraction to boys, she gets confirmed as bisexual [[spoiler:in Volume 9 when she gets together with Blake.]]
** [[spoiler: Qrow showedsome attraction to women in canon and sometimes made jokes about it. Here, he's gay and has no interest in women despite his sister's efforts to change that.]]
** [[spoiler: Qrow showed
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: While Taurus' beating and rape of Nia is horrifying, she isn't the most sympathetic victim since she is a SerialRapist herself [[spoiler: who allowed the girls to be harvested for organs]].
-->'''Author's Note:''' You can have some sympathy, but let's be real. She was a scumbag, too.
-->'''Author's Note:''' You can have some sympathy, but let's be real. She was a scumbag, too.
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** The sex scene with Neptune and Weiss. Due to the Weiss [[LieBackAndThinkOfEngland not being interested in it]], the idea isn't really as sexy as it could be otherwise.
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** The sex scene with Neptune and Weiss. Due to the Weiss [[LieBackAndThinkOfEngland not being interested in it]], it]] [[IncompatibleOrientation as a result of her homosexuality]] [[AdaptationalSexuality in this story]], the idea isn't really as sexy as it could be otherwise.
