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* CrackFic: The story begins descending towards this during the Exam finals. [[TropesAreNotBad Good]].
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* CrackFic: The story begins descending towards this during the Exam finals. [[TropesAreNotBad [[Administrivia/TropesAreTools Good]].
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* DeconReconSwitch: A lot of ContinuityDrift from {{Naruto}} is lampshaded and justified within story.
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* DeconReconSwitch: A lot of ContinuityDrift from {{Naruto}} Manga/{{Naruto}} is lampshaded and justified within story.
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* DeathIsCheap: Kabuto is accidentally (supposedly) killed in the Chunin Exams; [[spoiler:Gaara]] predicts right away that [[GenreSavvy he's coming back]].
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* DeathIsCheap: Kabuto is accidentally (supposedly) killed in the Chunin Exams; [[spoiler:Gaara]] predicts right away that [[GenreSavvy he's coming back]].back.
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Zabuza is still finding bits of rectum on his sword. his sensei is dead.
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* AssShove: The Uzumaki were infamous for this in Water Country, for the time they shoved the Seven Swordsmen of Mist's swords up their butts. According to Zabuza, his mentor ''still'' finds sword shards in his rectum... Tazuna thanks God that Naruto takes after his dad in that respect.
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* AssShove: The Uzumaki were infamous for this in Water Country, for the time they shoved the Seven Swordsmen of Mist's swords up their butts. According to Zabuza, his mentor he ''still'' finds sword shards in peices of rectum on his rectum...sword... Tazuna thanks God that Naruto takes after his dad in that respect.
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* EntertaininglyWrong: After coming back, Kakashi is ''not'' subtle in his favoritism and worry towards Naruto, or his dislike of Sasuke. Naruto, despite knowing time travel is possible, concludes Kakashi is acting so radically different because he didn't set up the eraser to fall on his teacher's head. He chides himself for doing so the first time around, because appaently, if he hadn't then Kakashi would have bought him candy and food and hugged him almost constantly.
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* EntertaininglyWrong: After coming back, Kakashi is ''not'' subtle in his favoritism and worry towards Naruto, or his dislike of Sasuke. Naruto, despite knowing time travel is possible, concludes Kakashi is acting so radically different because he didn't set up the eraser to fall on his teacher's head. He chides himself for doing so the first time around, because appaently, apparently, if he hadn't then Kakashi would have bought him candy and food and hugged him almost constantly.
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* EntertaininglyWrong: After coming back, Kakashi is ''not'' subtle in his favoritism and worry towards Naruto, or his dislike of Sasuke. Naruto, despite knowing time travel is possible, concludes Kakashi is acting so radically different because he didn't set up the eraser to fall on his teacher's head, and chides himself for doing so the first time around because appaently, if he hadn't then Kakashi would have bought him candy and food and hugged him almost constantly.
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* EntertaininglyWrong: After coming back, Kakashi is ''not'' subtle in his favoritism and worry towards Naruto, or his dislike of Sasuke. Naruto, despite knowing time travel is possible, concludes Kakashi is acting so radically different because he didn't set up the eraser to fall on his teacher's head, and head. He chides himself for doing so the first time around around, because appaently, if he hadn't then Kakashi would have bought him candy and food and hugged him almost constantly.
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* EntertaininglyWrong: After coming back, Kakashi is ''not'' subtle in his favoritism and worry towards Naruto, or his dislike of Sasuke. Naruto, despite knowing time travel is possible, concludes Kakashi is acting so radically different because he didn't set up the eraser to fall on his teacher's head, and chides himself for doing so the first time around because appaently, if he hadn't then Kakashi would have bought him candy and food and hugged him almost constantly.
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* ReallyGetsAround: The Second Hokage, Senju Tobirama, to the point his brother made a law trying to rein in his promusucity. Tobirama instead extended his tastes to outside Konoha. Many people in Suna, Iwa, Kiri, Wave and Kumo can claim him as their ancestor.
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* ReallyGetsAround: The Second Hokage, Senju Tobirama, to the point his brother made a law trying to rein in his promusucity.promuscuity. Tobirama instead extended his tastes to outside Konoha. Many people in Suna, Iwa, Kiri, Wave and Kumo can claim him as their ancestor.ancestor.
** According to Tazuna, ''every single Senju but Hashirama''. In fact he points out that once, before the founding of Konoha, the Senju had been to Wave Country and in two generations the dominant hair color went from brown to Senju black.
** According to Tazuna, ''every single Senju but Hashirama''. In fact he points out that once, before the founding of Konoha, the Senju had been to Wave Country and in two generations the dominant hair color went from brown to Senju black.
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* SelectiveSquick: InUniverse, Sasuke was disgusted by his future self, not that he ate Orochimaru, that he ate Orochimaru ''alive''
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* DepartmentOfChildDisservices: Hiruzen found out what [[RapeAsDrama happened to Naruto]] wasn't an isolated incident, he cleans house trying to correct this
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* DepartmentOfChildDisservices: When Hiruzen found out what [[RapeAsDrama what happened to Naruto]] to]] [[spoiler:Sasuke]] wasn't an isolated incident, he cleans house trying to correct thisthis.
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* AllAbusersAreMale: [[spoiler: Subversion - Sasuke's abusers were women, oneof whom was a serial child molestor.]]
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* AllAbusersAreMale: [[spoiler: Subversion - Sasuke's abusers were women, oneof one of whom was a serial child molestor.]]
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* AssShove: The Uzumaki were infamous for this in Water Country, for the time they shoved the Seven Swordmens of Mist's swords up their butts. According to Zabuza, his mentor ''still'' finds sword shards in his rectum... Tazuna thanks God that Naruto takes after his dad in that respect.
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* AssShove: The Uzumaki were infamous for this in Water Country, for the time they shoved the Seven Swordmens Swordsmen of Mist's swords up their butts. According to Zabuza, his mentor ''still'' finds sword shards in his rectum... Tazuna thanks God that Naruto takes after his dad in that respect.
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** Apparently even Naruto can do this if he feels like, as shown by Gato getting killed by the Water Proctologist Jutsu.
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* BrainBleach: A non-{{Squick}} version. Turns out Danzo is ''not'' immune to [[TheMessiah Naruto]] - he just has ROOT erase his memory each time after having prolonged contact with the kid.
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* BrainBleach: A non-{{Squick}} version. Turns out Danzo is ''not'' immune to [[TheMessiah [[MessianicArchetype Naruto]] - he just has ROOT erase his memory each time after having prolonged contact with the kid.
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* CoolOldGuy: Danzo used to bribe Kushina to pull pranks on Hiruzen. [[FlatWhat What.]]
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* FelonyMisdemeanor: Naruto gives Sasuke Kakashi's copy of Icha Icha Paradise, advising him to keep it hostage during the bell test; Sasuke instead drops it and kicks it into the bushes. Kakashi proceeds to beat him up for disrespecting the book.
** Naruto realized that Kabuto deliberately made himself smell like ramen during the Chunin Exams.
** Naruto realized that Kabuto deliberately made himself smell like ramen during the Chunin Exams.
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotHeinous: Naruto gives Sasuke Kakashi's copy of Icha Icha Paradise, advising him to keep it hostage during the bell test; Sasuke instead drops it and kicks it into the bushes. Kakashi proceeds to beat him up for disrespecting the book.
** Naruto realized that Kabuto delibrately made himself smell like ramen during the Chunin Exams.
** Naruto realized that Kabuto delibrately made himself smell like ramen during the Chunin Exams.
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Tweaks~
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What do you get four time travelers from different [[BadFuture bad futures]] end in the same timeline to try things? [[HilarityEnsues Hilarity]] [[GambitPileup Ensues]]
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* YouWillBeSpared: Gatou's mercenaries thought Naruto was averting it when they discovered there was a hole in the boat he dumped them in. Turns out Naruto did intend to spare them, but ''Inari'' put a hole in their boat.
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* YouWillBeSpared: Gatou's mercenaries thought Naruto was averting it when they discovered there was a hole in the boat he dumped them in. Turns out Naruto did intend to spare them, but ''Inari'' put a hole in their boat.boat.
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* CassandraTruth: Tenzo reveals that Kakashi's excuses to why he's late are true. Kakashi stops to help the little old lady on Life Street who own extremely vicious black cats.
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* ExtremeOmnivore: Thanks to his AcquiredPoisonImmuniy Naruto can eat anything, to the point he drinks ''antifreeze'' since it tastes sweet.
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* ExtremeOmnivore: Thanks to his AcquiredPoisonImmuniy AcquiredPoisonImmunity Naruto can eat anything, to the point he drinks ''antifreeze'' since it tastes sweet.
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* KidsAreCruel: Played with - Inari put a hole in the escaping mercenaries' boat knowing full well that they'd drown, but he felt bad about it. His mother simply punishes him with no dessert, knowing her son accidentally committed homicide but unable to ''not'' feel relieved by those men's deaths.
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* KidsAreCruel: Played with - Inari put a hole in the escaping mercenaries' boat knowing full well that they'd drown, but he felt bad about it.it when his mom tells him that was wrong. His mother simply punishes him with no dessert, knowing her son accidentally committed homicide but unable to ''not'' feel relieved by those men's deaths.
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** Justified - Kakashi was proposing an IHaveAFriend[=/=]WhatIf scenario to try and get advice on how he's supposed to feel about Sasuke (who has betrayed/will betray the village and Naruto); Gai mistakenly assumed he was referring to Naruto. After offending Kakashi, he started kicked himself for not noticing the parallels between Neji/Sasuke and Lee/Naruto.
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** Justified - Kakashi was proposing an IHaveAFriend[=/=]WhatIf IHaveThisFriend[=/=]WhatIf scenario to try and get advice on how he's supposed to feel about Sasuke (who has betrayed/will betray the village and Naruto); Gai mistakenly assumed he was referring to Naruto. After offending Kakashi, he started kicked himself for not noticing the parallels between Neji/Sasuke and Lee/Naruto.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Iruka is set off by Kakashi and Jiraiya's sudden desire to [[NotWhatItLooksLike be close to Naruto]]. The Uzumaki apparently ''weaponized'' this.
* BlackComedy: Gaara was bored in the Forest of Death, so when Orochimaru showed up he turned him into a basketball.
* BlackComedy: Gaara was bored in the Forest of Death, so when Orochimaru showed up he turned him into a basketball.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Iruka is set off by Kakashi and Jiraiya's sudden desire to [[NotWhatItLooksLike be close to Naruto]]. The Uzumaki apparently ''weaponized'' this.
* BlackComedy: Gaara was bored in the Forest of Death, so when Orochimaru showed up he turned him into a basketball. The Uzumaki apparently ''weaponized'' this.
* BlackComedy: Gaara was bored in the Forest of Death, so when Orochimaru showed up he turned him into a basketball. The Uzumaki apparently ''weaponized'' this.
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Ethylene glycol is antifreeze, not battery acid.
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* AcquiredPoisonImmunity: Naruto is immune to many poisons after he tried to eat several of them as a child to the point he drinks [[UpToEleven battery acid]] as juice.
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* AcquiredPoisonImmunity: Naruto is immune to many poisons after he tried to eat several of them as a child to the point he drinks [[UpToEleven battery acid]] antifreeze]] as juice.
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* DrivenToSuicide: Sasuke mistakes Naruto for this when the latter goes to the shed to get some battery acid to drink after having gotten his medication.
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* DrivenToSuicide: Sasuke mistakes Naruto for this when the latter goes to the shed to get some battery acid antifreeze to drink after having gotten his medication.
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* CannibalClan: The Uchiha Clan eat their dead as funerary tradition
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* CannibalClan: The Uchiha Clan eat their dead as funerary traditiontradition.
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* ButterflyOfDoom: [[PeggySue Jiraiya, Naruto, Tenzo and Kakashi]] note the minor effects make major changes, like Kakashi giving Naruto a new outfit results in Kiri nin fleeing because they realize he's an ''[[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Uzumaki]]''
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* ButterflyOfDoom: [[PeggySue Jiraiya, Naruto, Tenzo and Kakashi]] note the minor effects make major changes, like Kakashi giving Naruto a new outfit with his clan symbol on prominent display results in Kiri nin fleeing because they realize he's an ''[[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Uzumaki]]''Uzumaki]]''.
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* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: You know Naruto's {{Canon}} personality? That's when he's on ''medication''! As it turns out, his extremely high chakra levels (due to being both an Uzumaki and a jinchuuriki) apparently make him so uncontrollable that at ''age 2'', he needed to be kept in padded room until they found a way to give him his medication - without it, he not only can't live a normal life, he'd probably ''die at a young'' due to his body being unable to handle the constant tension and lack of sleep. Sasuke, Sakura, Zabuza, Haku and Tazuna's family all witness firsthand just how out-of-control a Naruto without his meds can get:
--> '''''Bright! Bright! Leaf! Bright! Tree! Bright! Oooh squirrel! Bright! Eeew spider! Bright! Pakkun! Pakkun! Pakkun! Kakashi-sensei! Huh, leash? Bright! Pretty bird! Owww! Acorns! Owww! Badger! Owww!'''''
--> '''''Bright! Bright! Leaf! Bright! Tree! Bright! Oooh squirrel! Bright! Eeew spider! Bright! Pakkun! Pakkun! Pakkun! Kakashi-sensei! Huh, leash? Bright! Pretty bird! Owww! Acorns! Owww! Badger! Owww!'''''
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** [[spoiler: Gaara demonstrates that the PeggySue doesn't have to come from a BadFuture or meant to come in the first place]]
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** [[spoiler: Gaara demonstrates that the PeggySue doesn't have to come from a BadFuture BadFuture, or meant even ''mean'' to come in the first place]]place!]]
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* DespairEventHorizon: Kakashi in his original timeline, Naruto in Tenzo's timeline [[spoiler: and Hinata in the current timeline]]
* TheDreaded: The Uzumaki to all of Kiri. To the point when the Demon Brothers and Zabuza find out that Naruto is an Uzumaki, they run for the hills. Naruto eventually becomes one in his own right, earning the nickname "Hell God"
* DrivenToSuicide: Sasuke mistaken Naruto for this when Naruto went to the shed to drink some battery acid after recovering his medication.
* TheDreaded: The Uzumaki to all of Kiri. To the point when the Demon Brothers and Zabuza find out that Naruto is an Uzumaki, they run for the hills. Naruto eventually becomes one in his own right, earning the nickname "Hell God"
* DrivenToSuicide: Sasuke mistaken Naruto for this when Naruto went to the shed to drink some battery acid after recovering his medication.
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* DespairEventHorizon: Kakashi in his original timeline, Naruto in Tenzo's timeline [[spoiler: and Hinata in the current timeline]]
timeline.]]
* TheDreaded: The Uzumaki to all of Kiri. To the point when the Demon Brothers and Zabuza find out that Naruto is an Uzumaki, they run for the hills. Naruto eventually becomes one in his own right, earning the nickname "HellGod"
God".
* DrivenToSuicide: Sasukemistaken mistakes Naruto for this when Naruto went the latter goes to the shed to drink get some battery acid to drink after recovering having gotten his medication.
* TheDreaded: The Uzumaki to all of Kiri. To the point when the Demon Brothers and Zabuza find out that Naruto is an Uzumaki, they run for the hills. Naruto eventually becomes one in his own right, earning the nickname "Hell
* DrivenToSuicide: Sasuke
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* TheAlcoholic: Sasuke who usually drinks alone to sleep, underage alcoholism is a problem among the genin.
* AllAbusersAreMale: [[spoiler: Subversion, Sasuke's abusers were women, one woman was a serial child molestor]]
* AllAbusersAreMale: [[spoiler: Subversion, Sasuke's abusers were women, one woman was a serial child molestor]]
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* TheAlcoholic: Sasuke Sasuke, who usually drinks alone to sleep, get to sleep (thanks to [[spoiler:the abuse he suffered as a child, including being forced to drink]]); underage alcoholism is noted by Kakashi to be a problem among the amongst genin.
* AllAbusersAreMale: [[spoiler:Subversion, Subversion - Sasuke's abusers were women, one woman oneof whom was a serial child molestor]]molestor.]]
* AllAbusersAreMale: [[spoiler:
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** [[spoiler:Hinata nearly killed herself after her match with Neji went horribly and no one was there for her]]
* EarlyBirdCameo: Sai's older brother, Shin gets a short scene where he tries to give Sai a teddy bear.
* EasyEvangelism: Lampshaded by Tenzo that many enemies of Naruto convert to his side and change their ways or die in repentance. Tenzo then locks Danzo and Naruto in a closet in hopes of [[InvokedTrope invoking it]]. Subverted as it had been tried six times before and Danzo would remain the same. Double Subverted as it turns out it does work on Danzo, but ROOT mindwipes him back to normal.
** Invoked by Naruto himself, when he decides to beat up Neji [[spoiler: for driving Hinata into suicide]]
* EarlyBirdCameo: Sai's older brother, Shin gets a short scene where he tries to give Sai a teddy bear.
* EasyEvangelism: Lampshaded by Tenzo that many enemies of Naruto convert to his side and change their ways or die in repentance. Tenzo then locks Danzo and Naruto in a closet in hopes of [[InvokedTrope invoking it]]. Subverted as it had been tried six times before and Danzo would remain the same. Double Subverted as it turns out it does work on Danzo, but ROOT mindwipes him back to normal.
** Invoked by Naruto himself, when he decides to beat up Neji [[spoiler: for driving Hinata into suicide]]
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** [[spoiler:Hinata nearly killed herself after her match with Neji went horribly and no one was there for her]]
her (Naruto's team were disqualified due to Kakashi entering the Forest of Death to stop Orochimaru, leading to her forfeiting).]]
* EarlyBirdCameo: Shin, Sai's older brother,Shin gets a short scene where he tries to give he's buying Sai a teddy bear.
* EasyEvangelism: Lampshaded by Tenzo in that many enemies of Naruto convert to his side and change their ways or die in repentance. Tenzo then locks Danzo and Naruto in a closet in hopes of [[InvokedTrope invoking it]]. Subverted as it had been tried six times before and Danzo would remain the same. Double Subverted as it turns out it does work on Danzo, but ROOT mindwipes him back to normal.
** Invoked by Naruto himself, when he decides to beat up Neji [[spoiler: for driving Hinata intosuicide]]nearly committing suicide.]]
* EarlyBirdCameo: Shin, Sai's older brother,
* EasyEvangelism: Lampshaded by Tenzo in that many enemies of Naruto convert to his side and change their ways or die in repentance. Tenzo then locks Danzo and Naruto in a closet in hopes of [[InvokedTrope invoking it]]. Subverted as it had been tried six times before and Danzo would remain the same. Double Subverted as it turns out it does work on Danzo, but ROOT mindwipes him back to normal.
** Invoked by Naruto himself, when he decides to beat up Neji [[spoiler: for driving Hinata into
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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: Including Naruto, who knew that Hinata was stalking him. Her being [[ObliviousToLove in love with him however..]]
* ExtremeOmnivore: Naruto can eat anything to the point he drinks battery acid since its sweet.
* ExtremeOmnivore: Naruto can eat anything to the point he drinks battery acid since its sweet.
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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: Including Naruto, who knew actually ''knew'' that Hinata was stalking him. Her being [[ObliviousToLove in love with him him, however..]]
* ExtremeOmnivore: Thanks to his AcquiredPoisonImmuniy Naruto can eatanything anything, to the point he drinks battery acid ''antifreeze'' since its it tastes sweet.
* ExtremeOmnivore: Thanks to his AcquiredPoisonImmuniy Naruto can eat
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* OutOfCharacterMoment: Kakashi was being affectionate.
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* OutOfCharacterMoment: Kakashi was Kakashi's being affectionate.affectionate towards Naruto, repeatedly, is this to outsiders. As was his arriving to a meeting with Hiruzen early (which had actually slipped from is memory over the years - he'd come for unrelated reasons).
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* PeggySue: Naruto, Kakashi, Jiraiya, Tenzo [[spoiler: and Gaara]]
* PowerOfFriendship
* RantInducingSlight: Gai unintentionally accuses Naruto of being a possible traitor, Kakashi is angry and goes off a rant demanding to know why people immediate blame Naruto for everything.
* PowerOfFriendship
* RantInducingSlight: Gai unintentionally accuses Naruto of being a possible traitor, Kakashi is angry and goes off a rant demanding to know why people immediate blame Naruto for everything.
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* PeggySue: Naruto, Kakashi, Jiraiya, Tenzo [[spoiler: and Gaara]]
Gaara.]]
*PowerOfFriendship
ThePowerOfFriendship: Pretty much the story's strongest theme
* RantInducingSlight: Gai unintentionally accuses Naruto of being a possible traitor, Kakashiis gets angry and goes off a rant demanding to know why people immediate blame Naruto for everything.
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* RantInducingSlight: Gai unintentionally accuses Naruto of being a possible traitor, Kakashi
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* [[spoiler: RapeAsBackstory: Sasuke was molested by his caretakers as a child. Naruto was nearly molested by an orphanage caretaker, who taking out his anger over the Kyuubi on him]]
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* [[spoiler: RapeAsBackstory: RapeAsBackstory]]: Sasuke was molested [[spoiler:molested by his caretakers as a child. Naruto was nearly molested by an orphanage caretaker, who caretaker taking out his anger over the Kyuubi on him]]him.]]
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-->'' All throughout his childhood his mother had told him that if he wasn't a good boy, an Uzumaki would get him. He'd never believed her, and had instead believed it when his friends had told him that the Uzumaki were all dead. His mother had been right all along. He hadn't been a good boy, and if that Uzumaki hadn't been kept on a leash he would have gotten him.''
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* SecretKeeper: Naruto has Sasuke and Sakura, as well as Haku (who was listening in) and by extension Zabuza; later, Gaara joins in. The other three time travellers find out about each other's time-travel, but are aware neither than Naruto knows of it nor that he's also involved [[spoiler:until he finally tells them - leading to a SpitTake.]]
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* ShotgunWedding: Gaara was nearly forced to marry Hinata because Hiashi thought he was [[IsThatWhatTheyreCallingItNow "training"]] with Hinata without a chaperone. They were measuring Hinata for the wedding kimono while she was ''unconscious'' before Naruto cleared things up.
* ShroudedInMyth: The Uzumaki are infamous outside of Konoha to the point that mothers used them as a boogeyman to scare their children into being good. Several character thought Uzumaki were a myth until [[OhCrap they met Naruto]].
* TheSleepless: PlayedForLaughs, what bothers Gaara is not his inability to sleep, but the boredom of being awake in sleeping hours.
* ShroudedInMyth: The Uzumaki are infamous outside of Konoha to the point that mothers used them as a boogeyman to scare their children into being good. Several character thought Uzumaki were a myth until [[OhCrap they met Naruto]].
* TheSleepless: PlayedForLaughs, what bothers Gaara is not his inability to sleep, but the boredom of being awake in sleeping hours.
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* ShotgunWedding: Gaara was nearly forced to marry Hinata because Hiashi thought he was [[IsThatWhatTheyreCallingItNow "training"]] with Hinata without a chaperone. They were measuring Hinata for the wedding kimono while (while she was ''unconscious'' ''unconscious'') before Naruto cleared things up.
* ShroudedInMyth: The Uzumaki are infamous outside of Konoha to the point that mothers used them as a boogeyman to scare their children into being good. Severalcharacter characters thought Uzumaki were a myth until [[OhCrap they met Naruto]].
* TheSleepless: PlayedForLaughs, what bothers Gaara is not his inability to sleep, but the boredom of being awake in sleepinghours.hours with nothing to do.
--> ''He had a feeling that what had freaked Kankuro and Temari out about his game of Orochiball so badly was the fact that he had been behaving somewhat "out of character" rather than the viciousness and brutality of his actions. This was a side of him that almost nobody ever saw because, they were usually asleep when it came out. During his youth, he'd had to fill his empty hours with something, and killing assassins only took a second or two...''
* ShroudedInMyth: The Uzumaki are infamous outside of Konoha to the point that mothers used them as a boogeyman to scare their children into being good. Several
* TheSleepless: PlayedForLaughs, what bothers Gaara is not his inability to sleep, but the boredom of being awake in sleeping
--> ''He had a feeling that what had freaked Kankuro and Temari out about his game of Orochiball so badly was the fact that he had been behaving somewhat "out of character" rather than the viciousness and brutality of his actions. This was a side of him that almost nobody ever saw because, they were usually asleep when it came out. During his youth, he'd had to fill his empty hours with something, and killing assassins only took a second or two...''
* TakeThat: To Sasuke's early ''Shippuden'' outfit, in Chapter 23:
--> ''It wasn't just the whole curse seal and attempted body takeover thing that he feared. While he was willing to wear the ridiculous tracksuit since it actually served a purpose, he'd seen a sketch of what Orochimaru had him wearing in three years, and...He suppressed a shudder as he pictured the open fronted shirt, and purple assbow that apparently matched the one belonging to Orochimaru. The fangirls were bad enough now. He could only imagine what they'd be like if he wandered around with his shirt half-off. They'd probably try to rape him in public or something.''
--> ''It wasn't just the whole curse seal and attempted body takeover thing that he feared. While he was willing to wear the ridiculous tracksuit since it actually served a purpose, he'd seen a sketch of what Orochimaru had him wearing in three years, and...He suppressed a shudder as he pictured the open fronted shirt, and purple assbow that apparently matched the one belonging to Orochimaru. The fangirls were bad enough now. He could only imagine what they'd be like if he wandered around with his shirt half-off. They'd probably try to rape him in public or something.''
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* TookALevelInKindness: Gaara, [[spoiler: who was the Godaime Kazekage who accidentally time traveled]], PlayedForLaughs as everyone who personally knew him freaks out at sudden change in behavior.
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* TookALevelInKindness: Gaara, [[spoiler: who was the Godaime Kazekage who accidentally time traveled]], traveled]]. PlayedForLaughs as everyone who personally knew him freaks out at sudden change in behavior.
* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Played for laughs with Temari's deathly fear of insects - she ends up facing ''Shino'' in the Chnin Exam Finals, and makes herself look completely worthless as opposed to the decent showing against Shikamaru in the normal timeline.
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* YouWillBeSpared: Gatou's mercenaries thought Naruto was averting it when they discovered there was a hole in the boat he dumped them in. Turns out Naruto did intend to spare them, but Inari put a hole in their boat.
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* YouWillBeSpared: Gatou's mercenaries thought Naruto was averting it when they discovered there was a hole in the boat he dumped them in. Turns out Naruto did intend to spare them, but Inari ''Inari'' put a hole in their boat.
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* DepartmentOfChildDisservices: Hiruzen found out what [[RapeAsDrama happened to Naruto]] wasn't an isolated incident, he cleans house trying to correct this
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* [[spoiler: RapeAsBackstory: Sasuke was molested by his caretakers as a child.]]
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* [[spoiler: RapeAsBackstory: Sasuke was molested by his caretakers as a child.]] Naruto was nearly molested by an orphanage caretaker, who taking out his anger over the Kyuubi on him]]
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* AlmightyJanitor: [[spoiler: in Gaara's timeline,]] Naruto grew up to be the Hokage but never received a promotion and had to retake the Chunin Exam. Many people joked that Naruto was the new "Eternal Genin" or one has to be Kage-level to become a Chunin.
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* AlmightyJanitor: [[spoiler: in Naruto grew up, sorted out many of his affairs and eventually became Hokage [[spoiler:in Gaara's timeline,]] Naruto grew up to be the Hokage timeline]], but because he never received a prior promotion and he had to retake the Chunin Exam. Exams. Many people had joked that Naruto was the new "Eternal Genin" Genin", or that one has to be Kage-level to become a Chunin.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Iruka is set off by Kakashi and Jiraiya's sudden desire to be close to Naruto. The Uzumaki apparently ''weaponized'' this.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Iruka is set off by Kakashi and Jiraiya's sudden desire to [[NotWhatItLooksLike be close to Naruto.Naruto]]. The Uzumaki apparently ''weaponized'' this.
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* BrainBleach: a non-{{Squick}} version. Turns out Danzo is not immune to [[TheMessiah Naruto]], he has ROOT erase his memory after having prolonged contact with Naruto.
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* BrainBleach: a A non-{{Squick}} version. Turns out Danzo is not ''not'' immune to [[TheMessiah Naruto]], Naruto]] - he just has ROOT erase his memory each time after having prolonged contact with Naruto.the kid.
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* CantHoldHisLiquor: Naruto finds out when he and Sasuke go out for drinks to celebrate a successful D-Rank that Sasuke is a melancholic drunk and [[LooseLips tends to reveal personal secrets]]. [[spoiler: Which is how Naruto finds out Sasuke was neglected and sexually abused by his caretakers post Uchiha Massacre]]
* ContinuityDrift: Inconsistencies from Canon are utilized within story.
* ContinuityDrift: Inconsistencies from Canon are utilized within story.
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* CantHoldHisLiquor: Naruto finds out when he and Sasuke go out for drinks to celebrate a successful D-Rank that Sasuke is a melancholic drunk and [[LooseLips tends to reveal personal secrets]]. [[spoiler: Which is how Naruto finds out Sasuke was neglected and sexually abused by his caretakers post Uchiha Massacre]]
Massacre.]]
* ContinuityDrift: Inconsistencies from Canon are utilized and explained within story.
* ContinuityDrift: Inconsistencies from Canon are utilized and explained within story.
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* CrackFic: The story begins descending towards during the Exam finals. [[TropesAreNotBad Good.]]
* DeathIsCheap: Kabuto is accidentally killed in the Chunin Exam, Gaara predicts right away [[GenreSavvy he's coming back]]
* DeathIsCheap: Kabuto is accidentally killed in the Chunin Exam, Gaara predicts right away [[GenreSavvy he's coming back]]
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* CrackFic: The story begins descending towards this during the Exam finals. [[TropesAreNotBad Good.]]
Good]].
** Not that it wasn't already heavy on comedy, mind you.
* DeathIsCheap: Kabuto is accidentally (supposedly) killed in the ChuninExam, Gaara Exams; [[spoiler:Gaara]] predicts right away that [[GenreSavvy he's coming back]]back]].
** Not that it wasn't already heavy on comedy, mind you.
* DeathIsCheap: Kabuto is accidentally (supposedly) killed in the Chunin
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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: Including Naruto, who knew that Hinata was stalking him. Her being in [[ObliviousToLove love with however..]]
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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: Including Naruto, who knew that Hinata was stalking him. Her being in [[ObliviousToLove in love with him however..]]
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* HarmfulToMinors: Kakashi is shocked when it seems that Naruto read Icha-Icha.
** Sasuke is an alcoholic and started when his caretakers forced him to drink alcohol as a child.
* HighlyVisibleNinja: Naruto. But it's pointed out that Naruto managed to evade several skilled Chunin and Jounin while wearing bright orange and was only caught when he felt like it.
* IAteWhat: Naruto, after being invited to a Uchiha funerary [[ImAHumanitarian feast]]
** Sasuke is an alcoholic and started when his caretakers forced him to drink alcohol as a child.
* HighlyVisibleNinja: Naruto. But it's pointed out that Naruto managed to evade several skilled Chunin and Jounin while wearing bright orange and was only caught when he felt like it.
* IAteWhat: Naruto, after being invited to a Uchiha funerary [[ImAHumanitarian feast]]
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* HarmfulToMinors: Kakashi is shocked when it seems that Naruto has read Icha-Icha.
** Sasuke is analcoholic alcoholic, and started when his caretakers forced him to drink alcohol as a child.
* HighlyVisibleNinja: Naruto. But it's pointed out that Naruto managed to evade several skilled Chunin and Jounin while wearing bright orange and was only caught when he felt likeit.
it. [[spoiler:Both Sasuke and Neji become his proteges after he explains this to them.]]
* IAteWhat: Naruto, after being invited to a Uchiha funerary [[ImAHumanitarianfeast]]feast]].
** Sasuke is an
* HighlyVisibleNinja: Naruto. But it's pointed out that Naruto managed to evade several skilled Chunin and Jounin while wearing bright orange and was only caught when he felt like
* IAteWhat: Naruto, after being invited to a Uchiha funerary [[ImAHumanitarian
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* KidsAreCruel: Double Subverted Inari put a hole in the escaping mercenaries' boat and felt bad about it, not realizing that the mercenaries would drown. His mother simply punishes him with no dessert, knowing her son accidentally committed homicide.
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* KidsAreCruel: Double Subverted Played with - Inari put a hole in the escaping mercenaries' boat and knowing full well that they'd drown, but he felt bad about it, not realizing that the mercenaries would drown. it. His mother simply punishes him with no dessert, knowing her son accidentally committed homicide.homicide but unable to ''not'' feel relieved by those men's deaths.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Hiruzen ''freaked'' when Kakashi came to a meeting an hour early
** Temari and Kankuro ''freak'' when [[PeggySue Gaara]] suddenly acts nice
* PaedoHunt: Mocked at first, but taken seriously when Naruto accidentally finds actual pedophiles and tells Iruka. Afterward, all genin were required to take a seminar on how to recognize sexual predators. Naruto was forced to explain why Kakashi and Jiraiya weren't pedophile, just horribly misguided.
** A couple of parents called for the execution of the newly convicted pedophiles
** Temari and Kankuro ''freak'' when [[PeggySue Gaara]] suddenly acts nice
* PaedoHunt: Mocked at first, but taken seriously when Naruto accidentally finds actual pedophiles and tells Iruka. Afterward, all genin were required to take a seminar on how to recognize sexual predators. Naruto was forced to explain why Kakashi and Jiraiya weren't pedophile, just horribly misguided.
** A couple of parents called for the execution of the newly convicted pedophiles
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Hiruzen ''freaked'' almost had a ''heart attack'' when Kakashi came to a meeting an hour early
early.
** Temari and Kankuro ''freak'' when [[PeggySue Gaara]] suddenly actsnice
nice.
* PaedoHunt: Mocked at first, but taken seriously when Naruto accidentally finds actual pedophiles and tells Iruka. Afterward, all genin were required to take a seminar on how to recognize sexual predators. Naruto was forced to explain why Kakashi and Jiraiya weren'tpedophile, pedophiles, just horribly misguided.
** A couple of parents called for the execution of the newly convictedpedophilespedophiles.
** Temari and Kankuro ''freak'' when [[PeggySue Gaara]] suddenly acts
* PaedoHunt: Mocked at first, but taken seriously when Naruto accidentally finds actual pedophiles and tells Iruka. Afterward, all genin were required to take a seminar on how to recognize sexual predators. Naruto was forced to explain why Kakashi and Jiraiya weren't
** A couple of parents called for the execution of the newly convicted
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* RantInducingSlight: Gai unintentionally accuses Naruto of being a possible traitor, Kakashi is angry and goes off a rant demanding why people are blaming Naruto for everything
* [[spoiler: RapeAsBackstory: Sasuke was molested by his caretakers as a child]]
* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Sexual abuse of minors is a literal death sentence.
* RealMenWearPink: Gaara likes to do macrame, design and make clothes and blankets for his siblings
* [[spoiler: RapeAsBackstory: Sasuke was molested by his caretakers as a child]]
* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Sexual abuse of minors is a literal death sentence.
* RealMenWearPink: Gaara likes to do macrame, design and make clothes and blankets for his siblings
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* RantInducingSlight: Gai unintentionally accuses Naruto of being a possible traitor, Kakashi is angry and goes off a rant demanding to know why people are blaming immediate blame Naruto for everything
everything.
** Justified - Kakashi was proposing an IHaveAFriend[=/=]WhatIf scenario to try and get advice on how he's supposed to feel about Sasuke (who has betrayed/will betray the village and Naruto); Gai mistakenly assumed he was referring to Naruto. After offending Kakashi, he started kicked himself for not noticing the parallels between Neji/Sasuke and Lee/Naruto.
* [[spoiler: RapeAsBackstory: Sasuke was molested by his caretakers as achild]]
child.]]
* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Sexual abuse of minors is a literal deathsentence.
sentence in Konoha.
* RealMenWearPink: Gaara likes to do macrame, design and make clothes and blankets for hissiblingssiblings.
** Justified - Kakashi was proposing an IHaveAFriend[=/=]WhatIf scenario to try and get advice on how he's supposed to feel about Sasuke (who has betrayed/will betray the village and Naruto); Gai mistakenly assumed he was referring to Naruto. After offending Kakashi, he started kicked himself for not noticing the parallels between Neji/Sasuke and Lee/Naruto.
* [[spoiler: RapeAsBackstory: Sasuke was molested by his caretakers as a
* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Sexual abuse of minors is a literal death
* RealMenWearPink: Gaara likes to do macrame, design and make clothes and blankets for his
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* RunningGag: Water Country and the Uzumaki
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* RunningGag: Water Country and the UzumakiUzumaki.
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* ShotgunWedding: Gaara was nearly forced to marry Hinata because Hiashi thought he was [[IsThatWhatTheyreCallingItNow "training"]] with Hinata without a chaperone. They were measuring Hinata for the wedding kimono while she was unconscious.
* ShroudedInMyth: The Uzumaki are infamous outside of Konoha to the point that mothers used them as a boogeyman to scare their children into being good. Several character thought Uzumaki were a myth until [[OhCrap they met Naruto.]]
* ShroudedInMyth: The Uzumaki are infamous outside of Konoha to the point that mothers used them as a boogeyman to scare their children into being good. Several character thought Uzumaki were a myth until [[OhCrap they met Naruto.]]
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* ShotgunWedding: Gaara was nearly forced to marry Hinata because Hiashi thought he was [[IsThatWhatTheyreCallingItNow "training"]] with Hinata without a chaperone. They were measuring Hinata for the wedding kimono while she was unconscious.
''unconscious'' before Naruto cleared things up.
* ShroudedInMyth: The Uzumaki are infamous outside of Konoha to the point that mothers used them as a boogeyman to scare their children into being good. Several character thought Uzumaki were a myth until [[OhCrap they metNaruto.]] Naruto]].
* ShroudedInMyth: The Uzumaki are infamous outside of Konoha to the point that mothers used them as a boogeyman to scare their children into being good. Several character thought Uzumaki were a myth until [[OhCrap they met
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* TalkingDownTheSuicidal:[[spoiler: Naruto talks down Hinata]]
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* TalkingDownTheSuicidal:[[spoiler: Naruto talks down Hinata]]Hinata after Neji performed his BreakThemByTalking, which was successful due to Naruto's absence from the exam.]]
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotHeinous: Naruto gave Sasuke Kakashi's copy of Icha Icha Paradise to keep it hostage during the bell test, Sasuke drops it and kicked it into the bushes. Kakashi beats Sasuke up for disrespecting the book.
** Naruto realized Kabuto delibrately made himself smell like ramen.
** Naruto realized Kabuto delibrately made himself smell like ramen.
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotHeinous: Naruto gave gives Sasuke Kakashi's copy of Icha Icha Paradise Paradise, advising him to keep it hostage during the bell test, test; Sasuke instead drops it and kicked kicks it into the bushes. Kakashi beats Sasuke proceeds to beat him up for disrespecting the book.
** Naruto realized that Kabuto delibrately made himself smell likeramen.ramen during the Chunin Exams.
** Naruto realized that Kabuto delibrately made himself smell like
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* ICanExplain: Naruto fast-talks Hiashi [[spoiler: from forcing Gaara to marry Hinata by explaining that Gaara and Hinata were with him but to Gaara, having a chaperone meant something else]].
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* AlternateTimeline: Jiraiya, Tenzo, Kakashi, Naruto [[spoiler: and Gaara]] all come from different timelines with different Bad Ends. Invoked in the {{Omake}}, [[spoiler: when Kakashi finds out that Obito survived and he killed Rin in the new timeline, when Obito died and Rin died taking a platoon of Iwa nin in Kakashi's original timeline.]]
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* AlternateTimeline: Jiraiya, Tenzo, Kakashi, Naruto [[spoiler: and Gaara]] all come from different timelines with different Bad Ends. Invoked in the {{Omake}}, [[spoiler: when Kakashi finds out that Obito survived and he killed Rin in the new timeline, when where Obito died and Rin died taking a platoon of Iwa nin for real in Kakashi's original timeline.]]
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* TakingYouWithMe: Rin died taking down a whole platoon of Iwa nin in Kakashi's [[spoiler: original]] timeline.