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Pauline hasn't seen her ex-boyfriend Mario since he disappeared several years prior. She's since moved on and become mayor of New Donk City. However, a blast from the past comes to her when a turtle monster arrives in her city with a scared would-be bride in tow. Pauline soon learns that the two - King Bowser and Princess Peach - know Mario. Pauline ends up kidnapped, alongside Peach, when Bowser learns that she's Mario's exe.
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Pauline hasn't seen her ex-boyfriend Mario since he disappeared several years prior. She's since moved on and become mayor of New Donk City. However, a blast from the past comes to her when a turtle monster arrives in her city with a scared would-be bride in tow. Pauline soon learns that the two - King Bowser and Princess Peach - know Mario. Pauline ends up kidnapped, alongside Peach, when Bowser learns that she's Mario's exe.
ex-girlfriend.
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''[[https://fanfiction.net/s/12532313/1/25m-Distance-Between-Us 25m Distance Between Us]]'' is a ''Franchise/SuperMarioBros'' fanfic based loosely on ''VideoGame/SuperMarioOdyssey''. It's a Pauline-themed story.
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* DarkFic: It's rated M for a reason. It's not all that dark, but there are several violent moments such as [[spoiler:Mario taking a bullet for Pauline]].
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* DarkFic: It's rated M for a reason. It's not all that dark, but there are several violent moments such as [[spoiler:Mario taking a bullet for Pauline]].Pauline]], as well as harsh swearing.
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''[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/12532313/1/25m-Distance-Between-Us 25m Distance Between Us]]'' is a ''Franchise/SuperMarioBros'' fanfic based loosely on ''VideoGame/SuperMarioOdyssey''. It's a Pauline-themed story.
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* VillainSong: Bowser forces Pauline to see a song he wrote for Mario.
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* VillainSong: Bowser forces Pauline to see sing a song he wrote for Mario.
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* AlternateDimension: Pauline's family is from "the Alternate Dimension of Earth", not Mario's Earth. She mentions that most Italian immigrants are from there.
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* AlternateDimension: AnotherDimension: Pauline's family is from "the Alternate Dimension of Earth", not Mario's Earth. She mentions that most Italian immigrants are from there.
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* ChildhoodFriendRomance: Pauline and Mario became friends as kids and ended up HighSchoolSweethearts as teens.
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* ChildhoodFriendRomance: Pauline and Mario became friends as kids and ended up HighSchoolSweethearts together as teens.
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* AlternateDimension: Pauline's family is from "the Alternate Dimension of Earth", not Mario's Earth. She mentions that most Italian immigrants are from there.
* BittersweetEnding: Mario saves Peach and [[spoiler:kills Bowser]]. He's given a choice of whether to stay in New Donk City with Pauline or travel back to the Mushroom Kingdom with Peach. He ultimately chooses [[spoiler:going back home with Peach]].
* BittersweetEnding: Mario saves Peach and [[spoiler:kills Bowser]]. He's given a choice of whether to stay in New Donk City with Pauline or travel back to the Mushroom Kingdom with Peach. He ultimately chooses [[spoiler:going back home with Peach]].
* DarkFic: It's rated M for a reason. It's not all that dark, but there are several violent moments such as [[spoiler:Mario taking a bullet for Pauline]].
* TheGamblingAddict: In his past, Mario suffered from a gambling addiction that Pauline helped him through.
* HotterAndSexier: Though there's not anything steamier than a kiss, there's a lot of innuendo and several references to past sexual encounters.
* MythologyGag: There's several references to several ''Mario'' titles such as ''Donkey Kong'', ''Wrecking Crew'', ''Dr. Mario'', and even ''Hotel Mario''.
* MythologyGag: There's several references to several ''Mario'' titles such as ''Donkey Kong'', ''Wrecking Crew'', ''Dr. Mario'', and even ''Hotel Mario''.
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* SelfMadeMan: Pauline grew up in a poor family. She worked as a showgirl for a while but always dreamed of owning property and stocks. Eventually, Pauline ended up elected mayor of New Donk City.
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* OhMyGods: Pauline exclaims "Thank Miyamoto" at one point. Bowser also says "by Miyamoto" in a manner similar to "by God".
* SelfMadeMan: Pauline grew up in a poor family. She worked as a showgirl for a while but always dreamed of owning property and stocks. Eventually, Pauline ended up elected mayor of New DonkCity.City.
* SpitefulSpit: Pauline spits in Bowser's face after he has her tortured.
* VillainSong: Bowser forces Pauline to see a song he wrote for Mario.
* SelfMadeMan: Pauline grew up in a poor family. She worked as a showgirl for a while but always dreamed of owning property and stocks. Eventually, Pauline ended up elected mayor of New Donk
* SpitefulSpit: Pauline spits in Bowser's face after he has her tortured.
* VillainSong: Bowser forces Pauline to see a song he wrote for Mario.
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* ChildhoodFriendRomance: Pauline and Mario became friends as kids and ended up HighSchoolSweethearts as teens.
* ColdBloodedTorture: Bowser has a Shy Guy attack a chained-up Pauline with fireballs.
* ColdBloodedTorture: Bowser has a Shy Guy attack a chained-up Pauline with fireballs.
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* GroinAttack: Subverted. Pauline tells Peach a story about how a dog once bit Mario "[[UnusualEuphemism right in the plunger]]". The dog literally bit a plunger Mario had on him.
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* GroinAttack: Subverted. Pauline tells Peach a story about how a dog once bit Mario "[[UnusualEuphemism right in the plunger]]". The dog literally bit a plunger Mario had on him.him.
* NamedByTheAdaptation: Pauline is given the surname of "Lombardi".
* SelfMadeMan: Pauline grew up in a poor family. She worked as a showgirl for a while but always dreamed of owning property and stocks. Eventually, Pauline ended up elected mayor of New Donk City.
* NamedByTheAdaptation: Pauline is given the surname of "Lombardi".
* SelfMadeMan: Pauline grew up in a poor family. She worked as a showgirl for a while but always dreamed of owning property and stocks. Eventually, Pauline ended up elected mayor of New Donk City.
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''[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/12532313/1/25m-Distance-Between-Us 25m Distance Between Us]]'' is a ''Franchise/SuperMarioBros'' fanfic based loosely on ''VideoGame/SuperMarioOdyssey''. It's a Pauline-themed story.
Pauline hasn't seen her ex-boyfriend Mario since he disappeared several years prior. She's since moved on and become mayor of New Donk City. However, a blast from the past comes to her when a turtle monster arrives in her city with a scared would-be bride in tow. Pauline soon learns that the two - King Bowser and Princess Peach - know Mario. Pauline ends up kidnapped, alongside Peach, when Bowser learns that she's Mario's exe.
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* ExpyCoexistence: Pauline mentions that Mario had once joked that, when she dyed her hair blonde several years ago, she looked like the girl from ''King Kong''. This is in a universe where Donkey Kong exists (and, as Mario joked, Pauline did get captured by a huge ape).
* GroinAttack: Subverted. Pauline tells Peach a story about how a dog once bit Mario "[[UnusualEuphemism right in the plunger]]". The dog literally bit a plunger Mario had on him.
Pauline hasn't seen her ex-boyfriend Mario since he disappeared several years prior. She's since moved on and become mayor of New Donk City. However, a blast from the past comes to her when a turtle monster arrives in her city with a scared would-be bride in tow. Pauline soon learns that the two - King Bowser and Princess Peach - know Mario. Pauline ends up kidnapped, alongside Peach, when Bowser learns that she's Mario's exe.
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* ExpyCoexistence: Pauline mentions that Mario had once joked that, when she dyed her hair blonde several years ago, she looked like the girl from ''King Kong''. This is in a universe where Donkey Kong exists (and, as Mario joked, Pauline did get captured by a huge ape).
* GroinAttack: Subverted. Pauline tells Peach a story about how a dog once bit Mario "[[UnusualEuphemism right in the plunger]]". The dog literally bit a plunger Mario had on him.
