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* {{Prequel}}: Appears to be the case, as Hughes is alive and well and neither the homunculi ''or Nina'' are mentioned in a chimera-heavy plot.
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* KidnappedScientist: An original character is a textbook example. She even introduces himself herself as "Doc".
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* SayingTooMuch: Roy mentions studying flame alchemy.
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* SayingTooMuch: Roy accidentally mentions studying flame alchemy.
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* ThermalDissonance: Roy can generate heat from his body: from [[{{MundaneUtility}} comfortable]] to scorching…
* WithholdingTheirName: Roy also doesn't tell Doc his real name. However...
* WithholdingTheirName: Roy also doesn't tell Doc his real name. However...
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* ThermalDissonance: Roy can generate heat from his body: from [[{{MundaneUtility}} comfortable]] to scorching…
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* AppliedPhlebotinum: Discussed by Roy and
* BioAugmentation: The captors use their prisoners for [[{{HalfHumanHybrid}} human chimeras]], aiming for a perfectly human-looking one with no transformation possibility but enhanced and/or inhuman abilities (think Martel).
* CursedWithAwesome: Roy won't ever be able to rise through the ranks to reach his goal of reforming Amestris. On the more urgent side, he's a man on the run. The new fire powers are
* KidnappedScientist: An original character is a textbook example. She even introduces himself as "Doc".
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* WithholdingTheirName: Roy also doesn't tell Doc his real name. However...
* SayingTooMuch: Roy mentions studying flame alchemy.
* BioAugmentation: The captors use their prisoners for [[{{HalfHumanHybrid}} human chimeras]], aiming for a perfectly human-looking one with no transformation possibility but enhanced and/or inhuman abilities (think Martel).
* SayingTooMuch: Roy mentions studying flame alchemy.
* BioAugmentation: The captors use their prisoners for [[{{HalfHumanHybrid}} human chimeras]], aiming for a perfectly human-looking one with no transformation possibility but enhanced and/or inhuman abilities (think Martel).
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* WithholdingTheirName: EyeColorChange: Roy's irises change from black to crimson.
* FugitiveArc: As of chapter 12, Royalso doesn't tell Doc his real name. However...
* SayingTooMuch: Roy mentions studying flame alchemy.
* BioAugmentation: The captors use their prisoners for [[{{HalfHumanHybrid}} human chimeras]], aiming for a perfectly human-looking one with no transformation possibility but enhanced and/or inhuman abilities (think Martel).and Edward are men on the run.
* FugitiveArc: As of chapter 12, Roy
* SayingTooMuch: Roy mentions studying flame alchemy.
* BioAugmentation: The captors use their prisoners for [[{{HalfHumanHybrid}} human chimeras]], aiming for a perfectly human-looking one with no transformation possibility but enhanced and/or inhuman abilities (think Martel).
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* AllThereInTheManual: The fanfic states that chimeras can't perform alchemy, as their life forces are "tangled" inside and they can't channel the energy for transmutation through themselves. Guess what this helps to determine...
* SlowTransformation: Due to a mistake in the transmutation circle, Roy's chimerization is delayed, manifesting in small ways, and then the "optimisation" happens.
* SlowTransformation: Due to a mistake in the transmutation circle, Roy's chimerization is delayed, manifesting in small ways, and then the "optimisation" happens.
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* AllThereInTheManual: HealingFactor: Not explored yet, but implied to exist. In real life, salamanders can regenerate whole limbs and eyeballs. Sorry, Edward.
* HilariousInHindsight: The fanficstates that chimeras can't perform alchemy, was started before the live-action movie was released, but both make Hakuro one of the major villains.
* KidnappedScientist: An original character is a textbook example. She even introduces himself as "Doc".
* MadeOfIncendium: Salamanders secrete mucus from theirlife forces skin. But how would you like secreting ''kerosene''? That's how the "fuel" part of flame alchemy plays out.
* NoSuchThingAsDehydration: Averted constantly. Being part-amphibian, chimera!Roy drinks a lot of water, prefers moist air, and using the new powers leaves him severely dehydrated.
* {{Prequel}}: Appears to be the case, as Hughes is alive and well and neither the homunculi ''or Nina'' are"tangled" inside and they can't channel the energy for transmutation through themselves. Guess what this helps to determine...
* SlowTransformation: Due to a mistakementioned in the transmutation circle, Roy's chimerization is delayed, manifesting in small ways, and then the "optimisation" happens.a chimera-heavy plot.
* HilariousInHindsight: The fanfic
* KidnappedScientist: An original character is a textbook example. She even introduces himself as "Doc".
* MadeOfIncendium: Salamanders secrete mucus from their
* NoSuchThingAsDehydration: Averted constantly. Being part-amphibian, chimera!Roy drinks a lot of water, prefers moist air, and using the new powers leaves him severely dehydrated.
* {{Prequel}}: Appears to be the case, as Hughes is alive and well and neither the homunculi ''or Nina'' are
* SlowTransformation: Due to a mistake
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* RejectedApology: General Hakuro didn't even try to help. General Hakuro attempts to calmly apologize. Roy Mustang is [[{{UnstoppableRage}} furious]]. Roy Mustang's optimization kicks in. Ask Hakuro how it went.
* FugitiveArc: As of chapter 12, Roy and Edward are men on the run.
* FugitiveArc: As of chapter 12, Roy and Edward are men on the run.
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* RejectedApology: General Hakuro didn't even try to help. General Hakuro attempts to calmly apologize. PowerGlows: ...and glows proportionally.
* PowerIncontinence: So far RoyMustang is [[{{UnstoppableRage}} furious]]. Roy Mustang's optimization kicks in. Ask Hakuro only knows one way of using the flames: [[{{PsychoactivePowers}} stirring up his emotions]]. A few times he had no idea how it went.
* FugitiveArc: As of chapter 12, Royhe [[{{StuffBlowingUp}} did]] [[{{Fireballs}} something]], and Edward are men on once the run.power activated while he was asleep.
* PowerTattoo: In a feat of [[{{Irony}} dark irony]], the (slightly warped) circle from the ignition glove becomes a tattoo on Roy's upper back.
* PowerIncontinence: So far Roy
* FugitiveArc: As of chapter 12, Roy
* PowerTattoo: In a feat of [[{{Irony}} dark irony]], the (slightly warped) circle from the ignition glove becomes a tattoo on Roy's upper back.
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* PowerTattoo: In a feat of [[{{Irony}} dark irony]], the (slightly warped) circle from the ignition glove becomes a tattoo on Roy's upper back.
* ThermalDissonance: Roy can generate heat from his body: from [[{{MundaneUtility}} comfortable]] to scorching...
* PowerGlows: ...and glows proportionally.
* MadeOfIncendium: Salamanders secrete mucus from their skin. But how would you like secreting ''kerosene''? That's how the "fuel" part of flame alchemy plays out.
* RequiredSecondaryPowers: An immunity to fire - the gloves weren't flammable, after all - and smoke.
* PowerIncontinence: So far Roy only knows one way of using the flames: [[{{PsychoactivePowers}} stirring up his emotions]]. A few times he had no idea how he [[{{StuffBlowingUp}} did]] [[{{Fireballs}} something]], and once the power activated while he was asleep.
* NoSuchThingAsDehydration: Averted constanly. Being part-amphibian, chimera!Roy drinks a lot of water, prefers moist air, and using the new powers leaves him severely dehydrated.
* CursedWithAwesome: Roy won't ever be able to rise through the ranks to reach his goal of reforming Amestris. On the more urgent side, he's a man on the run. The new fire powers are barely useful in combat. They still [[{{WreathedInFlames}} feel amazing]]...
* HealingFactor: Not explored yet, but implied to exist. In real life, salamanders can regenerate whole limbs and eyeballs. Sorry, Edward.
* AppliedPhlebotinum: Discussed by Roy and Ed in-universe; the later states that soul binding seems easier to explain than how Roy's transmutation worked.
* HilariousInHindsight: The fanfic was started before the live-action movie was released, but both make Hakuro one of the major villains.
* ThermalDissonance: Roy can generate heat from his body: from [[{{MundaneUtility}} comfortable]] to scorching...
* PowerGlows: ...and glows proportionally.
* MadeOfIncendium: Salamanders secrete mucus from their skin. But how would you like secreting ''kerosene''? That's how the "fuel" part of flame alchemy plays out.
* RequiredSecondaryPowers: An immunity to fire - the gloves weren't flammable, after all - and smoke.
* PowerIncontinence: So far Roy only knows one way of using the flames: [[{{PsychoactivePowers}} stirring up his emotions]]. A few times he had no idea how he [[{{StuffBlowingUp}} did]] [[{{Fireballs}} something]], and once the power activated while he was asleep.
* NoSuchThingAsDehydration: Averted constanly. Being part-amphibian, chimera!Roy drinks a lot of water, prefers moist air, and using the new powers leaves him severely dehydrated.
* CursedWithAwesome: Roy won't ever be able to rise through the ranks to reach his goal of reforming Amestris. On the more urgent side, he's a man on the run. The new fire powers are barely useful in combat. They still [[{{WreathedInFlames}} feel amazing]]...
* HealingFactor: Not explored yet, but implied to exist. In real life, salamanders can regenerate whole limbs and eyeballs. Sorry, Edward.
* AppliedPhlebotinum: Discussed by Roy and Ed in-universe; the later states that soul binding seems easier to explain than how Roy's transmutation worked.
* HilariousInHindsight: The fanfic was started before the live-action movie was released, but both make Hakuro one of the major villains.
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* PowerTattoo: In SayingTooMuch: Roy mentions studying flame alchemy.
* SlowTransformation: Due to afeat of [[{{Irony}} dark irony]], mistake in the (slightly warped) circle from the ignition glove becomes a tattoo on transmutation circle, Roy's upper back.
chimerization is delayed, manifesting in small ways, and then the "optimisation" happens
* SuperNotDrowningSkills: Downplayed and justified, as breath holding for half an hour is an IRL ability of salamanders.
* ThermalDissonance: Roy can generate heat from his body: from [[{{MundaneUtility}} comfortable]] toscorching...
scorching…
*PowerGlows: ...and glows proportionally.
* MadeOfIncendium: Salamanders secrete mucus from their skin. But how would you like secreting ''kerosene''? That's how the "fuel" part of flame alchemy plays out.
* RequiredSecondaryPowers: An immunity to fire - the gloves weren't flammable, after all - and smoke.
* PowerIncontinence: So farWithholdingTheirName: Roy only knows one way of using the flames: [[{{PsychoactivePowers}} stirring up also doesn't tell Doc his emotions]]. A few times he had no idea how he [[{{StuffBlowingUp}} did]] [[{{Fireballs}} something]], and once the power activated while he was asleep.
* NoSuchThingAsDehydration: Averted constanly. Being part-amphibian, chimera!Roy drinks a lot of water, prefers moist air, and using the new powers leaves him severely dehydrated.
* CursedWithAwesome: Roy won't ever be able to rise through the ranks to reach his goal of reforming Amestris. On the more urgent side, he's a man on the run. The new fire powers are barely useful in combat. They still [[{{WreathedInFlames}} feel amazing]]...
* HealingFactor: Not explored yet, but implied to exist. Inreal life, salamanders can regenerate whole limbs and eyeballs. Sorry, Edward.
* AppliedPhlebotinum: Discussed by Roy and Ed in-universe; the later states that soul binding seems easier to explain than how Roy's transmutation worked.
* HilariousInHindsight: The fanfic was started before the live-action movie was released, but both make Hakuro one of the major villains.name. However...
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* SlowTransformation: Due to a
* SuperNotDrowningSkills: Downplayed and justified, as breath holding for half an hour is an IRL ability of salamanders.
* ThermalDissonance: Roy can generate heat from his body: from [[{{MundaneUtility}} comfortable]] to
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* MadeOfIncendium: Salamanders secrete mucus from their skin. But how would you like secreting ''kerosene''? That's how the "fuel" part of flame alchemy plays out.
* RequiredSecondaryPowers: An immunity to fire - the gloves weren't flammable, after all - and smoke.
* PowerIncontinence: So far
* NoSuchThingAsDehydration: Averted constanly. Being part-amphibian, chimera!Roy drinks a lot of water, prefers moist air, and using the new powers leaves him severely dehydrated.
* CursedWithAwesome: Roy won't ever be able to rise through the ranks to reach his goal of reforming Amestris. On the more urgent side, he's a man on the run. The new fire powers are barely useful in combat. They still [[{{WreathedInFlames}} feel amazing]]...
* HealingFactor: Not explored yet, but implied to exist. In
* AppliedPhlebotinum: Discussed by Roy and Ed in-universe; the later states that soul binding seems easier to explain than how Roy's transmutation worked.
* HilariousInHindsight: The fanfic was started before the live-action movie was released, but both make Hakuro one of the major villains.
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''Through Fire and Rain'' is an ongoing ''Manga/FullmetalAlchemist'' fanfic by Kemnam. The story begins with Roy Mustang being [[{{NebulousEvilOrganisation}} captured]] and eventually transmuted into a salamander chimera, which doesn't exactly go right. [[spoiler: One of Roy's gloves is accidentally dropped into the circle with him and a salamander and, being an alchemical object, gets mixed in. This results in a '''deep''' affinity for flame alchemy and other interesting things.]]
This fic is on [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9427663/Through-Fire-and-Rain Fanfiction.net]] and on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/12746133/chapters/29072214 AO3]].
'''As major and minor revelations are central to this story, all spoilers will be unmarked!'''
!!Tropes used in ''Through Fire and Rain'':
*{{Prequel}}: Appears to be the case, as Hughes is alive and well and neither the homunculi ''or Nina'' are mentioned in a chimera-heavy plot.
*KidnappedScientist: An original character is a textbook example. She even introduces himself as "Doc".
*DefiantCaptive: Roy and Doc, of course.
*WithholdingTheirName: Roy also doesn't tell Doc his real name. However...
*SayingTooMuch: Roy mentions studying flame alchemy.
*BioAugmentation: The captors use their prisoners for [[{{HalfHumanHybrid}} human chimeras]], aiming for a perfectly human-looking one with no transformation possibility but enhanced and/or inhuman abilities (think Martel).
*FierySalamander: That's what Roy is transmuted with. "Fiery" and "salamander" are two distinct parts, but he gets both.
*AllThereInTheManual: The fanfic states that chimeras can't perform alchemy, as their life forces are "tangled" inside and they can't channel the energy for transmutation through themselves. Guess what this helps to determine...
*SlowTransformation: Due to a mistake in the transmutation circle, Roy's chimerization is delayed, manifesting in small ways, and then the "optimisation" happens.
*PlayingWithFire: Roy demonstrates his ability to perform flame alchemy to prove he's not a chimera, then loses the ability, and then gets back a ''peculiar'' variation of it.
*RejectedApology: General Hakuro didn't even try to help. General Hakuro attempts to calmly apologize. Roy Mustang is [[{{UnstoppableRage}} furious]]. Roy Mustang's optimization kicks in. Ask Hakuro how it went.
*FugitiveArc: As of chapter 12, Roy and Edward are men on the run.
*PowerMakeover: ''Extensive''. Described below, but not completely.
*EyeColorChange: Roy's irises change from black to crimson.
*RedEyesTakeWarning
*SuperNotDrowningSkills: Downplayed and justified, as breath holding for half an hour is an IRL ability of salamanders.
*ScaryTeeth: Also justified, as salamanders have all sharp teeth.
*PowerTattoo: In a feat of [[{{Irony}} dark irony]], the (slightly warped) circle from the ignition glove becomes a tattoo on Roy's upper back.
*ThermalDissonance: Roy can generate heat from his body: from [[{{MundaneUtility}} comfortable]] to scorching...
*PowerGlows: ...and glows proportionally.
*MadeOfIncendium: Salamanders secrete mucus from their skin. But how would you like secreting ''kerosene''? That's how the "fuel" part of flame alchemy plays out.
*RequiredSecondaryPowers: An immunity to fire - the gloves weren't flammable, after all - and smoke.
*PowerIncontinence: So far Roy only knows one way of using the flames: [[{{PsychoactivePowers}} stirring up his emotions]]. A few times he had no idea how he [[{{StuffBlowingUp}} did]] [[{{Fireballs}} something]], and once the power activated while he was asleep.
*NoSuchThingAsDehydration: Averted constanly. Being part-amphibian, chimera!Roy drinks a lot of water, prefers moist air, and using the new powers leaves him severely dehydrated.
*CursedWithAwesome: Roy won't ever be able to rise through the ranks to reach his goal of reforming Amestris. On the more urgent side, he's a man on the run. The new fire powers are barely useful in combat. They still [[{{WreathedInFlames}} feel amazing]]...
*HealingFactor: Not explored yet, but implied to exist. In real life, salamanders can regenerate whole limbs and eyeballs. Sorry, Edward.
*AppliedPhlebotinum: Discussed by Roy and Ed in-universe; the later states that soul binding seems easier to explain than how Roy's transmutation worked.
*HilariousInHindsight: The fanfic was started before the live-action movie was released, but both make Hakuro one of the major villains.
This fic is on [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9427663/Through-Fire-and-Rain Fanfiction.net]] and on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/12746133/chapters/29072214 AO3]].
'''As major and minor revelations are central to this story, all spoilers will be unmarked!'''
!!Tropes used in ''Through Fire and Rain'':
*{{Prequel}}: Appears to be the case, as Hughes is alive and well and neither the homunculi ''or Nina'' are mentioned in a chimera-heavy plot.
*KidnappedScientist: An original character is a textbook example. She even introduces himself as "Doc".
*DefiantCaptive: Roy and Doc, of course.
*WithholdingTheirName: Roy also doesn't tell Doc his real name. However...
*SayingTooMuch: Roy mentions studying flame alchemy.
*BioAugmentation: The captors use their prisoners for [[{{HalfHumanHybrid}} human chimeras]], aiming for a perfectly human-looking one with no transformation possibility but enhanced and/or inhuman abilities (think Martel).
*FierySalamander: That's what Roy is transmuted with. "Fiery" and "salamander" are two distinct parts, but he gets both.
*AllThereInTheManual: The fanfic states that chimeras can't perform alchemy, as their life forces are "tangled" inside and they can't channel the energy for transmutation through themselves. Guess what this helps to determine...
*SlowTransformation: Due to a mistake in the transmutation circle, Roy's chimerization is delayed, manifesting in small ways, and then the "optimisation" happens.
*PlayingWithFire: Roy demonstrates his ability to perform flame alchemy to prove he's not a chimera, then loses the ability, and then gets back a ''peculiar'' variation of it.
*RejectedApology: General Hakuro didn't even try to help. General Hakuro attempts to calmly apologize. Roy Mustang is [[{{UnstoppableRage}} furious]]. Roy Mustang's optimization kicks in. Ask Hakuro how it went.
*FugitiveArc: As of chapter 12, Roy and Edward are men on the run.
*PowerMakeover: ''Extensive''. Described below, but not completely.
*EyeColorChange: Roy's irises change from black to crimson.
*RedEyesTakeWarning
*SuperNotDrowningSkills: Downplayed and justified, as breath holding for half an hour is an IRL ability of salamanders.
*ScaryTeeth: Also justified, as salamanders have all sharp teeth.
*PowerTattoo: In a feat of [[{{Irony}} dark irony]], the (slightly warped) circle from the ignition glove becomes a tattoo on Roy's upper back.
*ThermalDissonance: Roy can generate heat from his body: from [[{{MundaneUtility}} comfortable]] to scorching...
*PowerGlows: ...and glows proportionally.
*MadeOfIncendium: Salamanders secrete mucus from their skin. But how would you like secreting ''kerosene''? That's how the "fuel" part of flame alchemy plays out.
*RequiredSecondaryPowers: An immunity to fire - the gloves weren't flammable, after all - and smoke.
*PowerIncontinence: So far Roy only knows one way of using the flames: [[{{PsychoactivePowers}} stirring up his emotions]]. A few times he had no idea how he [[{{StuffBlowingUp}} did]] [[{{Fireballs}} something]], and once the power activated while he was asleep.
*NoSuchThingAsDehydration: Averted constanly. Being part-amphibian, chimera!Roy drinks a lot of water, prefers moist air, and using the new powers leaves him severely dehydrated.
*CursedWithAwesome: Roy won't ever be able to rise through the ranks to reach his goal of reforming Amestris. On the more urgent side, he's a man on the run. The new fire powers are barely useful in combat. They still [[{{WreathedInFlames}} feel amazing]]...
*HealingFactor: Not explored yet, but implied to exist. In real life, salamanders can regenerate whole limbs and eyeballs. Sorry, Edward.
*AppliedPhlebotinum: Discussed by Roy and Ed in-universe; the later states that soul binding seems easier to explain than how Roy's transmutation worked.
*HilariousInHindsight: The fanfic was started before the live-action movie was released, but both make Hakuro one of the major villains.
