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** In the second chapter, Tang Shen visits an antique called Second Time Around ran by Aggie O'Neil, an the antique store April O'Neil ran in [[Comicbook/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtlesMirage the original Mirage comics]], the [[WesternAnimation/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles2003 2003 series]] and the [[Film/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles live]]-[[Film/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtlesIITheSecretOfTheOoze action]] [[Film/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtlesIII trilogy]].
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** In the second chapter, Tang Shen visits an antique called Second Time Around ran by Aggie O'Neil, an the antique store April O'Neil ran in [[Comicbook/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtlesMirage the original Mirage comics]], the [[WesternAnimation/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles2003 2003 series]] and the [[Film/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles [[Film/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles1990 live]]-[[Film/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtlesIITheSecretOfTheOoze action]] [[Film/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtlesIII trilogy]].
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* MakingRoomForBaby: After Tang Shen has quadruplets, the Hamato clan moves into a house that would double as a dojo.
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Many years ago, Tang Shen had met two boys; Hamato Yoshi and Hamato Saki. Both were infatuated with her kindness, her beauty, and how gentle she was. And overtime, Shen had grown to care for the two of them. But she could only love one as her true love.
It wasn't easy, at first. But she did not come to regret her decision. Questioned it? Maybe, but never regret.
The two brothers, like all brothers, developed a rivalry in everything, including a competition on who could best whom in ninjitsu. But the rivalry grew bitter when both fell for Tang Shen.
And when Saki learned the truth of his heritage, added with Yoshi and Shen's marriage and first-born, a bridge was burned between them. And forever did Saki consume himself in his rage, fuelling a fire he had inadvertently caused in his family's old home.
The two brothers fought, and Shen, shielding her beloved from a killing blow, took the fatal hit.
She survived, unbeknownst to Saki, and Yoshi mourned little Miwa and the two fled to New York where they could safely hide from Saki's ire and vengeance.
Little they knew, their lives would forever change from that day forth, with four new additions.
It wasn't easy, at first. But she did not come to regret her decision. Questioned it? Maybe, but never regret.
The two brothers, like all brothers, developed a rivalry in everything, including a competition on who could best whom in ninjitsu. But the rivalry grew bitter when both fell for Tang Shen.
And when Saki learned the truth of his heritage, added with Yoshi and Shen's marriage and first-born, a bridge was burned between them. And forever did Saki consume himself in his rage, fuelling a fire he had inadvertently caused in his family's old home.
The two brothers fought, and Shen, shielding her beloved from a killing blow, took the fatal hit.
She survived, unbeknownst to Saki, and Yoshi mourned little Miwa and the two fled to New York where they could safely hide from Saki's ire and vengeance.
Little they knew, their lives would forever change from that day forth, with four new additions.
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* ArbitrarilyLargeBankAccount: Mei Pai Chi is implied to be rich. She had a ridiculous amount of money to casually give to Yoshi and Tang Shen to rebuild their lives in New York, and later she rents an ''elephant'' for the boy's birthday party, [[ForTheLulz apparently as a joke at Yoshi and Tang Shen's expense]].
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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: Leonardo is portrayed as the least sociable of his brothers, having the fewest friends among them and even [[spoiler:partakes in SelfHarm via cutting]] when the stress of leadership starts weighing on him.
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* YoungerAndHipper: Like with April and Casey, Vernon Fenwick is much younger here, hapening to share a few classes with Leo.
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* YoungerAndHipper: Like with April and Casey, Vernon Fenwick is much younger here, hapening to share a few classes with Leo.
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** Murikami's granddaughter is named Lotus, an obvious reference to Lotus Blossom from the [[WesternAnimation/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles1987 1987 series]].
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** While's April's aunt goes unnamed in the parent series, here her name is Aunt Agatha, a character in the [[WesternAnimation/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles1987 1987]] episode "Case of the Hot Kimono".
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: While we weren't introduced to Shinigami in the series [[Recap/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles2012S4E15CityAtWar until midway through Season 4]], here we are introduced to her partying with Karai right before the Shredder finds out that there is presence of the Hamato Clan in New York.
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* InSpiteOfANail: While Karai isn't Miwa in this version, she was still raised by Shredder to believe that Yoshi killed her mother.
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* LethalChef: Without supervision, Michelangelo tends to be this, having hospitalized several people with his contributions to the bake sale.
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** While's April's aunt goes unnamed in the parent series, here her name is Aunt Agatha, a character in the [[WesternAnimation/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles1987 1987]] episode "Case of the Hot Kimono".
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** The antique Tang Shen gets from Second Time Around is a figuring of a rat and four turtles, an obvious allusion to Splinter and the Turtles from canon.
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** The antique Tang Shen gets from Second Time Around is a figuring figurine of a rat and four turtles, an obvious allusion to Splinter and the Turtles from canon.canon. According to Aggie, it was sculpted by an artist named [[Creator/PeterLaird Peter]] [[Creator/KevinEastman Eastman]] who was popular in TheEighties.
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** In the second chapter, Tang Shen visits an antique called Second Time Around, Around ran by Aggie O'Neil, an the antique store April O'Neil ran in [[Comicbook/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtlesMirage the original Mirage comics]], the [[WesternAnimation/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles2003 2003 series]] and the [[Film/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles live]]-[[Film/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtlesIITheSecretOfTheOoze action]] [[Film/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtlesIII trilogy]].
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** In the second chapter, Tang Shen visits an antique called Second Time Around, an the antique store April O'Neil ran in [[Comicbook/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtlesMirage the original Mirage comics]] comics]], the [[WesternAnimation/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles2003 2003 series]] and the [[Film/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles live]]-[[Film/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtlesIITheSecretOfTheOoze action]] [[Film/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtlesIII trilogy]].
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* MythologyGag: Tang Shen's friend who helped her and Yoshi move to America is named [[Series/NinjaTurtlesTheNextMutation Mei Pei Chi]].
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** Tang Shen's friend who helped her and Yoshi move to America is named [[Series/NinjaTurtlesTheNextMutation Mei PeiChi]]. Chi]].
** In the second chapter, Tang Shen visits an antique called Second Time Around, an the antique store April O'Neil ran in [[Comicbook/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtlesMirage the original Mirage comics]] and the [[Film/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles live]]-[[Film/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtlesIITheSecretOfTheOoze action]] [[Film/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtlesIII trilogy]].
** The antique Tang Shen gets from Second Time Around is a figuring of a rat and four turtles, an obvious allusion to Splinter and the Turtles from canon.
** Tang Shen's friend who helped her and Yoshi move to America is named [[Series/NinjaTurtlesTheNextMutation Mei Pei
** In the second chapter, Tang Shen visits an antique called Second Time Around, an the antique store April O'Neil ran in [[Comicbook/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtlesMirage the original Mirage comics]] and the [[Film/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles live]]-[[Film/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtlesIITheSecretOfTheOoze action]] [[Film/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtlesIII trilogy]].
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* INeedAFreakingDrink: Before the boys were conceived, Yoshi would sometimes help himself to red wine when his daughter's death and clan's collapse start to get to him.
* ItsAllMyFault: Shen feels responsible for Miwa's death because the place she hid her while the Foot Clan attacked burned down before she could get to her.
* ItsAllMyFault: Shen feels responsible for Miwa's death because the place she hid her while the Foot Clan attacked burned down before she could get to her.
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* MythologyGag: It is passively mentioned that one of Tang Shen's friends was named [[Series/NinjaTurtlesTheNextMutation Mei Pei Chi]].
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* MythologyGag: It is passively mentioned that one of Tang Shen's friends was friend who helped her and Yoshi move to America is named [[Series/NinjaTurtlesTheNextMutation Mei Pei Chi]].Chi]].
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Many years ago, Tang Shen had met two boys; Hamato Yoshi and Hamato Saki. Both were infatuated with her kindness, her beauty, and how gentle she was. And overtime, Shen had grown to care for the two of them. But she could only love one as her true love.
It wasn't easy, at first. But she did not come to regret her decision. Questioned it? Maybe, but never regret.
The two brothers, like all brothers, developed a rivalry in everything, including a competition on who could best whom in ninjitsu. But the rivalry grew bitter when both fell for Tang Shen.
And when Saki learned the truth of his heritage, added with Yoshi and Shen's marriage and first-born, a bridge was burned between them. And forever did Saki consume himself in his rage, fuelling a fire he had inadvertently caused in his family's old home.
The two brothers fought, and Shen, shielding her beloved from a killing blow, took the fatal hit.
She survived, unbeknownst to Saki, and Yoshi mourned little Miwa and the two fled to New York where they could safely hide from Saki's ire and vengeance.
Little they knew, their lives would forever change from that day forth, with four new additions.
''Underneath the Sakura Tree'' is a ''WesternAnimation/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles2012'' fanfic written by [=BabyPinkPuppy=] where Tang Shen survived that fated night and the Turtles are her and Splinter's human sons.
This fanfic can be read on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/25520650/chapters/61918573 here]].
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!!''Underneath the Sakura Tree'' provides examples of:
* AdaptationSpeciesChange:
** While Leonardo, Raphael, Donatello and Michelangelo were mutant turtles in canon, here they are very much human.
** Downplayed with Hamato Yoshi. Unlike his canon counterpart, Splinter remains human.
* DeadGuyJunior: Miwa was named after her then-deceased paternal grandmother.
* DeathByAdaptation: While in canon it was revealed that Miwa survived the night her mother died and was raised as Karai, here that isn't the case.
* DecompositeCharacter: This version of Karai is not Hamato Miwa, Miwa having really died when the Hamato estate burned down.
* MythologyGag: It is passively mentioned that one of Tang Shen's friends was named [[Series/NinjaTurtlesTheNextMutation Mei Pei Chi]].
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: While in canon it's implied that Splinter's human DNA is what gave the mutant turtles their humanoid physiologies (making him their biological father in the loosest sense of the term), here they are Splinter and Tang Shen's naturally born sons.
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It wasn't easy, at first. But she did not come to regret her decision. Questioned it? Maybe, but never regret.
The two brothers, like all brothers, developed a rivalry in everything, including a competition on who could best whom in ninjitsu. But the rivalry grew bitter when both fell for Tang Shen.
And when Saki learned the truth of his heritage, added with Yoshi and Shen's marriage and first-born, a bridge was burned between them. And forever did Saki consume himself in his rage, fuelling a fire he had inadvertently caused in his family's old home.
The two brothers fought, and Shen, shielding her beloved from a killing blow, took the fatal hit.
She survived, unbeknownst to Saki, and Yoshi mourned little Miwa and the two fled to New York where they could safely hide from Saki's ire and vengeance.
Little they knew, their lives would forever change from that day forth, with four new additions.
''Underneath the Sakura Tree'' is a ''WesternAnimation/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles2012'' fanfic written by [=BabyPinkPuppy=] where Tang Shen survived that fated night and the Turtles are her and Splinter's human sons.
This fanfic can be read on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/25520650/chapters/61918573 here]].
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!!''Underneath the Sakura Tree'' provides examples of:
* AdaptationSpeciesChange:
** While Leonardo, Raphael, Donatello and Michelangelo were mutant turtles in canon, here they are very much human.
** Downplayed with Hamato Yoshi. Unlike his canon counterpart, Splinter remains human.
* DeadGuyJunior: Miwa was named after her then-deceased paternal grandmother.
* DeathByAdaptation: While in canon it was revealed that Miwa survived the night her mother died and was raised as Karai, here that isn't the case.
* DecompositeCharacter: This version of Karai is not Hamato Miwa, Miwa having really died when the Hamato estate burned down.
* MythologyGag: It is passively mentioned that one of Tang Shen's friends was named [[Series/NinjaTurtlesTheNextMutation Mei Pei Chi]].
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: While in canon it's implied that Splinter's human DNA is what gave the mutant turtles their humanoid physiologies (making him their biological father in the loosest sense of the term), here they are Splinter and Tang Shen's naturally born sons.
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