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As per TRS, the current definition of Would Hit A Girl is "A guy that has no problems with violence against women is treated as morally questionable at best or evil at worst in a work's narrative and other characters". Any example that doesn't fit the new definition is removed.
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* WouldHitAGirl: [[spoiler:Y3: Jamie Davis accuses Elan Malfoy of cheating on her and tries to hex him. She gets off three spells, which he blocks, before he uses a spell that breaks all the bones in her wand hand.]]
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** ''VideoGame/BattleChess'': On the giant chess board in Y1, the rook turns into a rock monster.
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* CallForward: Goyle has quite the affinity for fire magicks. Readers of the series will remember that torched the Room of Requirement with ''[[DangerousForbiddenTechnique Fiendfyre]]'' in Deathly Hallows.
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* CallForward: Goyle has quite the affinity for fire magicks. Readers of the series will remember that he torched the Room of Requirement with ''[[DangerousForbiddenTechnique Fiendfyre]]'' in Deathly Hallows.
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''They Shook Hands'' is a series of ForWantOfANail / AlternateUniverse Harry Potter stories written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2560219/Dethryl Dethryl]]. The first chapters were posted on the author's Yahoo!group before the release of ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheOrderOfThePhoenix Order of the Phoenix]]'' in 2003. It has gained enough fame in the fandom that it was featured and discussed on Podcast/PotterFicWeekly.
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''They Shook Hands'' is a series of ForWantOfANail / AlternateUniverse Harry Potter stories written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2560219/Dethryl Dethryl]]. The first ten chapters were posted on the author's Yahoo!group before the release of ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheOrderOfThePhoenix Order of the Phoenix]]'' in 2003. It has gained enough fame in the fandom that it was featured and discussed on Podcast/PotterFicWeekly.
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** ''Series/MontyPythonsFlyingCircus''
*** A few lines of one scene with Professor Sinistra appear to have been lifted from the Management Training Course sketch. WordOfGod: They are.
*** Some remarks by Elan are very reminiscent of the Writers sketch. WordOfGod: Again correct.
*** Also, Dumbledore sometimes acts like the Psychiatrist and uses strange turns of phrase for "Come in" and "Sit down." WordOfGod: but you missed this one.
*** An early one in Y1, there is no Rule #6 in the Slytherin House rules. WordOfGod: And this one.
** ''Film/ThePrincessBride'': Several quotes slipped in very smoothly. Draco to Goyle: "Am I going mad, or did the word 'think' just escape your lips?"
** ''Franchise/StarWars'': Elan quotes Vader in Empire, "Search your feelings. You know I'm telling you the truth."
** ''Franchise/TheHitchhikersGuideToTheGalaxy'': The lifts in the Ministry of Magic are just as happy to serve as the doors in Hitchhiker's Guide. (Just so you know, that came from a joke chapter that Dethryl posted on April Fool's Day.) [[spoiler: Yes, but he brought it back.]]
*** A few lines of one scene with Professor Sinistra appear to have been lifted from the Management Training Course sketch. WordOfGod: They are.
*** Some remarks by Elan are very reminiscent of the Writers sketch. WordOfGod: Again correct.
*** Also, Dumbledore sometimes acts like the Psychiatrist and uses strange turns of phrase for "Come in" and "Sit down." WordOfGod: but you missed this one.
*** An early one in Y1, there is no Rule #6 in the Slytherin House rules. WordOfGod: And this one.
** ''Film/ThePrincessBride'': Several quotes slipped in very smoothly. Draco to Goyle: "Am I going mad, or did the word 'think' just escape your lips?"
** ''Franchise/StarWars'': Elan quotes Vader in Empire, "Search your feelings. You know I'm telling you the truth."
** ''Franchise/TheHitchhikersGuideToTheGalaxy'': The lifts in the Ministry of Magic are just as happy to serve as the doors in Hitchhiker's Guide. (Just so you know, that came from a joke chapter that Dethryl posted on April Fool's Day.) [[spoiler: Yes, but he brought it back.]]
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** ''Series/MontyPythonsFlyingCircus''
*** A few lines''Series/Babylon5'': Dwarfen society consists of one scene with Professor Sinistra appear to have been lifted the Religious caste, the Worker caste, and the Warrior caste. Dethryl will buy anything that has Creator/JMichaelStraczynski's name on it, so this is definitely an homage and not a rip-off.
** ''Series/BattlestarGalactica2003'': [[spoiler:Mr. Malfoy]] is on the run from theManagement Training Course sketch. WordOfGod: They are.
*** Some remarks by Elan are very reminiscent of the Writers sketch. WordOfGod: Again correct.
*** Also, Dumbledore sometimes acts like the PsychiatristDeath Eaters and uses strange turns of phrase for "Come in" and "Sit down." WordOfGod: but you missed this one.
*** An early one in Y1, there is no Rule #6 in the Slytherin House rules. WordOfGod: And this one.
** ''Film/ThePrincessBride'': Several quotes slipped in very smoothly. Draconeeds to Goyle: "Am I going mad, or did the word 'think' just escape your lips?"
** ''Franchise/StarWars'': Elan quotes Vader in Empire, "Search your feelings. You know I'm telling you the truth."
** ''Franchise/TheHitchhikersGuideToTheGalaxy'': The lifts in the Ministry of Magic are just as happyApparate every 33 minutes to serve as the doors in Hitchhiker's Guide. (Just so you know, that came from a joke chapter that Dethryl posted on April Fool's Day.) [[spoiler: Yes, but he brought it back.]]avoid being tracked.
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** ''Series/BattlestarGalactica2003'': [[spoiler:Mr. Malfoy]] is on the run from the
*** Some remarks by Elan are very reminiscent of the Writers sketch. WordOfGod: Again correct.
*** Also, Dumbledore sometimes acts like the Psychiatrist
*** An early one in Y1, there is no Rule #6 in the Slytherin House rules. WordOfGod: And this one.
** ''Film/ThePrincessBride'': Several quotes slipped in very smoothly. Draco
** ''Franchise/StarWars'': Elan quotes Vader in Empire, "Search your feelings. You know I'm telling you the truth."
** ''Franchise/TheHitchhikersGuideToTheGalaxy'': The lifts in the Ministry of Magic are just as happy
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** The "fat head" gag is adapted from WesternAnimation/InvaderZim.
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** ''Literature/LordDarcy'': Some of Mr. Nott's lessons about number theory draw on Randall Garrett's excellent work.
** ''Series/Babylon5'': Dwarfen society consists of the Religious caste, the Worker caste, and the Warrior caste. Dethryl will buy anything that has Creator/JMichaelStraczynski's name on it, so this is definitely an homage and not a rip-off.
** ''Series/Babylon5'': Dwarfen society consists of the Religious caste, the Worker caste, and the Warrior caste. Dethryl will buy anything that has Creator/JMichaelStraczynski's name on it, so this is definitely an homage and not a rip-off.
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** ''Franchise/TheHitchhikersGuideToTheGalaxy'': The lifts in the Ministry of Magic are just as happy to serve as the doors in Hitchhiker's Guide. (Just so you know, that came from a joke chapter that Dethryl posted on April Fool's Day.) [[spoiler: Yes, but he brought it back.]]
** The "fat head" gag is adapted from WesternAnimation/InvaderZim.
** ''Literature/LordDarcy'': Some of Mr. Nott's lessons about number theory draw on Randall Garrett's excellent work.
** The "fat head" gag is adapted from WesternAnimation/InvaderZim.
** ''Literature/LordDarcy'': Some of Mr. Nott's lessons about number theory draw on Randall Garrett's excellent work.
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** ''Series/MontyPythonsFlyingCircus''
*** A few lines of one scene with Professor Sinistra appear to have been lifted from the Management Training Course sketch. WordOfGod: They are.
*** Some remarks by Elan are very reminiscent of the Writers sketch. WordOfGod: Again correct.
*** Also, Dumbledore sometimes acts like the Psychiatrist and uses strange turns of phrase for "Come in" and "Sit down." WordOfGod: but you missed this one.
*** An early one in Y1, there is no Rule #6 in the Slytherin House rules. WordOfGod: And this one.
** ''Film/ThePrincessBride'': Several quotes slipped in very smoothly. Draco to Goyle: "Am I going mad, or did the word 'think' just escape your lips?"
** ''Franchise/StarWars'': Elan quotes Vader in Empire, "Search your feelings. You know I'm telling you the truth."
*** A few lines of one scene with Professor Sinistra appear to have been lifted from the Management Training Course sketch. WordOfGod: They are.
*** Some remarks by Elan are very reminiscent of the Writers sketch. WordOfGod: Again correct.
*** Also, Dumbledore sometimes acts like the Psychiatrist and uses strange turns of phrase for "Come in" and "Sit down." WordOfGod: but you missed this one.
*** An early one in Y1, there is no Rule #6 in the Slytherin House rules. WordOfGod: And this one.
** ''Film/ThePrincessBride'': Several quotes slipped in very smoothly. Draco to Goyle: "Am I going mad, or did the word 'think' just escape your lips?"
** ''Franchise/StarWars'': Elan quotes Vader in Empire, "Search your feelings. You know I'm telling you the truth."
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: Professor Umbridge initiates a school-wide dueling club that is quickly revealed to be a proto-military training course for students to prepare them for action against Voldemort and his Death Eaters. It's even named Ministry Youth.
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: Professor Umbridge initiates [[spoiler:initiates a school-wide dueling club that is quickly revealed to be a proto-military training course for students to prepare them for action against Voldemort and his Death Eaters. It's even named Ministry Youth.]]
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: [[spoiler:Due to the Ministry fully embracing the narrative that Voldemort has returned and is actively threatening peaceful magical citizens,]] Professor Umbridge is a far more reasonable and balanced figure. Harry still feels there's something ''off'' about her, though.
* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: Professor Umbridge initiates a school-wide dueling club that is quickly revealed to be a proto-military training course for students to prepare them for action against Voldemort and his Death Eaters. It's even named Ministry Youth.
* PoliticallyMotivatedTeacher: Umbridge was appointed Defence professor by the Ministry since the school governors could not agree to any of Dumbledore's candidates. [[spoiler:She makes use of her position to spout Ministry war propaganda and actively recruits students to join the Aurors once they graduate.]]
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** ''Series/Babylon5'': Dwarfen society consists of the Religious caste, the Worker caste, and the Warrior caste. Dethryl will buy anything that has J. Michael Straczynski's name on it, so this is definitely an homage and not a rip-off.
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** ''Series/Babylon5'': Dwarfen society consists of the Religious caste, the Worker caste, and the Warrior caste. Dethryl will buy anything that has J. Michael Straczynski's Creator/JMichaelStraczynski's name on it, so this is definitely an homage and not a rip-off.
* TyrantTakesTheHelm: Massively downplayed, but Umbridge's appointment as Hogwarts security officer and her review of other professors still has strong shades of her canon incarnation as the high inquisitor. Halfway through the year she becomes the primary voice of the faculty to the student body.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Lucius Malfoy. Also EvenEvilHasLovedOnes, EvenEvilHasStandards, and NotEvilJustMisunderstood.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: WellIntentionedExtremist:
** LuciusMalfoy. Malfoy: Also EvenEvilHasLovedOnes, EvenEvilHasStandards, and NotEvilJustMisunderstood.NotEvilJustMisunderstood.
** Dolores Umbridge: She definitely has a point that [[spoiler:Voldemort's forces should be resisted by all, and to the fullest extent possible.]] Her methods, on the other hand, may give one pause.
** Lucius
** Dolores Umbridge: She definitely has a point that [[spoiler:Voldemort's forces should be resisted by all, and to the fullest extent possible.]] Her methods, on the other hand, may give one pause.
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** ''{{Film/Heathers}}'': The canon has a student named Sawyer, and in TSH the character is given the name Veronica. The three Heathers are also mentioned, but they're not a clique.
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** ''{{Film/Heathers}}'': The canon has a student One of the older Slytherin girls is named Sawyer, Veronica Sawyer. Heather Duke and in TSH the character is given the name Veronica. The three Heathers Heather Chandler are also mentioned, but they're not a clique.
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** ''{{Film/Heathers}}'': The canon has a student named Sawyer, and in TSH the character is given the name Veronica. The three Heathers are also mentioned, but they're not a clique.
** ''Film/MeanGirls'': Romilda Vane uses 'fetch' as part of her vernacular.
** ''Film/MeanGirls'': Romilda Vane uses 'fetch' as part of her vernacular.
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** ''{{Series/Firefly}}'': Sirius has Jayne's line, "Gee, I've never been in trouble with the law before."
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** ''{{Series/Firefly}}'': ''{{Series/Firefly}}'':
*** Sirius has Jayne's line, "Gee, I've never been in trouble with the law before.""
*** There is a painting of a person juggling four geese described in passing.
*** Sirius has Jayne's line, "Gee, I've never been in trouble with the law before.
*** There is a painting of a person juggling four geese described in passing.
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Yep, there's a Rose. - https://www.fanfiction.net/s/282139/17/After-the-End
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*** jbern: Y4 speculation about the tasks includes "Who can get closest to the dementor?" which actually happened in FanFic/TheLieIveLived. Also Y4, one line of prose reads "to fight the coming darkness", which is the title of another of jbern's fics.
*** Fanfic/AfterTheEnd: There is a throwaway line in Y4 that Lavender Brown has an older sister named Rose.
*** Fanfic/AfterTheEnd: There is a throwaway line in Y4 that Lavender Brown has an older sister named Rose.
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*** jbern: Y4 speculation about the tasks includes "Who can get closest to the dementor?" which actually happened in FanFic/TheLieIveLived.''Fanfic/TheLieIveLived''. Also Y4, one line of prose reads "to fight the coming darkness", which is the title of another of jbern's fics.
***Fanfic/AfterTheEnd: ''Fanfic/AfterTheEndArabellaAndZsenya'': There is a throwaway line in Y4 that Lavender Brown has an older sister named Rose.
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** ''{Series/Firefly}'': Sirius has Jayne's line, "Gee, I've never been in trouble with the law before."
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** ''{Series/Firefly}'': ''{{Series/Firefly}}'': Sirius has Jayne's line, "Gee, I've never been in trouble with the law before."
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** ''Series/Firefly'': ''{Series/Firefly}'': Sirius has Jayne's line, "Gee, I've never been in trouble with the law before."
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** Ron Weasley. He tries to look out for Ginny, in his own way. It's not appreciated.
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* CatchPhrase: "Up Slytherin!" Also, TheCatchPhraseCatchesOn.
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* CatchPhrase: CatchPhrase:
** "Up Slytherin!" Also,TheCatchPhraseCatchesOn.TheCatchPhraseCatchesOn, since the Slytherin fandom started saying it.
** Hufflepuffs think cool things are "galactic".
** Slytherins will often say the cool things are "stellar".
** "Up Slytherin!" Also,
** Hufflepuffs think cool things are "galactic".
** Slytherins will often say the cool things are "stellar".
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* DeliberateValuesDissonance: Pureblood society
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* DeliberateValuesDissonance: Pureblood Pure-blood society
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** [[spoiler:[[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] between Harry and Tracy. Tracy gets Harry's first kiss, and is the first girl he officially dates. Though he breaks things off to avoid ruining the friendship they enjoyed, and he goes steady with two (almost three) other girls, they swing back around to OfficialCouple.]] [[spoiler: Then Harry discovers that Jamie Davis is Voldemort's spy inside of Hogwarts, and breaks off the relationship again due to being unable to trust that Tracy isn't also compromised.]]
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** [[spoiler:[[SubvertedTrope [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] between Harry and Tracy. Tracy [[spoiler:Tracy gets Harry's first kiss, and is the first girl he officially dates. Though he breaks things off to avoid ruining the friendship they enjoyed, and he goes steady with two (almost three) other girls, they swing back around to OfficialCouple.]] [[spoiler: Then Harry discovers that Jamie Davis is Voldemort's spy inside of Hogwarts, and breaks off the relationship again due to being unable to trust that Tracy isn't also compromised.]]
* PatrickStewartSpeech: Harry puts Theo in his place in Y4, pointing out that if Muggle-borns were so terrible, Hermione Granger wouldn't have beat him in every subject.
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** Y3: Still very much a character story, the big plot hits familiar beats like Sirius Black, Professor Lupin, Dementors, the Patronus Charm, and so on. [[spoiler: The ending is a doozy. Sirius is proven innocent and offers Harry a home.]]
** Y4: From Harry's perspective, the story is the same: the Triwizard Tournament comes to Hogwarts. [[spoiler: In the big finale, it is revealed that Voldemort's plot has been completely different due to the events at the end of Y3.]]
** Y4: From Harry's perspective, the story is the same: the Triwizard Tournament comes to Hogwarts. [[spoiler: In the big finale, it is revealed that Voldemort's plot has been completely different due to the events at the end of Y3.]]
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** Y3: Still very much a character story, the big plot hits familiar beats like Sirius Black, Professor Lupin, Dementors, the Patronus Charm, and so on. [[spoiler: The ending is a doozy. Sirius is proven innocent and offers Harry a home.home, as in canon, but is actually able to do it.]]
** Y4: From Harry's perspective, the story is the same: the Triwizard Tournament comes to Hogwarts. Harry is entered against his will. [[spoiler: In the big finale, it is revealed that Voldemort's plot has been completely different due to the events at the end of Y3.]]
** Y4: From Harry's perspective, the story is the same: the Triwizard Tournament comes to Hogwarts. Harry is entered against his will. [[spoiler: In the big finale, it is revealed that Voldemort's plot has been completely different due to the events at the end of Y3.]]
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* TookALevelInBadass: Harry, in comparison to his canon self, learns several spells far sooner (including the ''Furunculus'' curse, which develops into his favorite). [[spoiler:By the time the Triwizard Tournament rolls around, he is able to take the lead handily in the first two events.]]
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* TookALevelInBadass: Harry, in comparison to his canon self, learns several spells far sooner (including the ''Furunculus'' curse, which develops into his favorite). [[spoiler:By the time the Triwizard Tournament rolls around, he is able to take the lead handily in the first two events.]] [[spoiler:Well of course he does. Sirius and Snape are both helping him.]]
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** ''Franchise/Firefly'': Sirius has Jayne's line, "Gee, I've never been in trouble with the law before."
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** ''Series/Firefly'': Sirius has Jayne's line, "Gee, I've never been in trouble with the law before."
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** ''Series/Firefly'': ''Franchise/Firefly'': Sirius has Jayne's line, "Gee, I've never been in trouble with the law before."
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*** jbern - Y4 speculation about the tasks includes "Who can get closest to the dementor?" which actually happened in FanFic/TheLieIveLived. Also Y4, one line of prose reads "to fight the coming darkness", which is the title of another of jbern's fics.
*** Fanfic/AfterTheEnd - There is a throwaway line in Y4 that Lavender Brown has an older sister named Rose.
*** A Year Like None Other - Y5, when discussing how Snape can prove his loyalty to Voldemort, Snape suggests that there will be a sacrifice made at Samhain.
*** Fanfic/AfterTheEnd - There is a throwaway line in Y4 that Lavender Brown has an older sister named Rose.
*** A Year Like None Other - Y5, when discussing how Snape can prove his loyalty to Voldemort, Snape suggests that there will be a sacrifice made at Samhain.
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*** jbern - jbern: Y4 speculation about the tasks includes "Who can get closest to the dementor?" which actually happened in FanFic/TheLieIveLived. Also Y4, one line of prose reads "to fight the coming darkness", which is the title of another of jbern's fics.
***Fanfic/AfterTheEnd - Fanfic/AfterTheEnd: There is a throwaway line in Y4 that Lavender Brown has an older sister named Rose.
*** A Year Like NoneOther - Other: Y5, when discussing how Snape can prove his loyalty to Voldemort, Snape suggests that there will be a sacrifice made at Samhain.
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*** A Year Like None
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** ''Film/ThePrincessBride'' - Several quotes slipped in very smoothly. Draco to Goyle: "Am I going mad, or did the word 'think' just escape your lips?"
** Franchise/StarWars - Elan quotes Vader in Empire, "Search your feelings. You know I'm telling you the truth."
** Franchise/TheHitchhikersGuideToTheGalaxy: The lifts in the Ministry of Magic are just as happy to serve as the doors in Hitchhiker's Guide. (Just so you know, that came from a joke chapter that Dethryl posted on April Fool's Day.) [[spoiler: Yes, but he brought it back.]]
** Franchise/StarWars - Elan quotes Vader in Empire, "Search your feelings. You know I'm telling you the truth."
** Franchise/TheHitchhikersGuideToTheGalaxy: The lifts in the Ministry of Magic are just as happy to serve as the doors in Hitchhiker's Guide. (Just so you know, that came from a joke chapter that Dethryl posted on April Fool's Day.) [[spoiler: Yes, but he brought it back.]]
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** ''Film/ThePrincessBride'' - ''Film/ThePrincessBride'': Several quotes slipped in very smoothly. Draco to Goyle: "Am I going mad, or did the word 'think' just escape your lips?"
**Franchise/StarWars - ''Franchise/StarWars'': Elan quotes Vader in Empire, "Search your feelings. You know I'm telling you the truth."
**Franchise/TheHitchhikersGuideToTheGalaxy: ''Franchise/TheHitchhikersGuideToTheGalaxy'': The lifts in the Ministry of Magic are just as happy to serve as the doors in Hitchhiker's Guide. (Just so you know, that came from a joke chapter that Dethryl posted on April Fool's Day.) [[spoiler: Yes, but he brought it back.]]
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** ''Literature/LordDarcy'': Some of Mr. Nott's lessons about number theory draw on Randall Garrett's excellent work.
** ''Literature/LordDarcy'': Some of Mr. Nott's lessons about number theory draw on Randall Garrett's excellent work.
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* {{Patricide}}: [[spoiler: To put it mildly, Theo and his father have a disagreement about joining Voldemort's cause.]]
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* {{Patricide}}: {{Patricide}}:
** [[spoiler: To put it mildly, Theo and his father have a disagreement about joining Voldemort's cause.]]
** [[spoiler: Crabbe finds himself fighting his father in Year 6.]]
** [[spoiler: To put it mildly, Theo and his father have a disagreement about joining Voldemort's cause.]]
** [[spoiler: Crabbe finds himself fighting his father in Year 6.]]
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This fanfic is an attempt to tell the big overplot of the ''Literature/HarryPotter'' series using the Slytherin characters. The functional POD is that Lucius and Narcissa Malfoy have a child before Draco, and consequently their development is slightly different. By the time Draco meets Harry, he's realized the value of friendship and is more open of a person. He's not DracoInLeatherPants, but his friendship with Harry is [[HeelFaceTurn slowly morphing]] him into a better person.
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This fanfic is an attempt to tell tells the big overplot of the ''Literature/HarryPotter'' series using the Slytherin characters. The functional POD is that Lucius and Narcissa Malfoy have a child before Draco, and consequently their development is slightly different. By the time Draco meets Harry, he's realized the value of friendship and is more open of a person. He's not DracoInLeatherPants, but his friendship with Harry is [[HeelFaceTurn slowly morphing]] him into a better person.
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** [[spoiler:[[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] between Harry and Tracy. Tracy gets Harry's first kiss, and is the first girl he officially dates. Though he breaks things off to avoid ruining the friendship they enjoyed, and he goes steady with two (almost three) other girls, they swing back around to OfficialCouple. Then Harry discovers that Jamie Davis is Voldemort's spy inside of Hogwarts, and breaks off the relationship again due to being unable to trust that Tracy isn't also compromised.]]
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** [[spoiler:[[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] between Harry and Tracy. Tracy gets Harry's first kiss, and is the first girl he officially dates. Though he breaks things off to avoid ruining the friendship they enjoyed, and he goes steady with two (almost three) other girls, they swing back around to OfficialCouple. ]] [[spoiler: Then Harry discovers that Jamie Davis is Voldemort's spy inside of Hogwarts, and breaks off the relationship again due to being unable to trust that Tracy isn't also compromised.]]
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* InSpiteOfANail: Even with all of the changes, some events happen almost exactly as in canon.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Even with all of the changes, some events happen almost exactly as in canon. This is deliberate on the author's part, as the goal is to not change anything unaffected by Harry being in Slytherin.
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** Umbridge still arrives to teach Defence Against the Dark Arts in year 5, and is appointed by the Ministry to review her fellow professors' performance.
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** Professor Slughorn still teaches Potions in Year 6. Snape still teaches Defence.
** Professor Slughorn still teaches Potions in Year 6. Snape still teaches Defence.
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* OrphanageOfFear: Yet to be seen if the Magical Child Protection Act will result in this or an OrphanageOfLove
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* OrphanageOfFear: Yet to be seen if the Magical Child Protection Act will result in this or an OrphanageOfLoveOrphanageOfLove. [[spoiler: Unfortunately, we never get to see, since Voldemort attacks the Home for Magical Children and slaughters them all.]]
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** "My Head is NOT FAT!"
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** "My Head is NOT FAT!"FAT!" -Crabbe
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* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections
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* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnectionsScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections - Harry is not above using his fame to get what he wants.
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*** Such as?
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*** Such as?Significant glances, McGonagall pulling her lips into a line, etc.
*** In Y5, Draco gets hit in the face and starts complaining about his nose bleeding.
*** Also in Y5, Professor Umbridge is appointed as Security Officer.
*** Also in Y5, Professor Umbridge is appointed as Security Officer.
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** Franchise/TheHitchhikersGuideToTheGalaxy: The lifts in the Ministry of Magic are just as happy to serve as the doors in Hitchhiker's Guide. (Just so you know, that came from a joke chapter that Dethryl posted on April Fool's Day.)
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** Franchise/TheHitchhikersGuideToTheGalaxy: The lifts in the Ministry of Magic are just as happy to serve as the doors in Hitchhiker's Guide. (Just so you know, that came from a joke chapter that Dethryl posted on April Fool's Day.)) [[spoiler: Yes, but he brought it back.]]
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** Y5: Despite a significant break from the canon plotline, some things are still the same. Fudge still appoints Umbridge as the Defense teacher. Harry still leads a group of students to learn duelling skills. [[spoiler: The difference is that the Ministry acknowledges Voldemort's return, so Umbridge is there to make sure the students get a proper education. Harry's group is officially sanctioned, not secret.]]
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** Y5: Despite a significant break from the canon plotline, some things are still the same. Fudge still appoints Umbridge as the Defense Defence teacher. Harry still leads a group of students to learn duelling skills. [[spoiler: The difference is that the Ministry acknowledges Voldemort's return, so Umbridge is there to make sure the students get a proper education. Harry's group is officially sanctioned, not secret.]]
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*** A few lines of one scene with Professor Sinistra appear to have been lifted from the Management Training Course sketch. WordofGod: They are.
*** Some remarks by Elan are very reminiscent of the Writers sketch. WordofGod: Again correct.
*** Also, Dumbledore sometimes acts like the Psychiatrist and uses strange turns of phrase for "Come in" and "Sit down." WordofGod: but you missed this one.
*** An early one in Y1, there is no Rule #6 in the Slytherin House rules. WordofGod: And this one.
*** Some remarks by Elan are very reminiscent of the Writers sketch. WordofGod: Again correct.
*** Also, Dumbledore sometimes acts like the Psychiatrist and uses strange turns of phrase for "Come in" and "Sit down." WordofGod: but you missed this one.
*** An early one in Y1, there is no Rule #6 in the Slytherin House rules. WordofGod: And this one.
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*** A few lines of one scene with Professor Sinistra appear to have been lifted from the Management Training Course sketch. WordofGod: WordOfGod: They are.
*** Some remarks by Elan are very reminiscent of the Writers sketch.WordofGod: WordOfGod: Again correct.
*** Also, Dumbledore sometimes acts like the Psychiatrist and uses strange turns of phrase for "Come in" and "Sit down."WordofGod: WordOfGod: but you missed this one.
*** An early one in Y1, there is no Rule #6 in the Slytherin House rules.WordofGod: WordOfGod: And this one.
*** Some remarks by Elan are very reminiscent of the Writers sketch.
*** Also, Dumbledore sometimes acts like the Psychiatrist and uses strange turns of phrase for "Come in" and "Sit down."
*** An early one in Y1, there is no Rule #6 in the Slytherin House rules.
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** [[spoiler: Cedric]]
** [[spoiler: Sirius does not fall through the Veil at the Ministry of Magic. Instead, Harry's girlfriend does.]]
* TheStationsOfTheCanon:
*** Y1: Due to the influence of outside forces, otherwise known as the plot, Harry still goes through the usual stations of The Visit To Diagon Alley, The Trip To Hogwarts, The Sorting Hat, The Troll, all the way up to The Confrontation With Quirell/Voldemort. Only how he deals with these things is different.
*** Y2: Again, many of the same points are hit. Lockhart, the Heir of Slytherin, et cetera. Some things are changed, [[spoiler: like Harry doesn't go to Sir Nick's Deathday party]], but things largely parallel canon [[spoiler: until the very end]].
*** Y3: Still very much a character story, the big plot hits familiar beats like Sirius Black, Professor Lupin, Dementors, the Patronus Charm, and so on. [[spoiler: The ending is a doozy. Sirius is proven innocent and offers Harry a home.]]
*** Y4: From Harry's perspective, the story is the same: the Triwizard Tournament comes to Hogwarts. [[spoiler: In the big finale, it is revealed that Voldemort's plot has been completely different due to the events at the end of Y3.]]
** [[spoiler: Sirius does not fall through the Veil at the Ministry of Magic. Instead, Harry's girlfriend does.]]
* TheStationsOfTheCanon:
*** Y1: Due to the influence of outside forces, otherwise known as the plot, Harry still goes through the usual stations of The Visit To Diagon Alley, The Trip To Hogwarts, The Sorting Hat, The Troll, all the way up to The Confrontation With Quirell/Voldemort. Only how he deals with these things is different.
*** Y2: Again, many of the same points are hit. Lockhart, the Heir of Slytherin, et cetera. Some things are changed, [[spoiler: like Harry doesn't go to Sir Nick's Deathday party]], but things largely parallel canon [[spoiler: until the very end]].
*** Y3: Still very much a character story, the big plot hits familiar beats like Sirius Black, Professor Lupin, Dementors, the Patronus Charm, and so on. [[spoiler: The ending is a doozy. Sirius is proven innocent and offers Harry a home.]]
*** Y4: From Harry's perspective, the story is the same: the Triwizard Tournament comes to Hogwarts. [[spoiler: In the big finale, it is revealed that Voldemort's plot has been completely different due to the events at the end of Y3.]]
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** [[spoiler: Cedric]]
Cedric lives because Harry doesn't have any notion of sharing the victory.]]
** [[spoiler: Sirius does not fall through the Veil at the Ministry of Magic. Instead, ]] [[spoiler:Instead, Harry's girlfriend does.]]
*TheStationsOfTheCanon:
***TheStationsOfTheCanon: Anything that isn't affected by Harry being in Slytherin still happens.
** Y1: Due to the influence of outside forces, otherwise known as the plot, Harry still goes through the usual stations of The Visit To Diagon Alley, The Trip To Hogwarts, The Sorting Hat, The Troll, all the way up to The Confrontation With Quirell/Voldemort. Only how he deals with these things is different.
*** ** Y2: Again, many of the same points are hit. Lockhart, the Heir of Slytherin, et cetera. Some things are changed, [[spoiler: like Harry doesn't go to Sir Nick's Deathday party]], but things largely parallel canon [[spoiler: until the very end]].
*** ** Y3: Still very much a character story, the big plot hits familiar beats like Sirius Black, Professor Lupin, Dementors, the Patronus Charm, and so on. [[spoiler: The ending is a doozy. Sirius is proven innocent and offers Harry a home.]]
*** ** Y4: From Harry's perspective, the story is the same: the Triwizard Tournament comes to Hogwarts. [[spoiler: In the big finale, it is revealed that Voldemort's plot has been completely different due to the events at the end of Y3.]]]]
** Y5: Despite a significant break from the canon plotline, some things are still the same. Fudge still appoints Umbridge as the Defense teacher. Harry still leads a group of students to learn duelling skills. [[spoiler: The difference is that the Ministry acknowledges Voldemort's return, so Umbridge is there to make sure the students get a proper education. Harry's group is officially sanctioned, not secret.]]
** Y6: Professor Slughorn still teaches Potions. Snape still teaches Defence. Dumbledore still shares his collection of memories with Harry.
** [[spoiler: Sirius does not fall through the Veil at the Ministry of Magic.
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** Y1: Due to the influence of outside forces, otherwise known as the plot, Harry still goes through the usual stations of The Visit To Diagon Alley, The Trip To Hogwarts, The Sorting Hat, The Troll, all the way up to The Confrontation With Quirell/Voldemort. Only how he deals with these things is different.
** Y5: Despite a significant break from the canon plotline, some things are still the same. Fudge still appoints Umbridge as the Defense teacher. Harry still leads a group of students to learn duelling skills. [[spoiler: The difference is that the Ministry acknowledges Voldemort's return, so Umbridge is there to make sure the students get a proper education. Harry's group is officially sanctioned, not secret.]]
** Y6: Professor Slughorn still teaches Potions. Snape still teaches Defence. Dumbledore still shares his collection of memories with Harry.
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** Y2: Lucius essentially got Arthur Weasely fired, so in retaliation [[spoiler:Draco is nearly killed by Fred, George, Ginny, and Ron.]]
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** Y2: Lucius essentially got Arthur Weasely Weasley fired, so in retaliation [[spoiler:Draco is nearly killed by Fred, George, Ginny, and Ron.]]
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* HeelFaceTurn: Sorta. During Harry's 2nd year, [[spoiler: Percy moves into Slytherin after being ostracized from Griffyndor. He]] subsequently becomes a much happier and more pleasant person.
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* HeelFaceTurn: Sorta. During Harry's 2nd year, [[spoiler: Percy moves into Slytherin after being ostracized from Griffyndor.Gryffindor. He]] subsequently becomes a much happier and more pleasant person.
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* ManOfWealthAndTaste: Lucius Malfoy, natch.
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* ManOfWealthAndTaste: Lucius Malfoy, natch.Malfoy.
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* NonIdleRich: Lucius Malfoy may be wealthy but he seems to be actively involved in government and seems to expect his sons to well educated, productive wizards. All of the Slytherins seem fairly well off and still seem to have a great deal expected of them
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* NonIdleRich: Lucius Malfoy may be wealthy but he seems to be actively involved in government and seems to expect his sons to well educated, productive wizards. All of the Slytherins seem fairly well off and still seem to have a great deal expected of them them.
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** StarWars - Elan quotes Vader in Empire, "Search your feelings. You know I'm telling you the truth."
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** StarWars Franchise/StarWars - Elan quotes Vader in Empire, "Search your feelings. You know I'm telling you the truth."
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** [[spoiler:PlayedStraight between Harry and Tracy. Tracy gets Harry's first kiss, and is the first girl he officially dates. Though he breaks things off to avoid ruining the friendship they enjoyed, and he goes steady with two (almost three) other girls, circumstances ultimately lead to them becoming the OfficialCouple.]]
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** [[spoiler:PlayedStraight [[spoiler:[[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] between Harry and Tracy. Tracy gets Harry's first kiss, and is the first girl he officially dates. Though he breaks things off to avoid ruining the friendship they enjoyed, and he goes steady with two (almost three) other girls, circumstances ultimately lead they swing back around to them becoming OfficialCouple. Then Harry discovers that Jamie Davis is Voldemort's spy inside of Hogwarts, and breaks off the OfficialCouple.relationship again due to being unable to trust that Tracy isn't also compromised.]]
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** [[spoiler:PlayedStraight between Harry and Tracy. Tracy gets Harry's first kiss, and is the first girl he officially dates. Though he breaks things off to avoid ruining the friendship they enjoyed, and he goes steady with two other girls, circumstances ultimately lead to them becoming the OfficialCouple.]]
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** [[spoiler:PlayedStraight between Harry and Tracy. Tracy gets Harry's first kiss, and is the first girl he officially dates. Though he breaks things off to avoid ruining the friendship they enjoyed, and he goes steady with two (almost three) other girls, circumstances ultimately lead to them becoming the OfficialCouple.]]
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* FirstGirlWins: Gets played in several ways throughout the story.
** [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] in the case of Draco and Pansy. They were betrothed at a very young age, and are initially fine with it, but both ultimately decide that they would much prefer to date other people.
** PlayedStraight between James and Lily. While James dated many girls throughout his school career, Lily was the first one to catch his interest, and the only one he seriously pursued.
** [[AvertedTrope Averted]] between Elan and Jamie Davis. [[spoiler:They go through a nasty breakup after his first year spent at Durmstrang.]]
** [[spoiler:PlayedStraight between Harry and Tracy. Tracy gets Harry's first kiss, and is the first girl he officially dates. Though he breaks things off to avoid ruining the friendship they enjoyed, and he goes steady with two other girls, circumstances ultimately lead to them becoming the OfficialCouple.]]
** [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] in the case of Draco and Pansy. They were betrothed at a very young age, and are initially fine with it, but both ultimately decide that they would much prefer to date other people.
** PlayedStraight between James and Lily. While James dated many girls throughout his school career, Lily was the first one to catch his interest, and the only one he seriously pursued.
** [[AvertedTrope Averted]] between Elan and Jamie Davis. [[spoiler:They go through a nasty breakup after his first year spent at Durmstrang.]]
** [[spoiler:PlayedStraight between Harry and Tracy. Tracy gets Harry's first kiss, and is the first girl he officially dates. Though he breaks things off to avoid ruining the friendship they enjoyed, and he goes steady with two other girls, circumstances ultimately lead to them becoming the OfficialCouple.]]
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* AbortedArc: The Triwizard Tournament ends with Harry being transported via portkey into Voldemort's clutches, just as in canon. [[spoiler: However, due to changed circumstances, Bartemius Crouch Jr. is never revealed, and may not even have assumed Moody's identity at all. The question of who exactly tampered with the trophy cup is never brought up again.]]
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* InSpiteOfANail: Even with all of the changes, some events happen almost exactly as in canon.
** Ginny still receives Tom Riddle's diary and is in danger of having her soul devoured by Voldemort before Harry rescues her.
** Harry is still submitted into the Triwizard Tournament against his will.
** Voldemort still returns in living form at the end of the fourth year, [[spoiler: despite his primary lackey having been given the dementor's kiss at the end of the third.]]
** Umbridge still arrives to teach Defence Against the Dark Arts in year 5, and is appointed by the Ministry to review her fellow professors' performance.
** Ginny still receives Tom Riddle's diary and is in danger of having her soul devoured by Voldemort before Harry rescues her.
** Harry is still submitted into the Triwizard Tournament against his will.
** Voldemort still returns in living form at the end of the fourth year, [[spoiler: despite his primary lackey having been given the dementor's kiss at the end of the third.]]
** Umbridge still arrives to teach Defence Against the Dark Arts in year 5, and is appointed by the Ministry to review her fellow professors' performance.
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** Film/DownPeriscope: Harry opens the door while in a private chat with Daphne to reveal four other Slytherins plainly eavesdropping and teasing him about what was going on inside.
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** Film/DownPeriscope: ''Film/DownPeriscope'': Harry opens the door while in a private chat with Daphne to reveal four other Slytherins plainly eavesdropping and teasing him about what was going on inside.