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* BrickJoke: In the opening of "Dizzy-Lizzy", a loopy Joker randomly shouts "Ointment!". At the end of the chapter, Wolfrun cracks a joke about the statement, much to the now-lucid Joker's embarrassment.
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* BrickJoke: In the opening of "Dizzy-Lizzy", a loopy Joker randomly shouts "Ointment!".that he wants to fight a unicorn. At the end of the chapter, Wolfrun cracks a joke about the statement, much to the now-lucid Joker's embarrassment.
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** The title for the LostVoicePlot is "[[WesternAnimation/TheLittleMermaid1989 It Won't Cost Much; Just Your Voice]]".
** In that same chapter, Mashiro does the [[ComicBook/BlackPanther Wakanda]] arm-cross.
** The episode concerning Joker's comically loud sneezes is titled "[[WesternAnimation/ReadyJetGo Face Explosions]]".
** The title for the LostVoicePlot is "[[WesternAnimation/TheLittleMermaid1989 It Won't Cost Much; Just Your Voice]]".
** In that same chapter, Mashiro does the [[ComicBook/BlackPanther Wakanda]] arm-cross.
** The episode concerning Joker's comically loud sneezes is titled "[[WesternAnimation/ReadyJetGo Face Explosions]]".
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* ShoutOut:
** The title for the LostVoicePlot is "[[WesternAnimation/TheLittleMermaid1989 It Won't Cost Much; Just Your Voice]]".
** In that same chapter, Mashiro does the [[ComicBook/BlackPanther Wakanda]] arm-cross.
** The episode concerning Joker's comically loud sneezes is titled "[[WesternAnimation/ReadyJetGo Face Explosions]]".ShoutOut: [[ShoutOut/TwinklingInTheDark See here]].
** The title for the LostVoicePlot is "[[WesternAnimation/TheLittleMermaid1989 It Won't Cost Much; Just Your Voice]]".
** In that same chapter, Mashiro does the [[ComicBook/BlackPanther Wakanda]] arm-cross.
** The episode concerning Joker's comically loud sneezes is titled "[[WesternAnimation/ReadyJetGo Face Explosions]]".
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* WakingNonSequitur: In "Dizzy-Lizzy", Joker bursts awake, shouts "Ointment!", then promptly falls back asleep.
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* WakingNonSequitur: In "Dizzy-Lizzy", Joker bursts awake, shouts "Ointment!", yelling about fighting unicorns, then promptly falls back asleep.
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On May 30th, 2023, a sister story called ''Fanfic/SwarmingWithHatred'' began publication.
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* BrickJoke: In the opening of "Dazed and Confused", "Dizzy-Lizzy", a loopy Joker randomly shouts "Ointment!". At the end of the chapter, Wolfrun cracks a joke about the statement, much to the now-lucid Joker's embarrassment.
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** "Waking Up" features a brief appearance from [[Anime/FreshPrettyCure Cure Peach]] in the groupchat.
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* {{Crossover}}: While the story is primarily based on ''Anime/SmilePrecure'', the story also features characters from ''Anime/FutariWaPrettyCure'', ''Anime/FutariWaPrettyCureSplashStar'', ''Anime/SuitePrettyCure'', ''Anime/KiraKiraPrecureALaMode'', ''Anime/HealinGoodPrettyCure'', ''Anime/DeliciousPartyPrettyCure'', and ''Anime/HirogaruSkyPrettyCure''.
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* {{Crossover}}: While the story is primarily based on ''Anime/SmilePrecure'', the story also features characters from ''Anime/FutariWaPrettyCure'', ''Anime/FutariWaPrettyCureSplashStar'', ''Anime/SuitePrettyCure'', ''Anime/DokiDokiPrecure'', ''Anime/KiraKiraPrecureALaMode'', ''Anime/HealinGoodPrettyCure'', ''Anime/DeliciousPartyPrettyCure'', and ''Anime/HirogaruSkyPrettyCure''.
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* GrievousBottleyHarm: While the Cures are training using household objects, Cure Diamond brandishes a broken glass bottle.
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* ImmediateSelfContradiction: After taking a dose of Bad Energy, Akaoni pats Joker's back to try and burp him, which Joker insists he doesn't need. He burps immediately after finishing the sentence, much to his embarrassment.
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'''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/44604859/chapters/112206850 Twinkling in the Dark]]''' is a ''Anime/PrettyCure'' (primarily ''Anime/SmilePrecure'') fanfic, written by Creator/NoonboryKedabory and Creator/Gullfriend31. It began publication on January 28th, 2023.
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'''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/44604859/chapters/112206850 Twinkling in the Dark]]''' is a ''Anime/PrettyCure'' (primarily ''Anime/SmilePrecure'') fanfic, written by Creator/NoonboryKedabory and Creator/Gullfriend31.Creator/NoonboryKedabory. It began publication on January 28th, 2023.
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* HelplessKicking: Cure Custard kicks her legs to try and escape the ropes she's tied up in, but to no avail.
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* AmbiguouslyGay:
** Akaoni shows several signs of secretly being in love with Joker, such as him frequently hugging/holding him, and being jealous of his girlfriend Poisony.
** In "A Backup Plan", the LemonyNarrator quips that a scene with Wolfrun giving Joker a back massage can come off as very homoerotic, and later in the same chapter, a loopy Joker tells Akaoni that he loves him.
** Akaoni shows several signs of secretly being in love with Joker, such as him frequently hugging/holding him, and being jealous of his girlfriend Poisony.
** In "A Backup Plan", the LemonyNarrator quips that a scene with Wolfrun giving Joker a back massage can come off as very homoerotic, and later in the same chapter, a loopy Joker tells Akaoni that he loves him.
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* IllnessBlanket: In "Warming Up", Akaoni bundles Joker into a blanket to warm up.
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* UnusualEuphemism: Akaoni describes being bundled tightly into a blanket as "snug as a ferret in a cardboard tube".
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** The episode concerning Joker's comically loud sneezes is titled "[[WesternAnimation/ReadyJetGo Face Explosions]]".
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* {{Crossover}}: While the story is primarily based on ''Anime/SmilePrecure'', the story also features characters from ''Anime/FutariWaPrettyCure'', ''Anime/FutariWaPrettyCureSplashStar'', ''Anime/SuitePrettyCure'', ''Anime/KiraKiraPrecureALaMode'', ''Anime/HealinGoodPrettyCure'', and ''Anime/DeliciousPartyPrettyCure''.
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* {{Crossover}}: While the story is primarily based on ''Anime/SmilePrecure'', the story also features characters from ''Anime/FutariWaPrettyCure'', ''Anime/FutariWaPrettyCureSplashStar'', ''Anime/SuitePrettyCure'', ''Anime/KiraKiraPrecureALaMode'', ''Anime/HealinGoodPrettyCure'', ''Anime/DeliciousPartyPrettyCure'', and ''Anime/DeliciousPartyPrettyCure''.''Anime/HirogaruSkyPrettyCure''.
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* ShoutOut: The title for the LostVoicePlot is "[[WesternAnimation/TheLittleMermaid1989 It Won't Cost Much; Just Your Voice]]".
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** The title for the LostVoicePlot is "[[WesternAnimation/TheLittleMermaid1989 It Won't Cost Much; Just YourVoice]]".Voice]]".
** In that same chapter, Mashiro does the [[ComicBook/BlackPanther Wakanda]] arm-cross.
** The title for the LostVoicePlot is "[[WesternAnimation/TheLittleMermaid1989 It Won't Cost Much; Just Your
** In that same chapter, Mashiro does the [[ComicBook/BlackPanther Wakanda]] arm-cross.
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* ShoutOut: The title for the LostVoiceEpisode is "[[WesternAnimation/TheLittleMermaid1989 It Won't Cost Much; Just Your Voice]]".
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* {{Crossover}}: While the story is primarily based on ''Anime/SmilePrecure'', the story also features characters from ''Anime/FutariWaPrettyCure'', ''Anime/KiraKiraPrecureALaMode'', ''Anime/HealinGoodPrettyCure'', and ''Anime/DeliciousPartyPrettyCure''.
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* {{Crossover}}: While the story is primarily based on ''Anime/SmilePrecure'', the story also features characters from ''Anime/FutariWaPrettyCure'', ''Anime/FutariWaPrettyCureSplashStar'', ''Anime/SuitePrettyCure'', ''Anime/KiraKiraPrecureALaMode'', ''Anime/HealinGoodPrettyCure'', and ''Anime/DeliciousPartyPrettyCure''.
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* ForeheadOfDoom: PlayedForLaughs: When Majorina returns with some Bad Energy and mentions it was from someone with a big forehead, Akaoni prattles off every big-forehead Cure ''except'' the one Majorina actually stole it from (Egret).
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* TemptingFate: Joker claims the Pink Trio cannot defeat him because the Bad End Kingdom has a quartet. Cue [[BigDamnHeroes Cure Grace]].
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* PowerMakesYourHairGrow: Inverted for Cure August; her hair gets shorter when she transforms.
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* GreenThumb: Cure August's powers are nature themed.
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* RainbowPuke: The excess happy energy in Joker's system causes him to vomit a rainbow.
* SailorEarth: Nao/Cure March's sister Haru becomes a Cure called Cure August.
* SailorEarth: Nao/Cure March's sister Haru becomes a Cure called Cure August.
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* CatchYourDeathOfCold: When Miyuki scolds Candy for hogging the sheets, Candy retorts that she doesn't want to catch a cold.
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* TheCameo: Chapter 4 features a brief appearance from [[Anime/FreshPrettyCure Cure Peach]] in the groupchat.
* {{Crossover}}: While the story is primarily based on ''Anime/SmilePrecure'', the story also features characters from ''Anime/KiraKiraPrecureALaMode'', ''Anime/HealinGoodPrettyCure'', and ''Anime/DeliciousPartyPrettyCure''.
* {{Crossover}}: While the story is primarily based on ''Anime/SmilePrecure'', the story also features characters from ''Anime/KiraKiraPrecureALaMode'', ''Anime/HealinGoodPrettyCure'', and ''Anime/DeliciousPartyPrettyCure''.
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* TheCameo: Chapter 4 BrickJoke: In the opening of "Dazed and Confused", a loopy Joker randomly shouts "Ointment!". At the end of the chapter, Wolfrun cracks a joke about the statement, much to the now-lucid Joker's embarrassment.
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** "Waking Up" features a brief appearance from [[Anime/FreshPrettyCure Cure Peach]] in the groupchat.
** [[Anime/HeartcatchPrettyCure Cure Blossom]] briefly appears in "Power Nap", on patrol with Cure March.
* {{Crossover}}: While the story is primarily based on ''Anime/SmilePrecure'', the story also features characters from ''Anime/FutariWaPrettyCure'', ''Anime/KiraKiraPrecureALaMode'', ''Anime/HealinGoodPrettyCure'', and ''Anime/DeliciousPartyPrettyCure''.
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** "Waking Up" features a brief appearance from [[Anime/FreshPrettyCure Cure Peach]] in the groupchat.
** [[Anime/HeartcatchPrettyCure Cure Blossom]] briefly appears in "Power Nap", on patrol with Cure March.
* {{Crossover}}: While the story is primarily based on ''Anime/SmilePrecure'', the story also features characters from ''Anime/FutariWaPrettyCure'', ''Anime/KiraKiraPrecureALaMode'', ''Anime/HealinGoodPrettyCure'', and ''Anime/DeliciousPartyPrettyCure''.
* FreezeSneeze: In "Cold Snap", Joker sneezes after getting cold water dumped in his face.
* GetOut: Joker roars this at Wolfrun and Akaoni when he finally gets sick of their shenanigans in "Cold Snap".
* GetOut: Joker roars this at Wolfrun and Akaoni when he finally gets sick of their shenanigans in "Cold Snap".
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Cure Happy is less than pleased to find out that her actions nearly resulted in a death.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Cure Happy is less than pleased to find out that her actions nearly resulted in a death. Cure Precious is shown to be quite remorseful about the incident as well.
* OhCrap: This is the Bad End Trio's reaction to finding out they were supposed to be keeping Joker warm while he had a high fever, as opposed to trying to cool him down.
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* SlumberParty: In Chapter 3, "Bruises", Nodoka has a slumber party with Chiyu, Hinata, and Asumi.Asumi.
* SoupIsMedicine: The rice porridge variant occurs in "Dazed and Confused", where Wolfrun has Joker eat some congee infused with Bad Energy to snap him out of his loopiness.
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* TalkingInYourSleep: Joker has a tendency to mumble in his sleep.
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'''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/44604859/chapters/112206850 Twinkling in the Dark]]''' is a ''Anime/PrettyCure'' (primarily ''Anime/SmilePrecure'') fanfic, written by Creator/NoonboryKedabory and Creator/Gullfriend31. It began publication on January 28th, 2023.
After a major battle against the Pretty Cure, Joker is left near death, and the Bad End Kingdom must collect twenty-five vials of Bad Energy to save him.
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* ActionPrologue: The prologue shows the battle between the Pretty Cure and the Bad End Kingdom, while the full story is about the Bad End Kingdom trying to recover from the battle.
* BigSisterInstinct: Nao snaps out of her Bad Energy daze when Akaoni begins to threaten Yui.
* TheCameo: Chapter 4 features a brief appearance from [[Anime/FreshPrettyCure Cure Peach]] in the groupchat.
* {{Crossover}}: While the story is primarily based on ''Anime/SmilePrecure'', the story also features characters from ''Anime/KiraKiraPrecureALaMode'', ''Anime/HealinGoodPrettyCure'', and ''Anime/DeliciousPartyPrettyCure''.
* DamselInDistress: In the prologue, Cure Peace, Cure Custard, and Cure Yum-Yum are tied up and held over a pond of Bad Energy, with Joker threatening to drop them in and dissolve them.
* FearlessInfant: Yui Midorikawa isn't afraid of Akaoni in the slightest, not even when he takes her for ransom to get Nao to fight him.
* GoodHurtsEvil: What kicks off the plot; four Cures create a huge beam of pure goodness, while nearly kills Joker.
* HoldYourHippogriffs: "For the love of Pierrot" is used in place of "For the love of God".
* LuminescentBlush: Akaoni blushes in embarrassment when Wolfrun reminds him that Joker can't hear him while he's in a coma.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Cure Happy is less than pleased to find out that her actions nearly resulted in a death.
* PinkHeroine: The blast of light comes from the four present pink leaders; Cure Happy, Cure Whip, Cure Grace, and Cure Precious.
* SayMyName: The prologue ends with all three of the Bad End Trio shrieking Joker's name.
* SlumberParty: In Chapter 3, Nodoka has a slumber party with Chiyu, Hinata, and Asumi.
* SpeakInUnison: Wolfrun and Akaoni both yell "How did you do that?!" in unison when seeing Majorina's health wand.
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After a major battle against the Pretty Cure, Joker is left near death, and the Bad End Kingdom must collect twenty-five vials of Bad Energy to save him.
!!Tropes:
* ActionPrologue: The prologue shows the battle between the Pretty Cure and the Bad End Kingdom, while the full story is about the Bad End Kingdom trying to recover from the battle.
* BigSisterInstinct: Nao snaps out of her Bad Energy daze when Akaoni begins to threaten Yui.
* TheCameo: Chapter 4 features a brief appearance from [[Anime/FreshPrettyCure Cure Peach]] in the groupchat.
* {{Crossover}}: While the story is primarily based on ''Anime/SmilePrecure'', the story also features characters from ''Anime/KiraKiraPrecureALaMode'', ''Anime/HealinGoodPrettyCure'', and ''Anime/DeliciousPartyPrettyCure''.
* DamselInDistress: In the prologue, Cure Peace, Cure Custard, and Cure Yum-Yum are tied up and held over a pond of Bad Energy, with Joker threatening to drop them in and dissolve them.
* FearlessInfant: Yui Midorikawa isn't afraid of Akaoni in the slightest, not even when he takes her for ransom to get Nao to fight him.
* GoodHurtsEvil: What kicks off the plot; four Cures create a huge beam of pure goodness, while nearly kills Joker.
* HoldYourHippogriffs: "For the love of Pierrot" is used in place of "For the love of God".
* LuminescentBlush: Akaoni blushes in embarrassment when Wolfrun reminds him that Joker can't hear him while he's in a coma.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Cure Happy is less than pleased to find out that her actions nearly resulted in a death.
* PinkHeroine: The blast of light comes from the four present pink leaders; Cure Happy, Cure Whip, Cure Grace, and Cure Precious.
* SayMyName: The prologue ends with all three of the Bad End Trio shrieking Joker's name.
* SlumberParty: In Chapter 3, Nodoka has a slumber party with Chiyu, Hinata, and Asumi.
* SpeakInUnison: Wolfrun and Akaoni both yell "How did you do that?!" in unison when seeing Majorina's health wand.
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