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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/621446 Under the Big Top]]'' is a 2013 ''Series/{{Supernatural}}'' fanfic by lokissoldier. The story is about Castiel, a circus tightrope walker, and Dean, the circus's ringmaster, and the end of their doomed relationship.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/621446 Under the Big Top]]'' is a 2013 ''Series/{{Supernatural}}'' fanfic by lokissoldier. The story is about Castiel, a circus tightrope walker, and Dean, the circus's ringmaster, and the end of their doomed relationship. \n The story takes place on one fateful day after Dean breaks up with Castiel because he wants to stay in the circus while Castiel wants to run away.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/621446 Under the Big Top]]'' is a 2013 Series/{{Supernatural}} fanfic by lokissoldier. The story is about Castiel, a circus tightrope walker, and Dean, the circus's ringmaster, and the end of their doomed relationship.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/621446 Under the Big Top]]'' is a 2013 Series/{{Supernatural}} ''Series/{{Supernatural}}'' fanfic by lokissoldier. The story is about Castiel, a circus tightrope walker, and Dean, the circus's ringmaster, and the end of their doomed relationship.
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''Under the Big Top'' is a 2013 Series/{{Supernatural}} fanfic by lokissoldier. The story is about Castiel, a circus tightrope walker, and Dean, the circus's ringmaster, and the end of their doomed relationship. It can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/621446 here]].
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* TightropeWalking: Castiel is a tightrope walker in the circus. [[spoiler:At the end of the story, he kills himself by deliberating stepping off of the rope without a safety net.]]
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* TightropeWalking: Castiel is a tightrope walker in the circus. [[spoiler:At the end of the story, he kills himself by deliberating deliberately stepping off of the rope without a safety net.]]
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* DownerEnding: Castiel commits suicide, and Dean is left cradling his body as he reflects on the past.
* DressingToDie: Castiel puts on his costume and makeup before he commits suicide by stepping off the tightrope.
* FalseReassurance: After Sam confronts Castiel about how his breakup with Dean is affecting the rest of the troupe, Castiel assures him that "After tonight, everything will be better." Castiel plans on committing suicide that night.
* DressingToDie: Castiel puts on his costume and makeup before he commits suicide by stepping off the tightrope.
* FalseReassurance: After Sam confronts Castiel about how his breakup with Dean is affecting the rest of the troupe, Castiel assures him that "After tonight, everything will be better." Castiel plans on committing suicide that night.
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* DownerEnding: Castiel [[spoiler:Castiel commits suicide, and Dean is left cradling his body as he reflects on the past.
past.]]
* DressingToDie:Castiel [[spoiler:Castiel puts on his costume and makeup before he commits suicide by stepping off the tightrope.
tightrope.]]
* FalseReassurance: After Sam confronts Castiel about how his breakup with Dean is affecting the rest of the troupe, Castiel assures him that "After tonight, everything will be better."Castiel [[spoiler:Castiel plans on committing suicide that night.]]
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* FalseReassurance: After Sam confronts Castiel about how his breakup with Dean is affecting the rest of the troupe, Castiel assures him that "After tonight, everything will be better."
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* TheHeroDies: Castiel dies by suicide at the end of the story.
* PleaseWakeUp: After Castiel commits suicide, Dean begs him to wake up, even though he knows he's dead.
* SpurnedIntoSuicide: After Dean refuses to run away to marry Castiel, and they break up, Castiel kills himself due to his depression.
* TightropeWalking: Castiel is a tightrope walker in the circus. At the end of the story, he kills himself by deliberating stepping off of the rope without a safety net.
* PleaseWakeUp: After Castiel commits suicide, Dean begs him to wake up, even though he knows he's dead.
* SpurnedIntoSuicide: After Dean refuses to run away to marry Castiel, and they break up, Castiel kills himself due to his depression.
* TightropeWalking: Castiel is a tightrope walker in the circus. At the end of the story, he kills himself by deliberating stepping off of the rope without a safety net.
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* TheHeroDies: Castiel [[spoiler:Castiel dies by suicide at the end of the story.
story.]]
* PleaseWakeUp:After [[spoiler:After Castiel commits suicide, Dean begs him to wake up, even though he knows he's dead.
dead.]]
* SpurnedIntoSuicide:After [[spoiler:After Dean refuses to run away to marry Castiel, and they break up, Castiel kills himself due to his depression.
depression.]]
* TightropeWalking: Castiel is a tightrope walker in the circus.At [[spoiler:At the end of the story, he kills himself by deliberating stepping off of the rope without a safety net.
net.]]
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* TightropeWalking: Castiel is a tightrope walker in the circus.
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''Under the Big Top'' is a Series/{{Supernatural}} fanfic by lokissoldier. The story is about Castiel, a circus tightrope walker, and Dean, the circus's ringmaster, and the end of their doomed relationship. It can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/621446 here]].
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''Under the Big Top'' is a 2013 Series/{{Supernatural}} fanfic by lokissoldier. The story is about Castiel, a circus tightrope walker, and Dean, the circus's ringmaster, and the end of their doomed relationship. It can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/621446 here]].
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* SpurnedIntoSuicide: After Dean refuses to run away to marry Castiel Castiel, and they break up, Castiel kills himself due to his depression.
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''Under the Big Top'' is a fanfic by lokissoldier. The story is about Castiel, a circus tightrope walker, and Dean, the circus's ringmaster, and the end of their doomed relationship. It can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/621446 here]].
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''Under the Big Top'' is a Series/{{Supernatural}} fanfic by lokissoldier. The story is about Castiel, a circus tightrope walker, and Dean, the circus's ringmaster, and the end of their doomed relationship. It can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/621446 here]].
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* PleaseWakeUp: After Castiel commits suicide, Dean begs him to wake up, even though he knows he's dead.
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* FalseReassurance: After Sam confronts Castiel about how his breakup with Dean is affecting the rest of the troupe, Castiel assures him that "After tonight, everything will be better." Castiel was planning on committing suicide.
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* FalseReassurance: After Sam confronts Castiel about how his breakup with Dean is affecting the rest of the troupe, Castiel assures him that "After tonight, everything will be better." Castiel was planning plans on committing suicide.suicide that night.
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* SpurnedIntoSuicide: Castiel kills himself due to his depression after Dean refuses to run away to marry him, and they break up.
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* SpurnedIntoSuicide: Castiel kills himself due to his depression after After Dean refuses to run away to marry him, Castiel and they break up.up, Castiel kills himself due to his depression.
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''Under the Big Top'' is a fanfic by lokissoldier. The story is about Castiel, a circus tightrope walker, and Dean, the circus's ringmaster, and the end of their doomed relationship. It can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/621446 here]].
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!!''Under the Big Top'' contains examples of:
* CircusBrat: Castiel and his family all grew up in the circus. Castiel became a tightrope walker, but he hated the circus and planned to run away with Dean. Then Dean changed his mind about leaving the circus, and they broke up.
* DownerEnding: Castiel commits suicide, and Dean is left cradling his body as he reflects on the past.
* DressingToDie: Castiel puts on his costume and makeup before he commits suicide by stepping off the tightrope.
* FalseReassurance: After Sam confronts Castiel about how his breakup with Dean is affecting the rest of the troupe, Castiel assures him that "After tonight, everything will be better." Castiel was planning on committing suicide.
* HappyFlashback: There is a flashback to the first time Dean and Castiel kissed, and when Dean promised that they would run away together.
* TheHeroDies: Castiel dies by suicide at the end of the story.
* SpurnedIntoSuicide: Castiel kills himself due to his depression after Dean refuses to run away to marry him, and they break up.
* TightropeWalking: Castiel is a tightrope walker in the circus. At the end of the story, he kills himself by deliberating stepping off of the rope without a safety net.
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!!''Under the Big Top'' contains examples of:
* CircusBrat: Castiel and his family all grew up in the circus. Castiel became a tightrope walker, but he hated the circus and planned to run away with Dean. Then Dean changed his mind about leaving the circus, and they broke up.
* DownerEnding: Castiel commits suicide, and Dean is left cradling his body as he reflects on the past.
* DressingToDie: Castiel puts on his costume and makeup before he commits suicide by stepping off the tightrope.
* FalseReassurance: After Sam confronts Castiel about how his breakup with Dean is affecting the rest of the troupe, Castiel assures him that "After tonight, everything will be better." Castiel was planning on committing suicide.
* HappyFlashback: There is a flashback to the first time Dean and Castiel kissed, and when Dean promised that they would run away together.
* TheHeroDies: Castiel dies by suicide at the end of the story.
* SpurnedIntoSuicide: Castiel kills himself due to his depression after Dean refuses to run away to marry him, and they break up.
* TightropeWalking: Castiel is a tightrope walker in the circus. At the end of the story, he kills himself by deliberating stepping off of the rope without a safety net.
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