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* AdaptationalVillainy: While Cronus is a bit of a douche in the original comic, here he's even worse, going so far as to kidnap the main character and put them to sleep using a laced chicken wing.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: While Cronus is a bit of a douche in the original comic, webcomic, here he's even worse, going so far as to kidnap the main character and put them to sleep using a laced chicken wing.wing.
* AdaptationalHeroism: King Karkat is depicted as a much kinder incarnation than his other counterpart, while the webcomic Karkat usually is more hotblooded and acts "crabby" with ultimately caring about their allies in the end, King Karkat immediately jumps to help save his daughter by any means necessary despite the possible consequences.
* AdaptationalHeroism: King Karkat is depicted as a much kinder incarnation than his other counterpart, while the webcomic Karkat usually is more hotblooded and acts "crabby" with ultimately caring about their allies in the end, King Karkat immediately jumps to help save his daughter by any means necessary despite the possible consequences.
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* DamselInDistress: Trilessa ends up being this, with her kidnapping and being put to sleep by Cronus' laced chicken.
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* NotLikeOtherGirls: The description for Trilessa claims she isn't like other princesses, having dark and curly hair instead of typical blonde.
* PoesLaw: Like Learning and Sburbing, it's not entirely clear if the original fic was originally meant to be a satire or if it was meant to be serious. Though, due to the fic ending suddenly,
* PoesLaw: Like Learning and Sburbing, it's not entirely clear if the original fic was originally meant to be a satire or if it was meant to be serious. Though, due to the fic ending suddenly,
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* RelatedDifferentlyInTheAdaptation: Cronus in the fic is Eridan's son instead of his Dancestor, as well as Terezi being Cronus' wife.
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* RelatedDifferentlyInTheAdaptation: Cronus in the fic is Eridan's son instead of his Dancestor, as well as Terezi being Cronus' wife.wife.
* SlutShaming: Terezi ultimately hopes that her son finds one that isn't a "slut", though what that entails in the fic isn't very clear.
* UnfortunateNames: Trilessa isn't exactly a nice name for a beautiful princess, though this is mostly due to it being a portmanteau of Tracy and Alyssa.
* SlutShaming: Terezi ultimately hopes that her son finds one that isn't a "slut", though what that entails in the fic isn't very clear.
* UnfortunateNames: Trilessa isn't exactly a nice name for a beautiful princess, though this is mostly due to it being a portmanteau of Tracy and Alyssa.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11886680/1/Trilessa Trilessa]] by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6255681/stacy-ampora-strider-ampora stacy-ampora-strider-ampora]] is a Homestuck [[AlternateUniverse AU]] fanfic where the main character, Trilessa, is a princess living in a kingdom with her dad King Karkat. While the story itself would be a short, but simple fanfic about a kingdom-based AU, it's [[DancingBear primarily the fact]] that this predates the infamous [[Fanfic/LivingAndSburbing Living and Sburbing]] by the same author is quite the notable mention.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11886680/1/Trilessa Trilessa]] by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6255681/stacy-ampora-strider-ampora stacy-ampora-strider-ampora]] is a Homestuck [[AlternateUniverse AU]] fanfic where the main character, Trilessa, is a princess living in a kingdom with her dad King Karkat. While the story itself would be a short, but simple fanfic about a kingdom-based AU, it's [[DancingBear primarily the fact]] that this predates the infamous [[Fanfic/LivingAndSburbing Living [[Fanfic/LearningAndSburbing Learning and Sburbing]] by the same author is quite the notable mention.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11886680/1/Trilessa Trilessa]] by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6255681/stacy-ampora-strider-ampora stacy-ampora-strider-ampora]] is a Homestuck [[AlternateUniverse AU]] fanfic where the main character, Trilessa, is a princess living in a kingdom with her dad King Karkat. While the story itself would be a short, but simple fanfic about a kingdom-based AU, it's [[DancingBear primarily the fact]] that this predates the infamous [[LivingAndSburbing Living and Sburbing]] by the same author is quite the notable mention.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11886680/1/Trilessa Trilessa]] by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6255681/stacy-ampora-strider-ampora stacy-ampora-strider-ampora]] is a Homestuck [[AlternateUniverse AU]] fanfic where the main character, Trilessa, is a princess living in a kingdom with her dad King Karkat. While the story itself would be a short, but simple fanfic about a kingdom-based AU, it's [[DancingBear primarily the fact]] that this predates the infamous [[LivingAndSburbing [[Fanfic/LivingAndSburbing Living and Sburbing]] by the same author is quite the notable mention.
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* Alternate Universe Fic: Unlike Learning and Sburbing, this is a more subdued version of one, simply being a medieval AU featuring Homestuck characters.
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* Alternate Universe Fic: AlternateUniverseFic: Unlike Learning and Sburbing, this is a more subdued version of one, simply being a medieval AU featuring Homestuck characters.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11886680/1/Trilessa Trilessa]] by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6255681/stacy-ampora-strider-ampora stacy-ampora-strider-ampora]] is a Homestuck [[AlternateUniverse AU]] [[Fanfic fanfic]] where the main character, Trilessa, is a princess living in a kingdom with her dad King Karkat. While the story itself would be a short, but simple fanfic about a kingdom-based AU, it's [[DancingBear primarily the fact]] that this predates the infamous [[LivingAndSburbing Living and Sburbing]] by the same author is quite the notable mention.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11886680/1/Trilessa Trilessa]] by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6255681/stacy-ampora-strider-ampora stacy-ampora-strider-ampora]] is a Homestuck [[AlternateUniverse AU]] [[Fanfic fanfic]] fanfic where the main character, Trilessa, is a princess living in a kingdom with her dad King Karkat. While the story itself would be a short, but simple fanfic about a kingdom-based AU, it's [[DancingBear primarily the fact]] that this predates the infamous [[LivingAndSburbing Living and Sburbing]] by the same author is quite the notable mention.
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* DeadFic: The fic itself hasn't updated after 2016.
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* DeadFic: The fic itself hasn't updated after 2016.2016.
* PrecisionFStrike: Delivered by Trilessa, no less.
* RelatedDifferentlyInTheAdaptation: Cronus in the fic is Eridan's son instead of his Dancestor, as well as Terezi being Cronus' wife.
* PrecisionFStrike: Delivered by Trilessa, no less.
* RelatedDifferentlyInTheAdaptation: Cronus in the fic is Eridan's son instead of his Dancestor, as well as Terezi being Cronus' wife.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11886680/1/Trilessa Trilessa]] by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6255681/stacy-ampora-strider-ampora stacy-ampora-strider-ampora]] is a Homestuck [[AlternateUniverse AU]] [[Fanfic fanfic]] where the main character, Trilessa, is a princess living in a kingdom with her dad King Karkat. While the story itself would be a short, but simple fanfic about a kingdom-based AU, it's [[DancingBear primarily the fact]] that this predates the infamous [[LivingAndSburbing Living and Sburbing]] by the same author is quite the notable mention.
!Thy fic enwheels examples of:
* AdaptationalVillainy: While Cronus is a bit of a douche in the original comic, here he's even worse, going so far as to kidnap the main character and put them to sleep using a laced chicken wing.
* Alternate Universe Fic: Unlike Learning and Sburbing, this is a more subdued version of one, simply being a medieval AU featuring Homestuck characters.
* CutShort: In the middle of the conflict, no less. After King Karkat discusses a way to kill Cronus, the fic simply ends there.
* DeadFic: The fic itself hasn't updated after 2016.
!Thy fic enwheels examples of:
* AdaptationalVillainy: While Cronus is a bit of a douche in the original comic, here he's even worse, going so far as to kidnap the main character and put them to sleep using a laced chicken wing.
* Alternate Universe Fic: Unlike Learning and Sburbing, this is a more subdued version of one, simply being a medieval AU featuring Homestuck characters.
* CutShort: In the middle of the conflict, no less. After King Karkat discusses a way to kill Cronus, the fic simply ends there.
* DeadFic: The fic itself hasn't updated after 2016.
