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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Noah and Dave are revealed to be cousins.
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* NiceHat: Mike dons a fedora throughout episode 1, [[spoiler:only for it to be dropped when he gets the boot.]] Dave picks it up afterwards.
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/2282622/chapters/5017161 Total Drama: Some Stars]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/TotalDrama'' fanfiction by Bored_Commentator and Dollarino, set shortly after the events of ''Pahkitew Island'', on said island. [[SpotlightStealingSquad Characters with a tendency to overshadow the rest]] and characters subject to all forms of WeHardlyKnewYe, OutOfFocus, etc ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Izzy]]), from the pre-''Pahkitew'' seasons are pit against one another on two teams. On the Limelight Lions is [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Duncan]], [[NotSoDifferent Heather, Courtney]], [[BigEater Owen]], [[SplitPersonalityMerge Mi]][[TookALevelInJerkass ke]], [[NiceGirl Zoey]], and [[FarmBoy Sco]][[TookALevelInDumbass tt]]. The obscure otters have [[{{Joisey}} Anne]] [[NobodyTouchesTheHair Maria]], [[LovableJock Ty]][[ButtMonkey ler]], [[NoOneGetsLeftBehind Brick]], [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold E]][[BrawnHilda va]], [[FriendToAllLivingThings Dawn]], [[DeadpanSnarker Noah]], and [[CloudCuckoolander Izzy]]. Competing for the series' usual grand prize of a cool million, these 14 contestants must endure the machinations of Chris [=McLean=], as well as those of his newest intern, Dave.

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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/2282622/chapters/5017161 Total Drama: Some Stars]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/TotalDrama'' fanfiction by Bored_Commentator and Dollarino, set shortly after the events of ''Pahkitew Island'', on said island. [[SpotlightStealingSquad Characters with a tendency to overshadow the rest]] and characters subject to all forms of WeHardlyKnewYe, OutOfFocus, etc ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Izzy]]), from the pre-''Pahkitew'' seasons are pit against one another on two teams. On the Limelight Lions is [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Duncan]], [[NotSoDifferent Heather, Courtney]], Courtney, [[BigEater Owen]], [[SplitPersonalityMerge Mi]][[TookALevelInJerkass ke]], [[NiceGirl Zoey]], and [[FarmBoy Sco]][[TookALevelInDumbass tt]]. The obscure otters have [[{{Joisey}} Anne]] [[NobodyTouchesTheHair Maria]], [[LovableJock Ty]][[ButtMonkey ler]], [[NoOneGetsLeftBehind Brick]], [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold E]][[BrawnHilda va]], [[FriendToAllLivingThings Dawn]], [[DeadpanSnarker Noah]], and [[CloudCuckoolander Izzy]]. Competing for the series' usual grand prize of a cool million, these 14 contestants must endure the machinations of Chris [=McLean=], as well as those of his newest intern, Dave.



* NotSoDifferent: Courtney and Heather vehemently denying this (in very similar manners to each other) is a RunningGag in the first several chapters. Even after they decide to patch things up, they're ''both'' faking it and assuming the other has fallen into their trap.

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* NotSoDifferent: NotSoDifferentRemark: Courtney and Heather vehemently denying this (in very similar manners to each other) is a RunningGag in the first several chapters. Even after they decide to patch things up, they're ''both'' faking it and assuming the other has fallen into their trap.
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/2282622/chapters/5017161 Total Drama: Some Stars]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/TotalDrama'' fanfiction by Bored_Commentator and Dollarino, set shortly after the events of ''Pahkitew Island'', on said island. [[SpotlightStealingSquad Characters with a tendency to overshadow the rest]] and characters subject to all forms of WeHardlyKnewYe, OutOfFocus, etc ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Izzy]]), from the pre-''Pahkitew'' seasons are pit against one another on two teams. On the Limelight Lions is [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Duncan]], [[NotSoDifferent Heather, Courtney]], [[BigEater Owen]], [[SplitPersonalityMerge Mi]][[TookALevelInJerkass ke]], [[NiceGirl Zoey]], and [[FarmBoy Sco]][[TookALevelInDumbass tt]]. The obscure otters have [[{{Joisey}} Anne]] [[NobodyTouchesTheHair Maria]], [[LovableJock Ty]][[ButtMonkey ler]], [[NoOneGetsLeftBehind Brick]], [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold E]][[BrawnHilda va]], [[FriendToAllLivingThings Dawn]], [[DeadpanSnarker Noah]], and [[CloudCuckoolander Izzy]]. Competing for the series' usual grand prize of a cool million, these 14 contestants must endure the machinations of Chris [=McLean=], as well as those of his newest intern, Dave. Five chapters were posted, out of a planned 13 plus a bonus chapter (which would include the alternate ending to whoever wasn't the selected/victorious finalist), and the series stopped being updated for awhile until Bored_Commentator returned and posted the three and a quarter chapters that were completed but never moved over to Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn. All spoilers for the canonical series will be left unmarked.

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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/2282622/chapters/5017161 Total Drama: Some Stars]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/TotalDrama'' fanfiction by Bored_Commentator and Dollarino, set shortly after the events of ''Pahkitew Island'', on said island. [[SpotlightStealingSquad Characters with a tendency to overshadow the rest]] and characters subject to all forms of WeHardlyKnewYe, OutOfFocus, etc ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Izzy]]), from the pre-''Pahkitew'' seasons are pit against one another on two teams. On the Limelight Lions is [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Duncan]], [[NotSoDifferent Heather, Courtney]], [[BigEater Owen]], [[SplitPersonalityMerge Mi]][[TookALevelInJerkass ke]], [[NiceGirl Zoey]], and [[FarmBoy Sco]][[TookALevelInDumbass tt]]. The obscure otters have [[{{Joisey}} Anne]] [[NobodyTouchesTheHair Maria]], [[LovableJock Ty]][[ButtMonkey ler]], [[NoOneGetsLeftBehind Brick]], [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold E]][[BrawnHilda va]], [[FriendToAllLivingThings Dawn]], [[DeadpanSnarker Noah]], and [[CloudCuckoolander Izzy]]. Competing for the series' usual grand prize of a cool million, these 14 contestants must endure the machinations of Chris [=McLean=], as well as those of his newest intern, Dave. Dave.

Five chapters were posted, out of a planned 13 plus a bonus chapter (which would include the alternate ending to whoever wasn't the selected/victorious finalist), and the series stopped being updated for awhile until Bored_Commentator returned and posted the three and a quarter chapters that were completed but never moved over to Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn. All spoilers for the canonical series will be left unmarked.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Zoey slips into this pretty frequently.
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* HiddenHeartOfGold: Zoey, upon adopting her "commando" persona once more, tries to force herself to be just as much of a standoffish loner as she was when she did it at the end of ''Revenge''. Her kind heart shines through extremely easily, though, and she even begins to question if it's really worth keeping up the persona.



* JerkassFacade: Zoey, upon adopting her "commando" persona once more, tries to force herself to be just as much of a standoffish loner as she was when she did it at the end of ''Revenge''. Her kind heart shines through extremely easily, though, and she even begins to question if it's really worth keeping up the persona.

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* DiscOneFinalBoss: [[spoiler:Mike has taken ''several'' levels in jerkass, and it's more than implied that this is because Mal, the SuperpoweredEvilSide BigBad of ''All Stars'', had much more of an effect on the SplitPersonalityMerge in the finale of that season than Mike would care to admit. This, combined with the [[AllYourPowersCombined canonical nature of this merge]], makes him into an absolute force to be reckoned with... And then he's eliminated first by his all-too-GenreSavvy teammates, at Duncan's behest. Courtney would follow suit in Episode 7.]]

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* DiscOneFinalBoss: [[spoiler:Mike has taken ''several'' levels in jerkass, and it's more than implied that this is because Mal, the SuperpoweredEvilSide BigBad of ''All Stars'', had much more of an effect on the SplitPersonalityMerge in the finale of that season than Mike would care to admit. This, combined with the [[AllYourPowersCombined canonical nature of this merge]], makes him into an absolute force to be reckoned with... And then he's eliminated first by his all-too-GenreSavvy teammates, eammates, at Duncan's behest. Courtney would follow suit in Episode 7.]]



* GenreSavvy: At this point, Courtney has fully realized that something to do with a prospective love interest, be it directly or indirectly, has been what got her eliminated so far in every season she competes in.
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/2282622/chapters/5017161 Total Drama: Some Stars]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/TotalDrama'' fanfiction by Bored_Commentator and Dollarino, set shortly after the events of ''Pahkitew Island'', on said island. [[SpotlightStealingSquad Characters with a tendency to overshadow the rest]] and characters subject to all forms of WeHardlyKnewYe, OutOfFocus, etc ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Izzy]]), from the pre-''Pahkitew'' seasons are pit against one another on two teams. On the Limelight Lions is [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Duncan]], [[NotSoDifferent Heather, Courtney]], [[BigEater Owen]], [[SplitPersonalityMerge Mi]][[TookALevelInJerkass ke]], [[NiceGirl Zoey]], and [[FarmBoy Sco]][[TookALevelInDumbass tt]]. The obscure otters have [[{{Joisey}} Anne]] [[NobodyTouchesTheHair Maria]], [[LovableJock Ty]][[ButtMonkey ler]], [[NoOneGetsLeftBehind Brick]], [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold E]][[BrawnHilda va]], [[FriendToAllLivingThings Dawn]], [[DeadpanSnarker Noah]], and [[CloudCuckoolander Izzy]]. Competing for the series' usual grand prize of a cool million, these 14 contestants must endure the machinations of Chris [=McLean=], as well as those of his newest intern, Dave. Five chapters were posted, out of a planned 13 plus a bonus chapter (which would include the alternate ending to whoever wasn't the selected/victorious finalist), and the series stopped being updated for awhile until Bored_Commentator returned and posted the three and a quarter chapters that were completed but never moved over to Ao3. All spoilers for the canonical series will be left unmarked.

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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/2282622/chapters/5017161 Total Drama: Some Stars]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/TotalDrama'' fanfiction by Bored_Commentator and Dollarino, set shortly after the events of ''Pahkitew Island'', on said island. [[SpotlightStealingSquad Characters with a tendency to overshadow the rest]] and characters subject to all forms of WeHardlyKnewYe, OutOfFocus, etc ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Izzy]]), from the pre-''Pahkitew'' seasons are pit against one another on two teams. On the Limelight Lions is [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Duncan]], [[NotSoDifferent Heather, Courtney]], [[BigEater Owen]], [[SplitPersonalityMerge Mi]][[TookALevelInJerkass ke]], [[NiceGirl Zoey]], and [[FarmBoy Sco]][[TookALevelInDumbass tt]]. The obscure otters have [[{{Joisey}} Anne]] [[NobodyTouchesTheHair Maria]], [[LovableJock Ty]][[ButtMonkey ler]], [[NoOneGetsLeftBehind Brick]], [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold E]][[BrawnHilda va]], [[FriendToAllLivingThings Dawn]], [[DeadpanSnarker Noah]], and [[CloudCuckoolander Izzy]]. Competing for the series' usual grand prize of a cool million, these 14 contestants must endure the machinations of Chris [=McLean=], as well as those of his newest intern, Dave. Five chapters were posted, out of a planned 13 plus a bonus chapter (which would include the alternate ending to whoever wasn't the selected/victorious finalist), and the series stopped being updated for awhile until Bored_Commentator returned and posted the three and a quarter chapters that were completed but never moved over to Ao3.Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn. All spoilers for the canonical series will be left unmarked.
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* ShockingElimination: [[spoiler:Scott in the third episode, which had been building up towards Heather being sent packing, courtesy of Duncan's GenreSavvy.]] It was even a shocking elimination [[UpToEleven ''for the fic's writers'']].



* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Chapter 3's notes detail that [[spoiler:the writers had initially planned on eliminating Heather that chapter, and allowing Scott to take over as the BigBad.]] The writers also considered allowing Dave to join the competition partway through.
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* HeroicBSOD: Anne Maria [[spoiler:when she loses her hair]]. Dawn enterz one after learning the truth about Pahkitew Island. Meeting Clucky the Chicken helps her get over it [[spoiler: just in time for her self-organized elimination.]]

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* HeroicBSOD: Anne Maria [[spoiler:when she loses her hair]]. Dawn enterz enters one after learning the truth about Pahkitew Island. Meeting Clucky the Chicken helps her get over it [[spoiler: just in time for her self-organized elimination.]]



* SuperStrength: Eva, of course. In episode 5, she uproots an entire tree in a matter of moments with.

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* SuperStrength: Eva, of course. In episode 5, she uproots an entire tree in a matter of moments with.with her bare hands.

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* BehindTheMask: [[spoiler:Scott's lovable idiot tendencies he abruptly gained in ''All Stars''? All portrayed as a front. He's actually no less conniving than back in ''Revenge of the Island''. Duncan, Zoey, and possibly Owen are the only ones to catch on, but it's more than enough.]]


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* ManipulativeBastard: [[spoiler:Scott's lovable idiot tendencies he abruptly gained in ''All Stars''? All portrayed as a front. He's actually no less conniving than back in ''Revenge of the Island''. Duncan, Zoey, and possibly Owen are the only ones to catch on, but it's more than enough.]]

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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/2282622/chapters/5017161 Total Drama: Some Stars]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/TotalDrama'' fanfiction by Bored_Commentator and Dollarino, set shortly after the events of ''Pahkitew Island'', on said island. [[SpotlightStealingSquad Characters with a tendency to overshadow the rest]] and characters subject to all forms of WeHardlyKnewYe, OutOfFocus, etc ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Izzy]]), from the pre-''Pahkitew'' seasons are pit against one another on two teams. On the Limelight Lions is [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Duncan]], [[NotSoDifferent Heather, Courtney]], [[BigEater Owen]], [[SplitPersonalityMerge Mi]][[TookALevelInJerkass ke]], [[NiceGirl Zoey]], and [[FarmBoy Sco]][[TookALevelInDumbass tt]]. The obscure otters have [[{{Joisey}} Anne]] [[NobodyTouchesTheHair Maria]], [[LovableJock Ty]][[ButtMonkey ler]], [[NoOneGetsLeftBehind Brick]], [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold E]][[BrawnHilda va]], [[FriendToAllLivingThings Dawn]], [[DeadpanSnarker Noah]], and [[CloudCuckoolander Izzy]]. Competing for the series' usual grand prize of a cool million, these 14 contestants must endure the machinations of Chris [=McLean=], as well as those of his newest intern, Dave. There are five chapters up at the present, out of a planned 13 plus a bonus chapter (which will include the alternate ending). All spoilers for the canonical series will be left unmarked.

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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/2282622/chapters/5017161 Total Drama: Some Stars]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/TotalDrama'' fanfiction by Bored_Commentator and Dollarino, set shortly after the events of ''Pahkitew Island'', on said island. [[SpotlightStealingSquad Characters with a tendency to overshadow the rest]] and characters subject to all forms of WeHardlyKnewYe, OutOfFocus, etc ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Izzy]]), from the pre-''Pahkitew'' seasons are pit against one another on two teams. On the Limelight Lions is [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Duncan]], [[NotSoDifferent Heather, Courtney]], [[BigEater Owen]], [[SplitPersonalityMerge Mi]][[TookALevelInJerkass ke]], [[NiceGirl Zoey]], and [[FarmBoy Sco]][[TookALevelInDumbass tt]]. The obscure otters have [[{{Joisey}} Anne]] [[NobodyTouchesTheHair Maria]], [[LovableJock Ty]][[ButtMonkey ler]], [[NoOneGetsLeftBehind Brick]], [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold E]][[BrawnHilda va]], [[FriendToAllLivingThings Dawn]], [[DeadpanSnarker Noah]], and [[CloudCuckoolander Izzy]]. Competing for the series' usual grand prize of a cool million, these 14 contestants must endure the machinations of Chris [=McLean=], as well as those of his newest intern, Dave. There are five Five chapters up at the present, were posted, out of a planned 13 plus a bonus chapter (which will would include the alternate ending).ending to whoever wasn't the selected/victorious finalist), and the series stopped being updated for awhile until Bored_Commentator returned and posted the three and a quarter chapters that were completed but never moved over to Ao3. All spoilers for the canonical series will be left unmarked.



* BigBadEnsemble: The majority of the Limelight Lions are very credible potential villains, and Courtney, Heather, Scott, and Mike have (even if by technicality in Mike's case, which still counts due to implications that Mal's personality fused with his own) all actually ''been'' the BigBad of a canon season. You can also throw Dave into the mix, but he's not that good at it [[spoiler:until Episode 4]]. [[spoiler:It's been slowly subverted as time goes on, as Heather and Courtney [[BigBadDuumvirate formed an alliance]] [[DragonWithAnAgenda where they both see themselves as the one to eventually betray the other to get ahead]], Mike and Scott are the first Lions to go, and Dave's HostileShowTakeover occurs in episode 4 out of ''13''. His defeat actually turns out pretty easy.]]

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* BigBadEnsemble: The majority of the Limelight Lions are very credible potential villains, and Courtney, Heather, Scott, and Mike have (even if by technicality in Mike's case, which still counts due to implications that Mal's personality fused with his own) all actually ''been'' the BigBad of a canon season. You can also throw Dave into the mix, but he's not that good at it [[spoiler:until Episode 4]]. [[spoiler:It's been slowly subverted as time goes on, as Heather and Courtney [[BigBadDuumvirate formed an alliance]] [[DragonWithAnAgenda where they both see themselves as the one to eventually betray the other to get ahead]], Mike and Scott are the first Lions to go, and Dave's HostileShowTakeover occurs in episode 4 out of ''13''. His defeat actually turns out pretty easy.]] Ultimately, according to "chapter" 6's notes, had the series been written to its conclusion, [[spoiler:Noah's more traditional alliance and Eva's OneManArmy schtick would have carried them to the finale, with Heather acting as a threat of her own until the penultimate challenge.]]



* DeadFic: Admitted as such in the "sixth chapter," released long after the first five, explaining [[WhatCouldHaveBeen where the story was planned to go, showing the original idea board/plan for the series]], and linking to four chapters that were never posted to Archive of our Own (the last of which being incomplete).



* DiscOneFinalBoss: [[spoiler:Mike has taken ''several'' levels in jerkass, and it's more than implied that this is because Mal, the SuperpoweredEvilSide BigBad of ''All Stars'', had much more of an effect on the SplitPersonalityMerge in the finale of that season than Mike would care to admit. This, combined with the [[AllYourPowersCombined canonical nature of this merge]], makes him into an absolute force to be reckoned with... And then he's eliminated first by his all-too-GenreSavvy teammates, at Duncan's behest.]]

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* DiscOneFinalBoss: [[spoiler:Mike has taken ''several'' levels in jerkass, and it's more than implied that this is because Mal, the SuperpoweredEvilSide BigBad of ''All Stars'', had much more of an effect on the SplitPersonalityMerge in the finale of that season than Mike would care to admit. This, combined with the [[AllYourPowersCombined canonical nature of this merge]], makes him into an absolute force to be reckoned with... And then he's eliminated first by his all-too-GenreSavvy teammates, at Duncan's behest. Courtney would follow suit in Episode 7.]]



** Episode 7's script has Tyler mention having wicked chessboxing skills. [[SmallNameBigEgo While it wasn't written if this was an accurate statement or not]], [[spoiler:this was a buildup for the finale involving Chessboxing.]]



* TooPowerfulToLive: [[spoiler: Mike, since he still seems to have [[AllYourPowersCombined abilities gained from the]] SplitPersonalityMerge.]] Eva is a subversion, as her behavior has led her to be regarded as a valued teammate by the Obscure Otters.

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* TooPowerfulToLive: [[spoiler: Mike, since he still seems to have [[AllYourPowersCombined abilities gained from the]] SplitPersonalityMerge.]] Eva is a subversion, as her behavior has led her to be regarded as a valued teammate by the Obscure Otters. The longer into the competition she lasts, in fact, the more aware she is of this trope, [[spoiler:and manages to be the primary threat among strategists just by being ''that'' good, which would have carried her to the finale.]]

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* BigBadEnsemble: The majority of the Limelight Lions are very credible potential villains, and Courtney, Heather, Scott, and Mike have (even if by technicality in Mike's case, which still counts due to implications that Mal's personality fused with his own) all actually ''been'' the BigBad of a canon season. You can also throw Dave into the mix, but he's not that good at it [[spoiler:until Episode 4]]. [[spoiler:It's been slowly subverted as time goes on, as Heather and Courtney [[BigBadDuumivrate formed an alliance]] [[DragonWithAnAgenda where they both see themselves as the one to eventually betray the other to get ahead]], Mike and Scott are the first Lions to go, and Dave's HostileShowTakeover occurs in episode 4 out of ''13''. His defeat actually turns out pretty easy.]]

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* BigBadEnsemble: The majority of the Limelight Lions are very credible potential villains, and Courtney, Heather, Scott, and Mike have (even if by technicality in Mike's case, which still counts due to implications that Mal's personality fused with his own) all actually ''been'' the BigBad of a canon season. You can also throw Dave into the mix, but he's not that good at it [[spoiler:until Episode 4]]. [[spoiler:It's been slowly subverted as time goes on, as Heather and Courtney [[BigBadDuumivrate [[BigBadDuumvirate formed an alliance]] [[DragonWithAnAgenda where they both see themselves as the one to eventually betray the other to get ahead]], Mike and Scott are the first Lions to go, and Dave's HostileShowTakeover occurs in episode 4 out of ''13''. His defeat actually turns out pretty easy.]]



* SacrificialLion: Fittingly, every loss of the Limelight Lions shifts the direction of the series. [[spoiler: Mike kickstarts Zoey's CharacterDevelopment, Scott's departure leaves Courtney ''and'' Heather more competitive, as well as faking friendship, and Owen is so beloved that his quite violent elimination upset nearly everyone.]] Conversely, there has yet to be an Obscure Otter whose departure radically changed something. [[spoiler: Anne Maria didn't do much of significance, and Dawn completed her character arc and allowed herself to be eliminated, while her presence was only especially important to Eva.]]

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* DelayedReaction: Tyler has a decent few of these, and never once seems to notice it.



* LimelightSeries: The entire point of the Obscure Otters is that nearly all of them are OutOfFocus (and even Izzy, the member among them with the most overall screentime, only even made it past to the merge of one season thanks to being returned to the competition ''at'' the merge). Downplayed, though, since they're just as capable of being eliminated early as [[SpotlightStealingSquad the Limelight Lions]].



* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Noah screams in horror after what happens to [[spoiler:Owen in episode 5.]]



* ShipTease: The story is tagged with "implied Duncan/Zoey" and "implied Eva/Izzy," after all. The former has definitely started being teased, whereas with the latter, Eva and Izzy, while hanging out whenever it isn't obstructive, haven't really been teased that much as of chapter 3.

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* ShipTease: The story is tagged with "implied Duncan/Zoey" and "implied Eva/Izzy," after all. The former has definitely started being teased, whereas with the latter, Eva and Izzy, while hanging out whenever it isn't obstructive, haven't really been teased that much as of chapter 3.much.


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* SpotlightStealingSquad: The [[MeaningfulName Limelight Lions]] having this status in canon is lampshaded heavily. Chris shows heavy favor for them and considers the members of his team some of his prime moneymakers. The first time they lose a challenge he pretty much flips out.

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** Heather's inter-team alliance is pretty quickly dropped at the end of the episode setting it up.
* {{Adorkable}}: Zoey slips into this pretty frequently.



* GenreSavvy: At this point, Courtney has fully realized that something to do with a prospective love interest, be it directly or indirectly, has been what got her eliminated so far in every season she competes in.



* {{Hipster}}: Zoey shows signs of returning to this characterization.



* JerkassFacade: Zoey, upon adopting her "commando" persona once more, tries to force herself to be just as much of a standoffish loner as she was when she did it at the end of ''Revenge''. Her kind heart shines through extremely easily, though.

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* JerkassFacade: Zoey, upon adopting her "commando" persona once more, tries to force herself to be just as much of a standoffish loner as she was when she did it at the end of ''Revenge''. Her kind heart shines through extremely easily, though.though, and she even begins to question if it's really worth keeping up the persona.


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* NiceHat: Mike dons a fedora throughout chapter 1, [[spoileronly for it to be dropped when he gets the boot.]] Dave picks it up.

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* BigBadFriend: [[spoiler: Dave to Tyler, with [[DistressedDude poor results]] for the latter.]]

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* BigBadFriend: [[spoiler: Dave to Tyler, with [[DistressedDude poor results]] for the latter.]]]] After Heather and Courtney stop openly gutting at one another's throats, they start to view themselves as this to the other.



* {{Foreshadowing}}: Plenty of instances, the most subtle of which so far being [[spoiler: that Dave, as an intern, bonds with Tyler the most out of the contestants, and mistakes him for Topher. Guess who's Dave's replacement as an intern!]]

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** Anne Maria sure fusses over her hair a lot at the start of episode 2. [[spoiler:It'd be a shame if something burned it all away.]]


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* MoralityPet: Dawn, for Eva, helping her rein in her HairTriggerTemper.

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* MoralityPet: MoralityPet[=/=]LivingEmotionalCrutch: Dawn, for Eva, helping her rein in her HairTriggerTemper.HairTriggerTemper. [[spoiler:She's naturally distraught at Dawn's elimination, citing Dawn's status as such, but Dawn [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre reassures her that she'll be able to manage]].]]
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* FriendlyEnemy: Owen gets like this with everyone on opposing teams anyway, but it's most apparent here with Noah.


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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/2282622/chapters/5017161 Total Drama: Some Stars]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/TotalDrama'' fanfiction by Bored_Commentator and Dollarino, set shortly after the events of ''Pahkitew Island'', on said island. [[SpotlightStealingSquad Characters with a tendency to overshadow the rest]] and characters subject to all forms of WeHardlyKnewYe, OutOfFocus, etc ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Izzy]]), from the pre-''Pahkitew'' seasons are pit against one another on two teams. On the Limelight Lions is [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Duncan]], [[NotSoDifferent Heather, Courtney]], [[BigEater Owen]], [[SplitPersonalityMerge Mi]][[TookALevelInJerkass ke]], [[NiceGirl Zoey]], and [[FarmBoy Sco]][[TookALevelInDumbass tt]]. The obscure otters have [[{{Joisey}} Anne]] [[NobodyTouchesTheHair Maria]], [[LovableJock Ty]][[ButtMonkey ler]], [[NoOneGetsLeftBehind Brick]], [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold E]][[BrawnHilda va]], [[FriendToAllLivingThings Dawn]], [[DeadpanSnarker Noah]], and [[CloudCuckoolander Izzy]]. Competing for the series' usual grand prize of a cool million, these 14 contestants must endure the machinations of Chris [=McLean=], as well as those of his newest intern, Dave. There are five chapters up at the present, out of a planned 13 plus a bonus chapter. All spoilers for the canonical series will be left unmarked.

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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/2282622/chapters/5017161 Total Drama: Some Stars]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/TotalDrama'' fanfiction by Bored_Commentator and Dollarino, set shortly after the events of ''Pahkitew Island'', on said island. [[SpotlightStealingSquad Characters with a tendency to overshadow the rest]] and characters subject to all forms of WeHardlyKnewYe, OutOfFocus, etc ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Izzy]]), from the pre-''Pahkitew'' seasons are pit against one another on two teams. On the Limelight Lions is [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Duncan]], [[NotSoDifferent Heather, Courtney]], [[BigEater Owen]], [[SplitPersonalityMerge Mi]][[TookALevelInJerkass ke]], [[NiceGirl Zoey]], and [[FarmBoy Sco]][[TookALevelInDumbass tt]]. The obscure otters have [[{{Joisey}} Anne]] [[NobodyTouchesTheHair Maria]], [[LovableJock Ty]][[ButtMonkey ler]], [[NoOneGetsLeftBehind Brick]], [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold E]][[BrawnHilda va]], [[FriendToAllLivingThings Dawn]], [[DeadpanSnarker Noah]], and [[CloudCuckoolander Izzy]]. Competing for the series' usual grand prize of a cool million, these 14 contestants must endure the machinations of Chris [=McLean=], as well as those of his newest intern, Dave. There are five chapters up at the present, out of a planned 13 plus a bonus chapter.chapter (which will include the alternate ending). All spoilers for the canonical series will be left unmarked.


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* MultipleEndings: The story's non-canonical ending (in which whoever places second in the finale wins instead) will be written as chapter 14 of the 13-chapter/episode fic.
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* BrilliantButLazy: Noah puts this to his advantage when it comes to the hide and seek challenge. When everyone else is running and hiding from the opposite team's designated leaders as the countdown ticks down, Noah just sits down, cracks open a book, and waits for Owen to find him mere meters away. Then he distracts him from finding his fellow Obscure Otters.

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* CharacterDevelopment: Noah and Brick grow to tolerate one another and work together increasingly well throughout the season, even if they still find themselves disagreeing on a lot of mannerisms and strategies.



* HeterosexualLifePartners: Well, AmbiguouslyBi Life Partners in the former's case, but Owen and Noah still take time to interact whenever they can, even if being placed on separate teams has put a damper on their ability to be as buddy-buddy as they were in canon. Owen also qualifies with Duncan, on his own team.



* HistoryRepeats: The elimination of one character is very similar to the character's elimination in their actual debut season. [[spoiler:After the (coincidentally horror-themed) fourth episode ends with no elimination, Dawn is eliminated during the fifth episode.]] They take it much better this time than the last due to the actual circumstances beyond that.



* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: With wildly varying levels of "jerk" and "heart of gold," Noah, Eva, Duncan, [[spoiler:Zoey]], Anne Maria, Mike, and Heather all qualify.
* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: [[spoiler:Scott.]]

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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: With wildly varying levels of "jerk" and "heart of gold," Noah, Eva, Duncan, [[spoiler:Zoey]], Anne Maria, Mike, and Heather all qualify.
* JerkassFacade: Zoey, upon adopting her "commando" persona once more, tries to force herself to be just as much of a standoffish loner as she was when she did it at the end of ''Revenge''. Her kind heart shines through extremely easily, though.
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JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: [[spoiler:Scott.]]Scott.



* OutOfFocus: Anne Maria is the only member of the Obscure Otters to get no CharacterDevelopment beyond her newfound distaste for Mike. [[spoiler:She's also the second contestant to go.]]

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* OutOfFocus: Anne Maria is the only member of the Obscure Otters to get no extra CharacterDevelopment beyond her newfound distaste for Mike. [[spoiler:She's also the second contestant to go.]]


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* ShoutOut:
** Noah refers to Brick as [[Film/FullMetalJacket Pvt. Pyle]], a moniker he takes a good bit of offense to.
** Dawn [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda floats down a long drop harmlessly by holding Clucky the Chicken over her head]] at one point, even referencing Sam, the show's resident gamer, as the one who gave her the idea.
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* TheGhost: Heather and Alejandro's and Tyler and Lindsay's relationships are still going strong and mentioned a decent amount; it just so happens that Alejandro and Lindsay are both not competing.

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* TheGhost: Heather and Alejandro's and Tyler and Lindsay's relationships are still going strong and mentioned a decent amount; it just so happens that Alejandro and Lindsay are both not competing. Getting revenge on Sky is Dave's biggest goal, and she isn't on the island either.
* HeelFaceDoorSlam: Late into Episode 1, [[spoiler:Mike's [[TookALevelInJerkass new demeanor]]]] is shown to even be bothering ''him'' in the confessional, but he winds up getting the boot without even being able to apologize for his misbehavior.



* HiddenDepths: Topher enjoys fishing.

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* HiddenDepths: Topher enjoys fishing.fishing, as seen by his introduction.


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* ItsPersonal: Downplayed with Anne Maria, who is all too passionate about the circumstances of the first elimination, [[spoiler:claiming Mike [[SplitPersonalityMerge "killed Vito"]] and ought to be punished for it]], though she didn't play any direct role in said elimination.


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* OutOfFocus: Anne Maria is the only member of the Obscure Otters to get no CharacterDevelopment beyond her newfound distaste for Mike. [[spoiler:She's also the second contestant to go.]]
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In hindsight it was kind of a poor example of Bait And Switch Boss at \'\'best\'\'.


* BaitAndSwitchBoss: [[spoiler:Scott]] is built up late into episode 3, [[spoiler:revealing his HiddenDepths of being just as conniving as before,]] and getting [[spoiler:Heather]] into some hot water... but [[spoiler:Zoey and Duncan figure him out, and the latter talks Owen into voting him off]], leaving [[spoiler:Heather]] to continue her antagonizing role. Basically, it's either a DoubleSubversion for [[spoiler:Heather]], or just straight-up subverted for [[spoiler:Scott]].



* RonTheDeathEater: Mike is a fairly straightforward example, his suddenly becoming an asshole [[spoiler:justifying his early elimination]]. Ironically, WordOfGod is that both authors agree that their Mike is ''better'' than [[TheGenericGuy his actual]] [[RomanticPlotTumor self]], [[spoiler: and that they partially regret his early elimination for this exact reason]]. At least he still has redeeming traits, though.

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* RonTheDeathEater: Mike is a fairly straightforward InUniverse example, his suddenly becoming an asshole [[spoiler:justifying being a major source of interpersonal conflict during his early elimination]].run on the show. Ironically, WordOfGod is that both authors agree that their Mike is ''better'' than [[TheGenericGuy his actual]] [[RomanticPlotTumor self]], [[spoiler: and that they partially regret his early elimination for this exact reason]]. At least he still has redeeming traits, though.
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* TheOneGuy: [[spoiler:Duncan]] is the last male remaining on the Limelight Lions.

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* {{Flanderization}}: Clucky the Chicken only got mad/violent in ''Pahkitew Island'' because Rodney pushed her BerserkButton. In this, she's immediately AxCrazy, and stays that way until Dawn and Owen calm her down.



* KillerRabbit: Clucky the Chicken is even more violent and angry than she was in the actual show.



* SmallRoleBigImpact: [[spoiler:Mike]] does little directly, but is pivotal to the CharacterDevelopment of Zoey and Duncan.

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* SmallRoleBigImpact: [[spoiler:Mike]] does little directly, is the first voted off, but is pivotal to the CharacterDevelopment of Zoey [[spoiler:Zoey and Duncan.Duncan]].

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* BigBadEnsemble: The majority of the Limelight Lions are very credible potential villains, and Courtney, Heather, Scott, and Mike have (even if by technicality in Mike's case, which still counts due to implications that Mal's personality fused with his own) all actually ''been'' the BigBad of a canon season. You can also throw Dave into the mix, but he's not that good at it [[spoiler:until Episode 4]]. [[spoiler:Seems to be slowly becoming subverted, as Heather seems to have been DemotedToDragon, Mike and Scott are the first Lions to go, and Dave's HostileShowTakeover occurs in episode 4 out of ''13''. His defeat actually turns out pretty easy.]]

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* BigBadEnsemble: The majority of the Limelight Lions are very credible potential villains, and Courtney, Heather, Scott, and Mike have (even if by technicality in Mike's case, which still counts due to implications that Mal's personality fused with his own) all actually ''been'' the BigBad of a canon season. You can also throw Dave into the mix, but he's not that good at it [[spoiler:until Episode 4]]. [[spoiler:Seems to be [[spoiler:It's been slowly becoming subverted, subverted as time goes on, as Heather seems and Courtney [[BigBadDuumivrate formed an alliance]] [[DragonWithAnAgenda where they both see themselves as the one to have been DemotedToDragon, eventually betray the other to get ahead]], Mike and Scott are the first Lions to go, and Dave's HostileShowTakeover occurs in episode 4 out of ''13''. His defeat actually turns out pretty easy.]]



* BigBadWannabe: [[spoiler: Holy shit, Dave took over the island... and then he did little at all with that newfound power aside from make a new intro for the show.]]

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* BigBadWannabe: [[spoiler: Holy shit, Dave took over the island... and then he did little at all with that newfound power aside from make a new intro for the show.]]



* SuperStrength: Eva, of course. [[spoiler:In episode 5, she ''uproots an entire tree.'']]

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* StylisticSuck: [[spoiler:[[HostileShowTakeover Total Dave Domination]], whose intro literally consists of Dave flipping through photos and singing a shortened version of the theme song.]]
* SuperStrength: Eva, of course. [[spoiler:In In episode 5, she ''uproots uproots an entire tree.'']]tree in a matter of moments with.



* TooCleverByHalf: [[spoiler:Scott]] is eliminated right when he puts his clever plan into action.

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* TooCleverByHalf: [[spoiler:Scott]] is eliminated right when he puts tries to put his clever plan into action.

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