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''Transformers Prime: Time War'' is a Transformers fanfic by [=PhoenixKnight13=]. It follows a group of Autobots, Decepticons and Predacons lead by Smokescreen in the [[WesternAnimation/TransformersPrime Prime]] universe after the ''[[Recap/TransformersPrimeTVMBeastHuntersPredaconsRising Predacons Rising]]'' movie.
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* AlasPoorVillain: Ever loyal [[spoiler: Shockweave]] is killed by Megatron himself, Predaking even lampshades it.
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* KilledOffScreen: Present day Starscream gets killed by Predaking and the Predacons. But the event is not seen, only mentioned in the past tense.
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* KilledOffScreen: Present day Starscream gets killed by Predaking and the Predacons. But However the event is not seen, only mentioned in the past tense.
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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: Predaking goes on the warpath after [[spoiler: Wheeljack is hurt protecting him, Darksteel and Cliffjumper from an explosion]].
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Now has a sequel, ''Transformers Prime: The Rebirth''.
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* SuddenPrincipledStand: [[spoiler: Knock Out]] much to the shock of everyone present, stands between [[spoiler: Smokescreen and Megatron]] during the battle for the Space Bridge. He even flat-out refuses an order to back down.
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The "team" that stands between Megatron and control over the timeline, a {{Cloudcuckoolander}} ex-Decepticon, a TriggerHappy Wrecker, a pair BloodKnight Predacons, all being led by TheBumblebee simply because he's [[ClosestThingWeGot the closest thing they have]] to a leader.
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The "team" that stands between Megatron and control over the timeline, a {{Cloudcuckoolander}} ex-Decepticon, a TriggerHappy Wrecker, a pair of BloodKnight Predacons, all being led by TheBumblebee simply because he's [[ClosestThingWeGot the closest thing they have]] to a leader.
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--> '''Knock Out''': Hey! [[LampshedHanging Why does everyone keep hitting me?]]
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--> '''Knock Out''': Hey! [[LampshedHanging [[LampshadeHanging Why does everyone keep hitting me?]]
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* KilledOffScreen: Present day Starscream gets killed by Predaking and the Predacons. But the event is not seen, only mentioned in the past tense.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Directed at the villain, Smokescreen gives a rather concise yet epic one to Megatron.
--> '''Smokescreen''': That's your problem Megatron. You still think everybody else is expendable!
* RunningGag: Knock Out getting smacked for being, well Knock Out.
--> '''Knock Out''': Hey! [[LampshedHanging Why does everyone keep hitting me?]]
--> '''Smokescreen''': That's your problem Megatron. You still think everybody else is expendable!
* RunningGag: Knock Out getting smacked for being, well Knock Out.
--> '''Knock Out''': Hey! [[LampshedHanging Why does everyone keep hitting me?]]
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The "team" that stands between Megatron and control over the timeline, a {{Cloudcuckoolander}} ex-Decepticon, a TriggerHappy Wrecker, a pair BloodKnight Predacons, all being led by TheBumblebee simply because he's [[TheClosestThingWeGot the closest thing they have]] to a leader.
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The "team" that stands between Megatron and control over the timeline, a {{Cloudcuckoolander}} ex-Decepticon, a TriggerHappy Wrecker, a pair BloodKnight Predacons, all being led by TheBumblebee simply because he's [[TheClosestThingWeGot [[ClosestThingWeGot the closest thing they have]] to a leader.
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The "team" that stands between Megatron and control over the timeline, a {{Cloudcuckoolander}} ex-Decepticon, a TriggerHappy Wrecker, a pair BloodKnight Predacons, all being led by TheBumblebee simply because he's [[TheClosestThingWeGot the closest thing they have]] to a leader.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Averted, the fates of Starscream, Airachnid, and Shockwave after the ''Predacons Rising'' film are revealed.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Averted, the fates of Starscream, Airachnid, and Shockwave after the ''Predacons Rising'' film are revealed.
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* TimeTravel: Megatron uses a machine created by Shockwave go back into the past. Whereupon a small band of Autobots, led by Smokescreen are inadvertently dragged along with him.
* TrappedInThePast: Smokescreen, Wheeljack and Knock Out along with [[spoiler: Predaking and Darksteel]] are unintentionally pulled through a time portal. They wind up in the television series very first episode, where they have to fight Megatron as he attempts to change history.
* TrappedInThePast: Smokescreen, Wheeljack and Knock Out along with [[spoiler: Predaking and Darksteel]] are unintentionally pulled through a time portal. They wind up in the television series very first episode, where they have to fight Megatron as he attempts to change history.
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* AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: Temporarily. When [[spoiler:Smokescreen]] is seemingly killed. A burst of energy erupts from the Well of Allsparks and envelops him, [[spoiler:sending him to an astral plane similar to where Optimus met Alpha Trion, where he meets Optimus. Optimus then complements Smokescreen on all the ways he's grown and matured, and tells him he's ready for the next step in his journey, if he wishes to take it]].
* BallOfLightTransformation: Near the end of the story, [[spoiler:Smokescreen]] returns inside a sphere of light, before rematerializing as [[spoiler:Prime]].
* BallOfLightTransformation: Near the end of the story, [[spoiler:Smokescreen]] returns inside a sphere of light, before rematerializing as [[spoiler:Prime]].
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* AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: Temporarily. When [[spoiler:Smokescreen]] is seemingly killed. A burst of energy erupts from the Well of Allsparks and envelops him, [[spoiler:sending him to an astral plane similar to where Optimus met Alpha Trion, Trion in the ''Transformers Prime'' series, where he meets Optimus. Optimus then complements Smokescreen on all the ways he's grown and matured, and tells him he's ready for the next step in his journey, if he wishes to take it]].
* BallOfLightTransformation: Near the end of the story, [[spoiler:Smokescreen]] returns inside a sphere of light, before rematerializing as[[spoiler:Prime]].[[spoiler:a Prime]].
* BallOfLightTransformation: Near the end of the story, [[spoiler:Smokescreen]] returns inside a sphere of light, before rematerializing as
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* AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: Temporarily. When [[spoiler:Smokescreen]] is seemingly killed. A burst of energy erupts from the Well of Allsparks and envelops him, [[spoiler:sending him to an astral plane similar to where Optimus meet Alpha Trion, where he meets Optimus. Optimus then complements Smokescreen on all the ways he's grown and matured, and tells him he's ready for the next step in his journey, if he wishes to take it]].
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* AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: Temporarily. When [[spoiler:Smokescreen]] is seemingly killed. A burst of energy erupts from the Well of Allsparks and envelops him, [[spoiler:sending him to an astral plane similar to where Optimus meet met Alpha Trion, where he meets Optimus. Optimus then complements Smokescreen on all the ways he's grown and matured, and tells him he's ready for the next step in his journey, if he wishes to take it]].
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* AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: Temporarily. When [[spoiler:Smokescreen]] is seemingly killed. A burst of energy erupts from the Well of Allsparks it envelops him, [[spoiler:sending him to an astral plane similar to where Optimus meet Alpha Trion, where he meets Optimus. Optimus then complements Smokescreen on all the ways he's grown and matured, and tells him he's ready for the next step in his journey, if he wishes to take it]].
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* AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: Temporarily. When [[spoiler:Smokescreen]] is seemingly killed. A burst of energy erupts from the Well of Allsparks it and envelops him, [[spoiler:sending him to an astral plane similar to where Optimus meet Alpha Trion, where he meets Optimus. Optimus then complements Smokescreen on all the ways he's grown and matured, and tells him he's ready for the next step in his journey, if he wishes to take it]].
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* AlasPoorVillain: A newly [[spoiler:Primed]] Smokescreen seems to look upon Megatron in this light.
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* AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: Temporarily. When [[spoiler:Smokescreen]] is seemingly killed. A burst of energy erupts from the Well of Allsparks it envelops him, [[spoiler:sending him to an astral plane similar to where Optimus meet Alpha Trion, where he meets Optimus. Optimus then complements Smokescreen on all the ways he's grown and matured, and tells him he's ready for her next step in his journey, if he wishes to take it]].
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* AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: Temporarily. When [[spoiler:Smokescreen]] is seemingly killed. A burst of energy erupts from the Well of Allsparks it envelops him, [[spoiler:sending him to an astral plane similar to where Optimus meet Alpha Trion, where he meets Optimus. Optimus then complements Smokescreen on all the ways he's grown and matured, and tells him he's ready for her the next step in his journey, if he wishes to take it]].
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* DawnOfAnEra: The underlining theme of the story, in contrast with the ''Predacons Rising'' film's EndOfAnEra theme.
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* DawnOfAnEra: The underlining theme of the story, in contrast with the ''Predacons Rising'' film's EndOfAnEra EndOfAnAge theme.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Past!Optimus, suddenlt appears out of a groundbridge portal and tackles Present!Megatron in order to save [[spoiler:Knock Out]].
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* BigDamnHeroes: Past!Optimus, suddenlt suddenly appears out of a groundbridge portal and tackles Present!Megatron in order to save [[spoiler:Knock Out]].
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* BigDamnHeroes: Past!Optimus, tackles Present!Megatron in order to save [[spoiler:Knock Out]].
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* BigDamnHeroes: Past!Optimus, suddenlt appears out of a groundbridge portal and tackles Present!Megatron in order to save [[spoiler:Knock Out]].
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* AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: Temporarily. When [[spoiler:Smokescreen]] is seemingly killed. A burst of energy erupts from the Well of Allspark, it envelops him, [[spoiler:sending him to an astral plane similar to where Optimus meet Alpha Trion, where he meets Optimus. Optimus then complements Smokescreen on all the ways he's grown and matured, and tells him he's ready for her next step in his journey, if he's ready to take it]].
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* AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: Temporarily. When [[spoiler:Smokescreen]] is seemingly killed. A burst of energy erupts from the Well of Allspark, Allsparks it envelops him, [[spoiler:sending him to an astral plane similar to where Optimus meet Alpha Trion, where he meets Optimus. Optimus then complements Smokescreen on all the ways he's grown and matured, and tells him he's ready for her next step in his journey, if he's ready he wishes to take it]].
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* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: Megatron apparently fought, defeated and captured his younger self without much effort.
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* DawnOfAnEra: The underlining theme of the story, in contrast with the ''Predacons Rising'' film's EndOfAnEra theme.
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''Transformers Prime: Time War'' is a Transformers fanfic by [=PhoenixKnight13=]. It follows a group of Autobots, Decepticons and Predacon lead by Smokescreen in the [[WesternAnimation/TransformersPrime Prime]] universe after the Predacons Rising movie.
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''Transformers Prime: Time War'' is a Transformers fanfic by [=PhoenixKnight13=]. It follows a group of Autobots, Decepticons and Predacon Predacons lead by Smokescreen in the [[WesternAnimation/TransformersPrime Prime]] universe after the ''[[Recap/TransformersPrimeTVMBeastHuntersPredaconsRising Predacons Rising Rising]]'' movie.
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* HumbleHero: Smokescreen has become one of these.
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* HumbleHero: Smokescreen has become one of these. these.
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Both Airachnid and [[spoiler:Shockwave]] suffer this at Megatron's hand.
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Both Airachnid and [[spoiler:Shockwave]] suffer this at Megatron's hand.
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* SecretTestOfCharacter: [[spoiler: Optimus Prime's talk with Smokescreen in the void.]]
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* SecretTestOfCharacter: [[spoiler: Optimus Prime's talk with Smokescreen in WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Averted, the void.]] fates of Starscream, Airachnid, and Shockwave after the ''Predacons Rising'' film are revealed.
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''Transformers Prime: Time War'' is a Transformers fanfic by [=PhoenixKnight13=]. It follows a group of Autobots, Decepticons and Predacon lead by Smokescreen in the [[WesternAnimation/TransformersPrime Prime]] universe after the Predacons Rising movie.
Basically, Megatron sets out to alter the timeline, leaving Smokescreen and his team stuck in the past until they find a way to stop him.
!!This fanwork provides examples of:
* AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: Temporarily. When [[spoiler:Smokescreen]] is seemingly killed. A burst of energy erupts from the Well of Allspark, it envelops him, [[spoiler:sending him to an astral plane similar to where Optimus meet Alpha Trion, where he meets Optimus. Optimus then complements Smokescreen on all the ways he's grown and matured, and tells him he's ready for her next step in his journey, if he's ready to take it]].
* AlasPoorVillain: A newly [[spoiler:Primed]] Smokescreen seems to look upon Megatron in this light.
* BallOfLightTransformation: Near the end of the story, [[spoiler:Smokescreen]] returns inside a sphere of light, before rematerializing as [[spoiler:Prime]].
* BecauseDestinySaysSo: Averted [[spoiler: Smokescreen becomes a Prime, but only because he actively makes the decision to do so in order to go back and help the others]].
* BigDamnHeroes: Past!Optimus, tackles Present!Megatron in order to save [[spoiler:Knock Out]].
* CallBack:
** Several nods are made to the ''Transformers Prime'' television series.
** Knock Out mentions Orion Pax.
** Smokescreen mentions Optimus's speech detailing Cliffjumper's status as deceased to Wheeljack.
* CameBackStrong: [[spoiler:Smokescreen's ascension to Prime]] apparently vaporizes him and he reappears in the [[AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence void]]. After [[spoiler:Optimus]] explains what he's achieved, he's sent back down to the mortal plane to save the day.
* DespairEventHorizon: At the beginning of the story it's clear that Megatron has gone over this line following the events of the Predacons Rising movie.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: [[spoiler:Part of Megatron's reasoning (or so he claims) for going back in time is to prevent many of the deaths which occurred in the original timeline]].
* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: See ''ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice''.
* ForWantOfANail: Megatron believes [[spoiler: his injecting Dark Energon into his spark was what set off a long string of events that ultimately end with him becoming incapable of joining with the Well of Allsparks.]]
* HeelRealization: After being defeated by [[spoiler:Prime!Smokescreen, Megatron realized what a fool he'd been, shunting everyone away out of pride, leaving him to revel in his loneliness. You know it's genuine when after everyone returns to the future, he tells Smokescreen outright that he wont cause anyone any more trouble]].
* HumbleHero: Smokescreen has become one of these.
* NotSoHarmlessVillain: Past!Soundwave (as always) is a lot more dangerous than he lets on. Also, the fact that he [[spoiler: saw through present day Megatron's deception, orchestrated the Autobots rescue of Knock Out, and freed the Megatron of the past]].
* OddFriendship: One forms between the unlikely duo of Predaking and [[spoiler:Past!Miko]].
* SecretTestOfCharacter: [[spoiler: Optimus Prime's talk with Smokescreen in the void.]]
* YouCantFightFate: This is Wheeljack's attitude throughout most of the story, believing things like [[spoiler:Cliffjumper's death]] are inevitable.
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Basically, Megatron sets out to alter the timeline, leaving Smokescreen and his team stuck in the past until they find a way to stop him.
!!This fanwork provides examples of:
* AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence: Temporarily. When [[spoiler:Smokescreen]] is seemingly killed. A burst of energy erupts from the Well of Allspark, it envelops him, [[spoiler:sending him to an astral plane similar to where Optimus meet Alpha Trion, where he meets Optimus. Optimus then complements Smokescreen on all the ways he's grown and matured, and tells him he's ready for her next step in his journey, if he's ready to take it]].
* AlasPoorVillain: A newly [[spoiler:Primed]] Smokescreen seems to look upon Megatron in this light.
* BallOfLightTransformation: Near the end of the story, [[spoiler:Smokescreen]] returns inside a sphere of light, before rematerializing as [[spoiler:Prime]].
* BecauseDestinySaysSo: Averted [[spoiler: Smokescreen becomes a Prime, but only because he actively makes the decision to do so in order to go back and help the others]].
* BigDamnHeroes: Past!Optimus, tackles Present!Megatron in order to save [[spoiler:Knock Out]].
* CallBack:
** Several nods are made to the ''Transformers Prime'' television series.
** Knock Out mentions Orion Pax.
** Smokescreen mentions Optimus's speech detailing Cliffjumper's status as deceased to Wheeljack.
* CameBackStrong: [[spoiler:Smokescreen's ascension to Prime]] apparently vaporizes him and he reappears in the [[AscendToAHigherPlaneOfExistence void]]. After [[spoiler:Optimus]] explains what he's achieved, he's sent back down to the mortal plane to save the day.
* DespairEventHorizon: At the beginning of the story it's clear that Megatron has gone over this line following the events of the Predacons Rising movie.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: [[spoiler:Part of Megatron's reasoning (or so he claims) for going back in time is to prevent many of the deaths which occurred in the original timeline]].
* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: See ''ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice''.
* ForWantOfANail: Megatron believes [[spoiler: his injecting Dark Energon into his spark was what set off a long string of events that ultimately end with him becoming incapable of joining with the Well of Allsparks.]]
* HeelRealization: After being defeated by [[spoiler:Prime!Smokescreen, Megatron realized what a fool he'd been, shunting everyone away out of pride, leaving him to revel in his loneliness. You know it's genuine when after everyone returns to the future, he tells Smokescreen outright that he wont cause anyone any more trouble]].
* HumbleHero: Smokescreen has become one of these.
* NotSoHarmlessVillain: Past!Soundwave (as always) is a lot more dangerous than he lets on. Also, the fact that he [[spoiler: saw through present day Megatron's deception, orchestrated the Autobots rescue of Knock Out, and freed the Megatron of the past]].
* OddFriendship: One forms between the unlikely duo of Predaking and [[spoiler:Past!Miko]].
* SecretTestOfCharacter: [[spoiler: Optimus Prime's talk with Smokescreen in the void.]]
* YouCantFightFate: This is Wheeljack's attitude throughout most of the story, believing things like [[spoiler:Cliffjumper's death]] are inevitable.
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