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Percy Weasley.[[spoiler: He may be a stickler for rules, and have no problem turning in his siblings for committing assault on another student, but deeply cares about his siblings, especially Ginny. When Ginny is put in danger, Percy risks his life and offers Harry anything, including a valuable magical artifact and a willingness to hide Harry's crimes. When that doesn't work, Percy offers his own life, and later digs himself in further by asking for more favor for his sister. In exchange, Percy gives a magical oath to serve Harry and proceeds to be a major source of help to Harry, even breaking rules for him.]]
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Percy Weasley.[[spoiler: He may be a stickler for rules, and have no problem turning in his siblings for committing assault on another student, but deeply cares about his siblings, especially Ginny. When Ginny is put in danger, Percy risks his life and offers Harry anything, including a valuable magical artifact and a willingness to hide Harry's crimes. When that doesn't work, Percy offers his own life, and later digs himself in further by asking for more favor for his sister. In exchange, Percy gives a magical oath to serve Harry and proceeds to be a major source of help to Harry, even breaking rules for him.]]
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* The Patriarch: Lucius Malfoy. A loving one but you don't want to get on his bad side.
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* The Libby: Pansy Parkinson. Laine Slater
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* Big Brother Instinct: Elan Malfoy. He is extremely protective of his brother and his adopted brother Harry.
Percy Weasley.[[spoiler: He may be a stickler for rules, and have no problem turning in his siblings for committing assault on another student, but deeply cares about his siblings, especially Ginny. When Ginny is put in danger, Percy risks his life and offers Harry anything, including a valuable magical artifact and a willingness to hide Harry's crimes. When that doesn't work, Percy offers his own life, and later digs himself in further by asking for more favor for his sister. In exchange, Percy gives a magical oath to serve Harry and proceeds to be a major source of help to Harry, even breaking rules for him.]]
Percy Weasley.[[spoiler: He may be a stickler for rules, and have no problem turning in his siblings for committing assault on another student, but deeply cares about his siblings, especially Ginny. When Ginny is put in danger, Percy risks his life and offers Harry anything, including a valuable magical artifact and a willingness to hide Harry's crimes. When that doesn't work, Percy offers his own life, and later digs himself in further by asking for more favor for his sister. In exchange, Percy gives a magical oath to serve Harry and proceeds to be a major source of help to Harry, even breaking rules for him.]]
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* ProperlyParanoid: "CONSTANT VIGILANCE!"
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* BigBrotherMentor: With traces of BigBrotherWorship. Harry looks up to Draco's elder brother Elan, to the point he doesn't realise Elan's large faults.
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''They Shook Hands'' is a series of ForWantOfANail/AlternateUniverse Harry Potter stories written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2560219/Dethryl Dethryl]]
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''They Shook Hands'' is a series of ForWantOfANail/AlternateUniverse ForWantOfANail / AlternateUniverse Harry Potter stories written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2560219/Dethryl Dethryl]]
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''They Shook Hands'' is a series of AlternateUniverse ForWantOfANail/AlternateUniverse Harry Potter stories written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2560219/Dethryl Dethryl]]
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Since it\'s used more than once, the \'Fathead\' thing is more of a running gag than a brick joke.
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* PetMonstrosity: [[spoiler:In Year 2, Harry takes control of the basilisk instead of killing it.]]
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* TookALevelInJerkass: Tim (Theo in the revision) takes several levels in Year 4, because [[spoiler:because his dad has been ignoring him.]]
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* TookALevelInBadass: Harry, in comparison to his canon self, learns several spells far sooner (including the ''Furunculus'' curse, which develops into his favorite). By [[spoiler:By the time the Triwizard Tournament rolls around, he is able to take the lead handily in the first two events.]]
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* DeathByAdaptation: Wormtail [[spoiler:Wormtail is given the Dementor's Kiss as a result of Snape actually listening to Harry in this timeline.]]
** [[spoiler:Hermione is killed by the basilisk in Year 2.]]
** [[spoiler:Hermione is killed by the basilisk in Year 2.]]
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* DarkIsNotEvil: A recurring theme in the series. See HitlerAteSugar below.
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* TookALevelInJerkass: Tim (Theo in the revision) takes several levels in Year 4, because his dad has been ignoring him.
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Post-Canon Revision: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7659033/1/They_Shook_Hands_PostCanon_Revision_Year_One Year 1]]
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7786722/1/They_Shook_Hands_PostCanon_Revision_Year_Two Year 2]]
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7949779/1/They_Shook_Hands_PostCanon_Revision_Year_Three Year 3]]
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7786722/1/They_Shook_Hands_PostCanon_Revision_Year_Two Year 2]]
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7786722/1/They_Shook_Hands_PostCanon_Revision_Year_Two Year
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* ForWantOfANailForWantOfANail: Harry's first friend in the wizarding world is Draco Malfoy, not Ron Weasley. This changes the entire foundation of his introduction to the magical world.
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out before he crosses the MoralEventHorizon.
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* HitlerAteSugar: Slytherins very much resent being labelled Junior Death Eaters. Just because Voldemort was a Slytherin doesn't mean all Slytherins believe as he does.
* Mild touches of RonTheDeathEater. He's not evil (yet?) but he is a major antagonist to Harry and his friends.
* HitlerAteSugar: Slytherins very much resent being labelled Junior Death Eaters. Just because Voldemort was a Slytherin doesn't mean all Slytherins believe as he does.
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* HitlerAteSugar: Slytherins very much resent being labelled Junior Death Eaters. Just because Voldemort was a Slytherin doesn't mean all Slytherins believe as he does.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: HitlerAteSugar: Slytherins very much resent being labelled Junior Death Eaters.Eaters. Just because Voldemort was a Slytherin doesn't mean all Slytherins believe as he does.
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Year 5 is currently in-process and will be posted when complete.
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This fanfic is an attempt to tell the big overplot of the HarryPotter series using the Slytherin characters. The functional POD is that Lucius and Narcissa Malfoy have a child before Draco, and consequently their development is slightly different. By the time Draco meets Harry, he's realized the value of friendship and is more open of a person. He's not DracoInLeatherPants, but his friendship with Harry is [[HeelFaceTurn slowly morphing]] him into a better person.
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This fanfic is an attempt to tell the big overplot of the HarryPotter ''Literature/HarryPotter'' series using the Slytherin characters. The functional POD is that Lucius and Narcissa Malfoy have a child before Draco, and consequently their development is slightly different. By the time Draco meets Harry, he's realized the value of friendship and is more open of a person. He's not DracoInLeatherPants, but his friendship with Harry is [[HeelFaceTurn slowly morphing]] him into a better person.
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This fanfic is an attempt to tell the big overplot of the HarryPotter series using the Slytherin characters. The functional POD is that Lucius and Narcissa Malfoy have a child before Draco, and consequently their development is slightly different. By the time Draco meets Harry, he's realized the value of friendship and is more open of a person. He's not DracoInLeatherPants, but his friendship with Harry is [[HeelFaceTurn slowly morphing]] him into a better person.
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''They Shook Hands'' is a series of AlternateUniverse Harry Potter stories written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2560219/Dethryl Dethryl]]
Original version: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6378694/1/They_Shook_Hands_Year_1 Year 1]] [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6382715/1/They_Shook_Hands_Year_2 Year 2]] [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6417928/1/They_Shook_Hands_Year_3 Year 3]] [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6453693/1/They_Shook_Hands_Year_4 Year 4]]
Post-Canon Revision: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7659033/1/They_Shook_Hands_PostCanon_Revision_Year_One Year 1]]
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7786722/1/They_Shook_Hands_PostCanon_Revision_Year_Two Year 2]]
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7949779/1/They_Shook_Hands_PostCanon_Revision_Year_Three Year 3]]
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8120562/1/They_Shook_Hands_PostCanon_Revision_Year_Four Year 4]]
The Point of Departure (for Harry, anyway) is when he meets Draco Malfoy in Madam Malkin's robe shop. In TSH, unlike canon, he introduces himself to Draco. They shake hands and decide to be friends. They spend the next month before school exchanging letters, and on the train Harry is introduced to other children Draco knows. We see Ron and Hermione, but Harry doesn't interact with them. Things really deviate from canon when Harry is Sorted into Slytherin.
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Original version: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6378694/1/They_Shook_Hands_Year_1 Year 1]] [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6382715/1/They_Shook_Hands_Year_2 Year 2]] [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6417928/1/They_Shook_Hands_Year_3 Year 3]] [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6453693/1/They_Shook_Hands_Year_4 Year 4]]
Post-Canon Revision: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7659033/1/They_Shook_Hands_PostCanon_Revision_Year_One Year 1]]
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7786722/1/They_Shook_Hands_PostCanon_Revision_Year_Two Year 2]]
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7949779/1/They_Shook_Hands_PostCanon_Revision_Year_Three Year 3]]
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8120562/1/They_Shook_Hands_PostCanon_Revision_Year_Four Year 4]]
The Point of Departure (for Harry, anyway) is when he meets Draco Malfoy in Madam Malkin's robe shop. In TSH, unlike canon, he introduces himself to Draco. They shake hands and decide to be friends. They spend the next month before school exchanging letters, and on the train Harry is introduced to other children Draco knows. We see Ron and Hermione, but Harry doesn't interact with them. Things really deviate from canon when Harry is Sorted into Slytherin.
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