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** While at Whiskey Peak, we get [[VideoGame/TheElderScrollsVSkyrim "Fus! Roh! Dah!", Jones jamming an arrow into her opponent's knee,]] [[WebVideo/CinemaSins eating an apple to look like more of an asshole,]] [[WesternAnimation/SamuraiJack GREAT FLAMING EYEBROWS,]] and this little gem between Jones and Mr. Thirteen
-->Thirteen: [[Film/ThePrincessBride You seem like a decent human; I hate to kill you.]]
-->Jones: And you're a very nice otter; I'd hate to die.
-->Thirteen: [[Film/ThePrincessBride You seem like a decent human; I hate to kill you.]]
-->Jones: And you're a very nice otter; I'd hate to die.
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* BlazingInfernoHellfireSauce: Or broth, in this case. Usopp describes Jones’ ramen as "like eating ginger fire".
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* CanadianEqualsHockeyFan: Apparently happened to Chopper, judging by a certain [[Fanfic/ThisBites crossover]] omake
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* TrainingFromHell: Jones' self-imposed challenge in order to train herself to get stronger.
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* DragonRider: Not yet, but implied to be on the way by one of the scenes from the first [[WebVideo/HonestTrailers omake]].
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** While being held captive by the Straw Hats, Mr. Nine calls Jones the [[Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire "Mother of dragons"]], although she cuts him off before he can complete the sentence, claiming it to be the wrong franchise.
** Jones' thoughts go a little funny while Arlong is trying to strangle her, turning into the lyrics of [[Disney/TheLionKingIISimbasPride We Are One]].
** Sanji's interaction with Wapol parallels how [[Series/Merlin2008 Merlin and Arthur meet]].
** Jones' thoughts go a little funny while Arlong is trying to strangle her, turning into the lyrics of [[Disney/TheLionKingIISimbasPride We Are One]].
** Sanji's interaction with Wapol parallels how [[Series/Merlin2008 Merlin and Arthur meet]].
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* BlindWithoutEm: At the very least ''implied'' with Jones. When she came out of the hold in Chapter 2, her vision was fuzzy, the the narration indicates that she left her glasses in the hold, which all but confirms it.
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* CanadianEqualsHockeyFan: Apparently happened to Chopper, judging by a certain [[Fanfic/ThisBites crossover]] omake
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* HowDoIShootWeb: On top of the [[spoiler: Force-Force Fruit requiring physics knowledge and a lot of control, Jones spends a solid chapter thinking that the name refers to an entirely different kind of [[Star Wars Force]].]]
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* HowDoIShootWeb: On top of the [[spoiler: Force-Force Fruit requiring physics knowledge and a lot of control, Jones spends a solid chapter thinking that the name refers to an entirely different kind of [[Star Wars [[Franchise/StarWars Force]].]]
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* {{Training From Hell}}: Jones' self-imposed challenge in order to train herself to get stronger.
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[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/12318087/1/Twelve-Red-Lines Twelve Red Lines]] is a One Piece Self-Insert fanfiction created by writer [[https://m.fanfiction.net/u/8653151/ Vikingr]] It was published on January 11, 2016.
The main story is about a gender-fluid (depending on the term you like to use) character named Jones, who, after comitting suicide, lands herself in the One Piece universe. soon enough, she ends up becoming a member of the Straw Hat Pirates, and readers soon find this as a story of a balance of both healing and adventure.
* {{Ascended Extra}}: Ghin, Johnny, and Yosaku. [[spoiler: they end up joining the main crew. ]]
** [[spoiler: Some of Baroque Works, too. Miss Monday/Mairead, Mr. 9/Jack, Miss Goldenweek/Lisa, and the Unluckies.]]
* {{Badass Normal}}: Jones. Though compared to monsters of the crew, she might not be seen that way, no one can deny her skill with karate.
* {{Blind Without Em}}: At the very least ''implied'' with Jones. When she came out of the hold in Chapter 2, her vision was fuzzy, the the narration indicates that she left her glasses in the hold, which all but confirms it.
The main story is about a gender-fluid (depending on the term you like to use) character named Jones, who, after comitting suicide, lands herself in the One Piece universe. soon enough, she ends up becoming a member of the Straw Hat Pirates, and readers soon find this as a story of a balance of both healing and adventure.
* {{Ascended Extra}}: Ghin, Johnny, and Yosaku. [[spoiler: they end up joining the main crew. ]]
** [[spoiler: Some of Baroque Works, too. Miss Monday/Mairead, Mr. 9/Jack, Miss Goldenweek/Lisa, and the Unluckies.]]
* {{Badass Normal}}: Jones. Though compared to monsters of the crew, she might not be seen that way, no one can deny her skill with karate.
* {{Blind Without Em}}: At the very least ''implied'' with Jones. When she came out of the hold in Chapter 2, her vision was fuzzy, the the narration indicates that she left her glasses in the hold, which all but confirms it.
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* {{Ascended Extra}}: Ghin, Johnny, and Yosaku. [[spoiler: they end up joining the main crew. ]]
** [[spoiler: Some of Baroque Works, too. Miss Monday/Mairead, Mr. 9/Jack, Miss Goldenweek/Lisa, and the Unluckies.]]
* {{Badass Normal}}: Jones. Though compared to monsters of the crew,
A healthy blend of adventure, humor, parody, and real world issues, it's neither as dark nor as silly as one would expect.
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!Tropes contained in ''Twelve Red Lines'':
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-->''’Jones''': Come on, where was a giant carnivorous sea cow when you needed one?
* ATeamFiring: Jones is not a good shot. At all. "Shoot an arrow ninety degrees to the right" not a good shot.
* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Let’s just say that Jones has had a lot of bad experiences with people in her backstory and leave it at that.
* ApologizesALot: Jones being Canadian, it comes with the territory.
* AscendedExtra: Courtesy of Jones's intervention, Ghin, Johnny, and Yosaku join the crew.
** Some of Baroque Works agents get more attention, too. Thus far, we have Miss Monday/Mairead, Mr. 9/Jack, Miss Goldenweek/Lisa, and the Unluckies.
* AttackReflector: The power of the [[spoiler:Force-Force Fruit that Jones eats]]; it's nearly identical to an Impact Dial with its function, save only that the force can explode outwards if too much is absorbed without releasing it.
* BadassNormal: Jones. Though compared to monsters of the crew, she might not be seen that way, no one can deny her skill with karate or her chemistry expertise.
* BlazingInfernoHellfireSauce: Or broth, in this case. Usopp describes Jones’ ramen as "like eating ginger fire".
* BlindWithoutEm: At the very least ''implied'' with Jones. When she came out of the hold in Chapter 2, her vision was fuzzy, the the narration indicates that she left her glasses in the hold, which all but confirms it.
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* {{Breaking the Fourth Wall}}: Jones even ends up being a "self-aware" self-insert.
* {{Driven to Suicide}}: Jones. In the first chapter, she commits suicide. this is actually how she ends up in ''One Piece'' anyway.
* {{Exact Words}}: Luffy in Chapter 2.
** [[spoiler: [-Luffy: Then don't promise me you won't die. Promise me you'll ''live''.-]]]
* {{Older Than They Look}}: Several times, Jones is mistaken for a teenager as opposed to a 23-year old adult.
* {{Self Insert}}: The story ''is'' a self-insert.
* {{Spell My Name with an S}}: Jones debates whether to spell Ghin/Gin's name with the first or second spelling. [[spoiler: She settled on Ghin.]]
* {{Stepford Smiler}}: Jones. Though some might find this questionable-in one of the Baratie chapters, she outright quotes Elsa from ''Frozen'' and put what she describes as a server's smile to hide her anxiety.
** [-Jones: Taking a deep breath, I pasted an unfortunately familiar expression on my face. Fake smile, server's smile. Don't let them in; don't let them see. Be the good girl you always have to be. Conceal- don't feel. Put on a show. Make one wrong move and everyone will know. "It- it's fine. I've done this before; I can handle it."-]
* {{Theme Naming}}: The chapter titles, which are named after words that carry a certain meaning for that specific chapter.
* {{Breaking the Fourth Wall}}: Jones even ends up being a "self-aware" self-insert.
* {{Driven to Suicide}}: Jones. In the first chapter, she commits suicide. this is actually how she ends up in ''One Piece'' anyway.
* {{Exact Words}}: Luffy in Chapter 2.
** [[spoiler: [-Luffy: Then don't promise me you won't die. Promise me you'll ''live''.-]]]
* {{Older Than They Look}}: Several times, Jones is mistaken for a teenager as opposed to a 23-year old adult.
* {{Self Insert}}: The story ''is'' a self-insert.
* {{Spell My Name with an S}}: Jones debates whether to spell Ghin/Gin's name with the first or second spelling. [[spoiler: She settled on Ghin.]]
* {{Stepford Smiler}}: Jones. Though some might find this questionable-in one of the Baratie chapters, she outright quotes Elsa from ''Frozen'' and put what she describes as a server's smile to hide her anxiety.
** [-Jones: Taking a deep breath, I pasted an unfortunately familiar expression on my face. Fake smile, server's smile. Don't let them in; don't let them see. Be the good girl you always have to be. Conceal- don't feel. Put on a show. Make one wrong move and everyone will know. "It- it's fine. I've done this before; I can handle it."-]
* {{Theme Naming}}: The chapter titles, which are named after words that carry a certain meaning for that specific chapter.
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* BloodLust: Jones isn't really this, but curiosity and a desire to intimidate make her lick a cut on Nezumi's cheek while she was trying to scare them. It works.
* BreakingTheFourthWall: Doesn't take long to start doing this after she gains her Medium Awareness.
* BreakThemByTalking: With all of the knowledge Jones has and a love of language, this is easily her most lethal weapon.
* CaffeineBulletTime: According to Jones, coffee does this to her, albeit in an Earth-normal fashion.
* CanadaEh: Jones's Canadian heritage comes up on occasion, specified in other tropes on this page.
* CordonBleughChef: Jones, to the point that not even
* {{Driven
* DrivenToSuicide: Jones. In the first chapter, she
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** [[spoiler: [-Luffy: Then don't promise me you won't die. Promise me you'll ''live''.-]]]
* {{Older Than They Look}}: Several times, Jones
* {{Self Insert}}: The story ''is'' a self-insert.
* {{Spell My Name with an S}}: Jones debates whether to spell Ghin/Gin's name with
* FantasticRacism: Arlong and crew, naturally.
* ForeignCussWord: Jones's go-to curses are 'Merde', 'Tabarnak', and 'Osti d'épais de marde'.
* ForWantOfANail: This fic is ''very'' realistic about how much a simple act could change everything.
** Not long after she joins, she notices that they're passing by the rock where Johnny and Yosaku are. She
** Before Nezumi and his goons can dig up Nami’s treasure, Jones incapacitates them with chloramine vapor and then ties them all up. Because they never see her face or any of the other Straw Hats', Luffy doesn’t get a bounty. And likewise, Smoker has no reason to try going after them in Loguetown.
* FriendToAllLivingThings: Has a desire to pet anything she considers cute, and has knowledge from a biology degree to back up that inclination. [[spoiler:She manages to make a good impression on Mr. 13 as a result of this, and as a result, the Unluckies become possible allies.]]
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* HatesBeingTouched: One of Jones' many issues.
* HeelRealization: A series of breaking speeches from Jones to the defeated and imprisoned Arlong Pirates sets the stage for this, which Jones knows is the most she can manage.
* HeroicSacrifice: At the end of Chapter 13, [[spoiler:Jones defends Vivi from a T-Rex bite, using her powers to take it down with her, but suffering apparently fatal injuries.]]
* HowDoIShootWeb: On top of the [[spoiler: Force-Force Fruit requiring physics knowledge and a lot of control, Jones spends a solid chapter thinking that the name refers to an entirely different kind of [[Star Wars Force]].]]
* InstantAwesomeJustAddDragons: The Warship Island filler invokes this; this fic takes it a step further by having Jones, stated to be a dragon lover already, rescue a hatchling that was unable to break out of its shell. The newly christened [[Literature/DragonridersOfPern Ruatha]] joins his 'mother' with the Straw Hats as a result.
* InsultedAwake: In Chapter 5, Jones rouses Sabo from the coma he fell into from regaining his memories by appealing to his BigBrotherInstinct:
-->'''Jones''': Outlook Sabo, if you can hear me, you need to wake up. Monkey D Luffy's in danger of being eaten by a giant crocodile.
-->'''Sabo''': [[OhNoNotAgain Not again!]] ''(leaps off the couch and grabs his [[PipePain pipe]])'' Ace, get the… ''(realizes where he is)''
* IsItSomethingYouEat:
-->'''Luffy''': What’s exposition? Can I eat it?
* ItRunsOnNonsenseoleum: This being One Piece, it’s basically a law of the universe, something Jones lampshades but otherwise accepts with surprising ease.
** Though Zoro talking normally with a sword in her mouth seems to be an exception.
* MadeOfIron: Jones naturally has high endurance, meaning that despite the fact that a normal human in this world would be MadeOfPlasticine in that world, she’s not in danger of dying from a simple punch.
* MarySue: [[DiscussedTrope Discussed]] in Chapter 3, with Jones worrying that she might be one, and hoping that her weird behavior and injury-prone status would avoid that.
* {{Masquerade}}: The Straw Hats learn the truth about Jones immediately. But for everyone else, she claims that she’s a witch.
* MediumAwareness: At the start of Chapter 4, Jones realizes that with everything that’s happened to her, she’s actually within a fan fiction that another version of herself is writing. She is displeased, to put it mildly…but at the same time, she wastes no time in beginning to treat her situation like {{Deadpool}}.
* NotGoodWithPeople: It takes time for her to warm up to the Straw Hats, and she’s not comfortable interacting with most outside of the crew unless it's in an attempt to intimidate them.
** And even with the Straw Hats, as of chapter 12 she still doesn’t feel comfortable enough to cry in front of any of them or sleep in the same room.
* OlderThanTheyLook: Jones is 24, but strangers tend to think she’s younger than the 17-19 crew. This is quite often exasperating for her.
* PersonAsVerb: After waking up on the Going Merry, no-longer-amnesiac Sabo states that he has the Grandpa Garp of all headaches.
* RageAgainstTheHeavens: The instant she realizes that she’s in a fan fiction, she starts chastising the one with the keyboard, and continues to do so regularly, regardless of who is around her.
* SaiGuy: Having trained with them during her karate lessons, Jones adds the weapons to her arsenal the first chance she gets.
* SelfInsertFic: Naturally.
* ShoutOut: Jones makes use of some of the media of her home world for allusions.
** In Chapter 2, she mentally recites [[Disney/{{Frozen}} Elsa]]’s mantra when she starts working at the Baratie in Luffy’s place.
-->'''Jones''': Don’t let them in; don’t let them see. Be the good girl you always have to be. Conceal- don’t feel. Put on a show. Make one wrong move and everyone will know.
** In the same chapter, she mentions getting Ghin an [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Element of Loyalty]] armband.
** Also in the same chapter, she references ''Film/EverAfter'' when she opens the cell door by removing the pins from the hinges and swinging it open from the lock, complete with the quote from Da Vinci:
-->'''Ghin''': That- where did you learn that? It's amazing.
-->'''Jones''': Yes, I will go down in history as the woman who opened a door.
** In Chapter 5, she mentally refers to Johnny and Yosaku as the [[Literature/HarryPotter Weasley Twins]]. And in later chapters, they live up to it.
** In Chapter 13, Miss Goldenweek gives her real name as Lisa. Now, considering the fact that she’s an ''artist'', what do you think that’s referring to?
* SimpleStaff: Having trained with it during her karate lessons, Jones adds the weapon to her arsenal the first chance she gets.
* SpellMyNameWithAnS: Though ‘Gin’ is noted to be the canon spelling, Jones mentally revises that to 'Ghin' to avoid messing up the pronunciation. Ghin, being illiterate, just goes with it.
* StepfordSmiler: Jones. Though some might find this questionable-in one of the Baratie chapters, she outright quotes Elsa from ''Frozen'' and put what she describes as a server's smile to hide her anxiety.
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* ThrowingYourSwordAlwaysWorks: As in canon, Johnny and Yosaku toss their swords to Zoro. Jones lampshades the danger and impracticality of it all.
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**[-Jones: Taking a deep breath, I pasted an unfortunately familiar expression on my face. Fake smile, server's smile. Don't let them in; don't let them see. Be the good girl you always have to be. Conceal- don't feel. Put on a show. Make one wrong move and everyone will know. "It- it's fine. I've done this before; I can handle it."-]
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**[[spoiler: Some of Baroque Works, too. Miss Monday/Mairead, Mr. 9/Jack, Miss Goldenweek/Lisa, and the Unluckies.]]
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*{{Older Than They Look}}: Several times, Jones is mistaken for a teenager as opposed to a 23-year old adult.
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* {{Driven to Suicide}}: Jones. In the first chapter, she commits suicide. this is actually how she ends up in ''One Piece'' anyway.
* {{Stepford Smiler}}: Jones. Though some might find this questionable-in one of the Baratie chapters, she outright quotes Elsa from ''Frozen'' and put what she describes as a waiters smile to hide her anxiety.
* {{True Companions}}: The Straw Hats. Jones even lampshades this in Chapter 2.
** [[spoiler: Luffy orders her to ''live'' at that. Jones comments that this is remniscient of what The Straw Hats told Robin, showing that they really do see her as a friend. if not that, that they ''want to''.]]
* {{Stepford Smiler}}: Jones. Though some might find this questionable-in one of the Baratie chapters, she outright quotes Elsa from ''Frozen'' and put what she describes as a waiters smile to hide her anxiety.
* {{True Companions}}: The Straw Hats. Jones even lampshades this in Chapter 2.
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*{{Exact Words}}: Luffy in Chapter 2.
**[[spoiler: [-Luffy: Then don't promise me you won't die. Promise me you'll ''live''.-]]]
*{{Stepford Smiler}}: Jones. Though some might find this questionable-in one of the Baratie chapters, she outright quotes Elsa from ''Frozen'' and put what she describes as a waiters smile to hide her anxiety.
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* {{Driven to Suicide}}: Jones. In the first chapter, she commits suicide. this is actually how she ends up in ''One Piece'' anyway.
* {{Stepford Smiler}}: Jones. Though some might find this questionable-in one of the Baratie chapters, she outright quotes Elsa from ''Frozen'' and put what she describes as a waiters smile to hide her anxiety.
* {{True Companions}}: The Straw Hats. Jones even lampshades this in Chapter 2.
** [[spoiler: Luffy orders her to ''live'' at that. Jones comments that this is remniscient of what The Straw Hats told Robin, showing that they really do see her as a friend. if not that, that they ''want to''.]]
* {{Stepford Smiler}}: Jones. Though some might find this questionable-in one of the Baratie chapters, she outright quotes Elsa from ''Frozen'' and put what she describes as a waiters smile to hide her anxiety.
* {{True Companions}}: The Straw Hats. Jones even lampshades this in Chapter 2.
** [[spoiler: Luffy orders her to ''live'' at that. Jones comments that this is remniscient of what The Straw Hats told Robin, showing that they really do see her as a friend. if not that, that they ''want to''.]]
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-{{Stepford Smiler}}: Jones. Though some might find this questionable-in one of the Baratie chapters, she outright quotes Elsa from Frozen and put what she describes as a ''waiters'' smile to hide her anxiety.
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*{{Driven to Suicide}}: Jones. In the first chapter, she commits suicide. this is actually how she ends up in ''One Piece'' anyway.
*{{Stepford Smiler}}: Jones. Though some might find this questionable-in one of the Baratie chapters, she outright quotes Elsa from
*{{True Companions}}: The Straw Hats. Jones even lampshades this in Chapter 2.
**[[spoiler: Luffy orders her to ''live'' at that. Jones comments that this is remniscient of what The Straw Hats told Robin, showing that they really do see her as a friend. if not that, that they ''want to''.]]
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Twelve Red Lines is a One Piece Self-Insert fanfiction created by writer [[https://m.fanfiction.net/u/8653151/ Vikingr]] It was published on January 11, 2016.
The main story is about a gender-fluid (depending on the term you like to use) character named Jones, who, after comitting suicide, lands herself in the One Piece universe. soon enough, she ends up becoming a member of the Straw Hat Pirates, and readers soon find this as a story of a balance of both healing and adventure.
-{{Stepford Smiler}}: Jones. Though some might find this questionable-in one of the Baratie chapters, she outright quotes Elsa from Frozen and put what she describes as a ''waiters'' smile to hide her anxiety.
The main story is about a gender-fluid (depending on the term you like to use) character named Jones, who, after comitting suicide, lands herself in the One Piece universe. soon enough, she ends up becoming a member of the Straw Hat Pirates, and readers soon find this as a story of a balance of both healing and adventure.
-{{Stepford Smiler}}: Jones. Though some might find this questionable-in one of the Baratie chapters, she outright quotes Elsa from Frozen and put what she describes as a ''waiters'' smile to hide her anxiety.
